ImmortalDawn Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 It's your choice, which ever one makes you feel more comfortable. Just please don't make it too short. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 I can manage that. I just Wanted it to not be super long. I think I'll divide the next chapter into two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 29, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 bump My next chapter should be out by sunday, before I go to school on monday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2010 Bump Come on people read my story please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted February 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2010 Bump read story please. and thank you for reading it. Please also comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted February 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 bump. please read my story. I need comments so i can move on to chapter 6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted February 17, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2010 Bump please read my story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Magnet Soldier Posted February 26, 2010 Report Share Posted February 26, 2010 It's....interesting. But I think you've wasted a bit too much time on the introductions, and The grammer isn't that great. There's also the fact it's in present tense but that is a personal annoyance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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