Rprshadow Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 i made this card to be an inprovment over snatch steal... in my opinion it would be the utimate "change of heart" style card, but i have doubts about it being ballenced enough. anyone familiar with the naruto anime should recognize the relavence of the picture. incase you arn't familier the picture dipics neji hyuuga (good guy) in an akatsuki robe (the group of villans), i thought it was a good picture choice since this particular "good guy" is one of the least likely to ever become a traitor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Well, it's an improvement of your last card, but I see some sentence structuring issues that I notice you repeat; like spacing out the effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Saboooom Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Picture is pretty grainy and the OCG isnt great. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rprshadow Posted December 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 well im glad it atleast got a 6/10 it was thrown together pretty quickly and to be honest in my opinion it's definitly one of my worst, as for spacing effects and writing "attack and deffence instead of ATK and DEF that's just a personal preferance i can't seem to get over. On another note i suppose i should take this chance to show one of my more succesful ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 1, Snatch Steal is banned, so making one with noLP increase is bad, and2 Your second card has too much ATK.Balance those two out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rprshadow Posted December 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 you really think the gaara card has too many attack points? the reason i gave him 1800 attack points is because with only 1800 you usualy can't kill anything....anything that doesn't have some kind of effect to destroy and or remove your monster. i clearly understand what you mean about snatch steal though, in my first few cards i was very bad at doing drawbacks in the cards, mainly because as i duelist i look at alot of the cards and ask myself if it's even worth making. and sorry about the ritual i atached to this i realize i most likely made it WAY unballenced, but thats mainly because im biast int he mannor of it being based on my favorate character. still...atleast i don't make cards with infinate attack points for anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jerry OldMaster Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 First: poor OCG, blurry picture. It's GOR is around 1.85, so it definitely will be banned. 5/10.Second..... okay, but ATK should be 1600. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztex Posted December 11, 2007 Report Share Posted December 11, 2007 Bad OCG but I like your idea! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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