Yugioh D-City(Chapter 10 is up on post #92)

[♠Decietful King♠]

[spoiler=Theme song]Don't mind the characters already there just listen to the song Funny Sunny Day -SxOxU

 

[spoiler=Main Character]

Name-Shiroi Enkou(means white flame)

Age-15

Duelist Rank-3(prior to the events of chapter 1), 7 (after events of chapter 1) After his Training and after the first two rounds of The Tournament he gets up to Rank 10

Deck-Black Warrior Deck(Archetype i made)

Ace card-Blackstar Dragon

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Personality/Bio-Lazy, Great Duelist loves the game of Duel monsters. Has a big crush on Tenka Arashi has great respect for Aka Arashi(Tenka's older brother and one of the 6 level 10 ranked Duelist). He is thrown into a wild prophecy in which he must save his entire world (no surprise there).

 

[spoiler=Protagonists]

[spoiler=Roi Militant]

Name is french for King Fighter

Age-15

Duelist Rank-7

Deck-Legends Reborn deck

Ace card-Legendary Beast Lioflare

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Personality/Bio-Talks a lot annoying to Tenka because he fears she is trying to steal Shiroi from him as he and Shiroi have best friends since he moved to Duelist City from France when he was 6.

 

[spoiler=Tenka Arashi]

Name means Snow Storm

Age-15

Duelist rank-7

Deck-Storm Deck(another Archetype i made)

Ace card- Ice Storm Dragon

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Personality/Bio-Outgoing, good duelist and falls in love with Shiroi but decides not to tell him. Great student good friend and misses her older brother as he only hangs out with 5 of the 6 other level 10s.

 

[spoiler=Aka Arashi]

Name means Red Storm

Age-19

Duelist Rank-10

Deck-Archane Deck(archetype i made(not done yet))

Ace card-Archane Beast Jinwar

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Personality/Bio-Snoty, quite, top ranked Duelist despises Weak people because they can't stick up for themselves. Great Student loves his little sister and protects her often.

 

 

[spoiler=Akana Hibiki]

Character by .ttoo.

Age-20

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Name (I would prefer it to have a meaning): Akana Hibiki (Deep red echo)

Duelist Rank: It changes as story progress 3 at beginning

Deck: Moonlight Secrets- Working on it

Personality: Intelligent, reckless sometimes.

 

 

[spoiler=Denkiteki Kedamono]

Name means Legendary Beast (nicknamed Kit by Shiroi and Roi because his name was too long.)

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Age-15

Duelist Rank-1 until Duels against and beats both Nenshou and Renatus at the same time he jumps to 7 as this might go against the rules the Mayor sees it fit because of the accomplishment.

Deck-Centuera Beasts deck(another Archetype i made

Ace card-Centuera Beast Overas

Personality-Mysterious, intelligent, speaks with Roi a lot seeing how they both speak French.

Bio-Not much is known about this duelist. He is known to sometimes talk to Roi and Shiroi but not many others. His duel style relies on his monsters' power and their swarm ability.

 

 

[spoiler=Cacarout Digrase]

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Name by Destruction Hero

Duelist Rank:5(soon becomes 6)

Deck:destiny heroes and elemental heroes(soon has Phantom sky blaster and Raviel)

Antagonist or Protagonist?:Protagonist

Personality:Smart,kind and generous but when dueling is nasty,cruel and wicked.

Bio:He came to duel a few people and find his lost deck but the rest is a mystery.

 

[spoiler=Teishu Twins]

[spoiler=Appearnaces]

 

Design By Raver

Name:Kaen Teishu(means Blaze Master)

Duelist Rank: 9

Deck:This Jurak Deck I found (You can add a few other cards if you want. All Cards on page apply to deck.)

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Protagonist

Personality: Is a quick thinker a smart duelist,eager to duel and win.Is always pretty quick to help his friends.

Bio:Comes from the suburbs of New Domio City. When he was 7 he and his brother got thier first decks.They were a dueling team from the start. When his Jurak Velhipo Kuro's Blackwing Armor Master and were stolen by bulies,Kaen heard that Kuro was beaten by thier leader trying to get them back and then steped in to beat the leader and got thier cards back.Nothing else is known about the twins, other than that thier parents were well know duelists....

 

Name: Kuro Teishu( Means Dark Master)

Duelist Rank: 9

Deck:Blackwing All cards on page apply

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Protagonist

Personality: Thinks fast but can somtimes be rash.He does'nt realy like to lose but is'nt a sore loser.Is never far away from his brother Kaen.

Bio: Comes from the suburbs of New Domio City. When he was 7 he and his brother got thier first decks.They were a dueling team from the start. When his Blackwing Armor Master and Kaen's Jurak Velhipo were stolen by bulies, he tried to get them back but was beaten by the group's leader.Then Kaen steped in to beat the leader and got thier cards back.Nothing else is known about the twins, other than that thier parents were well know duelists....

 

 

[spoiler=Jake Johnson]

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Name: (no meaning) Jake Johnson

Duelist Rank: 8

Deck:morphtronic (include combo Defense magnen, defense magnen, defense cameran)

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Protagonist

Personality: Loves to duel and always looking to duel. And isnt scared of a challange (on rare ocasions refers that hes from america)

Bio: After moving to D-city he quickly challenged anyone he saw to a duel, and with his Morphtronic invinceible shield (cameran magnen magnen) he was able to defeat high ranked duelists and become a rank eight.

 

 

[spoiler=Spiridon Carter]

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Name: Spiridon (Greek meaning caller of spirits)

Duelist Rank: 0 at 1st then gets higher (no self-confidence) (later believes he can be a great duelist)

Deck: Fiend Roar Deties

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Protagonist

Personality: calm, but if you get him mad, you won't like it.

Bio: One day, Spiridon entered a tournament when he was 7. He lost every duel, and lost his self-confidence. He only duels if:

1. He is forced to

2. He is mad

Any memories of his mom will make him upset.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Main Antagonist]

Name-Akumu Kaze (means nightmare wind)

Age-15

Duelist Rank-10

Deck-Yokai Deck (archetype by TitanKing)

Ace card-Yokai Warrior-Arshon

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Personality-?????

Bio-Not much is known about the leader of the Nightmare Gang but he does leave the opponents he beats in a duel with Nightmares after wards. The only known duelist to Draw out his Ace monster is Aka Arashi.

 

[spoiler=Antagonists]

[spoiler=Renatus Silvius]

 

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Name means born again in the forest

Age-16

Duelist Rank: 9

Deck: Zombies

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Antagonist

Personality: Always wants to win. Does what ever it takes to win even if he cheats

Bio: Underling to Akumu. Uses his deck to swarm his opponents and terrify them into submission. Has been a bully ever since he was little and still acts this way. Akumu's lead general.

 

 

[spoiler=Donny Pulvera]

Name: (Pulvera means Pulverize)

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Age-15

Duelist Rank:6 when he first duels Shiroi and is a rank 9 during the tournament

Deck: 1st duel against Shiroi uses Elemental heroes and Evil Heroes. In second Duel appearance on he uses Espadachin Heroes.(Archetype by me)

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Antagonist

Personality: Quiet, Gets fired up in a duel, Sweet and Kind.

Bio: Donny loves dueling he played against his father in a duel using a deck made by his grandfather he beat his father a great Duelist that once defeated the Legendary Yusei. Donny left his family to set out to some day face a far more better duelist than Yusei. Becomes Shiroi's rival after their first duel as they matched on par with each other but was later revealed to be a thrown match to test Shiroi and see if was a threat to Akumu. One of Akumu's 4 generals because of his great skills.

 

 

[spoiler=Roy Gordan]

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Character by Meka

Duelist Rank: Rank 5 when he first appears to the Guardians Rank 8 during the Tournament

Deck: Cloudians Deck

Ace Card-Stardust Dragon

Antagonist or Protagonist: Antagonist

Personality:Hot Tempered and Usually the first to throw a punch Roy will follow a gut instinct to the ends of the earth, Usually doesn't think before he acts but means well and will be there in a time of need. One of Akumu's 4 Generals.

Bio: Age:17 Height:6' 2" Weight:327 lbs From: St Louis, Missouri, USA

 

 

[spoiler=Zosimo]

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Name means survivor

Duelist Rank: 9

Deck: Flamvell

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Antagonist

Personality: Impatient, harsh but respectful when defeated. As a survivor he has learned to combine his surroundings and resources to create greater things, he applies this tactic when he duels. One of Akumu's 4 Generals because of his survival skills.

Ace Card: Red Dragon Archfiend

 

 

[spoiler=Nenshou Kusari]

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Age-18

Name means Burning Chain

Duelist Rank-8 until he loses to Shiroi he drops to 6

Deck-Iron Chain Deck

Ace card-Iron Chain Dragon

Personalty-obnoxious loud and rude

Bio-Is known well for repeatedly harassing Tenka. Shiroi has enough of it and challenges Nenshou to a duel and which Nenshou loses.

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Rank Meaning]The Duelist rank have a specific meaning Duelist are ranked based on their skills. The Rankings go from 0-10 the only way if someone could be a Zero is if they have a 0%-5% winning percentage. To achieve Rank 2 a duelist must win 15 Matches. Rank 3 30 matches while to achieve Rank 4 you must win against 3 level 3s in a row. To achieve level 5 you must be able to duel on par with a level 5. One can skip Ranks if lets say a Rank 3 defeats a Rank 8 duelist their rank would increase by 4(the max a Rank can jump in one duel) the Rank 8 would lose 2 ranks making him a Rank 6. The difficult part is to achieve rank 10 meaning 1 one must beat 1 Rank 10 in a duel but a rank 10 is no pushover as Rank 10's are the most accomplished Duelist and their winning percentage is 97%-100%.

 

 

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[spoiler=Plot]

Shiroi is part of a 15000 year-old prophecy stating that White Flame along with the other 4 Guardians must one day band together to stop the Nightmare Wind and his group named Kasai Gaki as they attempt to one day take over the world but can not do so until they defeat the 5 Guardian Beast held by Shiroi Enkou, Roi Militant, Tenka Arashi, Aka Arashi and an Unknown fifth duelist who will be revealed later in the story.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1 Rise Blackstar Dragon!]

 

"Come on dude," Roi insisted "Lets go get something to eat."

 

"Fine!" I spat at him "But I getta choose the place."

 

"Alright!" he cheered.

 

Well lets catch you up to speed, my name is Shiroi Enkou I am a lowly Rank 3 duelist but my friends only think so because they all think I am slacker. This kid walking with me was Roi Militant my best friend ever since he moved here from France 9 years ago and well he could be so stubborn at times I just give up.

 

"Look it what we have here," Roi stated "Guess I know why you picked this place."

 

He pointed out the beautiful waitress walking toward us.

 

There she was I thought the hottest girl ever met Roi knew that I've had a crush on her since grade school.

 

"How can I help you today Shiroi?" she said her voice sounded like bells ringing.

 

"Hey I'm here to you know." Roi interrupted.

 

"Oh, hey Roi." she replied in a annoyed voice.

 

"HEY SWEETHEART" some guy screamed "STOP TALKING TO THOSE LOSERS AND COME TAKE THIS ORDER!" the man gestured towards his groin area.

 

"Oh god, not him again" she said.

 

"Hey Tenka you want me to take care of him?" I questioned.

 

"No it's fine he'll leave eventually," Tenka replied.

 

"Besides dude he's a Rank 8 Duelist and he's part of the Nightmare Gang." Roi remarked.

 

The Nightmare Gang are a group of thugs here in Duelist City led by the best duelist in the city Akumu Kaze nicknamed the Nightmare because when he beats someone in a duel he leaves the loser with nightmares.

 

"HEY SWEETIE COME ON OVER HERE ALREADY!" the screamed again.

 

He was really getting annoying I thought.

 

"I'll take care of him," I said.

 

Mistake 1 is I got up and threatened him to leave my friend alone. Mistake 2 was accepting his challenge.

 

"You sure you wanna duel me Kid?" he asked mockingly.

 

"Of course," I replied "You remember our terms, right?" I asked.

 

"I win you become my little lap dog," he said laughing "You win I never come back to this restaurant again."

 

"Like that'll happen boss," one of his grunts said hysterically.

 

"Oh by the way kid my name is Nenshou Kusari," he said still laughing.

 

"Alright then," I remarked annoyed already "Lets Duel."

 

(Nenshou-4000 LP Shiroi-4000 LP)

 

"I’ll let you go first punk," Nenshou explained.

 

Shiroi's turn

"Alright, Draw." I said.

 

Perfect i thought to myself I drew Double Summon.

 

"I’ll start things off by summoning Chaos Synchron!"

 

"And then i activate the Spell Card Double Summon, this card lets normal summon one extra monster to my side of the field and I choose Speed Warrior(ATK900/DEF400)!"

 

"Now I tune my Chaos Synchron to my Speed Warrior to Synchro Summon my Chaos Warrior(ATK2300/DEF1300)!"

 

Yes I thought I summoned one of my best cards on my first turn.

 

"I place two cards face-down and end my turn."

That turn was a complete success I thought.

 

Nenshou's turn.

"Alright, Draw" Nenshou exclaimed.

 

"Not bad kid but I'll do you one better, I summon Iron Chain Coil in DEF mode (ATK 1100/ DEF 1600)." Nenshou said

"That's not all, I activate the Trap Card Ultimate Offering to summon Iron Chain Snake in DEF mode (ATK800/DEF1200)," Nenshou said "But who said it was over there I tune my Iron Chain Coil to my Iron Chain Snake to Summon MY IRON CHAIN DRAGON(ATK2500/DEF1300)!!!"

"Now Iron Chain Dragon attack his Chaos Warrior!" Nenshou commanded.

"Not so fast," I screamed "I reveal face down to my Blinding Angel Trap Card, this card allwos me to negate your attacks as long as it stays on the field."

Dodged a bullet there, I thought but if I don't draw the right card then I might as well go buy a dog suit.

 

Life point update Shiroi 4000-LP Nenshou-3500 LP

 

Shiroi's Turn

"I take 500 damage from my Blinding Angel Trap Card," I told Nenshou.

"I activate the Trap Card Tuner Assailant" I said.

"Now by paying 500 life points I can search my deck for one Tuner monster and summon it to my side of the field and I choose Burn Synchron(ATK1400/DEF500)!" I explained.

"But who said that was all" I yelled in joy "Now I tune my Burn Synchron to my Chaos Warrior!"

"From the Black void of space comes the Guardian of the Black Star." I chanted

"Rise: Blackstar Dragon!(ATK2500/DEF2300)" I called out and came crashing down from the Sky above was my Ace monster the Blackstar Dragon.

"And with Burn Synchron being used in the Synchro Summon of this card my Blackstar Dragon gets 500 extra ATK points!" I explained Blackstar Dragon(3000/2300)

"Now i activate one of my monster's special ability by paying 500 Life points I can destroy any monster you control and I choose your Iron Chain Dragon."

 

Nenshou with a worried look on his face screams, "NO YOU CAN'T."

 

"I can and I will," I replied with a sly grin on my face.

A black gust came and sliced Iron Chain Dragon in half.

"Now you're wide open" I said "Go Blackstar Dragon attack his Life points directly!" (3500-3000=500)

"I place one card face down and end my turn," I said.

 

LP updates Shiroi-2500 Nenshou-500

 

"Draw," Nenshou said calmly.

 

"Wow, Shiroi might actually win!" Roi said confidently.

 

"Yah I know, he's amazing!" Tenka exclaimed

 

I could feel my face turn red hot.

 

"I play the Trap Card Call of the Haunted and bring back my Iron Chain Dragon(2500/1300)"

 

"Now I activate the equip spells Black Pendant and Dragon Treasure to give my Iron Chain Dragon an extra 1400 ATK points” Nenshou said proudly. Iron Chain Dragon(3900/1300)

“Now I activate Raigeka Break,” he said “Now I discard one card to destroy your Blinding Angel Trap Card!”

Uh oh I thought.

“Now I attack your Blackstar Dragon with my Iron Chain Dragon,” Nenshou commanded.

“No before I activate my De-Synchro spell card which allows me to return my Blackstar Dragon to the extra deck so I can bring back the Synchro material monsters” I explained “Say hello again to my Burn Synchron (1400/1050) and my Chaos Warrior (2300/1300).”

“I’ll end my turn with this I activate a second Raigeka Break and destroy your Burn Synchron so you can’t re-summon your Blackstar Dragon,” Nenshou said.

“I end my turn,” Nenshou said.

 

Shiroi’s Turn

 

“I draw,” I said.

“You really should've destroyed my Chaos Warrior.” I said laughing.

“Why’s that?” Nenshou asked

“Because my Chaos Warrior can attack you life points directly when I cut its ATK in half,” I grinned, “Game over!”

“Go Chaos Warrior, finish this with Gatling Claw Burst” I commanded.

Chaos Warrior jumped over his Iron Chain Dragon and his left Hand released from his body and hit Nenshou for 1150 LP and ended the Duel.

“No way, I…….. I lost,” Nenshou announced.

“Of course you did Nenshou, you moron,” an anonymous voice said “You’re lucky your still In the Nightmare Gang.”

It turned out to be one of the Generals of the Nightmare Gang, Renatus Silvius.

“Well let’s go Nenshou well see what Akumu has to say about this,” Renatus said.

“Haha and I’ll be back for you Shiroi,” Renatus added.

“No I’m dueling you Renatus,” Roi interrupted.

“Fine I’ll do the same thing to you I did to your lowly brother,” Renatus laughed so loud the ground shook.

“Until then Roi!” Renatus screamed.

“Yah, until then Renatus,” Roi replied.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2 New Student]

 

"Jeeze, what a crazy weekend," Roi complained.

 

"You're the one who wanted to go out and eat," I replied annoyed.

 

 

 

Someone was laughing behind us it turned out to be Tenka "Wow, you two are like little kids when you get together," she said.

 

"You shouldn't talk to two Rank 7's like that," Roi replied looked at me grinning.

 

"Oh, that's right Shiroi you became a Rank 7 after you won your duel with that Nightmare gang loser," Tenka said, "Did you get that congratulating letter like me and Roi did?"

 

"Yah," I replied.

 

I started to go over the letter in my head:

 

Dear Mr. Enkou,

Congratulations on your victory over the Former rank 8 duelist Nenshou Kusari. Your performance has given you a spot in the grand Duelist Championship to be held in 3 months time. Your victory has also vaulted you to become a Rank 7 Duelist.

 

Sincerely,

Mayor Figurasi.

 

Roi and Tenka were busy arguing and got interrupted by our teacher Miss Shellous she said, "Excuse me class, we have a new Student today his name is Donny Pulvera."

 

Everyone began to whisper because we all knew who his father was.

 

"I heard he beat his father in a duel and we all know who his father beat." Roi suddenly whispered in my ear.

 

"It's true," Donny interrupted our conversation.

 

"You probably got lucky," I replied.

 

"You wanna test that theory," Donny asked confidently.

 

"Your on new guy," I replied.

 

"If you two are gonna duel you'll have to go the roof, I don't want a big commotion in my classroom," Miss Shellous said.

 

"Alright follow me," I said, "Unless you're scared," I added

 

As we walked up the stairs the class followed and Tenka came, took my hand and kissed me on the cheek adding, "Good luck."

 

"Thanks," I said, I thought my face was about to light on fire.

 

When we took our places Donny asked, "You ready to loose?"

 

"No way," I replied.

 

"Lets go then," he said.

 

"DUEL!!" we screamed and the duel had begun.

 

Life Point Tracker

Shiroi-4000LP Donny-4000LP

 

Donny's Turn

"I'll let you go first," I said

 

"Draw," he said.

 

"I'll start things off by summoning Evil Hero Infernal Gainer in attack mode," Donny stated. Evil Hero Infernal Gainer(1600/0)

 

"Next I'll place one card face-down and end my turn" he added.

 

Shiroi's Turn

 

"I draw and activate Giant Trunade," I said, " Sending that face-down back to your hand and now I summon Phoenix Warrior in attack mode." Phoenix Warrior (1700/900)

Now go Phoenix Warrior destroy his Infernal Gainer with Quad-Flare Slash," I commanded.

Donny'sLP 4000-100=3900

Pheonix Warrior threw all four of his swords at Infernal Gainer and destroyed him.

 

Life point Tracker

Shiroi's LP-4000 Donny's LP-3900

 

"I place one card face down and end my turn." I added.

 

Donny's Turn

 

"Draw," Donny stated.

 

"First I activate the ability of my Evil Hero Infernal Prodigy to special summon him in attack mode," he stated, "Next, I activate Monster Reborn to re-summon my Infernal Gainer, Then he sacrifice both monsters' to Summon my Evil Hero Malicious Edge in attack mode" he added. Evil hero Malicious Edge(2600/1800)

 

"Finally, I attack your Phoenix Warrior with my Malicious Edge," Donny said, "Go."

Shiroi'sLP 4000-900=3100

"I place a card face-down and end my turn." Donny concluded.

 

Life Point Tracker

Shiroi's LP-3100 Donny's LP-3900

 

Damnit this guy is good I thought If i don't stop screwing around I might as well kiss my invite to the Tournament good bye.

 

TO BE CONTINUED........

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3 On the Edge]

 

[spoiler=Recap]A new student arrives in Duelist City named Donny Pulvera and joins Roi, Tenka, and Shiroi in there class. Shiroi and Donny get off on the wrong foot and soon get into a duel on the rooftop. Shiroi gains the early advantage but loses it when Donny summons one of his stronger monsters. Now Shiroi faces losing his invite to the Grand Duel Tournament if he doesn't pull of the win.

 

 

Shiroi's Turn

 

"My move," I announced.

 

And it better be a good one I hoped to myself.

 

"Draw," I pronounced.

 

"And activate my own Monster Reborn to re-summon my Phoenix warrior," I told him, "Next, I'll summon my Crush Synchron." Phoenix Warrior(1700/900) Crush Synchron (1200/100)

 

"Then, I tune my Crush Synchron to my Phoenix Warrior to Synchro Summon my Crush Warrior," I said loudly. Crush Warrior(3000/2700)

"Im not even close to being done I activate my Crush Warrior's Special power which lets me summon one level 2 or lower Machine or Warrior Type monster from my deck" I added quickly.

"Go, Reap the Warrior from the Grave," I said. Reap the Warrior from the Grave (1200/0)

"Go, Crush Warrior destroy his Malicious Edge with Crushing Melee," I commanded.

Donny's LP 3900-400=3500

"Now go Reap, reap on his life points with Underworld Blast Assault" I commanded

 

"Not so fast, I activate Magical Cylinder which lets me redirect your attack back at you," he said smirking.

 

Shiroi's LP 3100-1200=1900

 

Crap, I can't catch a break I might as well put down my Blinding Angel just in case he has a stronger monster waiting I thought.

 

"I'll put one card face-down and end my turn," I said.

 

Life Point Tracker

Shiroi's LP-1900 Donny's LP-3500

"Draw," said Donny .

 

"I activate a second Monster Reborn to bring back Malicious Edge, and make him attack your Reap the Warrior from the Grave,"he said thinking he would win.

 

"I activate my Blinding Angel Trap Card, which means your monsters can't attack until this card is destroyed," I said desperately.

 

"Fine I guess I'll end my turn with this, Go Raigeka Break by discarding one card I can destroy your Blinding Angel trap card and place one card face-down," he said.

 

Crap I thought I better draw the right card or this duel is over next round.

 

Shiroi's Turn

 

 

It all comes down to this next card I thought desperately.

 

"Draw," I announced.

 

YESSSSSSSSSSSS I thought with a sigh of relief.

 

 

"First I sacrifice my Reap the Warrior from the Grave to summon my Doragon Warrior," I said proudly. Doragon Warrior(2100/1800)

 

 

"But I'm not even close to being done I activate Tuner Assailant by paying 500 life points I can Summon my Burn Synchron," I said with urgency. Burn Synchron(1400/500)

Shiroi's LP 1900-500=1400

 

"Wow, for a second there I thought he was about to loose," Roi said from the watching crowd.

 

"He still is," said Donny.

 

"You played a good game Donny but it's over," I said

 

"Go Burn Synchron tune up Doragon Warrior to summon my best monster," I said with light in my eyes.

 

From the depths of the void the guardian of the Black Star Rise Blackstar Dragon I chanted.

 

"And since he was summoned with Burn Synchron he gets 500 extra ATK," Tenka cheered on from the crowed.

 

Blackstar Dragon(3000/2300)

 

"Not so fast i activate Spellbinding Circle and place it on your Blackstar Dragon meaning it can't attack until this card is destroyed," Donny said.

 

"Yah, but i can still activate it's effect by paying 500 life points he can destroy any monster on your side of the field," I said, "And I choose Malicious Edge."

1400-500=900

A black wind came and destroyed his monster.

"Now i activate Crush Warrior's special ability and summon my Speed Warrior in attack mode," I said with victory in my grasp.

"Go, attack his life points directly Crush Warrior with Crushing Melee," I said with a quick breath, "and Speed Warrior's special power with his special ability his ATK doubles so finish this Speed Warrior with Sonic Edge."

(3000+1800=4800)

3500-4800=-1300

The holograms disappeared and the duel was over.

 

"Game over, but good try though Donny," I said.

 

"We will have rematch at the Tournament" Donny said, "You did get an invite right?"

 

"Of course he did," Roi interrupted.

 

"Fine until then," Donny said and left walking through the crowd.

 

He would be a bad opponent to duel in the Tournament I thought because if I drew the wrong card I shuddered at the thought I have a weird feeling he was holding back a bit though.

 

Seen switches to Donny walking down the street.

 

"What do you want Renatus?" asked Donny.

 

Renatus appears next to Donny.

"Akumu want's to know what you thought of him," Renatus said.

 

"He's good but as of right now he's no threat to Akumu or his plans," Donny replied.

 

"Okay but the next time you two duel Akumu doesn't want you holding back are we clear," Renatus said.

 

"Of course I won't hold any punches next time," Donny replied getting annoyed know.

 

"Good," then Renatus disappeared.

Then again next time he'll be twice as good so i wont have a choice Donny thought looking forward to that day.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 4 Aka-vs-Roi 0% Chance of Victory]

 

It was a quite Wednesday afternoon. We were off for Christmas break, so Roi and I decided to go visit Tenka at her families restaurant but that's when everything went wrong.

 

"Hey Tenka," Roi and I said in unison.

 

"Hey guys," Tenka answered, "Well seeing how I'm on break you guys wanna hang."

 

We started talking for a while but then Roi and Tenka got into an argument and that's when everything went wrong.

 

"Tenka what's all the commotion," someone asked it turned out to be Aka, Tenka's older brother.

"Oh, you really should stop hanging around this trash Tenka," Aka added.

 

"Wow who are you calling trash," Roi asked.

 

"You and that slacker sitting next to my sister" Aka replied harshly.

 

"And that's where I draw the line you white haired freak," Roi said getting out of his seat, "Lets settle this with a duel hot shot."

 

"Don't start crying when you don't get to start your turn," Aka said laughing.

 

"Brother stop it," Tenka said pleading.

 

"No Tenka he's asking for it so I'll give it to him," Roi interrupted.

 

We walked outside then Aka and Roi took there places and began.

 

"DUEL!" they pronounced.

 

Life Point Tracker

Roi LP-4000 Aka LP-4000

 

"I'll go first," Roi announced.

 

Roi's Turn

"DRAW," he said.

"I'll start by summoning my Legendary Beast Anu in Attack Mode," Roi said with a little smirk. Legendary Beast Anu(1500/1200)

"I'll finish my turn by placing one card face down and end my turn," he finished.

 

 

Aka's Turn

 

"I draw and activate Ultimate Offering," Aka said.

"I'll summon Archane Apprentice Lua, Archane Magician Burn and Archane Magician Green all in Attack Mode," Aka added. Archane Apprentice Lua(1450/1750) Archane Magician Burn(1650/1850) Archane Magician Green(1950/450)

Aka's LP=4000-1000

"Next I tune my Archane Apprentice Lua to my Archane Magician Green to Synchro Summon my Archane Witch Haley," Aka added laughing. Archane Witch Haley (2650/2450)

"Now I add one spell counter on Haley thanks to her special power next I add a second to Haley thanks to Burn's power which also gives 800 more ATK and add discard one card to add a third thanks to Haley's second ability," Aka said, "Next i activate Giant Trunade from my hand to get return your face down to your hand."

"Next I command Burn to attack your Anu and Haley to attack you directly,"Aka added.

Roi's LP= 4000+1500-2450-2650=400

"Finally I activate Haley's final ability which allows me to remove all 3 spell counters from her and deal 500 points of damage for each one." Aka added.

Roi's LP=400-1500=-1100

"Game over you piece of trash," he said laughing.

 

I can't believe he beat Roi so easily I thought.

 

"Hey brother stop that," Tenka of all people is standing up for Roi, "You embarrassed him enough leave us alone know."

 

"I'm just teaching you should really choose better duelist as friends," Aka said sighing.

 

"No," I interrupted, "No one talk's to my best friend like that."

"It's my turn and I promise you wont win," I said.

 

"Fine trash if you wanna loose so bad," Aka said.

 

When we took our spots someone interrupted, it turned out to be the Mayor's adviser, Akana Hibiki.

 

"That's enough the Mayor needs to see all four of you right now," Akana interrupted.

 

I wondered what the Mayor needed us for.

 

We drove to the mayor's house in silence mainly because Roi and I couldn't think of something nice to say of Aka.

 

"It is very important that you keep what you are about to hear completely and absolutely quite," Akana said, " Do you understand.

 

What is this chick talking about I thought Well whatever it is it must be important.

 

TO BE CONTINUED.....

 

[spoiler=Chapter 5 The Prophecy]

 

[spoiler=Recap]After Roi was humiliated by Aka in a duel Shiroi challenged Aka for Roi's pride but were interrupted by the Mayor's adviser Akana Hibiki. Akana took Tenka, Roi, Aka and Shiroi to meet the mayor to reveal something of great importance.

 

 

"Ahhh, at last I get to meet you all in person," Mayor Figurasi exclaimed.

 

"If I may ask," Aka interrupted, " Why is it you have brought us here?"

 

Weird it seems Aka doesn't want to show his ugly side to the Mayor I thought to myself.

 

"Akana if you may," insisted the Mayor, "I have other matters I must attend to."

 

"Fine," she said agitated, "As you see on the screen here are 5 Duel Monster Cards."

 

She pointed to the big 70 inch plasma monitor which had on it our Favorite cards. My Blackstar Dragon, Roi's Legendary Beast Lioflare, Tenka's Ice Storm Dragon, Aka's Archane Beast Jinwar, and a monster card I have never seen before named Centuera Beast Overas were all being shown on the screen.

 

"The reason I am showing you these cards," Akana said, "Is because these cards haven't always been in your decks have they?"

 

Now that she mentioned it I thought Blackstar Dragon hadn't always been in my deck it just appeared there a one day a couple years ago.

 

"Well," Roi said trying to think back before he got his Lioflare, "Lioflare just appeared in my deck one day."

 

"Does the same go for the rest of you?" Akana asked.

 

"Yah," Tenka, Aka and I replied.

 

"Well these cards choose you for a reason I wish the other four cards choose Rank 10 duelist but it can't be helped," Akana said.

 

"What are you talking about?" I asked.

 

"The cards on the screen are the Five Guardian Beasts'," Akana explained, "They choose duelists' to help save the world from an Evil so powerful it could destroy not only the planet but the entire universe."

 

"Well who is the fifth Guardian then," Tenka asked.

 

"We had trouble tracking him down because he lived outside of the city," Akana said, "He was born in Japan but moved to France as little boy and we didn't even think he existed until he played the card a couple weeks ago." "His name is Denkiteki Kedamono," Akana added.

 

When she said his name a boy about the same age as Tenka, Roi and myself walked in the room. He had pinkish hair, golden eyes (I thought they might be contacts) and wore a blue blazer with a black under shirt with white jeans with red and white shoes.

 

 

"Wow, that's a long name you mind if i call you Kit," Roi was the first to greet him, "And by the way my name is Roi Militant."

 

"Nice to meet you Roi and well my friends call me Kit so go right ahead," Denkiteki replied.

 

"Well hey there I'm Tenka Arashi and this is my brother Aka Arashi, nice to meet you Kit," Tenka and Aka came and shook his hand.

 

"I'm Shiroi Enkou pleasure to meet you," I was last like always.

 

"I've heard about you," he said looking at me, "Your the lazy one right?"

 

I blushed.

"Yah it's kinda true," Roi said laughing.

 

"You wanna duel me then?" he asked.

 

"Sounds like fun," I replied.

 

"Oh not again," Tenka said.

 

"Let me warn you Denkiteki here defeated both Renatus and Neshou at once and he is a Rank 7," Akana interrupted.

 

"Well this should be fun then," I said.

 

"Very," Denkiteki replied.

 

"Well I guess you two can duel here," Akana pressed a button and the table where we were just sitting retreated towards the ground giving us ample space to duel.

 

Once Kit and I took position we yelled "DUEL!!!"

 

"I'll go first," I stated.

 

"Draw," I said.

"First I Summon Shield Warrior in DEF mode," I said with confidence, "Next, I play the Trap Card Analyze, which allows me to look at the top 4 cards in your deck and destroy all the the monsters for the price of 500 Life Points."

Life Point Tracker: Shiroi's LP=4000-500=3500

I looked at the first four cards in his deck and I hit the jackpot seeing how all four cards were monsters.

"So I guess I'll make you discard all four of those monsters," I said while he put the four cards in the Graveyard, "To finish my turn I place one card face-down."

 

LP Tracker:

Shiroi-3500 LP Kit-4000

 

Kit's Turn

 

"Draw," he said.

"First, I summon Centuera Beast Gogyou Saru" He said, "Then, I activate his special which lets me send him to the graveyard and summon two Level 3 or lower monsters from my deck and I choose Centuera Beasts' Inu and Kitsune."

"Next, I tune Centuera Beast Kitsune to Centuera Beast Inu to Synchro Summon Centuera Beast Ika Kishi in ATK mode," right when he said the monsters name a geyser suddenly appeared from the ground and the a Squid-like warrior came from the ground." Centuera Beasts' Gogyou Saru, Inu, Kitsune, and Ika Kishi. (100/1500), (1500/600), (1300/1200), (2200/2000)

"Then, activate my Centuera Beast Inu special ability when he's sent to the Graveyard I can bring one Level 4 or lower Centuera Beast from my Graveyard, and I choose Centuera Beast Kitsune,"

 

Uh oh is all I could think up for this one.

 

"Next, I activate the trap card Centuera Tsutsu," Kit said "While this card is on the field all my Centuera Beast monsters attack a DEF position monster the difference in the ATK and DEF is subtracted out of your life points."

"Finally, I attack your Shield Warrior with my Ika Kishi," Kit said at last.

 

"Not so fast," I said, " I activate Scrap-Iron Scarecrow which negates your monster's attack and the card is put face down again."

 

"Oh, wait did I forget to mention that Denkiteki has the skills of a Rank 9 Duelist," Akana interrupted with a sly smile, "He is just so new in town he hasn't had the chance to climb so far up the rankings."

 

Well damn, now I'm really in trouble because I guarantee he'll find away around Scrap-Iron Scarecrow his next turn so imma need to step things up fast I thought.

 

TO BE CONTINUED......

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 6 Guardian of the Great Mountain]

 

[spoiler=Recap]As, Akana told the gang about the 5 Guardian Beasts the 5th Guardian was introduced. Now Shiroi and the 5th Guardian Denkiteki (nicknamed Kit by Roi) are locked in a heated duel with Kit taking the early advantage.

 

 

"In that case I'll end my turn," Kit said.

Damn this kid got lucky I don't have any more trap cards Denkiteki thought to him self.

 

Shiroi's Turn

 

"Draw," I stated.

 

"First, I place 2 cards face down," I said leaving only 2 cards in my hand, "Then I release my Shield Warrior to summon my Dying Will Warrior." Dying Will Warrior(2300/1500)

"Thanks to Dying Will's Ability when I have two or less cards in my hand all Warrior monsters are given 400 extra ATK including Dying Will Warrior," I said. Dying Will Warrior(2700/1500)

"Next I activate the Spell Card Monster Reborn so I bring back my Shield Warrior," I said. Shield Warrior(800/1600)

"Who said he was gonna stay out for long now activate my Face-Down Double Summon so I can release my Shield Warrior to summon Master Warrior in ATK mode and don't forget Dying Will Warrior's special power which gives Master Warrior an extra 400 ATK," I said. Master Warrior(2900/1800)

"Now Dying Will Warrior attack his Ika Kishi with Rain Chains," I commanded, "If you thought that was it no way go Master Warrior attack Kit directly with Twelve-Blade Assault."

2900+500=3400

LP Tracker

Denkiteki LP's=4000-3400=600

"I place one card face down and end my turn," I said.

 

Life Point Tracker

Shiroi's LP=3500 Denkiteki's LP=600

 

Denkiteki's Turn

"Draw," Denkiteki said, "First I'll activate the Trap Card Centuera Karite, which allows me destroy one face-up monster you control and inflict that monsters ATK as direct damage to my opponent and I choose your Master Warrior."

 

The reaper from the card materialized and sliced my Master Warrior in half and one of Master Warrior's swords came and hit me taking a huge chunk of my life points.

LP Tracker

Shiroi's LP 3500-2900=600

"Next, I summon my Centuera Beast Kitsune and activate the Special Ability of my Centuera Beast Doragon by removing two cards in my hand from play I can Special Summon him from my hand," he stated, "Now that Doragon was Special Summoned we both have to draw until we have 5 cards in our hand."

Damn I only drew 1 monster to hell with my luck Denkiteki thought.

"Now we have to summon one Tuner monster we drew, I choose Centuera Beast Oushi Bouyo," he added.

 

"I guess I'll summon Chaos Synchron in Defense Mode," I said. Chaos Synchron (0/2350)

 

"Well I guess I'm going to have to tune my Centuera beast Oushi Bouyo to my Centuera Beast Doragon," he stated.

 

The guardian of the great Mount. Olympus come down and bless us all Rise Centuera Beast Overas, Denkiteki chanted. Centuera Beast Overas (2800/2100)

"And with Kitsune's special power Overas gains 400 extra ATK," he added. Centuera Beast Overas (3200/2100)

"I activate Raigeki Break I discard one card and destroy the face down which is your Scrap-Iron Scarecrow."

"Go Centuera Beast Overas Attack his Dying Will Warrior with Olympian Blast," he commanded.

 

"Not before I activate my Blinding Angel Trap Card which means you can't attack as long as this card is on the field," I said.

 

"I guess all I can do is put one card face-down and end my turn," Denkiteki stated.

 

Life Point Tracker

Shiroi's LP=600 Denkiteki's LP=600

 

Shiroi's Turn

 

"Draw," I stated.

"First I summon Speed Warrior in ATK mode and know I tune my Chaos Synchron to my Dying Will Warrior so I can Summon my ace," I said.

From the black void comes the Guardian of the black star RISE Blackstar Dragon I chanted. Blackstar Dragon(2500/2300)

 

"I activate my Spellbinding Circle, which means your monster cant attack," he said.

 

"But it can activate it's special power which allows me to destroy one of your monster for the price of 500 life points," I said, "Go, Black Comet Wind."

A black wind came and destroyed his monster.

"Next I activate my own Raigeki Break to destroy Spellbinding Circle," I said.

Lightning came and destroyed his Spellbinding Circle.

"Now go Blackstar Dragon attack his Kitsune and finish this duel with Burning Black Meteor," I commanded.

A small charcoal black meteor appeared in front of Blackstar's Mouth and kept growing in size and finally came the blast I'd been waiting for the for of Black Wind and completely obliterated Centuera Beast Kitsune. Blackstar Dragon and Speed Warrior disappeared and the duel finished.

 

"I guess we will have to raise your Ranking again Mr. Enkou," Akana said. I had forgotten anyone was there.

 

"Well, the Trash actually won," Aka said.

 

"And now it's your turn Aka," I said angrily.

 

"Now, now, I can't have the Guardians fighting amongst themselves save until your training starts," Mayor Figurasi was back.

 

"Training?" Roi asked.

 

"Ahh yes training you'll need it if you hope to defeat Akumu and his Generals whom already are starting training," the mayor said.

 

"I don't need training," Aka said.

 

"Can you use an Assault Mode monster," Akana interrupted.

 

Aka shut up because everyone knew the only duelist in D-City that has ever learned Assault Mode was Akumu Kaze.

 

"So we will be going out to a special training facility out in the mountains," Mayor Figurasi said cheerfully.

 

"What about my parents sir?" Roi asked again.

 

"Oh everything has been cleared with your parents Mr.Militant," the mayor said, "The same for you Mr. and Miss Arashi."

 

He must've knew I lived alone because he hadn't mentioned me.

 

"Wait Kit will you have a place to stay when we come back," I asked.

 

"Now that you mention it I don't," Denkiteki replied.

 

"Well your welcome to stay with me," I said.

 

We shook hands and then I left to go pack for the trip.

 

 

[spoiler=chapter 7 An Assualt Begins Part 1]

 

 

For most of the bus ride I was wondering why I was chosen by Blackstar. Seeing how such a slacker and just achieved Rank 8 after my duel with Kit. You're a great Duelist my man something said in my head. As I looked around I didn't see anything that could have said that to me, but then the voice came back. Down here kid, I looked down and my deck was glowing.

 

Who is this I thought. I stated looking through my deck for the glowing card and it turned out to be my Hero Kid.

 

For real man you're a great duelist and have a purer heart and that's why Blackstar picked you, Hero Kid said in my head.

 

I guess your right I replied. After that Hero Kid hadn't said anything for the rest of the bus ride. When we arrived the first thing I noticed is how huge this place was.

 

"As you can see there are five different chambers leading to five different Duel Zones where each of you will be challenged by duelist hand selected by the Mayor and myself," Akana said, "Here you must all take one of these cards plus your monsters' Assault Mode hurry amd take them." We each came one at a time to take the pair of cards.

 

When I came up last she handed me one Assault Mode Activate Trap Card and Blackstar Dragon/Assault Mode then I put both cards in my deck and walked back.

 

"Now Aka go through the far right chamber to enter your Duel Zone Denkiteki go through the one right next to it. Tenka please as a procotion the only clothes you need are a Tank-Top and shorts like I told you on the bus, and once you're finished changing go through the door on the far left, Roi go through the one on right next to Tenka's and Shiroi you get the middle chamber," Akana instructed, "Oh, and all the Duel Zones are connected and helping one another is not forbidden."

"Now proceed through your chambers," she added.

 

The screen switches to Aka's Duel Zone.

 

What a wierd place Aka thought to himself. Aka was walking on water and the mountians where coming from the sky and mentioning the sky it was purple. Then Aka noticed runes shining from the water. Aka looked back up at sky and notcied stars but looked closer and the stars were also runes.

 

"You like the place Aka," a anonymous voice said, "Welcome to the Arcane Realm." "First let me explain the rules of this realm if you lose a duel here you will lose your mind and will never be able to leave this Zone," the man added, "By the way my name is Xas Dumaz."

 

"I'm guessing that you lost a duel here," Aka asked.

 

"Yes, about 15000 years ago when the first Guardian came to me," Xas replied.

 

No way this dude barely looks 12 Aka thought probably duels like it to.

 

"So are we gonna start," Aka asked.

 

"Of course," Xas replied.

 

"DUEL!!" they exlaimed.

 

The screen switches to Denkiteki's Duel Zone.

 

Damn I'm up high Denkiteki thought looking down. Then Denkiteki looked foward and saw a beautiful city with the most extravegant palaces and the most beautiful people imaginable.

 

"Ahh, you've made it at last Kit," a strange man said.

 

"How do you know my name?" Denkiteki asked

 

"I know almost everything about you Kit, and how you control the Guardian of our Great City," the man said.

 

"Who are you?" Denkiteki asked.

 

"My name is Aether, god of Light," Aether said proudly.

 

"You mean like God?" Denkiteki asked.

 

"No you idiot I am A god as in lowercase," Aether said annoyed. "Now we must of course duel," Aether added.

 

"Now, you're speaking my language," Denkiteki seemed pleased.

 

"Well then lets begin," Aether said.

 

If this guy is a god why does he want to duel someone like me Denkiteki thougt.

 

Scene switches back to Aka and Xas's Duel.

 

"No way I.... I lost," Xas said with a surprised look on his face. Xas was comepletely overwhelmed by Archane Beast Jinwar/Assault Mode. "You deserve to call yourself the Guardian of the Arcane Realm," Xas added contently.

 

Scene switches to Tenka's Duel Zone.

 

As soon as Tenka walked in she began to wish she hadn't taken most of rher clothes off know she was beginning to freez her butt off in the below zero tundra."CCCCRAPPPPPP," Tenka said.

 

"You cold?" an unknown voice asked.

 

"Oooooof ccccourse I am," she had almost bitten her tongue clean off.

 

Tenka walked closer and she saw a woman about in her twenties sitting in a lawn chair with a bikini on. The woman jumped out of the chair stood up picked up something off the ground and strapping on her arm all in one fluid motion. "Well my name is Bianca," when she said her name a fierce wind picked up and almost threw Tenka about a mile. "If you don't hurry and duel me you'll freeze to death," Bianca said.

 

"Ifffff that's whattt yyyou want thhhennn letttts stttartttt," Tenka manged to spit out.

 

"DUEL," Bianca yelled.

 

"Ddddd," Tenka managed.

 

The scene switches to Roi's Duel Zone.

 

As Roi entered his Zone he looked down and saw he was walking over a volcano. "Well about time you got here," Roi looked up and noticed someone standing on the other side of the volcano. "The name's Vax," the man said. "So you must know the drill we duel until you beat me," Vax stated.

 

"No problem," insisted Roi.

 

The scene switches back to Denkiteki's Duel Zone.

 

"Not bad kid," Aether said seeming pleased with Denkiteki after he lost to him. "You truley deserve the powers of Overas."

 

"Thank you," Denkiteki replied. A light flashed a Denkiteki was standing back in the room where him and the others seprated. Aka and Tenka were already there.

 

"Wow that was weird," Aka said.

 

"I wonder where Shiroi is," Tenka thought aloud.

 

Scene switches to Shiroi's Duel Zone.

 

"You might've beet me boy but you didn't meet the conditions of our agreements," a man said.

 

"I still won Cacarout," I said mad.

 

"To bad know move on to another Duel Zone and face another one of the Testers," he said.

 

As he said that a tunnel opened and I walked through. While I was walkin I noticed that Roi was walking towards me. "So looks like im not the only one having trouble," I asked him.

 

"Yah, I guess not," Roi replied.

 

"Aww isn't this cute two guardians and we only wanted Shiroi," someone said laughing.

 

"Calm down Roy we have a job to do," another voice said.

 

"Shut up your such a buzz kill Zosimo," Roy replied.

 

The two men came into the light and it turned out to be two of Akumu's Generals, Roy Gordon and Zosimo.

 

What do these two losers want with us, I thought. Looks like wooping up on these two will make up for that looser Cacarout failing me.

 

TO BE CONTINUED....

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 8 An Assault Begins Part 2]

 

[spoiler=Recap]Denkiteki, Aka, and Tenka all three master the art of /Assault Summoning, but on the other hand Shiroi and Roi are having trouble getting the hang of summoning their respective Assault Mode monsters. Soon after they fail their respective test they run into each other when they're switching Duel Zones. As they tell each other how they both failed their tests they are ambushed by two of Akumu's Generals, Zosimo and Roy Gordan.

 

 

"Well, seeing how you're both here how about we tag-duel and a new Duel Zone," Roy said eagerly.

 

"Fine you're on," I replied in haste.

 

"I'm down," Roi added.

 

"Fine allow us to move then," Zosimo said while snapping his fingers. As it appeared out of thin air there came a door revealing a new Duel Zone. After we all took our positions the four of us screamed in unsion "Duel."

 

This Duel Zone was different then both Roi's and Shiroi's previous Zones. It was a wastland covered in destroyed buildings.

 

LP Tracker

Shiroi-4000

Zosimo-4000

Roi-4000

Roy-4000

 

"Well if no one is gonna take the lead then I will," shouted Roi.

 

Roi's Turn

 

"Draw, Roi stated. "First, I summon Legendary Beast Hydra in attack mode," Roi said looking pleased with himself (Legendary Beast Hydra ATK/1900 DEF/1400), "Next, I activate the equip spell card Inhancement which gives my Hydra 800 extra attack points." Legendary Beast Hydra (2700/1400). "Finnaly, I place two cards face down and end my turn," Roi said with a smile on his face.

"My turn," Roy said.

 

Roy's Turn

 

"I place one card in face down defense position and put three card's face down," Roy said calmly. "I end my turn," he added.

 

"My turn," I said.

 

Roi started out good all I have to do is support Hydra at the moment, I thought looking at my hand, and I've got the perfect card to do it.

 

Shiroi's Turn

"Draw," I shouted.

 

"First, I activate the Continuous Trap Guessing Game," I said, "But sadly I can't use it until my next standby phase so I'll save explaining its effect for later. "Next, I place two cards face down and activate Doragon Blaster-Z," I said. "By sending one card in my hand to the graveyard I can inflict 750 points of damage to my opponent's Life Points and I choose Zosimo."

LP Tracker

Zosimo's Life Points

4000-750=3250

 

"Well that was a waste," Roy said laughing.

 

As far as you know I replied in my head."Next, I activate the Spell Card Summoner Angel," I said, "I pay 500 life points to Summon Divine Synchron in attack mode." Divine Synchron (0/0) "Now I activate Divine Synchron's special power which allows me to summon one Warrior Type monster in my deck and I choose Control Warrior." "I activate Contorl Warriors ability, which allows me to switch the battle position of one of my opponents monster and I choose your face down Roy," I pronounced, "Next, I'll tune Divine Synchron to my Control Warrior."

Ashes to ashes rise the divine guardian of the Rainbows Pass! Synchro Summon! Shine, Divine Warrior(2700/2200)

"Now, go Divine Warrior attack Roy's face down with Rainbow Lightning Blast," I said.

 

"I activate one of my face-down cards," Roy said, "Go Spi------"

 

"Not so fast I activate Divine Warriors Special power which negates one of your face-downs and destroys it, so eat that one," I said. The hologram of the face down card he intended to activate shattered. A great and colorful lightning bolt shot down from the sky and destroyed Roy's face down monster.

 

"You activated Poison Fog's special power when he is sent to the Graveyard by battle he-----," Roy said.

 

"Sorry to interrupt again but when Divine Warrior destroys a card in battle he goes back to the original owners deck and if I'm correct Poison Cloud has no attack points, so you lose 2700 Life Points," I said pleased with my plan.

 

Roy's LP

4000-2700=1300

 

"And now I end my turn," I said.

 

LP Update

Shiroi-3500

Roi-4000

Zosimo-3250

Roy-1300

 

"Draw," Zosimo said quietly.

 

Zosimo's Turn

 

"I activate Ultimate Offering," Zosimo began, "I summon Flamvell Magician and Flamvell Firedog." "Next, I'll tune Flamevell Magician to Flamvell Firedog to Summon the most powerful card in my deck."

The ruler's heartbeats will now file through here! Take witness to its creation-shaking power! Synchro Summon! My very soul, Red Dragon Archfiend!"Now, I will add on by using the Spell Card De-Spell and destroy your Inhancement Equip Spell." The hologram of Roi's Spell Card Shattered and disappeared. "Now, I place one card face down and Attack your Hydra with my Red Dragon Archfiend's Scorching Crimson Flare," Zosimo added to my dismay.

 

LP-Tracker

Zosimo-2750

 

"Not before I activate my face down go, Hurried Switch," Roi said with a grin on his face, "Which allows me to return Legendary Beast Hydra to my hand and Summon a Synchro monster from my extra deck regardess of summoning conditions." "The monster I choose is Legendary Beast LioFlare and your attack is redirected towards him," Roi added. LB-Lioflare(3000/2200)

When the monsters attack met each other in the center of the square, that was formed by us dueling, there was a stalemate for for ten seconds LB-Lioflare broke through RDA's attack and destroyed the mighty dragon, but one of the dragon's horns soared and sliced right through the lion destroying both monsters. "Now, I activate my face down," both Roi and Zosimo said. "ASSAULT MODE ACTIVATE," they shouted. When they activated they activated their trap cards both Roy and myself began to shout, "FINAL ASSAULT." After we shouted I explained the Trap Card "When my opponent summons an Assault Mode monster I can send one Synchro Monster in my Extra deck to the Graveyard and Summon that monster's Assault Mode."

 

"Yah, what he said," Roy said smiling.

 

"WELL SAY HELLO," we all shouted in unison.

 

"To Red Dragon Archfiend/Assault Mode," Zosimo said.

 

"To Legendary Beast Lioflare/Assault Mode," Roi added.

 

"Well I send my Stardust Dragon to the Graveyard and Summon Stardust Dragon/Assault Mode," Roy said.

 

"And I do the same and send my Blackstar Dragon to the Graveyard to summon Blackstar Dragon/Assault Mode," I said.

 

"Well, I end my turn," Zosimo said.

 

"Draw," Roi said.

 

"Not so fast," I said, "I activate my face down Quick Turner." "This card can skip your turn for the small fee of 500 life points but it also can skip more than 1 turn so I pay 1000 Life Points and skip both Roi's and Roy's turn," I explained.

 

"So, I Draw," I said.

 

LP Tracker

Shiroi LP-3500-1000=2500

Shiroi's Turn

 

"I activate from my hand Card of Sanctity," I said, "Everyone draws until they have 6 cards." The four of us drew until we had six card in our hands. "Next, I activate my Doragon Blaster-Z I send two Quillbolt Hedghogs to the graveyard and someone will lose 1500 life points," I discarded the two cards. "I choose Zosimo," I said with straight face.

 

"Dude what are you doing," Roi said in protest, "Finish off Roy." I ignored him and continued with my attack.

 

Zosimo LP

2750-1500=1250

 

"Now I'll end this duel," I said, "I activate Mechanical Assault, which destroys all face up Assault Mode monsters on the field including my own."

 

"What the heck dude?" Roi asked.

 

"Let me finish," I replied, "For every Assault Mode monster destroyed we all lose 500 life points for a total of 2000!" Game over, " I added.

 

LP Tracker

Roy-1300-2000=-700

Zosimo-1250-2000=-750

Roi-4000-2000=2000

Shiroi-2500-2000=500

 

"We win," I said.

 

"You two disappoint me loosing to kids like this," an unknown voice said. A black doorway appeared and out walked the feared leader of the Nightmare Gang, Akumu Kaze. "Now come and leave them be," Akumu said. The three left an eerie mood behind.

 

"Congratulations," a man said it was Cacarout, "You two pass and can join the others."

 

Roi and I walked back to the main hall thinking of the duel.

 

"Well now that we are all here," Akana said, " I can tell you the next part of the training." "You all know the tournament is most famous for it's many Turbo Duels?" she asked us.

 

"Of course, even I know that," Denkiteki said.

 

"Well, you five will learn how to Turbo Duel as we wait for the 1 month of waiting for the grand event," Akana told us. "Now its time to meet your instructors, The Teishu brothers," she added. The two boys no older than Shiroi looked at them and the taller one said, "Follow us."

 

His brother finished, "And you will see your Duel Runners."

 

I wonder how mine will look like. I thought to myself I hope it looks like the Yusie Fudo used. With that exciting thought I followed the twins to down the hall.

 

TO BE CONTINUED

 

 

Chapter 9 is on latest post by me

[.ttoo.]

Appearance : Black hair, blue eyes, tan skin, Black shirt. brown jacket.

Name (I would prefer it to have a meaning): Akana Hibiki (Deep red echo)

Duelist Rank: It changes as story progreses 3 at beggening

Deck: Moonlight Secrets- Working on it

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Protagonist

Personality: Inteligent, reckless sometimes.

 

I'll post the missing info later on.

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Just to tell you theirs a few problems with your fan fic.What does Antagonist and Protagonist mean im sorry to ask but also why are you copying ideas well it's just that making the fan fic exactly like the other one.The rank things are comfusing well since you are putting that it seems like you could make people lose on perpous but you could make it fair by knowing the people who joins skills by rp.Your rank thing means no meaning because Yugioh dueling is most the time luck and it's harsh for a rank 0 to get to 1 by wining 15 duels infact your fan fic might not have 15 duels.

 

Well sorry to say these things but your fan fic well needs improvement like all people starting the beginning of their first fan fic.Like half the starting people mines started a disarster but you will improve.

 

Wait a minute in typing rubish.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

What does Antagonist and Protagonist mean

Yugioh dueling is most the time luck

Your argument has been invalidated.

 

@OP: That sort of terrible random Japanese is the reason Hierachine's Galactic Empire exists.

 

Anyway, you need a plot, or this thread is useless and can get locked.

[♠Decietful King♠]

yah i added the plot and each of the main characters Ace card (except Akumu and Akana

[LuffyLaxer]

Submission/Application Form

Appearance:

[spoiler=Character]

 

 

Name:Renatus Silvius which means born again in the forest

Duelist Rank: 5

Deck: Zombies

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Antagonist

Personality: Always wants to win. Does what ever it takes to win even if he cheats

Bio: Underling to Akuma. Uses his deck to swarm his opponents and terrify them into submission. Has been a bully ever since he was little and still acts this way.

[♠Decietful King♠]

Submission/Application Form

Appearance:

[spoiler=Character]

 

 

Name:Renatus Silvius which means born again in the forest

Duelist Rank: 5

Deck: Zombies

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Antagonist

Personality: Always wants to win. Does what ever it takes to win even if he cheats

Bio: Underling to Akuma. Uses his deck to swarm his opponents and terrify them into submission. Has been a bully ever since he was little and still acts this way.

 

Character accepted

[.ttoo.]

Did you accepted me?

[♠Decietful King♠]

Chapter one is up

---

Did you accepted me?

Yah

[Sorrow.]

[spoiler=Appearance]

 

Name: Donny Pulvera (Pulvera means Pulverise)

Duelist Rank:2

Deck: Lycans of Revenge Deck

Antagonist or Protagonist?: Antagonist

Personality: Quiet, Gets fired up in a duel, Sweet and Kind.

Bio: Donny loves dueling he played against his father in a duel using a deck made by his grandfather he beat his father a great Duelist that once defeated the Legendary Yusei. Donny left his family to set out to some day face a far more better duelist than Yusei, Yugi.

[meka]

Appearance:Tall, Muscular, Wears Black T Shirt and Black Jeans, Has a Custom Built Duel Disk (Black with red lights)

Name: Roy Gordon

Duelist Rank: 1 (Keeps a rulebook in his pocket)

Deck: [spoiler=Barbarian Rage] 3x Badlands

3x Barbarian Lord - Animus

3x Barbarian Lord - Ensis

2x Barbarian Lord - Erus

3x Barbarian Lord - Exercitus

3x Barbarian Lord - Ferrum

3x Barbarian Lord - Laqueus

3x Barbarian Lord - Vici

3x Barbarian Reinforcements

2x Blood and Steel

3x Home Field Advantage

3x Spell Runes

3x To Tough To Die

3x Win Some Lose Some

 

Antagonist or Protaganist: Antagonist - Antihero(Preferrably)

Personality:Hot Tempered and Usually the first to throw a punch Roy will follow a gut instinct to the ends of the earth, Usually doesn't think before he acts but means well and will be there in a time of need

Bio: Age:17 Height:6' 2" Wieght:327 lbs From: St Loius, Missouri, USA

Special: If you will be Using Duel Runners he has a Black Mustang GT that he converted into a Duel Runner

[.ttoo.]

Look, my deck's reveled cards are here. I'll reveal more later on.

 

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-176286.html

 

P.S. also rate

[pherronboy]

where'd u get the blackstar dragon pic?

9/10 cuz there are a few grammar errors, otherwise a good fanfic

[♠Decietful King♠]

Added chapter 2, New Student.

[LuffyLaxer]

Nice. I like how you left the cliffhanger at the end. Very good chapter. 10/10.

[♠Decietful King♠]

thanks

[.ttoo.]

Amazing, only three questions

When will I appear?

Can I start my introduction?

Can I create chapters?

[♠Decietful King♠]

Chapter 3 added hope you guys like

also added Denkiteki Kedamono to the Main Protagonist list

[LuffyLaxer]

I like it. Your chapters keep getting Better and Better. Keep up this pace and the story would be done by new years.

[♠Decietful King♠]

Well actually the story is gonna be rather long i mean like 32 chapters long, and thanks for your comments

 

 

 

Amazing' date=' only three questions

When will I appear?[b']Chapter 5 when they find out about the prophecy[/b]

Can I start my introduction?Depends what you mean

Can I create chapters?I would prefer you not

[meka]

You didnt say anything about my character, was I denied?

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Ok the plot made it better now I kind of understand it well ill comment on the chapter.

 

chapter 1=a good opening with some powerful cards but a slight minor mistake.

 

chapter 2=Intresting but I thought malicious edge only needs 1 tribute if the opponant controls the monster.

 

chapter 3=the best one so far you used a stratagy to make be comfused so im impressed.

 

Ill make a app

 

Submission/Application Form

 

Appearance:

[spoiler=appearence]

Dark jacket,red glaring eyes,dark brown hair,whiteish skin colour,golden duel disk,black expensive shoes,shadowry suit.

 

 

Name: Cacarout Digrase(I made it up)

Duelist Rank:5(soon becomes 6)

Deck:destiny heroes and elemental heroes(soon has Phantom skyblaster and Raviel)

Antagonist or Protagonist?:Protagonist

Personality:Smart,kind and genourus but when dueling is nasty,cruel and wicked.

Bio:He came to duel a few people and find his lost deck but the rest is a mystery.

[.ttoo.]

 

Can I start my introduction?Depends what you mean

 

Never mind.

[♠Decietful King♠]

Chapter 4 is finally up

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Chapter 4 is ok but im in circles.