devilslayer Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 hi if this isn't good can you tell me where to find cards where i can get ideas of effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 first of all the card stinks. seconed of all you need to make it an effect monster third of all the grammer is all wrong you should just look at real yu-gi-oh cards to get ideas and to work on your grammer ps sorry if i was hard on you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Santiduelist Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 First its an effect monster, so redish colour, second wording is really bad so check real life cards to get an idea of how it should be, and last its underpowered, 2 many stars and weak stats, but the pic is OK. Since its your first time i wont rate or anything but u should check your wording and dont make them too underpowered. Good Luck mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztex Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Its too underpowered and bad OCG! Try referring from real cards for balance and good OCG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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