Need help with this card

[Kei-kun]

For those of you who remember me saying that I wanted to make a very small fusion set for my Royal and Renegade monsters, so I wanted to get an opinion on this card.

 

 

If you need to see one of the fusions monsters for this set, let me know and I'll make a few up. Anyway, tell me what you think. Also, if you can help me think up a better name for this card, please let me know.

[branny]

very good work 11/10!! i wud like to see the fusion monsters

p.s chek out my xmas ones

[university222]

its quite a good card

i think the only downside is the long name

so...................... 9.2/10

[Kei-kun]

its quite a good card

i think the only downside is the long name

so...................... 9.2/10

 

Yeah, I was having trouble with the name too. Any ideas for another one? ^^;

[Kei-kun]

very good work 11/10!! i wud like to see the fusion monsters

p.s chek out my xmas ones

 

thanks, I'll go and post them later today or when I get the chance. I'll check out your Xmas cards soon. ^^

[Bloodrun]

you got everything right, except you forgot to capitalize Life Points lol, and it is actually a pretty good effect, you just need to get better your effect phrasing other then that i give you a 9/10 =)

[Kei-kun]

you got everything right' date=' except you forgot to capitalize Life Points lol, and it is actually a pretty good effect, you just need to get better your effect phrasing other then that i give you a 9/10 =)

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Oh okay then, thanks! I'll make sure to change those when i do everything. ^^