--------------- Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 oh i kno! Shinryu is part of teh ending these are the people involved in the ending -Obviously all ten of us-Chihiro-Sawhexe-some Atrumhearts-Chaos-Cosmos-Cid of the Lufaine-Shinryu-Teh Kongo Brothers-and a Secret Person! ooooOOOOooooh ;Dhey guys sorry but i stayed up a little too late finishing up homework i'll post teh ending tomoro remember save the next post! ps sorry im pushing the ending on you guys and you guys are probably a little bumbed but just remember one thing in the words of Shadow's friend Firion (in teh story): "This isn't the end. A new dream is waiting to begin." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krillin! Posted April 7, 2010 Report Share Posted April 7, 2010 What about the others that are with The Kongos on their Shinryuji Naga? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 herro evryone just lettin u kno that im working on teh post cause its actually very very long just lettin u kno kthxbaips inu yes they will b there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krillin! Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 ITS NOT REALLY THE END IS IT? IF IT IS HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO INTRODUCE THE KONGO? I MAY NOT BE ABLE TO INTRODUCE THEM WITH A NEW STORY PLOT! *HYPERVENTILATES IN ALL CAPS* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashwee13 Posted April 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 oh calm down inu. we'll continue somehow and figure out a new story line. don't hurt yourself by HYPERVENTILATING IN ALL CAPS. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 ok then in a little bit ima post and inu you can introduce them into KHKBIII. u have tons of good ideas. im sure u can think of somethin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashwee13 Posted April 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2010 wtf with the avatar? it's like watching little ants go around and around and around.......it's REALLY annoying. oh, and someone continue PLEASE. i's getting bored. (wow that's amazing....it's MY thread and I'M the one getting bored) i don't know how to continue. but i want to see what's going to happen next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 14, 2010 Report Share Posted April 14, 2010 ima continue but my connection sucks so later today when i get a better connection Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashwee13 Posted April 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2010 excuses excuses stop being so lazy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 14, 2010 Report Share Posted April 14, 2010 nuh-uh i finished the ending and saved it on mai computer to save it im gona be home soon ill just go downstairs (i live in a condo) and post it ps i just wana give a little suspense to u guys so heres a little hint on the ending one of us dies (_)O(_) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 The ship lands. When we get off. Inu: Oh....my....god.... [spoiler=The Edge of Madness (Chaos's Home)] Chaos is sitting on his throne, staring at us. Chaos: I see that the time has come... Chaos floats up from his throne. We all get into a battle position. Chaos: Let us mark the end of this---eternal conflict. We all jump at Chaos, using our miscellaneous attacks. Chaos shrugs most of them off as if nothing. Chaos starts to summon pillars of fire, and pulls out a sword. After hours of fighting (sorry guys but I really dont wana write all the fighting down i started writing and just got tired of it), Chaos is down. Literally, he is on the floor. We ten surround him. Ashe is in front of him. Ashe: Chaos. Why would you want to defeat Cosmos? What could you possibly gain from the destruction of the Universe? Chaos: It is destiny that we fight, just as it is destiny that you DIE! Chaos grabs his sword and stabs Ashe directly in the heart. Me, Inu, Shadow, and Zerg: ASHE!!!! Rydia: Oh my god! Others: >gasp!!!< Ashe slowly slides off of Chaos's sword. Her Glass Heart falls out of her pocket and shatters. Me: YOU!!! Shadow and I grab our Blackout Prizm and Infinity Spectrum, respectively, and stab Chaos where his heart should be. Chaos: GAAHH!!! Chaos catches on fire, and fades away. We all rush to Ashe. Shadow: Nonononononononono >crying< Ashe lays motionless. Mizuki turns and starts walking away. Xion sees her. Xion: Mizuki! Where are you going?! Everyone turns to Mizuki, except for Zerg and Shadow. Mizuki turns back. Mizuki: ....to fulfill my destiny. Me: Mizuki... what are you talking about. Mizuki: Atman, remember I love you. Me: Mizuki?! Mizuki goes into her trance, but something is different. Mizuki just glows brighter and brighter, until she is completely enveloped in light. Suddenly, Mizuki's Heart of Light floats out, and her body falls. Me: Mizuki?! I rush over to her. Her body is lifeless. The heart floats towards Ashe. Zerg and Shadow look at it. The heart touches the glass fragments, and the fragments reform Ashe's Glass Heart, however the Heart of Light fades away. Ashe breathes and wakes. Shadow: ASHE!! Shadow hugs Ashe. Ashe: Huh? Where....Shadow? Everyone surrounds Ashe. I stand up from Mizuki's body. Cloud and Golbez come over to me. Cloud: Are you ok, Atman? I look up from Mizuki's body, and turn to them. Me: I'm fine. I'm sure this won't be the last time I see her. Golbez is silent, looking at Mizuki's body. He is the only one that sees Mizuki suddenly fade into the floor. Suddenly, there is a loud roar. We all look to the sky to see the Shinryuji Naga. Golbez: What?! Cloud: Shinryu. But...he's not in his full form. Inu: Oh god not you people.... The Kongo Brothers jump down. The others stay on Shinryu. Agon: Inu, we meet again. Zerg: Inu, are these people more villains? Inu: Not nessecarily. Towards Agon, I'm guessing Atman was right. Unsui: That's right. We work for the Shinryuji. Inu: But if Shinryu "purifies" the universe, we'll all die! Agon: So? The Shinryuji promised us that if we wake him when one of the gods dies, that we'll be restored to our current state, memories in tact. Rydia: Basically a "Get out of Death Free" Card. Inu: And with that you'll be able to continue with your pathetic ways while society redevelopes. Unsui: Who are you calling "pathetic"?! Agon: Unsui, you turd, shut up! Ashe: Um... but if that's Shinryu...why isn't he "purifying" the Universe now? Agon: Well, he's not in his full form. We need to go to the Temple of Shinryuji to restore him to his full form. Agon and Unsui teleport to the top of Shinryu. They fly out of here. Riko(fading away along with the dragon): I think I got some pretty goodshots... Shadow, pulling out a small device he got from the ship: According to this... the Temple of Shinryuji is....on the other side of the Universe. Xion: Shinryu is too fast. They'll get there before we do. Inu: What do we do? Me: Nothing. Cloud: We can't just give up... Me: No, I literally mean, nothing. Chihiro: >cheep?< Me: Follow me. We head into the Lunar Whale. I fly us back to Order's Sanctuary. We rush out of the ship. Me: Cosmos?! A voice echoes through the Sanctuary. It belongs to Cid of the Lufaine. Cid: Cosmos is no longer alive. Everyone: !!! Me: I knew it! Cid: After you all left, Sawhexe arrived at the Sanctuary. ~~~F~L~A~S~H~B~A~C~K~~~ The portal to the Planet's Core closes. Cosmos: Atman, I'm afraid that is a promise you cannot keep. Sawhexe walks forward. SX: You rang, Cosmos? Cosmos: You and I both know what must be done... SX: With pleasure. Sawhexe points her Keyblade directly at Cosmos's heart. Meteor... >kablooeh< ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Me: Cosmos had so much faith in us, that she believed we wouldn't fail. So she sacrificed herself, so Shinryu would not be able to re-balance the Universe, cause as soon as we destroyed Chaos, the Universe was balanced again. Cid: You are right, Atman. When Shinryu reaches the Temple, he will fall back asleep, and the Kongo Brother and company along with him. Ashe: So we literally have to do... Cloud: Nothing. Our job is already done. I am not doing this again... Cloud teleports back to his world, leaving behind his Stone Heart. Xion: I should return to the Organization. Thanks everyone... Xion leaves, leaving his Ice Heart (I know Xion is a girl, but remember this Xion was a member that stopped playing, and he wuz a boy.) Rydia: I'll miss you guys... Rydia leaves, her Wood Heart remaining. Golbez: .........may our paths cross again. Leaving his Dark Heart. Inu: So... what about us? Ashe: I guess we are free to do what we want. Zerg: I say we party! ;D Me: ........I gotta go.. Shadow: Go? Where are you going? Me, looking back: I don't know. Probably Twilight Town... Meanwhile, in the Lunar Whale's Library... Square Enix is still open at the Table of Contents. Words fade in at the bottom... XXII. Kingdom Hearts Keyblade BrawlXXIII. Kingdom Hearts Keyblade Brawl II Meanwhile, again, somewhere unknown... Mizuki is in absolute darkness. She looks slightly different than usual. She takes one step forward, and the floor brightens up. Mizuki remembers nothing. But the floor...is............ ........familiar. END Ending Theme: see i told u i did the ending! doo u leik itt? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krillin! Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 YEAH! But when do we start III! Also I love the floor but Can Shinryuji and company come back in III? I just had an awesome idea. But its such a sad ending. Especially if you read it Dearly Beloved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 15, 2010 Report Share Posted April 15, 2010 yay thx about the floor yes shinryu can come bak well, ashwee always starts the plots so lets let her start it again btw in case u dont remember, the girl at the center of the floor is ashwee, top is shadow, top left is me, below me is you, and the rest are mizuki, zerg (altho he is covered by ashe's hair), cloud, xion. rydia, and golbez. u should be able to tell them apart ;D did u leik what i did with the book Square Enix? i thought that was clever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krillin! Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 I liked it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 16, 2010 Report Share Posted April 16, 2010 where teh fukc is ashe? she needs to maek a new plot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krillin! Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 OR... I COULD Make the plot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashwee13 Posted April 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 Okay I'm thinking of a new plot. I haven't been on in a while, but I'm working on it.jeez i almost started crying when i read that.....so emotional Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 19, 2010 Report Share Posted April 19, 2010 yay im an epic writer! hehe i told u guys one of us was going to die, but i didnt say if you were coming back ;D so hurry up with the plot, we've got millions of ideas that are just begging to be poured out onto the pagescreen! so...... ...yea kthxhurryupbai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashwee13 Posted April 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 I'm working on it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Calm down. Should I make a new thread or stay on this one? That's all I need to know. Please reply quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 hmm... well if u maek a new thread, then mods would move it to the rp section and people would join and might mess it up also in rps theres no godmodding (its when u control anotther person, and we do that alot!) so maybe we should stick to this thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashwee13 Posted April 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 okay. i'll put it on the front page in a spoiler. Or should I put it on this page? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 20, 2010 Report Share Posted April 20, 2010 hmm... i guess this page cause i just press 'last' and im pretty sure inu does that too, so its more direct for us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 oh ps guys i got an idea do NOT introduce me in the begining ima do sometin surprising u kno what they say, 'the best kind of prize is a surprise' ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ashwee13 Posted April 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 ok i'm werkin on itIt has been two years since Ashwee and her friends fought and defeated Chaos. After Ashwee was seriously injured, Mizuki stepped in and healed her wounds....at an unfortunate cost. Mizuki traded her life to save one of her closest friends. Since then Atman has not been seen. It is said that he is out looking for his lost love. But, what he doesn't know is that Mizuki is in a different dimension, searching for a way out. In the real world, Ashwee is unaware of the danger of having lost her own heart and someone else's replacing it. What the whole group of friends doesn't know, is the impending storm of war is almost among them. Will they be able to defeat the evil coming and find Atman and Mizuki? Will Ashwee die or fade away into darkness where Mizuki is? ummmmmmmmm how's that for an intro? or at least a prologue? until i figure out something new. or can we go from there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted April 21, 2010 Report Share Posted April 21, 2010 i think i can go from there but later, im on mai phone right nao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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