.Leo Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 HeyAs you guys might've seen' date=' I've got a fanfic on this website, but I haven't got many readers. Not as many as my last book, that is. In the beginning, everyone was enthousiastic about the prologue, but I don't get the feeling that all those people actually read beyond that point.I was wondering whether any of you'd like to cast a look at it, and comment now and then. Thx I couldn't bring myself to finish it. There's nothing about it that draws me into the story. I tried reading it. Couldn't finish it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 It needs something that draws the reader in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Magnet Warrior deck' date=' for teh lulz. [b']Monsters {21}[/b]3x Giant Rat3x Beta2x Alpha2x Gamma 2x Valkyrion 2x Megarock Dragon2x Barbaros 2x Koa'ki Meiru Guardian 1x Sangan1x PoC1x Grand Mole Spells {13}3x Dark Factory of Mass Production3x Guidance to Ore3x Miracle Rupture2x Foolish Burial 2x Sacred Defense Barrier Traps {6}3x Rock Bombardment 2x Release from Stone1x Solemn Skill Drain DUDE...And some Gigantes would become good here too. How the hell did I miss Skill Drain? What to neg for it and Gigantes? - sangan, 2 x release, 1 x Mass prod...POC?+ 3 x Skill Drain+ 2 x Gigantes- 2 x field Spell+ 2 forbidden chalice? Also check out the ROCK deck I made inpired by this.http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-178622-post-3580108.html#pid3580108 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Konami should just release Fossil Fusion already. It would be awesomesauce Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 It needs something that draws the reader in. There are friggin card games in it. What else do you want? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringerofcake Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Konami should just release Fossil Fusion already. It would be awesomesauce BUt knowing Konami, they'd prob'ly nerf it to high heaven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 It needs something that draws the reader in. There are friggin card games in it. What else do you want? I have no clue. But it just screams "Boring sitcom!" to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Konami should just release Fossil Fusion already. It would be awesomesauce Fux yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zombiepromking Posted January 1, 2010 Report Share Posted January 1, 2010 Konami should just release Fossil Fusion already. It would be awesomesauce That would be cool but we have no fossil fusions yet, and fossil fusion would only be side material in the case of a Fossil mirror match. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Wait...so what are we doing? Discussing a Kuriboh deck to try to make it semi-competetive or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xazeon Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Well, guys, my time is up. See y'all next year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted January 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Well' date=' guys, my time is up. See y'all next year.[/quote'] Wait what??? Are you late for 2010 or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Well' date=' guys, my time is up. See y'all next year.[/quote'] Wait what??? Are you late for 2010 or something? Maybe he's from the future and can't come back til 2011? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XP_Lulz Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Well' date=' guys, my time is up. See y'all next year.[/quote'] Wait what??? Are you late for 2010 or something? Maybe he's from the future and can't come back til 2011? Or he's in a freaky universe where everything is 1 day behind. So it's Dec. 31 for him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Well' date=' guys, my time is up. See y'all next year.[/quote'] Wait what??? Are you late for 2010 or something? Maybe he's from the future and can't come back til 2011? Or he's in a freaky universe where everything is 1 day behind. So it's Dec. 31 for him. Or he had hard gas and poo'd himself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 *Selects Backpacks**Goes over to the HP items**Picks Revive**picks this topic* PPP Topic regained 500 HP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Thank youz armadilloz! I leftz all my revivez at the pokemon center with the shiz-y nurse joy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Wait...so what are we doing? Discussing a Kuriboh deck to try to make it semi-competetive or something? Puffball Deck > Kuriboh. I mean. WHERE IS THE LOVE FOR HANEWATA AND WATAPON!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Hey guys...I need your help....I want to make a decent PKMN deck...so I was wondering can you chekc out this?¿.....IO finfd it a funny idea to play with [align=center]ENERGY LIFEPokemon3 x Eevee (Rising Rivals)3 x Leafeon (Rising Rivals)4 x Treecko (Stormfront)4 x Sceptile (Stormfront)3 x Buneary (Majestic Dawn)3 x Loppuny (Legends Awakened) Trainers/Supporters4 x Rare Candy3 x Looker's Investigation3 x Roseanne's Research2 x Cynthia's Feelings3 x Super Scoop Up2 x Palmer's Contribution3 x Miasma Valley2 x Lucian's Assignment3 x PlusPower Energy3 x Call Energy12 x Grass Energy[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Hey guys...I need your help....I want to make a decent PKMN deck...so I was wondering can you chekc out this?¿.....IO finfd it a funny idea to play with [align=center]ENERGY LIFEPokemon3 x Eevee (Rising Rivals)3 x Leafeon (Rising Rivals)4 x Treecko (Stormfront)4 x Sceptile (Stormfront)3 x Buneary (Majestic Dawn)3 x Loppuny (Legends Awakened) Trainers/Supporters4 x Rare Candy3 x Looker's Investigation3 x Roseanne's Research2 x Cynthia's Feelings3 x Super Scoop Up2 x Palmer's Contribution3 x Miasma Valley2 x Lucian's Assignment3 x PlusPower Energy3 x Call Energy12 x Grass Energy[/align] If it were up to me, I would say it needs 4 copies of Bill and Prof Oak.But then again, those are B& :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Yep. Due to being outdated. I can't really help make it better since I'm JUST getting into it and don't really know anything good. It helps me learn how to build decks though. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Anyone heard of Speedrill? Fuxing amazing deck I've heard. =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aximil Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 Anyone heard of Speedrill? Fuxing amazing deck I've heard. =3 Let me guess. A Beedrill deck running 4 Rare Candys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 what is that¿? @axi: Almost every competitive deck that runs a stage 2 dude used to use Pokemon Breeder/now Rare Candy in order to speed up and hit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted January 2, 2010 Report Share Posted January 2, 2010 http://bulbapedia.bulbagarden.net/wiki/Speedrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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