Sploda Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 First Fan-Fic. Hope people like it.[spoiler=prologue]Nightmares. At first no thought they were real. Everyone just thought it a figment of their imagination, thinking that they would just wake up and everything would be better. They thought wrong. At first only a small group of friends were affected, but soon it engulfed the entire world. Of course the Humans fought back, we always fought back. That was just our nature. It was our downfall. We are known as the Watchers. My name is Nicholas T. Miah, and if you are reading this then you are probably one of the last humans alive. Most of us were so young when it happened you probably don't know what caused the Hell you were born into. If you are reading this then I implore you, read on. You must know what happened to our race, what happened to our home. I am Nicholas T. Miah and this is the Tale of the Wathcers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 I like where this is going, as it's vague enough to keep me interested. However, when you said "Of course the Humans fought back," that's when it went too vague. If you mention something like that, then it would make sense to explain WHAT they fought. Simply saying 'nightmares' doesn't cut it. Good none-the-less. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted December 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 Well I'm spliting it into 2 Arcs. The first explaining what happened during Nicholas's time and the one where you see what the world has become. Nightmares is just a word I used to set the mood. Don't worry you'll know what happens in time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fenrir Posted December 18, 2009 Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 As long as you know what you're doing. =/ Still, interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted December 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2009 Its my first but yeah I know what I'm doing. Planing on a Chapter at least every 3 days, if not every day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 This reminds me of a letter for survivors of a chaotic crisis. Oh, yeah, that's basically it. It's good. Can't wait for Chapter 1, BTW, maybe you can help me get started on a fic about two swords of spiritual and cursed energy. PM me if you have any ideas for me, okay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted December 19, 2009 Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 This isn't a prologue. It's 20-odd sentences strung together. You have to go more in depth and enter the plot a bit before calling it a "prologue." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sploda Posted December 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2009 Well then lets call it an "introduction". if that makes you feel better. Also chapter 1 will be up tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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