devilslayer Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 I looked at some more cards & got an idea so what do you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 ok first thats not your card 2nd still using correct grammer and still hitting the enter key to much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balvarine Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Well.........1st:--->Your card cannot be rated because of incorrect grammar:(+there is no the ending of a sentence and all else like capitalizing and the wrong terms are included as well as spelling mistakes and your card has no determined effect,I suppose.)2nd--->Your pic is not the best.3rd:---->Your first 8 words are useless because the card icon indicates that this is not a Normal Trap Card.4th_---->(As I can see from your effect,you do not have a proper wording nor spelling,so,I'll correct your grammar in by writing your effect anew)(with a little tweak):--------->"This card can only be activated by Tributing 1 face-up monster you control(or pay some Life Points,I do not know excatly).When your opponent declares an attack,select 1 Attack Position monster on your opponent's side of the field,other than attacking monster,that has the highest ATK and take control of it until the end of a Battle Phase.If your opponent's attacking monster has ATK of 1900 or more while it attacks a monster you control,your opponent's monster is destroyed at the end of a Damage Step."---------------------------------------------------------------------------Thank you for reading!---------------------------------------------------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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