chris78909 Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 here are my cards hope u like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 There are countless amounts of spelling and wording errors, also the 3 warriors would have been better as effect monsters and of a lower level. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatonryu! Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Yeah, I agree with Dj-Osiris 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 of ive changed it is it better ? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 of ive changed it is it better ? :) Sorry but its not, its no-where near realistic, look and read the stickys in this section for help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatonryu! Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 There's still some grammar errors on Gladiator of Light, Dark, and Fire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
university222 Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 i guess i agree with above comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 huhrg i give up ! i dont understand i try my hardest but i still cant get anything right :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 is this card any better ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Sorry but your new card is totally overpowered, and yet its effect is weak due to possible wording errors. To help you out, ive done a remake of your fusion card. "Warrior of Light" + "Warrior of Dark" + "Warrior of Fire"This card can only be Summoned through Fusion Summon with the above fusion material monsters. Once per turn by paying 1000 life points you may select 1 Warrior type Monster from your Graveyard and increase this cards ATK points by half the selected Monsters original ATK points until the end phase of the turn. ^_^ hope that helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 well all i can say i am of no use here :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 well here's my last try is this any better ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gatonryu! Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Yes that card is much better. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Yes, that card is more or less perfect ^_^ 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 hmmm, what you have to remember is that when you list a monster in a car effect you have to put it in "parenthesis" and when you have Special Summon, Summon, Normal Summon, Deck, Graveyard, Life Points, things like those all have to be capitalized, ill give you a 6/10 for the total set =) keep up the good work! just dont get to carried away 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 heres another card i have made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 heres another card i have made ok well opponent's needs the ' before the s, and Life Points needs to be capitalized =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miranda_Cosgrove14 Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 There are countless amounts of spelling and wording errors' date=' also the 3 warriors would have been better as effect monsters and of a lower level. 4/10[/quote'] I agree, but the pics are cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 kool 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 ok i fixed it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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