Guest Merciful Idiot Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 [spoiler=Don't see this, I need this only to memorize the Zeta Matrix's data........I know you're not going to listen to me, damn you.......]How dare you look! I'm calling the YCM police! http://ben10.wikia.com/wiki/Celestialsapienhttp://ben10.wikia.com/wiki/Anoditehttp://ben10.wikia.com/wiki/Highbreedhttp://ben10.wikia.com/wiki/Dravekhttp://ben10.wikia.com/wiki/Uxoritehttp://ben10.wikia.com/wiki/Null_Guardianshttp://ben10.wikia.com/wiki/Dragonshttp://ben10.wikia.com/wiki/To'kustarhttp://ben10.wikia.com/wiki/Chimera_Sui_Generishttp://ben10.wikia.com/wiki/Ectonurite The reason why it's called Destroyer of the Universe instead of Savior/Protector of the Universe will be revealed in Chapter 2. [spoiler=Prologue]A boy was running as fast as he could, on an empty street. There was a black figure closing in on him, and it was coming closer and faster. The boy, seeing a car, quickly stopped and quickly crawled under it. He waited as then saw the figure pass him. He took a deep breath and then smiled. But his escape was short for the car was suddenly hurled into the sky. The boy quickly stood and turned and was about to run when a tentacle-like thing wrapped itself around his leg. The tentacle pulled the boy towards the figure as he tried to escape with all his power. The tentacle then effortlessly lifted up the boy making him upside-down. The boy saw the figure. It had an upside-down skull where its face was supposed to be and had only one eye. It had exposed bones in some places and also had dark-blue skin and white, long and sharp claws instead of fingers. It also had a tentacle on its chest which was the tentacle keeping the boy in place. Where its legs were supposed to be was instead another tentacle like the one on his chest. It was holding a black watch of sorts. The black watch was everything a normal wristwatch should be except that instead of a clock in the inner glass of the wristwatch, there was black with two red triangles on the left and right side of the black. The ghost-like thing held out the watch towards the boy’s left wrist and it immediately attached itself to the wrist. The boy screamed and then suddenly, he woke up. He looked around and sighed. Whew……It was just a dream….. He thought until he looked at his left wrist. The strange watch-like thing from his dream was still attached to his wrist. He was shocked and then climbed out of bed, ran out of the house, slid across the staircase, landed on the bottom floor, and fetched a broom from a door next to the stairs all in unnaturally-perfect order. He then proceeded to try and stick the tip of broom underneath the watch with his right hand but it was no use, the watch completely covered all possible gaps. He soon began hitting the watch with his right hand but still no luck. He then began to try and pull it off, bite it off, and even try to use a knife to cut off the handle but nothing worked, despite his efforts.He soon held out the watch towards the wall and began charging towards it. The watch hit the wall at full-force but all it did was giving the boy a broken hand. The boy sat down on the table and sighed. He stood up to get some breakfast but then heard a voice. It couldn’t be his parents, they were already dead, nor could it be his friends, because it was only 5:00 in the morning which the boy didn’t notice until seeing the kitchen clock. He listened closely and heard the voice. The eerie and creepy voice chilled him down to the spine. He then listened closely and heard the voice again, only this time it was from right behind him. He turned around to see the very same frightening figure he saw in his dream.“Zen, I have a job for you.” [spoiler=Chapter 1]Zen, surprised for a second before running towards the door. The ghost-like thing then faded through the floor. Before Zen could reach the door, the ghost rose from the floor and blocked the front door. Zen then started running towards the back door but it too was blocked by the ghost-thing. “Enough games,” The ghost said in a spine-chilling voice. It faded through the floor again as Zen started running up the stairs again. He was going to jump through the window in his room. But while on the stairs, the claws of the ghost rose from the stairs and grabbed Zen by the ankle. Zen tried to release its grip but it was too strong. The ghost rose from the stairs and had its tentacle wrapped around his chest as soon as it let go its grip. Zen struggled for a while before kicking the ghost thing. The kick went straight through the ghost but the tentacle suddenly lost its strength. Zen took this opportunity and ran straight to his room and opened the window. He climbed onto the edge of the window and jumped. He landed on a bush and then began running down the street. The ghost-like thing quickly caught up to him and thousands of tentacles grabbed Zen, completely covering his chest and legs. “How…..annoying……” The ghost said in a bothered and spine-chilling sort of way as Zen struggled.“Who….are you?” Zen said in a weak voice as he still struggled.“Ahh…..Forgive me....I am an Ectonurite from Anur Phaetos and I am an ex-Ecto-Lord of, Xs’Trayr.”“Ectonurite? High Ecto-Lord? Anur Phaetos?” Zen tilted his head sideways in confusion. The ghost noticed this and sighed.“In short, I’m an alien called Xs’Trayr and I’m from a distant planet which I used to be king of.” Zen, for some reason, lost all his fear.“That explains a lot. And I’ll just call you Trayr.”“Fine then. Now where was I?”“Letting me go back home free and getting off this planet?”“Yesss- Wait, no. That’s wrong.” Trayr put his hand to his skull face and scratched himself. “Ah, yes. Now I remember.” Trayr took out a remote with a big red button from nowhere and then pressed it. For a few seconds, nothing happened. After the few seconds, a ghostly-white giant space cruiser with black lines here and there appeared from nowhere and landed on the ground, destroying the park in the process. A door opened and then Trayr threw Zen inside with his tentacles. Trayr then went through the door and then the door closed. He then uttered, “I have a job for you, Zen,” again. Zen tilted his head sideways again. But then he just realized what the spaceship from the inside looked like. There were dark metal corridors everywhere. Trayr then grabbed Zen and dragged him all the way to the main control room, which had controls everywhere being handled by bandages which were coming from what looked like a mummified Egyptian Pharoah. “You have a mummy piloting this ship?” Zen asked. Trayr facepalmed himself to the boy’s stupidity as the mummy-like creature stopped on the controls. The creature turned and gave a look at Zen before going back on the controls. “I wonder what else you have on this ship…. Maybe a-““QUIET ALREADY, YOU ANNOYING LITTLE CLONE OF A BRAT!” Trayr snapped. He threw Zen towards the wall but was caught by a couple of bandages from the mummy. The mummy carefully placed Zen onto the ground and by then, Trayr was gone.“Look, I have absolutely no idea what’s going on here. Could someone explain it to me?” Zen then asked with absolutely no fear piercing his words.The mummy glared at Zen before answering his question, “You are here because you’re the clone of Ben Tennyson, secretly put into a pregnant woman before even knowing it. The original baby inside the pregnant was killed as soon as you entered. And-”“Hold up a second, I’m a clone ? Of the legendary Ben Tennyson?”“Basically, yes. Ben himself is unaware of this and besides, he wouldn’t even have the heart to do the job.” “And what am I supposed to do?”“Have you forgotten the Zeta-Matrix on your wrist?”Zen looked at the watch on his wrist and said, “You mean the watch-thing?”“Yes….I do.”“But what does that have to do with anything?” The mummy facepalmed himself for a while and then replied, “Ben Tennyson does these ‘cool stuff’ with the Omni-Matrix, which contains approximately one million, nine hundred and three samples of DNA.”“That’s a lot.”“Yes, but we didn’t have the time to gather that much in such a short time. We only had time to get ten powerful samples of DNA. And each one took a year to obtain.”“So this Zeta Matrix thingy has only ten aliens on it?”“Technically, yes. But each one is powerful. Spin the dial counter-clockwise twice.” Zen did as he was told and then suddenly it glowed and then a green hologram of a dragon came out. “This is from the Dragonia species, a proud, fine, and ancient race. It wasn’t easy to collect their DNA.” “Cool.” Zen then turned the dial again and then the green hologram changed to what looked like a winged creature with no eyes, legs, or arms, instead having tendrills coming from their lower body.“This came from a Null Guardian. It took a year to get out of the Null Void in one piece with the DNA sample.” “This…..isn’t so cool.” Zen turned the dial once more and the green hologram changed once more, this time of what looked like a worm which has nothing except for a giant mouth ringed with teeth on top.“Dravek, Trayr said it was easy to collect the sample.” “This…definitely isn’t cool.” Zen turned the dial clockwise five times and then it turned off. Zen then took his attention back to the mummy. “I almost forgot I don’t even know why I’m here and who you are.” “Ah, right, forgive me. I’m Tutenhain, Thep Khufan from planet Anur Khufos. And you will learn why you’re here tomorrow.” Zen looked around once more before seeing the enormous window right in front of him; he was already in outer space. “When did we take off?” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Bump for now.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Sounds like Ghostfreak but with Albedo's Omnitrix, sounds interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 this has caught my attention. now let's see if it can hold my attention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 OMG, RUN ZEN THERES A PEDOBEAR BEHIND U! It's...weird. I absolutely hate the show, but if it will be nothing like the show, I'll continue reading :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 What the above have said, although I personally liked the ORIGINAL Ben 10, Alien Force was just bad, and I feel Evolutions may be worse. Still gotta watch the rest of Season 3 of Alien Force and maybe Season 4 of the original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Chapter 1 added. Zen is really, really weird. How can he take all of this just like that? STRANGE................................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 I just want to know why there were no civilians who saw a giant spaceship and a ghost taking a little boy to it o-O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 It couldn’t be his parents' date=' they were already dead, nor could it be his friends, [b']because it was only 5:00 in the morning which the boy didn’t notice until seeing the kitchen clock.[/b] He listened closely and heard the voice. The eerie and creepy voice chilled him down to the spine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 I usually wake up at that time :/ Most people are even still on the streets driving at 5 in the morning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted December 20, 2009 Report Share Posted December 20, 2009 Well, this town is different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryno Dorcus Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Both chapters were really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted December 21, 2009 Report Share Posted December 21, 2009 Well' date=' this town is different.[/quote'] Well darn them for not being able to hear a spaceship lift off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted December 23, 2009 Report Share Posted December 23, 2009 Quite interesting indeed...I can't wait to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted December 24, 2009 Report Share Posted December 24, 2009 What the above have said. Seems promising. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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