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There did another app with some changes if its not ok I will make one more.

 

Name-Ryan Tokanua

Gender-Male

Bastard(yes/no. If yes with witch animal. ex:Kisame is a shark bastard)-No

Weapons(Shuriken and Kunais are in Inventory)- Tanto

Inventory-Shuriken, Kunais, Explosive Tags, Fuuma Suriken

Village-Leaf

Land-Fire

Look-My Avitar

Nature(up to 3)-Wind, Fire, Lightning, Pheonix

Combined Nature- None

Kekkei Genkai- None

Clan- None

Age-19

Techniques- Lightning Blade, Wind Clone, Rasengan,Pheonix Rasengan, Pheonix Flower Jutsu, Fireball Jutsu, 1000 years of death, Summoning (Fox), Substitution, Fire Dragon Jutsu, Wind Katana, Shadow Clone , Fire Katana (Wind and Fire Katana cover my katana with wind or fire)

Host- No

Akatsuki- No

Good/Evil- Good

Goal- To Eliminate the Akatsuki.

Rank(Genin,Chunnin etc.)-Jonin

 

By the way can I have a NCP squad of genin if not then fine but if so then can they be...

 

Sarah- Beginner Byakugahn User

Max- Medical Ninja

Scott- Taijustu User

 

Its ok if you say no my charicter is ok without them.

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Ken jumps down landing next to the building Tenkai landed in. Ken then jumps inside his white chakra softening slightly as he approached Tenkai. "oh just a little question before you go back and try to attack again can i absorb you if he kills you, you seem pretty strong..". Ken then jumps using chakra to stand upside down on the ceiling, waiting for Tenkais response. Ken looks back out the hole using his sharingan he senses that Jarred's chakra is still gojng "hmm.. i wonder if the guy youre fighting is even conscious anymore" he says, not meaning Unconscious though.

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Tenkai jumped up next to Ken, staring at Jarred.

"I'm not going to die. I only need to fight him long enough to complete my Sharingan... if I can't... I'll run like hell. And about what you said about Jarred... you're right, he doesn't seem to be in control... almost as if he's watching someone else fight for him." Tenkai jumped high into the air, his single chakra tail flowing behind him. His small chakra wings flapped but the couldn't sustain his weight.

That's right... I need to get into a higher stage before the wings take effect.. Tenkai plummetted towards the lion and roared, only to stir up debris around it.

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Tenkai howled as his arm got shreded by the lion's claws. He backed away from the beast, letting the chakra heal him.

"You aren't Jarred anymore.... which means.... I can go all out!" Tenkai let lose the 2nd tail, which caused chakra to make a mini tornado around him. Air blasted out at the lion while Tenkai howled into the sky, chakra wings becoming larger and forming a second tail. The wind died down and there lay Tenkai, in a limp stance: the transformation complete.

"Alright.... let's see what you can do!" The jinchuriki made various handsigns and held out his hands.

"Air Blade!" An intangible sword of air formed in his hands, unbreakable but powerful enough to cut through nearly anything. Tenkai charged at the lion and swung.

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Hey, i edited my app a bit, but can i ask, if we cannot be related to canon Naruto characters, do they live? As in like is Akatsuki still under Madara? Anyways my edited app:

 

Name- Kaizen Shinotsuku

Gender- Male

Bastard(yes/no. If yes with witch animal. ex:Kisame is a shark bastard)- No

Weapons(Shuriken and Kunais are in Inventory)- N/A

Inventory-Shuriken, Kunais, Smoke bombs

Village- Water (Defected)

Land- Land of Waves

Look- animeguyn.jpg

Nature(up to 3)- Water, Lightning

Combined Nature(if possible. ex:Water Nature + Wind Nature= Ice Nature)- N/A

Kekkei Genkai- N/A

Clan(if ou make a new clan you can make a Kekkei Genkai)- N/A

Age- 16

Techniques- Control of water

Host(yes/no. If yes of wich beast and what level of controll you have on it)- No

Akatsuki(yes/no. If yes cannot be a host) Yes

Good/Evil- Evil, close to neutral

Goal- To help Akatsuki reach its Goal

Rank(Genin,Chunnin etc.)- S Rank Missing Nin Criminal

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There did another app with some changes if its not ok I will make one more.

 

Name-Ryan Tokanua

Gender-Male

Bastard(yes/no. If yes with witch animal. ex:Kisame is a shark bastard)-No

Weapons(Shuriken and Kunais are in Inventory)- Tanto

Inventory-Shuriken, Kunais, Explosive Tags, Fuuma Suriken

Village-Leaf

Land-Fire

Look-My Avitar

Nature(up to 3)-Wind, Fire, Lightning

Combined Nature- None

Kekkei Genkai- None

Clan- None

Age-19

Techniques- Lightning Blade, Wind Clone, Rasengan, Fire Flower Jutsu, Fireball Jutsu, 1000 Years Of Death, Summoning (Fox And Crow), Substitution, Fire Dragon Jutsu, Shadow Clone Jutsu.

Host- No

Akatsuki- No

Good/Evil- Good

Goal- To Eliminate the Akatsuki.

Rank(Genin,Chunnin etc.)-Jonin

 

By the way can I have a NCP squad of genin if not then fine but if so then can they be...

 

Sarah- Beginner Byakugahn User

Max- Medical Ninja

Scott- Taijustu User

 

Its ok if you say no my charicter is ok without them.

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Dante chuckled

"Uh, no, my friend, listen, if you had gone out there, you wouldn't be alive..." he completed healing then he put his cloak back on "The 7 Tails and The 8 are both mine...But there were a few others over there...The 1 Tails and The 6th...You can take them on, I presume."

 

~Jarred~

The lion roared with ferocity as it was hit by the blade. The chakra surrounding the lion allowed it not to be cut in half by the blade.

The lion hit the ground but after roaring some more he got back up. He didn't charge back at Tenkai, he just stood there.

That's enough...

Slowly the lion downgraded in size and became Jarred again. The claws disappeared, the whiskers too. As the lion became Jarred once again it let out a single roar of vengeance.

Jarred then fixed up his jacket and put it on again. He was bleeding on his right arm and it dripped as he walked towards an exit. Jarred Cyan was always the one to be ready to walk away from everything, it's how he learned... It was the only way to hide his feelings; just to walk away.

"Maybe tomorrow..." he yawned as he went to the ninja hospital.

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Tenkai's chakra dissolved and he returned to normal. He faced the opposite way of Jarred, trying to figure out something.

"So... you're just going to walk away!? IS THAT IT?" He wirled around and ran for Jarred, jumping in front of him and blocking his way.

"You're just going to walk away? This fight may mean nothing to you but I need this fight! You may see me as a fool for trying to take revenge on the Akatsuki but that's in your view! Do you really think I want to do this? It's not that I want to... it's because I have to!" Tenkai pushed back the hair covering his forehead, revealing a scar shaped like a star with a line through it.

"You see this? This is... this is what the Akatsuki did to me. While I was crying over my best friend's dieing body, his murderer snuck up behind me and infused the living part of him within my concious. Night and day I have to live with an angry voice in my head telling me to get revenge! The only way to end it is to kill his murderer..." Tenkai turned away from Jarred and started walking away, wanting to get back to his training.

"I guess.... I guess I'll have to find another way to complete my Sharingan... goodbye Jarred."

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Jarred yawned.

He started to walk again. But then all of a sudden he stopped. The nagging thought of a friend or former friend in need was bothering him. He didn't seem like it, but he was bothered.

"I'll help you train, but I cannot guarantee successfully defeating my brother...I know him, after all, I know every inch of him..."

He clenched his fist and took a breath.

Jarred didn't turn to look at Tenkai

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Tenkai stopped. He as well didn't turn to face the person he just fought.

"You can? Then if that's the case.... I guess I'll train with you. Don't worry, I won't try to fight you anymore... well, at least not that seriously." Tenkai laughed and turned around, a desperate expression on his face.

"I need this... I need to live in peace... You know everything about Dante, eh? Well, combined with training and skill I'll win for sure."

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Jarred nodded.

"He is my twin, after all..." he said, placing his hand on his eye. He turned to Tenkai and headed for the training fields. He entered the fields calmly and motioned for Tenkai to follow.

Jarred examined the training grounds as he entered; everything in the exact place it was when he was a genin. He took a deep breath

"Sure has been some time..." he muttered.

The logs for kunai pratice were filled with holes and scars; obviously being used before.

He climbed up one of the logs and sat on the top of it.

Jarred took a kunai from his pouch and twirled it around his finger as he waited

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Tenkai stared blankly at Jarred, not knowing what to do.

"Uh... Am I supposed to do something? I don't really remember much of my training in the Leaf... is this some kind of practice?" Tenkai felt a bead of sweat roll down his forehead, it sure had been a while.

 

"Why are you doing this? I'm tired of hearing that friend of your's complain!"

"I'm doing this the right way. I won't release you when I have no control."

"FOOL!"

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"No, every time I try it it blows up in my face." Tenkai held out his hand and tried to form a Rasengan, which started to work. Suddenly, the sphere exploded and sent him flying into a bunch of bushes. A groan came from the ruined bushes and a dazed head popped up.

"See?" Tenkai disappeared under the bushed and after a few moments reapeared, getting rid of his wounds with his Mystic Palm. The dismayed ninja looked up at Jarred.

"Got anything to help with that?"

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Jarred nodded...

"Wind...If I'm not mistaken I believe Dante also has the nature of wind..." he jumped off the log and landed with a thump. Jarred walked over to Tenkai.

"See, my brother, never took an interest in learning the rasengan...He had always called it a waste of time...He may not seem like the brightest guy, but sure enough, he was smart, wether he knew it or not..." he said, suddenly putting on a serious face "The rasengan is a powerful technique, but unless the user can absolutely perfect it...Dante always knew that he could get alot more done in the time that it would take to perfect the rasengan...so he never did it... It's not sure-hit jutsu, which is why Dante believes it's a waste of time...If you can only use it once or twice, or if your opponent is extremely fast, and all you have to depend on is the rasengan...The odds are against you, understand?"

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"Yes, but I have more tricks up my sleave than you give me credit for." Tenkai cut off the Mystic Palm Technique and looked at his arms. They were completely healed.

Looks like it's improving.. He looked up at Jarred and smirked.

"Dante may view it as a waste of time, but to me... it's one of the best Ninjutsu I can learn. After all, I need to get good at Ninjutsu and Taijutsu seeing as I'm not a Genjutsu user... and I won't be getting the Mangekyou very soon. Anyway... do you have a solution to my problem or will I just have to train extrememly hard?"

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Jarred sighed and shrugged

"Yes, I suppose I can help you at least make the rasengan..." he said calmly "Now, you know the similarity between the Rasengan and The Chidori, I assume?"

Jarred made quick hand signs and then held his palm inches from the ground. Suddenly there was a spark, then the Chidori formed...He held it up for Tenkai to see.

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Tenkai stared into the lightning.

"Wow... pretty colors.... hehehe... at least mine doesn't require handsigns." Tenkai looked at Jarred's face, which was tinted blue by the jutsu.

"I know they are both pretty basic while being extremely advanced. The Chidori is a simply a jab, but a jab with insane power and accuracy... If used right."

 

"This is pointless... why can't you just wipe out the Akatsuki with my power?"

"Because I'm not an idiot, duh!" A rumbled echoed through Tenkai's mind.

"Why, oh WHY did you have to be my host?"

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Jarred nodded again

"Right...The Chidori can also increase the users accuracy, which makes it more of a sure-hit then the Rasengan..." he said, as he absorbed the lightning chakra back into his palm. The blue tint on his face disappeared and then he looked towards Tenkai.

"You've got the 1st part down.....So you just need to work on the sphere...Ok...Form it..."

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Tenkai stared at Jarred in disbelief.

"Form it? You saw what happened last time! *Gulp* Ok... here goes nothing..." Tenkai held out his palm and focused his chakra. Blue chakra began swirling around his palm, creating a sphere of chakra. The orb was shakey, never fully intact but somehow keeping together.

"I'm... I'ma doing it! I'm do- oh CRAP!" The sphere shifted and chakra swirled around it like a storm. The shell cracked and the chakra became haywire.

"AGH!"

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