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Ok so yeah since i've been role-playing, why not make my own fan fic? But I need help. I want to make a fighting Fan Fic, but I would like to borrow a bit from different animes plus mix it together with my own stuff.

 

So yeah this is what I have so far.

 

[spoiler=Main Character]

Main Character: Tiberius Hawkins

Age:17

Height: 6'1"

Weight: 185

Race: African American.

Hair Style: Like Jimmy Kudo From Case Closed

Clothing Style: Backward Blue Fitted. Blue T-Shirt. Cut-off shorts that stop mid-shin. Blue Adidias not high tops. Blue fingerless gloves. Black socks

Personality: He is very intelligent, yet humble. defends his friends at a moments notices. Very shy around girls. Cares too deeply for people.

Bio: A street Urchin after his parents death at the age of 5, Tiberius is a loner that was picked on and abused for most of his life, from foster home to foster home. (Thats all I got So far)

Powers: Light, Flight and Sensing

City Born: Rock Creek

Parents: (even though they are deceased, i feel as I should mention them.) Father Charles Hawkins, Mother Anza Michikie.

 

 

[spoiler=Plot]

Plot: Tiberius was Your average Poor kid in high school. No one Care about him or what happened to him except for (Girlfriend character and best friend character). Always getting beat up and tossed around at school and at home, until one day where (major plot point happens). Now Tiberius has gotten incredible powers. Will he use them for good? Or will he turn on the cruel world that has destroyed him and his family and kill everyone.

 

 

Yeah that's all I got so Could I get some help please?

I need a:

[spoiler=Main Character's Girlfriend]

Name: Celena Valentine

Type of Character: Your choice

Age: 17

Height: 5'6''

Weight: 142

Hairstyle: Long, brown hair that is slightly wavy. Comes down a little past her shoulders.

Clothing Style: Light blue, almost white, short sleeve shirt with the word Angel written in cursive across the front. Long blue jeans that are slightly baggy, and white tennis shoes with a light blue trim.

Personality: Tries to stay optimistic and happy, but she can be serious when need be. She is willing to do what it takes to help her friends.

Bio: Born into a family of three, her mother passed away shortly after her 6th birthday. Since her dad worked most of the time, she had to learn to take care of the house. The only person who helped teach her was her grandmother, Korrina Hartwell, who began living with her when she turned 10.

Powers: Air

City Born: Rock Creek

Parents: Father Markus Valentine, Mother Aurora Hartwell

 

 

[spoiler=Main Character's Nemesis]

Name:Talvance Raine

Type of Character: Nemesis

Age:18

Height:5'11

Weight:187

Hair Style:Like Sasuke from Naruto

Clothing Style:normally wears a pair of Torn black pants, with a white T-shirt and a Dark and gold button up shirt over his tee, normally the overshirt is unbuttoned

Personality:Rather rude in speech towards others, but is in no way a thug, while he may hang out with the wrong kind of people he is cruel in a sophisticated way, often being manipulative before causing physical pain.

Bio:Born to a middle class family, the youngest of three, his older siblings became successful in the areas of Art and Science, but he himself was no good in anything except in violence, though in the eyes of his family he was a disgrace. He continues to fight as it is probably the only thing that keeps him sane.

Powers: Darkness

City Born: Rock Creek

 

 

[spoiler=Support Characters]

[spoiler=Good]

[spoiler=Andrew Rhodes]

Name: Andrew Rhodes

Type of Character: Best friend to Tiberius

Age: 18

Height: 6'3''

Weight: 182

Hairstyle: Shaggy dark red hair

Clothing Style: Sleeveless dark grey shirt with a design of a crimson dragon wrapped around a blade.

Personality: Like an older brother he watches out for his friends and tries to help anyway he can. He can be a little stubborn and seem mean at times, but he is actually a nice guy.

Bio: Born into a family of four, he always looked up to his older brother. He strived to be like him, even when he moved away. At the age of 15 he lost his mother and unborn sister due to a robbery attempt. With his father still in a deep depression, he struggles to keep everything going.

Powers: Earth

City Born: Rock Creek

Parents: Father Matthew Rhodes, Mother Abigail Fox

 

 

 

[spoiler=Erus Ghiaccio]

Name:Erus Ghiaccio

Type of Character: Celena's best friend good friends with Tiberius

Age:17

Height:5'11"

Weight:165lbs

Hair Style:Short white hair

Clothing Style:Long sleeve collared shirts with the sleeves rolled up to his elbows with Khaki shorts always (even during winter)

Personality:Talks alot, is cold to Tiberius at times and really hates obnoxious people.

Bio:Celene's good friend since grade school and gets along with others great. Tends to be a bit cold at times and doesn't get cold even during the winter. His parents were killed only when he was 3 has lived with Celene ever since but kept his last name.

Powers: Ice

City Born: Rock Creek

Parents:Unknown

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Evil Support Character]

Name: Nathan Daniels

Type of Character: Your choice, probably a nemesis support character

Age: 16

Height: 5'10''

Weight: 165

Hairstyle: Short light brown hair, but not too short.

Clothing Style: Long black shirt with a sliver Celtic Knot design. Jeans are a lighter color and he wears brown shoes.

Personality: Quiet and very intelligent, he believes everything has a logical explanation behind it. Very manipulative and he loves to play mind games.

Bio: Born into a rich family, he hardly seen either of his parents. He basically got whatever he wanted, whenever he wanted.

Powers: Fire

City: Rock Creek

Parents: Father Tristan Daniels, Mother Alyssa Paine

 

 

 

 

the Mentor Character

and A very good story of how the characters gained their powers.

 

and maybe a few extra plot thoughts. I was thinking along the lines of static shock, where everyone gets hit at the big bang, but that feels like stealing so if anything i need help.

 

Thanks in Advance.

 

Oh By the Way, Here is the form for characters.

[spoiler=Character App]

Name:

Type of Character: (In relationship to Tiberius)

Age:

Height:

Weight:

Hair Style:

Clothing Style:

Personality:

Bio:

Powers: (Only one)

City Born: Rock Creek

Parents:

 

 

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Name:Talvance Raine

Type of Character: Nemesis

Age:18

Height:5'11

Weight:187

Hair Style:Like Sasuke from Naruto

Clothing Style:normally wears a pair of Torn black pants, with a white T-shirt and a Dark and gold button up shirt over his tee, normally the overshirt is unbuttoned

Personality:Rather rude in speech towards others, but is in no way a thug, while he may hang out with the wrong kind of people he is cruel in a sophisticated way, often being manipulative before causing physical pain.

Bio:Born to a middle class family, the youngest of three, his older siblings became successful in the areas of Art and Science, but he himself was no good in anything except in violence, though in the eyes of his family he was a disgrace. He continues to fight as it is probably the only thing that keeps him sane.

Powers: best option would be the opposite of the Main characters, so you'll need to choose first

City Born: Rock Creek

Parents:

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Just enjoy making it. I'm sure it'll turn out fine. (^_^)

 

This. And the following:

1. Update often, like at least once every week. Not doing so will cause the downfall of a fan-fic quickly.

2. Don't use script format. It's even against the rules now.

3. If you can do this (some people naturally do), write with your emotions. Include your experiences into the fic as well. If you are in a relationship or like someone or such and you plan on a character liking another or being in a relationship, try incorporating your feelings into it. It helps make the fan-fic a bit more realistic and you are more willing to work on the story to try to push the characters together and develop the characters. At least it worked for me; I'm not sure how perfect that is for you, but it's worth a shot, right?

4. Try not to get yourself caught up in cross-fics in which the other person involved completely controls what happens and eliminates your main character in the first duel, especially if the cross-fic is a huge tournament. Trust me, you'll feel like a prisoner rewriting those chapters.

5. If you do get caught in the cross-fic situation involving a large tournament, just try your best to either develop your character somehow and still keep the main character involved somehow if possible.

That's all I can think of right now.

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Story for powers.

 

A powerful man known as Creed exists. Creed wants to anylyze human nature and picks several people to give powers. They are unaware how they got it, they just know they can use it, Creed ant's to see what they will do with them.

 

Name: Shallow Esophagus

Type of Character: Mysterious mentor like character

Age: 25

Height: 5 ft 8in

Weight: 150 pounds

Hair Style: buzzcut

Clothing Style: wers a black leather duster over a whit shir with black jean like pants. Wears a white mask like in The Liars Game.

Personality: He seems easily amused, but never laughs. He likes using a Socratic method to ansewer questions or gives hypothetical situations.

Bio: Shallow is the Referee, this means he has to regulate and control Creeds game to keep it from going out of hand and leading it in the way Creed wishes. Amy past about him is unknown, it is debatable if he even exists or is just a robot given life by Creed.

Powers: Shallow is capable of granting other people powers (due to his connection with the godlike Creed).

City Born: Unknown

Parents: N/A

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Creed wants to see if pride from the new-found powers will turn into their downfall so he has people who know each other well get the special powers. This way people will be famillar with one another. These groups ar referred to as Packsand range from groups of 2 to 6.

 

He then issues a cruel challenge. Each mark will go away in 6 weeks. If you capture somebody you can have your mark last an extra 6 weeks while they lose their mark. In addition you can gain additional power marks if you do this to someone close to you.

 

Will greed turn the party's against each other? Will they prey upon others in order to keep their strength? Or will they overcome it and simply let the mark die out?

 

In addition doing something moral and benevolent can give you extra time with your mark. Much more so if it's self sacrifice. It's a secret though, otherwise people would do it only to keep the mark.

 

Creed also will grant a pack a permanent mark of their choice if they can beat all the other packs. Killing the enemy is not necessary but optional.

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This may be of some help, but it's up to you if you want to use it.

 

Name: Celena Valentine

Type of Character: Your choice

Age: 17

Height: 5'6''

Weight: 142

Hairstyle: Long, brown hair that is slightly wavy. Comes down a little past her shoulders.

Clothing Style: Light blue, almost white, short sleeve shirt with the word Angel written in cursive across the front. Long blue jeans that are slightly baggy, and white tennis shoes with a light blue trim.

Personality: Tries to stay optimistic and happy, but she can be serious when need be. She is willing to do what it takes to help her friends.

Bio: Born into a family of three, her mother passed away shortly after her 6th birthday. Since her dad worked most of the time, she had to learn to take care of the house. The only person who helped teach her was her grandmother, Korrina Hartwell, who began living with her when she turned 10.

Powers: Air

City Born: Rock Creek

Parents: Father Markus Valentine, Mother Aurora Hartwell

 

Like I said it's up to you, change as you see fit. I hope it helps and I wish you luck with your story.

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Oh sorry I thought by PArty you meant have the special people in groups.

 

How about this.

 

In order to get the most diverse people possible he hosts several nightclub parties in secret.

 

Their is dry ice which s eventually mixed with a knockout gas taking the entire club out by surpirse.

 

Then he signs that grant people the power are drawn on their bodies along with a letter explaining what they can do and what happened.

 

Thanks to thier being several models of Shallow this happens worldwide.

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Here's another, like before it's up to you.

 

Name: Nathan Daniels

Type of Character: Your choice, probably a nemesis support character

Age: 16

Height: 5'10''

Weight: 165

Hairstyle: Short light brown hair, but not too short.

Clothing Style: Long black shirt with a sliver Celtic Knot design. Jeans are a lighter color and he wears brown shoes.

Personality: Quiet and very intelligent, he believes everything has a logical explanation behind it. Very manipulative and he loves to play mind games.

Bio: Born into a rich family, he hardly seen either of his parents. He basically got whatever he wanted, whenever he wanted.

Powers: Super Intelligence

City: Rock Creek

Parents: Father Tristan Daniels, Mother Alyssa Paine

 

Hope it helps.

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