Joan Leona and the Knights of Lumaria (Redone and New chapter updated!!!)

[Megami Seika]

*Glomps Nishi landing on his chest her skirt up revieling her pannies*

O_O EEEEEK!

*LOL moment achieved*

[Nishi-chan]

-catches her-

-moment negated-

[Megami Seika]

*Genjutsu relesed It actualy happened*

[Nishi-chan]

-Genjutsu within a Genjutsu, Mangekyo bish xP -

-doesn't get glomped, and before anything else can happen, leaves-

(literally actually...night!)

[Megami Seika]

*Freazes time and punts Nishi in The nuts 12 times*

 

*releases time*

Baka!

[Lord JZ of the Enigma]

remind me never to get you angry.

[Jolta]

Gawd, quite an awesome story. *Glares* Hmmm... Queer. But good. I can't really comment properly until I see it all.

 

"Is there any thing rong?"

 

Was that intentional? Keke.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Ooh, ACTION.

 

The temporal displacement's gonna be a jabroni, especially if it's something like chrono-impairment in Time Traveler's Wife. Might be a good idea to add frequent flashforwards/comparisons to the original 1970 cast; we wanna remember them.

 

Sentence structure is iffy. Keep your clauses straight.

[Megami Seika]

Yes, thanks for the check out Gamemaster-Sama!, and they will be the same characters just that the world will se them as the hystorical figures they replaced.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

So do they each have their own arc, or is it Sonic Storybook Series style, or what? Eh... never mind, I'll wait. So long as you didn't establish the early characters for nothing.

[DL]

Well, I think this going somewhere, but the grammar msitakes made me think you didn't revise it. seet, seet.

 

Anyway, I look forward for more.

[Nishi-chan]

*Freazes time and punts Nishi in The nuts 12 times*

 

*releases time*

Baka!

-the clone that she punted disappears-

That looked like it hurt...

[Megami Seika]

Nishi you cant god mod me my time stop is instant. -_-

[Nishi-chan]

I know, it's called planning ahead.

I made the clone before you stopped time...like Itachi. The moment I first dodged you I made him.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

If Naruto were an RP, Itachi would be a massive godmodder. I call that none of this long, spammy situation should have taken place in the first place, and that the panty-shot, at the very latest, should have been the end of it, if not the glomp.

 

/minimod

 

Keep writing pl0x.

[Nishi-chan]

If Naruto were an RP' date=' Itachi would be a massive godmodder.[/quote']

Ain't that da twuth

 

 

I call that none of this long' date=' spammy situation should have taken place in the first place, and that the panty-shot, at the very latest, should have been the end of it, if not the glomp.

 

/minimod

[/quote']

Agreed <_<

[Megami Seika]

Sorry guys I'm gona update tomarow!

[Lord JZ of the Enigma]

okay then, can't wait, I already like this story, and my character hasn't done squat yet.

[Spirit of DMG]

Well, this is interesting. It seems that this will have two stories going on at once. Not something very common, I like it.

[vengeful lemonS]

wow ive been meaning to make a fan fic out of the original rp im just glad somone did just remember to put in the original rebellion of the 1st rebels(the aces ironic right?)

[Spirit of DMG]

This is getting interesting. So, are the weapons something like Zanpakuto? Wonder what'll happen next.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Mm. Serious descriptive quality drop in Ch1.

 

Pity how Joan's such a chick magnet; it'll leave a lot of people very unhappy in their love lives.

[vengeful lemonS]

the weapons aret the things making each demon appear in lumaria each person is born with a demon but some demons dont appear for a while.

[Lord JZ of the Enigma]

ah, yes, my dual blades, how I love those, yet your sword always makes mine look insignificant....can't wait until the next chapter...geez, Joseph sure is a chick-magnet, ain't he? LOL

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

ah' date=' yes, my dual blades, how I love those, yet your sword always makes mine look insignificant....can't wait until the next chapter...geez, Joseph sure is a chick-magnet, ain't he? LOL

[/quote']Joseph? Joseph?