New Fire Card

[Heaven Irit]

 

And the effect:

This monster cannot be normal summoned or set. This monster cannot be special summoned except by tributing 3 pyro monsters form the graveyard form play. Once per turn, you may decrease a monster's ATK by 400 until the end of the turn. This monster cannot attack a player unless a monster is removed form ether from owner's graveyard or play.

[Home Slice]

You used a pic of a card already made ?????????

[Heaven Irit]

its the pic of Umia, or something like that

[-DOOM]

Don't use pics that are from real Yugioh cards.

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 pyro monsters form your graveyard. Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on the field. The selected card loses 400 ATK. If there are no monsters removed from play, this card cannot declare an attack.

 

meh effect, only a good beatstick i think. 7/10

[ÐΛЯКЛΞSSКЛłGHТ]

Pic is Uria, Lord Of Sealing Flames, change pic

Name is stupid, sorry

Effect is ok anyway

I think i can correct the OCG:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 Pyro-Type monsters form your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on the field. The selected monster loses 400 ATK. If there are no monsters removed from play, this card cannot declare an attack.

7/10

[Guest Cursed Reaction]

There's no need to post a thread twice.

[-DOOM]

Pic is Uria' date=' Lord Of Sealing Flames, change pic

Name is stupid, sorry

Effect is ok anyway

I think i can correct the OCG:

[b']This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 Pyro-Type monsters form your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on the field. The selected monster loses 400 ATK. If there are no monsters removed from play, this card cannot declare an attack.[/b]

7/10

 

you just copied my correction >_<

[DMZ]

Maybe he posted it at the same time as you. Does it really matter WHO corrects the card as long as it is being corrected?

 

And there is 1 difference:

HP Doom:

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 3 pyro monsters form your graveyard. Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on the field.

 

Darkness Knight

removing from play 3 Pyro-Type monsters from your Graveyard.

 

The latter is correct OCG.

 

To sum it up :

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 3 Pyro-type monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn you can select 1 monster on the field and decrease its ATK by 400. If there are no monsters removed from play, this card cannot declare an attack.

 

NOTE: MY OCG fix is slightly different than both of the above ones.

 

Card is not bad, but the pic needs to change :)

 

7/10

[ragnarok1945]

don't use existing ygo card pics

 

the OCG correction is already up, effect is ok, not great

 

6.8/10