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Joan Leona and the Knights of Lumaria (Redone and New chapter updated!!!)

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[spoiler= Characters]

Joan

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Ranna

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Arcadia

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[spoiler=Prologue]

It's 1970, a small town, in New England is home to a very smart girl her name Joan leona, this common girl with high goals is about to go to a world where her resolve will be tested and she will have to make many choices. Now let us go and see how this story unfolds.

 

 

“Hey Joan!” A young girl girl called out.

 

Joan sighed and turned seing her childhood friend Ranna, she was a meek girl of 16 all though she always had pigtails and cute pink glasses.

 

“Yes Ranna whats up,” she said with a slight smile.”Is there something wrong?”

 

“No, actually great news were in the same class this year and Joseph going be in too,” Ranna mentioned with emphasis.

 

Joan’s face got got red, Joan was a pretty girl her hair was a braid of chocolate back length hair, her skin is a pale white almost like fresh fallen snow, and her eyes crystal blue.

 

Joan’s snow white completion returns retaliateing to Ranna’s comment, “S-So what!” she said, her face flushing red again as she enters the room seeing Joseph, Ranna smiles and takes the second to last seat leaveing Joan with the seat in front of Joseph She just froze looking at the seat.

 

At this point the teacher was getting impatient, “Miss Leona take your seat!”

 

“I’m sorry Ms Greenwood I cant find a seat,” Joan said trying to refrain from blushing.

 

“Theres a seat in front of Mr. Kveykva” Ms Greenwood bluntly states.

 

Joan walks over to the desk, “hi Joseph” She says shyly as she sits down.

 

Joseph was a tall boy around 6’2 witch was large compared to Joan’s 5’8, he had short brown ear length hair, his skin was a light copper, and his eyes were dark ocean blue.

 

Joan’s vision gets blurry she blacks out.

 

Joan hears lots of people screaming she cant move her arms and she blind folded, “Huh whats?”

 

“Today we burn the heretic Jeanne d’Ark, unmask her so she can see her death!”

 

The blindfold is removed and Joan can now see that shes tied to a post with thousands of people watching her, a man in black takes a stick on fire and trows it at her legs seing shes up above a pile of wood, “Ahhhhh!” she screams, (“Shut up do you want to be saved?”) Joan screams, “Please save me I’ll do anything!”(“Fine share your soul with me, Choose my Caytalist”)

 

“I chose… to be your caytalist!” Joan says at that moment a large bight orb appears and raises, the orb disapates reveling a passed out Joan in the hands of a man with white wings, short grey hair, hollow grey eyes, his left hand that of a skeleton.

 

“My new mistress I am Arcadia and I’m here for you when ever you call.” Arcadia says softly as he flys away with her, the crowd in awe as they leave.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1:The fated]

 

 

Joan awoke to the chatter of a girl and boy, Arcadia siting next to her and infront of a couple of people argueing, on her other side was a few others weird creatures.

 

“Shut the heck up,” a voice Joan reconised as Ranna. “We don’t know where we are were all frightened so we should ask these creatures that saved us!”

 

Joan was now fully awake and sat up, “Ah our fearless leader awakes” Arcadia says jokingly, bringing attention to Joan.

 

Ranna pushes people out of the way to get to Joan, “Joanie! We were scared you were hurt,” Ranna says, hugging Joan. “Well me and Joseph atleast.”

 

Joseph walks over to Joan, “hey you ok” Joseph says, softly as he smiles.

 

Joan blushes, her face turning red, “Hey! Don’t stare like that at my Joseph, Joseph is all for Amore” the demon Amore says, jumping at the two.

 

“Ehhh when did Joseph become yours,” Joan booms loudly, surprised at her willingness to defend him.

 

“What do you like him plus I saved him and he made a contract with me, our souls eternally one” Amore sighed happily, blushing.

 

“She’s Right she saved me, meby I should explane”

 

I awoke with a woman half naked over me trying to take off my shirt, “Wait what who are you? Get off me!” I yelped.

 

“What but you told me you loved me” She started to bawl, but her face got stern.

 

“Fine! If I cant have you no one will!” I was confused she took out a dagger and raised it above her head, with a vile face, but at that moment time stood still,(>”what are you scared? Do you want to be saved? Then have our souls eternally one!”<)

 

“Our souls eternally one!”I screamed, the weird woman stabbed down but I was unhurt.

 

“I am your heart, your soul, and Your shield!” Amore said, there was a spirit like berrior around my body. I then blacked out and when I opened my eyes I was here with Amore, next to me petting my brow” Joseph said, Some what blushing.

 

Amore more stuckup looking after seeing Joseph blush, “Hermph! What about you Ranna?” Joan questions, Ranna.

 

“Uhh well I’m here with, Isra” Ranna sighed, as a little girl with tinny wings and a halo, tackles her.

 

“Big sis!” Isra says happily. “Well our story is weird” Rahana starts.

 

“Well after I blacked out I awoke in a battle field with a arrow in my chest.

 

There was blood in a puddle around me, The pain was unbearable, “Help me!!!” I screamed in pain. But no one stopped, I started to cry when, (>”Come on ill help you, just promise to be my big sis<)” Ira said happily.

 

“Ok I’ll be your Big Sis” I said slowly.

 

At that moment a White wand appeared in my hand and I was healed, Like all of you I fainted and awoke here, With his little one laying on top of me he face buried in my chest” Ranna says takeing few breaths, She ruffles Isra’s hair.

 

“Wait you got a wand I got twin swords” Joseph says, he looks towards Joan in horror.

 

Joan hadent noticed but she had a massive Great sword on her back. She grabs at her back pulling it off of her back like nothing holding it up in shock, “Gram, the sword that’s light as a feather to its owner but if it hits or is wielded not by that person it becomes 10 times the weight of what it looks,” Arcadia says calmly. “Nane & Xina, a sword so sharp it cut diamond like it was butter,” Amore says slowly. “Freyja, is the wand, it has the power to heal virtually any wound,” Isra says excited

 

“I guess we all have weapons now we need to find out whats going on,” Joan says.

 

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We've established one tsundere main character, one best friend for yuri shippers, and one crush for the main character. That's a solid base for just about anything.

 

Unfortunately, nothing else has been established. It's too short even to MyST.

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We've established one tsundere main character' date=' one best friend for yuri shippers, and one crush for the main character. That's a solid base for just about anything.

 

Unfortunately, nothing else has been established. It's too short even to MyST.

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I read MyST as Myst, which made me crack up.

 

Anyways, I'm just going to say that it's cliche so far. =D

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Tsundere = win

Best frined for yuri shippers = win

main character's crush = depends

 

too short' date=' grammar is mostly solid.

 

MAKE MORE!

 

this sounds like an anime...

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This made me laugh....Either way, I like it alot, even if I (Josep) didn't get any speaking parts in this chapter. I liked the story....though unlike everyone else, I didn't see anything about a yuri pairing....

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Wow your lucky.

 

How come JZ's in it. I don't see any fics with me in it. D:

 

Wait never mind I lied.

 

But it's the thought that counts.

 

So Jeane de'Ark=Joan de Ark.

 

Duh.

 

I find it funny how an old man pops out of nowhere and flies off. If anything that makes you look more like a witch.

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