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He is always here Ninja's ^^; as am I

 

Also I've heard of Medabots, though not the other one, but I have tried something similar and it turned out horrible . . .

Now my idea HAD Metabot parts in it but it also had Digimon and Pokemon . . . along with a good old fashioned adventure story to it.

 

*sulks in corner*

 

I even created an entire WORLD for it with currancy and what not TT_TT

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I have an idea.

 

Many alternate Earths have Duel Monsters on them, even though that number is infinitely small compared to the rest of the multiverse, but every now and then, instead of a world of motorcycles and holograms and technology, you get a slight anomaly...

Welcome to the world of Ærth, a mystical realm where the path to technological progression has just reached the steam engine, the ability to cast spells is not terribly uncommon, and wars are fought with swords, shields, magic, and monsters. Here dueling is similar, yet different. Those that have the ability to cast spells and summon monsters from the Astral Plane to aid them in the Material Plane are generally called "Duelists", though this can be branched out into "Duel Marshals", those who fight alongside their monsters and do not use magic terribly often, or "Duel Mages", those that use magic more often than they summon monsters. However, being a Duelist is taxing on the body, because you devote your life force into the summoning and casting process. Even if your monster sacrifices himself to save you, you will lose Life Points. Most Duelists stop once they reach a pre-arranged amount of life lost, but even the most powerful people have a limit, and if you reach that limit, you will die.

Ærth has many nations, but the six most important ones are the Kingdom of Academia, a rather central nation, not too big or too small, that happens to sit at a major crossroads of trade. They represent the LIGHT Attribute, and are devout worshipers of the Ancient Gods. The Principality of Northumber, to the north of Academia, dominates a huge portion of the continent it, Academia, and other nations share, Sacribes, yet it is mostly barren in a sizable portion of it. This nation embodies the EARTH Attribute, and deals with the extraction of many valuable minerals. The Eistaran League is a group of former colonies, both based on the continent of Lower Eistara and on islands in the Eistaran Sea, that have unified together and thrown off the oppressive yokes strangling them and become a power of their own. The League now represents the WATER Attribute, surpassing the previous holder, the Greater Domonue Republic, as a new emerging superpower. The Holy Dominion of Saophar is based around the southern continent of the same name. A theocracy that, instead of worshiping the Ancient Gods, has a religion based around a "Crimson Dragon". They have invented a new type of summoning called "Synchro Summoning", which is an offshoot of Ritual and Fusion Summoning, and their best Duel Mages are working hard to invent new spells to support these new monsters. Their Attribute is WIND. The Commonwealth of Wasterm is another relatively new nation formed from several countries unifying under one rule. Wasterm is the caretaker of the FIRE Attribute, and they specialize in technological advancement. Next door to Wasterm, and currently controlling the most land in all of Ærth is the Merikan Empire, a brutal, savage nation that wants nothing more than to conquer all of Ærth. Their Attribute is that of the DARK, and they will stop at nothing to obtain all of the other Attributes.

Can the Merikan Empire's new expansionist push be stopped, or will these foul monsters, along with one nation who plans on betraying them all, rule Ærth with an iron fist?

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Uh, keep it low on the spam people. Remember what happened last time?

 

Anyways, I'm not much of a YGO person but that arguably seems like something I would join. The only thing I would suggest is to attempt to break out of the cliches of elements. LIGHT are worshippers, EARTH extract minerals... Can't you think of something more interesting? :P

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An idea that I would like to get some comments on

 

[spoiler=The Story]

The Definition

 

What is Nirvana? Nirvana is referred to as the supreme state free from suffering and individual existence. Buddhist refer to it as "Enlightenment " . Since the time of the Great Buddha many have tried to reach nirvana as he did even mediating under the same tree as him. Thought all the attempts none has been be to obtain their nirvana it would take centuries for the person to reach their nirvana .

 

 

The Young Man

 

January 1, 2015 this brings us to the time of a young man wanting to start the new with a different light. The past year for him was not so great wanting to find so peace he decided to visit the Buddhist temple in the mountains above his town. Shortly after arriving and telling the temple monks about his problems they had him meditate, after the first day came to a close the monks noticed that he as not moved. They decided to leave him alone until he woke 4 days later he still didn't move as that day drew to a close the parents of the young man came to the temple looking from him. The monks told them what has happened the young man's greedy father alerted the local news about his son. Within days news stations from around the world where at the temple a month and a half later the young man awoke. Upon awakening the young man possessed and other worldly aura. The monks determined that he has reached "His Nirvana" thanking the monks the left the temple and begin living his life receiving a call from a major news station about an interview he traveled to the city. 3 days before the interview he was attacked by a group of teens trying to find a way for a good laugh. On impulse to protect himself his body begin to glow and ancient tattoos appeared on him. The teens begin the run at the sight raising his hand he killed the teens and destroyed everything in a 10 feet radius. In fear he was locked away saddened about what he did he being mediating again, but was unable to in his current location. He escaped attempting to return to the temple he found it had be destroyed and his parents killed. With nothing left he begin traveling two months of traveling he reached an old temple. he being meditating their a week after mediating he was found by the army before begin taken he awoken more powerful then before stating that the has reached "True Nirvana" he transported the army back to where they came from. using his power he created a giant island using the surround forest he then transported it to the middle of the Atlantic ocean.

 

 

The others

 

10 years later many other begin mediating some trying to gain power others for peace of mind. After the first group of people reached "Their Nirvana" the young child now dubbed "The Great One" saw the dangers of what could happen if they reached "True Nirvana". Using his power he sealed "True Nirvana" from everyone else. Still more and more begin mediating, but not all was able to reach nirvana some fall from the path became what is know as an "Eater". The "Eaters" where begins that could "Eat" another's nirvana. Like any great power good or evil the government wanted it as a weapon so they begin "Project Hive Mind" capturing and experimenting on "users" and "Eaters". They used them to create the "hive mind" 3 different "minds" which granted those connected to it different abilities. Wanting more power The "Eaters" and "The Hive" set out to reach " The Great One" fearing for his safety the "Users" also set to reach him as well.

 

 

[spoiler=The plot]

 

With "The Hive", "The Eaters", and "The Users" all trying to reach "The Great One" you just one more in the great battle. The question is are you fighting for Power, Peace, or something else?

 

 

 

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Didn't I say to keep it low on the spam? :I

 

The plot is surprisingly original in terms of design, although it was a slight pain reading the actual story. You might want to have that proofread. Besides that, certain events in the story seem a little rushed (basically the part where the temple is destroyed and his parents are killed and what not). Explain the other factions/groups a bit more and you should be set. But it does seem pretty interesting and I would recommend working on it more. :]

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Thanks Fenrir i kind of did rush it for the most part just to get the idea out, but I am thinking of how to better explain the other factions. I am also looking for someone to help with the story, due to the fact that coming up with stories is not my strong point.

 

Again thanks for the comment.

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