Elemental Lords: The Darkness Fades In! [Chapter 4 Posted!]

[Kōsuke Ueki]

This is my second Fan Fic. Hope you like it. Enjoy!

 

[spoiler=[align=center]Table of Contents]

Prologue - Below Table of Contents

 

Chapter 1 - Post #7

 

Chapter 2 - Post #11

 

Chapter 3 - Post #15

 

Chapter 4 - Post #18

 

Chapter 5 - Coming Soon![/align]

 

 

[spoiler=Prologue]

Fear...

 

Fear is the reason I was living in a horrible life. Fear was the reason I was kidnapped, nearly killed, and almost raped.

 

Hope...

 

Hope was the reason how I can believe in myself. Hope was the reason why I can change things. These and more were experienced in my life. That is until I turned 18. My name is Sean Kozac, and this is the story of how my life was changed for many years to come. This is the story of the Elemental Lords and Warriors!

 

 

[spoiler=Elemental Lord Powers]

1. Light(Mine)

2. Fire(Mine)

3. Water(Open)

4. Ice(Open)

5. Stone(Open)

6. Forest(Open)

7. Wind(Open)

8. Lightning(Open)

9. Sun(Open)

10. Darkness(Mine)

 

[spoiler=Application]

Note 1: If you apply and are accepted, your will be under the use of me and ONLY me for the whole story.

Note 2: Remove everything in brackets.

 

Character Application:

 

Name:

Ancestor's Name(Has to be a scrambled version of your chosen name so that I can read it):

Transferred Elemental Lord Power(See “Elemental Lord Powers”):

Elemental Lord Abilities(Must be listed in spoiler):

Appearance(Link and edit description only):

Battle Appearance(Same as Appearance):

Elemental Blade[Must have Alon- in it(Which means blade in my special language) and a word that means the element you chose.):

Ancestor Life Story(From birth to the great battle):

Character Bio(3-4 sentences or 2-3 lines. Say when someone told you the story that only involved your ancestor):

 

Elemental Dragon Application:

 

Note: You must have this with your character app.

 

Element:

Name:

Appearance(Description only, unless from a different country can use a small 100×120 pixel pics):

Fusion Appearance(Same as Appearance):

Armor Fusion Appearance(Must be a sketch):

Time as Elemental Lord Guardian:(Between 2,500 and 100,000):

Sword Transformation Appearance(When fused as dragon armor. Link only):

 

 

 

I will add something new to the character application soon.

[Yankee]

Uh..I'm not doin anything until I know the story and if you can write..>_>

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Okay, I'll make the prologue tomorrow, and the applications will be active until Christmas. Applications will then be active again after Christmas. Sounds good?

[Yankee]

Sure?

I don't know anybody that will put applications in until it's up though..

[bury the year]

You need a plot, a prologue, and an explanation. This is completely out-of-context otherwise.

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Edit'd. Prologue added.

[Kōsuke Ueki]

[align=center]Okay, since I have a Wii, I can't copy and paste. So from now on, each chapter will be in some of my next posts. Table of Contents will be up after Christmas, and before New Year's Eve. But for now, here is Chapter 1.

 

[spoiler=[b]Chapter 1: The Great Elemental War[/b]]

20,000 B.C.-19,500 B.C.

 

There were 10 Elemental Lords:

 

Fire, Water, Ice, Forest, Stone, Wind, Lightning, Sun, Light, and Darkness.

 

These very lords had kept the world in order, except the Lord of Darkness, who's purpose is unknown to others and himself. So he had decided to try and take over Earth with his warriors and dragon guardian. He declared war on the Elemental Lords, their warriors and dragon guardians that kept nature in balance, hoping to find a purpose in life. The battle was fierce, but the Lord of Darkness could not be stopped. The Lord of Darkness then realized his purpose was to rule the Earth alone.

But one day, during the war, the Lord of Light arose from his long slumber when he sensed an inbalance in nature due to the war. "Lord of Darkness!" the Lord of Light spoke. "Your reign of terror ends here!" "YOU!!!" the Lord of Darkness yelled. The Lord of Light, his warriors, and his dragon guardian, Kintaro, entered the war, making it much more fierce.

Every other Elemental Lord fought against the Lord of Darkness. The battle became more fierce as the years went on. And as the years went on, more and more lives have been lost.

Near the end of the war, the strongest warrior of the Lord of Light, Naes Cazok, was given the sword the Lord of Light had possessed, the Alondite, meaning "Sword of 10,000 Shining Stars". The Lord of Fire's strongest warrior, Samoht Cazok, was given the Alonblaze, meaning "Sword of 10,000 Erupting Infernos". Samoht worked with his brother to take down the Lord of Darkness' strongest warrior, and Naes' evil spawn, Enas Samose, who was given the Alonshadow, meaning "Sword of 10,000 Dark Shadows", used by the Lord of Darkness.

The end of the war was caused when all of the Elemental Lords were destroyed. The good Elemental Lords sacrificed themselves to seal away the Lord of Darkness' power into a stone. The remaining Lords did the same thing, but sealed their dragons and swords away as well. And before they did that, they all told their strongest warriors, "Well, done! You have made us very proud. Now, in 21 and a half milleiniums, your descendants will find our Elemental stones. You may now live your lives peacefully. Farewell, forever." With that said, the Lords died with their powers sealed away in a stone with a symbol that matches their elements.

 

The world was at peace once more, but it wouldn't last long. For in 21,500 years, darkness will fade back into this world, one way or another.

 

 

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[Kōsuke Ueki]

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I highly await comments by anyone.

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Since nobody has posted a comment, here is Chapter 2:

 

[align=center][spoiler=[b]Chapter 2: Before The Experience![/b]]

Thomas Kozac, my brother, and descendant of Samoht Cazok, went on a school camping trip with many others, including me, Sean Kozac, descendant of Neas Cazok, and my greedy little half-brother, Sane Esomas, descendant of Enas Samose. We did many activities for many hours, including hiking, dodgeball, basketball, etc.

Later that night, all of the counselors were a chaperone to one camper. A camper would go with a counselor to a distant area in the forest, and each tell them a story. The stories that were told to each camper was merely the same one I had told you, but in more details of their ancestors and team-up partners. Thomas was explained more about his ancestor than I remember. The story I was given was the exact same mentioned earlier. Each camper was given these exact words from their chaperones when they finished the stories, "Do not speak of your part of this story to anyone until the right moment." All together, we all said, "When is the right moment?" All of the counselors then said, "You will know very soon."

The next morning, we all returned to our buses, thinking of how we will wait for the 'right moment'. "These people believe in such nonsense! Thomas thought. Do they really think we're gonna fall for that big bunch of bologna? I thought.

Thomas was a very nice guy. He was a generous and caring person. I, too, have these traits, but I'm more intelligent and always made sacrifices for others.

What drawed our attention was the fact that we had been seeing visions of the future, but we didn't understand why. We believed that it was a sign that we need to follow by in order to see what happens.

These visions were always interrupting important parts of our lives, but we soon knew that something was coming, something 100%, entirely out of the ordinary.

We knew that when the time comes, we would understand the truth. We would know what to do. We would stop this before it ruins our lives. We would put an end to it once and for all. But for a year, nothing had happened, until 4 months ago, when everything began to go wrong.

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Still awaiting comments!

[Kōsuke Ueki]

BUMP!!

[Sman518]

Cool!

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Thanks. I'll PM you when Ch. 3 is up. At least someone made a comment. Thank God!

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Okay, people, what's going on? I barely gotten any comments! I just want a lot of comments, that's all! Let's hope you have comments for Chapter 3. Here it is.

 

[align=center][spoiler=[b]Chapter 3: The Return of Darkness![/b]]

A year later, everything went wrong. This experience happened to all of us, one at a time. The first to experience this, and the one who started all of this, was my evil half-brother, Sane Esomas:

 

Sane Esomas

 

Sane was walking like he was hiding something. He always got in trouble with the law. He never knew when to stop. It is the same with pranks.

One day, his visions returned, but this time it was different. He was in his room, it was black with posters of Black Metal and Death Metal bands. On one side of his room, there was a glass box with a longsword inside. It was a prize for winning a radio contest.

When his visions returned, it showed a symbol of a black skull emblem on a plain, white poster. In coincidence, Sane looked at the very poster behind him. He slowly walked up to it. When he touched it, black clouds quickly formed in the sky.

The Stone of Darkness appeared in Sane's hand. He looked into the skull emblem on it very deeply. Suddenly, shadows began to cover his body, making it hard to breathe. Then out of nowhere, the longsword began to levitate and appear before Sane's hand. The shadows then ceeded. Sane had changed in appearance. He had the appearance of an old time warrior of darkness, but with armor on his arms and shoulders. The longsword had transformed into the Alonshadow. Sane had all of Enas' memories, making him realize what he must do.

"It's time to do what Enas planned to do ages ago!" Sane yelled. He busted through his window. He then chanted a dark spell. "Makuta! Renu, Mai Zen Po!" The spell released two previous soldiers of the Lord of Darkness. Their names were Exotor and Terminia. They bowed to Sane as he released pawn creatures of the Lord of Darkness, that now work for Sane. They were known as Shadow Strikers.

Meanwhile, Thomas went to find the source of the clouds. He came up to a Shadow Striker that noticed him. It blasted Thomas with a dark sphere-like attack. Before he got hit, Thomas closed his eyes and put his right hand out. Suddenly, a fire blast came out of his hand. He looked to see that the fire disintegrated the attack and the Striker. He looked at the palm of his hand and noticed a fire emblem there. He was shocked at what it could mean. It then disappeared. Thomas was confused on what was going on.

What he didn't know was that he is involved in this. He would need to find the Stone of Fire quickly. His life will be on the line if he doesn't.

 

 

Applications are open! Apply now![/align]

[SmallieBigs]

Who needs a Pro Weather Report when you have a Rookie Daily News!

 

This is my second Fan Fic. Hope you like it. Enjoy!

 

[spoiler=[align=center]Table of Contents]

Prologue - Below Table of Contents

 

Chapter 1 - Post #7

 

Chapter 2 - Post #11

 

Chapter 3 - Coming Soon![/align]

 

 

[spoiler=Prologue]

Fear...

I sense an awesome story.

Fear is the reason I was living in a horrible life. Fear was the reason I was kidnapped' date=' nearly killed, and almost raped.

Ewwww, anyway I sense an epic story, because the Epen is going wild.

Hope...

Come on hope! Darkness FTW!

Hope was the reason how I can believe in myself. Hope was the reason why I can change things. These and more were experienced in my life. That is until I turned 18. My name is Sean Kozac, and this is the story of how my life was changed for many years to come. This is the story of the Elemental Lords and Warriors! Okay so far my Epen has exploded I sense a huge amount of epic...

 

 

[spoiler=Elemental Lord Powers]

1. Light(Mine)

2. Fire(Mine)

3. Water(Open)

4. Ice(Open)

5. Stone(Open)

6. Forest(Open)

7. Wind(Open)

8. Lightning(Open)

9. Sun(Open)

10. Darkness(Mine)

 

[spoiler=Application]

Note 1: If you apply and are accepted, your will be under the use of me and ONLY me for the whole story.

Note 2: Remove everything in brackets.

 

Character Application:

 

Name:

Ancestor's Name(Has to be a scrambled version of your chosen name so that I can read it):

Transferred Elemental Lord Power(See “Elemental Lord Powers”):

Elemental Lord Abilities(Must be listed in spoiler):

Appearance(Link and edit description only):

Battle Appearance(Same as Appearance):

Elemental Blade[Must have Alon- in it(Which means blade in my special language) and a word that means the element you chose.):

Ancestor Life Story(From birth to the great battle):

Character Bio(3-4 sentences or 2-3 lines. Say when someone told you the story that only involved your ancestor):

 

Elemental Dragon Application:

 

Note: You must have this with your character app.

 

Element:

Name:

Appearance(Description only, unless from a different country can use a small 100×120 pixel pics):

Fusion Appearance(Same as Appearance):

Armor Fusion Appearance(Must be a sketch):

Time as Elemental Lord Guardian:(Between 2,500 and 100,000):

Sword Transformation Appearance(When fused as dragon armor. Link only):

 

 

 

I will add something new to the character application soon.

[spoiler=DAILY NEWS!]

Since nobody has posted a comment' date=' here is Chapter 2:

 

[align=center'][spoiler=[b]Chapter 2: Before The Experience![/b]]

Thomas Kozac, my brother, and descendant of Samoht Cazok, went on a school camping trip with many others, including me, Sean Kozac, descendant of Neas Cazok, and my greedy little half-brother, Sane Esomas, descendant of Enas Samose. We did many activities for many hours, including hiking, dodgeball, basketball, etc. First person story, huh? Weather Report I think frowns on this I forget.

Later that night, all of the counselors were a chaperone to one camper. A camper would go with a counselor to a distant area in the forest, and each tell them a story. Oh no a story! The stories that were told to each camper was merely the same one I had told you, but in more details of their ancestors and team-up partners. Alright so noe you are explaining the story and what is about good job. Thomas was explained more about his ancestor than I remember. "Noe" WTF is that you mean know right? The story I was given was the exact same mentioned earlier. How long was the time agaiN? Each camper was given these exact words from their chaperones when they finished the stories, "Do not speak of your part of this story to anyone until the right moment." All together, we all said, "When is the right moment?" All of the counselors then said, "You will know very soon." Suspenseful! I like it...

The next morning, we all returned to our buses, thinking of how we will wait for the 'right moment'. "These people believe in such nonsense! Thomas thought. Do they really think we're gonna fall for that big bunch of bologna? I thought.

Thomas was a very nice guy. He was a generous and caring person. I, too, have these traits, but I'm more intelligent and always made sacrifices for others. Like how in the prolouge right?

What drawed our attention was the fact that we had been seeing visions of the future, but we didn't understand why. We believed that it was a sign that we need to follow by in order to see what happens. DOUBLE GARY SUES!

These visions were always interrupting important parts of our lives, but we soon knew that something was coming, something 100%, entirely out of the ordinary. Revealing the story isn't that great! Anyway cool story bro.

We knew that when the time comes, we would understand the truth. We would know what to do. We would stop this before it ruins our lives. We would put an end to it once and for all. But for a year, nothing had happened, until 4 months ago, when everything began to go wrong. I know the next chapter is going to be a flashback!

 

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Still awaiting comments!

[spoiler=Daily News!]20,000 B.C.-19,500 B.C.

 

There were 10 Elemental Lords:

 

Fire, Water, Ice, Forest, Stone, Wind, Lightning, Sun, Light, and Darkness. Nice explaining the past well no not right now.

 

These very lords had kept the world in order, except the Lord of Darkness, Of course! who's purpose is unknown to others and himself. Hmmm weird was his creation just some sick joke? So he had decided to try and take over Earth with his warriors and dragon guardian. Okay he wants to take over the world, so generic T_T He declared war on the Elemental Lords, their warriors and dragon guardians that kept nature in balance, hoping to find a purpose in life. Okay so he has 2 goals, both very different. The battle was fierce, but the Lord of Darkness could not be stopped. The Lord of Darkness then realized his purpose was to rule the Earth alone. WHAT!?!?!?!?!?

But one day, during the war, the Lord of Light arose from his long slumber when he sensed an inbalance in nature due to the war. "Lord of Darkness!" the Lord of Light spoke. "Your reign of terror ends here!" "YOU!!!" the Lord of Darkness yelled. The Lord of Light, his warriors, and his dragon guardian, Kintaro, entered the war, making it much more fierce. New line when somebody else is speaking. Of course the war is more fierce when somebody else enters.

Every other Elemental Lord fought against the Lord of Darkness. The battle became more fierce as the years went on. And as the years went on, more and more lives have been lost. I like how you take the story into dark areas of the world.

Near the end of the war, the strongest warrior of the Lord of Light, Naes Cazok, was given the sword the Lord of Light had possessed, the Alondite, meaning "Sword of 10,000 Shining Stars". The Lord of Fire's strongest warrior, Samoht Cazok, was given the Alonblaze, meaning "Sword of 10,000 Erupting Infernos". Samoht worked with his brother to take down the Lord of Darkness' strongest warrior, and Naes' evil spawn, Enas Samose, who was given the Alonshadow, meaning "Sword of 10,000 Dark Shadows", used by the Lord of Darkness. Okay intresting different languages for names you could have used more creative names but really who cares.

The end of the war was caused when all of the Elemental Lords were destroyed. The good Elemental Lords sacrificed themselves to seal away the Lord of Darkness' power into a stone. The remaining Lords did the same thing, but sealed their dragons and swords away as well. And before they did that, they all told their strongest warriors, "Well, done! You have made us very proud. Now, in 21 and a half milleiniums, your descendants will find our Elemental stones. You may now live your lives peacefully. Farewell, forever." With that said, the Lords died with their powers sealed away in a stone with a symbol that matches their elements. Nice ending, but really just seal their dragons and swords away okay.

 

The Daily News has been spread!

 

The world was at peace once more, but it wouldn't last long. For in 21,500 years, darkness will fade back into this world, one way or another.

[Kōsuke Ueki]

Thanks a lot! I've been awaiting a report about 3 weeks. You forgot to review Chapter 3, though.

[Kōsuke Ueki]

I hate not having comments. Either than that, here's Chapter 4.

 

[align=center][spoiler=[b]Chapter 4: The Flames Reignite![/b]]

Thomas Kozac

 

When Thomas had first noticed the fire emblem on his hand, he did not know what it meant. Of course, he still had visions, but they were different this time. They were like visual clues to what he must find.

His first vision showed a building of sorts. It was abandoned due to reports of paranormal activity. Thomas didn't believe in ghosts, and neither do I. He had decided to follow these visions and see where they led to.

When he came to the house, he went through the front door.

The house seemed about 15 years old. It had old paintings from unimportant people. It was covered in cobwebs, making it hard to tell where he needs to go and what he needs to find.

Suddenly, a few Shadow Strikers ambushed Thomas in the middle of his search. He looked to see a longsword on the wall that can still be used. He grabbed it and prepares a stance. Then the fire emblem appeared on his hand again. From what he did before, he launched fire blasts at the Strikers, making them disintegrate. Thomas still had wondered how he did that, but when the time comes, he'll understand everything.

He eventually saw another vision. It showed the fire emblem that appeared on his hand twice on an old safe. It just came in coincidence that the same safe was behind him. The emblem appeared on his hand again and on the safe. He thought he should touch the safe with his hand to see if anything would happen. Something did happen.

As soon as Thomas touched the safe, he saw something glowing red from behind him. He walked over to the glowing object. It was the Stone of Fire. He picked it up and there was the same fire emblem on it as well. He looked deeply into the emblem and his eyes widened. He then saw a vision of the great battle that took place before. Meanwhile, a red fog covered Thomas' body. The sword in his hands was covered in flames. Suddenly, the appearance, memories, and powers of Samoht Cazok came to him. The longsword in his hand became the legendary Alonblaze. He now knew exactly what need's to be done. It's time to bring peace back to this world. Thomas thought.

Of course, I still had to find out the purpose of my visions. Until that time happens, I would still be searching in confusion of what is my purpose in this kind of problem.

 

 

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