LuffyLaxer Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 chapter 3 is up. this chapter will set the stage for all the further events. chapter for should be up by saturday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 chapter 3 is up. this chapter will set the stage for all the further events. chapter for should be up by saturday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 chapter 3 is up. this chapter will set the stage for all the further events. chapter for should be up by saturday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 chapter 3 is up. this chapter will set the stage for all the further events. chapter for should be up by saturday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 6, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2010 chapter 3 is up. this chapter will set the stage for all the further events. chapter for should be up by saturday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalDawn Posted January 7, 2010 Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 I like the story, keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2010 Thanks. I try. Oh for a +rep, can anybody guess what type of show this is based off of? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
â™ Decietful Kingâ™ Posted January 9, 2010 Report Share Posted January 9, 2010 Is it Static Shock and jeeze my characters douche Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 11, 2010 Correct. +rep coming your way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2010 bump Hey guys chapter 4 is up!!! 5 is to actually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 Bump Come on and read my chapter 4. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalDawn Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 Chapter 4 was good. I wish you luck with the upcoming chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 thanks. I have chapter 5 up sometime next week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalDawn Posted January 14, 2010 Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 Yeah, I have to admit I...kinda fell for the trick. I look forward to reading Chapter 5. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 14, 2010 hehe. I'm pretty sure most people did. But thanks for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 BumpChapter 5 will be up next week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Genesis- Posted January 22, 2010 Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Personally I think that it's not half bad. Also you may want to edit your detailing some stuff is too detailed and some isn't detailed enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2010 Okay cool. Anything specific? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Bump this  Chappter 5 is up for all you loyal readers and new readers. Read and review please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Bump this  Chappter 5 is up for all you loyal readers and new readers. Read and review please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2010 Bump this  Chappter 5 is up for all you loyal readers and new readers. Read and review please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2010 BBump Please read and review my story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 Bump Please read my story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImmortalDawn Posted January 28, 2010 Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 I read it, and it's good. I'm curious on how the characters are going to act when they get their powers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted January 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2010 My sis said the same thing. I was actually going to write chapter six shorter than the rest. I'm actually debating whether or not I should. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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