Duel monsters Evelution

[Grunt Issun]

CHAPTER 1 the begining

 

"Hey Jack, I just got my new deck, So you wanna help me try it out" My friend Maria said

 

Hi My names Jack Hal, And Thats my friend Maria Random, nobody really knows her real last name but we call her that 'cus she never use the same deck more then three times, she never has the same stratagie so shes preety hard to beat.

"Okay Maria, Are you ready for me" I Screamed Eagerly

 

"I should be asking you the same thing" She said as she raised her duel disk.

 

I raised my duel disk.

 

"LETS DUEL" we said in synch

 

"I'll start" I said and drew my oppening hand

 

okay looks like my best move is with celtic gaurdian

"I SUMMON, CELTIC GAURDIAN, IN ATTACK MODE" I yelled to her

(ATK: 1400 DEF: 1200)

 

"Then I place a card face down and end my turn" I said

 

"Okay I draw, and Special summon CYBER DRAGON, to the field" She announced

(ATK: 2100 DEF: 1600)

 

"Now Cyber Dragon, destroy Celtic Gaurdian."She yelled

 

The big metal dragon blasted the Elf Warrior with some kind of energy and the elf shatterd

 

(2100-1400=700)(4000-700=3300)

 

"So this time its machines I guess" I thought aloud

 

"ok DRAW" I said as I drew

 

"Perfect, I summon M-Warrior #1 in attack mode" I said

(ATK: 1000 DEF: 500)

 

"weird he has low attack points, Why would you summon him?" Maria Asked

 

"This is why" I Answerd

"I activate, Sword Summoning" I announced

 

sword summoning allows the user to tribute one level 3 or above warrior type monster to special summon "swordman taylana, hero of the galaxy" on the field.

 

"I tribute M-warrior" I told her

"to summon this, TAYLANA COME FORTH"

(ATK: 2000 DEF: 2000)

"next go Shining Galaxy sword, which increases his attack by 700 points"

(Atk: 2700 DEF: 2000)

 

"dang" Maria whisperd

 

"Now I use "big bang shot" which gives my monster 400 more ATK, and piercing damage"

(ATK: 3100 DEF: 2000)

 

"I have a felling your not done" Maria said woriedly

 

"RIGHT, Go block attack and megamorph" I Screamed

 

cyber dragon switched into defense mode (DEF: 1600) and Taylana doubled in power and size (ATK: 5400)

 

"Now Taylana slash her dragon" I commandad

 

Taylana flew twords cyber dragon and slashed his head of, the dragon then exploded. (5400-1600=3800) (4000 - 3800=0200)

 

"HA, your down to 200 life points" I said triumphantly

 

"but look at taylana" she pointed

 

Taylanas strenght decreased to 1350

 

"So, he has less strength now, He's still awsome. I place one card face down and end"

 

"okay, prepare for this, I SPECIAL SUMMON CYBER DRAGON!!!!" she screamed " NOW ATTACK"

 

I had something planned for that

 

"GO MAGIC CLYINDER" I yelled.

 

Magic clylinder reverses tha damage of the attack to the attackers life points

 

(0200 - 2100 = 0000)

 

"I...lost, mabye this deck isnt so good." she admited

 

"you only summoned 2 monsters, so it could still be good" I said

 

"You really think so?" she asked

 

"Youre gunna change in a week anyway so YEAH" I told her.

 

Chapter 1 END

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

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...Well, if you're going to write pointless Duels, learn to Duel well first.

No good Deck should run vanillas.

Taylana can be Summoned whenever, with no cost (read: broken, the Spell is crap).

Jack's broken hand would've been quite awesome if it were at all possible; by the end of the Duel, he has -1 cards in his hand.

There is no reason something wouldn't have come up to destroy something as easy to break as Magic Cylinder in any competent Deck by the third turn.

YOU FRIGGIN' MISSPELLED SACRIFICE.

 

Also, there's no plot. It's just a random Duel, as you did, admittedly, lampshade. Still, no one really cares about watching random Duels. Write a plot if you're going to write.