CrownedClown Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 [align=center]Meh[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 [align=center]HO-HO-HO I'm in. Race: HumanName: MakotoAge: 24Gender:: MaleAppearance: [spoiler=Makoto] Personality: Makoto is the "too kind" pilot. He'll be the first to put the blame on himself and to put things off to lend others a hand. A very analitical person, his philosophy is "There is no problem without a solution."Bio: The only son of a rich benefactor of the war, Makoto doesn't fully believe in a just battle. With divorced parents he joined the ranks to please his father but it was strictly against his mother's wishes, whom he lived with at the time. He is peaceful but always vigilant in getting his point across. Upon entering the military he was a strategist but during an accident he began piloting a Mobile Suit. With his suprior knowledge he is said to possess the SEED Factor which as of now has unknown benifits or consequences. Faction: Rebel UnionRank: Elite SoliderMobile Suit Name: AaliyahPower Plant: XX-DriveMobile Suit Appearance: [spoiler=Aaliyah] Mobile Suit Weaponry: Multi-Shot flares mounted on shoulders. Vulcons located on head. Beam Saber mounted on left wrist and high powered beam rifle mounted on right arm.Mobile Suit Equipment: N/A[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 [align=center]HO-HO-HO I'm in. Race: HumanName: MakotoAge: 24Gender:: MaleAppearance: [spoiler=Makoto] Personality: Makoto is the "too kind" pilot. He'll be the first to put the blame on himself and to put things off to lend others a hand. A very analitical person' date=' his philosophy is "There is no problem without a solution."[b']Bio:[/b] The only son of a rich benefactor of the war, Makoto doesn't fully believe in a just battle. He is peaceful but always vigilant in getting his point across. Upon entering the military he was a strategist but during an accident he began piloting a Mobile Suit.Faction: Rebel UnionRank: Elite SoliderMobile Suit Name: AaliyahPower Plant: XX-DriveMobile Suit Appearance: [spoiler=Aaliyah] Mobile Suit Weaponry: Multi-Shot flares mounted on shoulders. Vulcons located on head. Beam Saber mounted on left wrist and high powered beam rifle mounted on right arm.Mobile Suit Equipment: SEED mode (if thats ok, but he can't use it yet.)[/align]There's only 3 (Well... Technically 2) Problems with your App: #1) The Pic: Too Childish (SHE Looks 14 >.>)#2) Your Bio: It's missing a Line and a Half#3)... SEED Mode isn't a MS thing, it's a Person thing. And you need SEED Factor First >.> Fix those and your Accepted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Race: Android Name: 7009328-KenAge: 55 Physical Appearance: Late Teens-Early TwentiesGender: Male[spoiler=Appearance:] Personality: Ken was made opposite of his creator, underhanded and sly he can lie perfectly without any signs shown, he is often though calm and quiet and usually keeps from friendly conversation to any other Androids, Ken is usually kind towards humans.Bio: Ken was designed purposely to be able to get his way around anything, working perfectly with the underhanded tactics he picked up. Ken is the complete opposite to what his creator acted like but visits his creators children from time to time as shortly after he left his creator they died leaving only one message, that they were shot down by someone within a mobile suit, with that he joined the Rebel union quickly rising through the ranks as he destroyed many other in combat hoping to find the suit that destroyed his creator and Kill whoever pilots it. He has no idea of to whom the mobile suit was allied but there was a slight glimpse of it leaving when he arrived to his creators death, he searcher both among the Rebel Union and the UIG Ranks for that such mobile suit.Faction: Rebel UnionRank: 3rd in command, yet often not seen as he works out of sightMobile Suit Name: Caelestis Machina (Latin, Celestial Machine)Power Plant: XX-Drive[spoiler=Mobile Suit Appearance:]similar to Mobile Suit Weaponry: Heat rods attached to sides of feet sticking out- detachableRocket launcher with 16 Rockets on top of left shoulderBeam Saber, blade part sticking out from tip of what would be middle finger knuckleMobile Suit Equipment: Large Shield attached to left Arm, Detachable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 There's only 3 (Well... Technically 2) Problems with your App: #1) The Pic: Too Childish (SHE Looks 14 >.>)#2) Your Bio: It's missing a Line and a Half#3)... SEED Mode isn't a MS thing' date=' it's a Person thing. And you need SEED Factor First >.> Fix those and your Accepted[/color']#1) Was lazy in pic finding but got another. (You got a link to a good anime pic finding place where the old guys don't look like creepers?)#2) Added, again lazy. >.>#3) SEED Factor added SEED Mode taken out but will be used in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Okay, now your Accepted LZ ANBU_Leader... HOW does you Character know it was a UIG Mobile Suit that killed His Creator? I could easily make it a Rebel Mobile Suit >.> FIX that. And about the Space thing: UIG controls the PLANET, including it's Orbit >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Thankies. <3 Not many Gundam RP'ers. =[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZhaneX Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 [align=center]Race: AndroidName: 2489127 - RevanAge: 27Gender: MaleAppearance: [spoiler=Pic] Personality: He was designed to be the perfect soldier. Silent and deadly. Unfortunatly, his creators weren't geniuses with programing. He is actually quite rude usually, ignoring people often and not listening to orders often. However, he is a highly capable Mobile Suit pilot, and maintains his planned personality during serious situations at the very least.Revan's Creator's Note:WHY?! Why did I hire that idiot of a programer? I know I can't program an android, I can only build them, but I should have held out! I should have found a better programer! Instead of the perfect soldier I got...Bio: Built to be the Perfect Battle Droid his programing...failed, though his combat specs were completed, his personality left alot to be desired of a perfect soldier. Despite this failure, he was given a place within the Elite Forces of the UIG army. His piloting skills are top notch and despite his personality problems, he remains a fairly important fighter. Just as long as he doesn't piss off the wrong person...Faction: UIGRank: Elite SoldierMobile Suit Name: GrasperPower Plant: X-DriveMobile Suit Appearance:[spoiler=Pic] Mobile Suit Weaponry:Beam Rifle - Basic beam rifleBeam Saber - 2 Basic Beam sabers along with a 3rd with an extended range built into the beam rifleBeam Claw - 2 energized cables with claws on the endMobile Suit Equipment:OverDrive System - Allows Suit to change from Moblie Suit mode to Fighter Mode and back.[/align] Umm, is it alright that I use an Over Flag? I mean, I know that's from Gundam 00, but it doesn't have a GN Drive or anything... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted December 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 [align=center]Race: AndroidName: 2489127 - RevanAge: 27Gender: MaleAppearance: [spoiler=Pic] Personality: He was designed to be the perfect soldier. Silent and deadly. Unfortunately' date=' his creators weren't geniuses with programing. He is actually quite rude usually, ignoring people often and not listening to orders often. However, he is a highly capable Mobile Suit pilot, and maintains his planned personality during serious situations at the very least.[u']Revan's Creator's Note:[/u]WHY?! Why did I hire that idiot of a program. I know I can't program an android, I can only build them, but I should have held out! I should have found a better programmer! Instead of the perfect soldier I got...Bio: Built to be the Perfect Battle Droid his programing...failed, though his combat specs were completed, his personality left alot to be desired of a perfect soldier. Despite this failure, he was given a place within the Elite Forces of the UIG army. His piloting skills are top notch and despite his personality problems, he remains a fairly important fighter. Just as long as he doesn't piss off the wrong person...Faction: UIGRank: Elite SoldierMobile Suit Name: Carver'DPower Plant: X-DriveMobile Suit Appearance:[spoiler=Pic] Mobile Suit Weaponry:Linear Rifle - Fires solid piercing rounds at high-accelerationsVibrolade - The Blade is Vibrated at a Very High Frequency to Increase its Cutting Ability.Mobile Suit Equipment:OverDrive System - Allows Suit to change from Mobile Suit mode to Fighter Mode and back.Sonic Shield - Rod-shaped object on right arm that spins at high-speeds to deflect incoming attacks.[/align] Umm, is it alright that I use an Over Flag? I mean, I know that's from Gundam 00, but it doesn't have a GN Drive or anything...Edits mean what it REALLY is in THIS Sotryling Here's the Probable... Your using a Relic in THIS Time Line >.>, as they where FIRST made in 2307, and really: WHY a Over Flag? Of ALL the thing you could have chosen... Even the ORIGINAL Gundam would have been better, ATLEAST it has Beam Sabers I recommend something that will actually do some Damage >.> Like this: http://gundam.wikia.com/wiki/GAT-X103AP_Verde_Buster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZhaneX Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 The reason I picked the Over Flag is because I like Aerial Transformable Mobile Suits.But if it's not acceptable than I'll pick something else...BTW, does the pic have to be from a Gundam Series? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Race: HumanName: Henry JacobsenAge: 25Gender: Male[spoiler=Appearance:] Personality: Henry is a man of business. He is a no-nonsense kind of guy who never lies, and always follows orders to the letter. He is friendly underneath a tough outer shell, and he loves kids.Bio: Henry was a kind fellow. When he was finally showed the errors of the UIG, he almost had a mental breakdown. He spent weeks inside, moaning and groaning. After he thought, pondered, he made up his mind. He packed all his precious belongings, left not a trace of what he had been, and left, not telling anyone where he was goingl. He joined the Rebels a week later.Faction: RebelRank: Elite SoldierMobile Suit Name: Infinite JusticePower Plant: X-Drive[spoiler=Mobile Suit Appearance:] Mobile Suit Weaponry: two beam sabers stored on hip, vulcan guns on head, small energy sub machine gun, dual energy blastersMobile Suit Equipment: Wings that stabilize flight, can be detached to become weapons, can convert to an atmospheric/spacecraft fighter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 The reason I picked the Over Flag is because I like Aerial Transformable Mobile Suits.But if it's not acceptable than I'll pick something else...BTW' date=' does the pic have to be from a Gundam Series?[/b']*facedesk* >.> The hell do you think? It's just too obvious Spartan... Your pics aren't working Cnaged you XX-Drive to an X-Drive, and you DO realize that UIG has Records of ALL their Members and makes Notes of their "Missing" Members? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Both of them or just the guy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Spartan... Your pics aren't working Cnaged you XX-Drive to an X-Drive' date=' and you DO realize that UIG has Records of ALL their Members and makes Notes of their "Missing" Members?[/quote'] What do you thing is "s" in picS means? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 How's that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 If your using the Infinite Jurtice as you Mobile suit pic... Just use the Infinte Justice >.> And te Pic of the GUY isn't workin now >.> THIS is why the "Preview Post" Button >.> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZhaneX Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Okay what about this, would it be okay to use a 00 suit design, just without all the GN bells and whistles? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 WTF are "GN Bells and Whistles"!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZhaneX Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 GN-type beam weapons, Trans-AM, radar jamming and GN Particle spreading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 ... No >.> If you can't think up something... Just... Just use this Mobile Suit: http://gundam.wikia.com/wiki/MVF-M11C_Murasame It transforms into a Jet >.> The ONLY Gundam you could think off is an Over Flag... And I found this... I sense a Fail Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZhaneX Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 ...actually, I thought that we weren't allowed Gundams for the first bit.If I thought we could use a Gundam, just not a 00 one, I woulda picked the Zeta. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 ...actually' date=' I thought that we weren't allowed Gundams for the first bit.If I thought we could use a Gundam, just not a 00 one, I woulda picked the Zeta.[/quote']I meant Mobile Suit >.> Not Accepted >.> You CAN use a Gundam, but it's CAPABILITIES are reduced to the same as a Mobile Suit >.>! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZhaneX Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Okay then. Editted my first post to be Zeta. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrownedClown Posted December 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 ((Despite me ALREADY saying "Not Accepted at you HUGE-HUGE Fails... We needed one more to start >.>)) Bayonetta was doing her Daily Patrol in the E.S. Dinah, Today was her Turn to Patrol 'Rennes-le-Château', the Main Metropolis and Home to the UIG's Headquarters. "Why of all Day did I have to Patrol Home Base?" she though with a Sigh. ["Miss Bayonetta... May I have a moment of you time?"] Said a Voice over the Video-Link, it was Dmitri Yuriev Current Head of the UIG's Military Group. "O-of course Head Chairman Yuriev!" Bayonetta said, halting the E.S. Dinah, and carefully listening to the Head Chairman's Words. While she listened, she activated Rennes-le-Château's Outer Defenses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ANBU Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 Roxas i fixed.. i think... i took out the orbit bit and said that he searchers both among rebel Union ranks and the UIG he fights, so it could be either.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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