Blackstone Dresden Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 Line 1: Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse should be capitalized; it's "banded" not "banned"Line 3: Heracles is a person, change it to Spartaline 6: You forgot the n in and Throughout: The Four Horsemen are from Christian mythology, not Greek Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost-O Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 Line 1: Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse should be capitalized; it's "banded" not "banned"Line 3: Heracles is a person' date=' change it to Spartaline 6: You forgot the n in and Throughout: The Four Horsemen are from Christian mythology, not Greek[/quote'] I know about the Christian thing. But I know there are a lot of people who can't stand the Christian religion, so I made it a twist. Sparta is over used and boring. I need something better than that. Oh, and you forgot the periods at the end of your sentences. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake the Sage Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 *appears* Hello all. Not needing any help or anything, just here to state that Tamers is open and still accepting if any or all wish to join. And, if possible, I am still open for ideas on it's ever evolving plot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 That was a list format, not sentence format, so really my only @#$% up was not capitalizing "Line 6" And yes, a lot of people don't like Christianity, so maybe just remove all religious subtext entirely, or make up your own unseen divine being to give the characters the ability to fight the Horsemen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost-O Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 I hate creating religions, but it's a good idea damn it. I could title it after the Golems, but I'm unsure what to make a deity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 Then maybe just create Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse and Four Horsemen of Salvation Death-LifeFamine-AbundanceWar-PeacePestilence-Blessing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost-O Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 But then, what would I do with the gods? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 lol well maybe you should try replacing the gods with angelic or demonic characters, since it fits with the whole idea of the four horsemen. Also, I think I'll continue with my megaman RP idea. Basically you are a person with a netnavi (duh) and you will go through the events of the RP (you'll find out what those are once I make the plot) with your netnavi (like I said, not much done yet, soooo... I can't really give much detail). But there wouldn't be a bass or megaman, but I might use some villains from the battle network series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeroukoo Posted May 9, 2010 Report Share Posted May 9, 2010 Well for us to, help, you should say something about the plot. From what I'm getting at is that its going to be random. Need help on a Mass Effect RP, link is in the sig. I think that it is good rp, any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost-O Posted May 9, 2010 Report Share Posted May 9, 2010 Well for us to' date=' help, you should say something about the plot. From what I'm getting at is that its going to be random. Need help on a Mass Effect RP, link is in the sig. I think that it is good rp, any suggestions?[/quote'] Check my profile of all threads to a link to the role-play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted May 9, 2010 Report Share Posted May 9, 2010 Well for us to' date=' help, you should say something about the plot. From what I'm getting at is that its going to be random. Need help on a Mass Effect RP, link is in the sig. I think that it is good rp, any suggestions?[/quote'] Two things. 1) I said I need to make something about the plot, and when I get around to it, I will post it. 2) Your mass effect RP plot seems boring because of the fact that the plot is just a bunch of races on a ship that want to kill each other. What role does the new universe play in it? Also, it gives no hints of what will happen. From what I'm getting at is that its going to be WAY more random than anything I could've come up with. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeroukoo Posted May 9, 2010 Report Share Posted May 9, 2010 I guess your right. I have to tell whats going to happen. It was going to be a surprise but I might as well just add it. Thanks Remnants. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted May 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2010 So, yah. I know I'm somewhat breaking my own rules here, but I just wanted to judge how many people would be interested in the Psyren RP I posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted May 9, 2010 Report Share Posted May 9, 2010 I guess your right. I have to tell whats going to happen. It was going to be a surprise but I might as well just add it. Thanks Remnants. well, you don't have to say EXACTLY what's going to happen, but a hint maybe? like, an unknown threat approaches? IDK. Anyways, I will DEFINITELY need some help with my RP, but I don't feel like doing it out here. More over a PM thing. But so far, I know there will be different arcs. Things like, the dark-chips and nebula, cybeasts, and many other surprises. Also, Rinne, Psyren? I'll check it out, but nvr heard of it, and I didn't even know you posted an rp 0_0 anyways, I'll take a look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost-O Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 I wanna see a good, Yu-Gi-Oh RP that isn't surrounded by obtaining "da most powerful cards evar" or "god cards" or anything like that. Something with actual plot and competitive, real dueling. But I'm not creative enough to create one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackstone Dresden Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Try out Alpha? It's pretty much a subversion of every Yu-Gi-Oh RP trope (It's set in the far (as in 3+ CENTURIES beyond 5D's) future, you're in another galaxy, on various planets, and at least one of the villains is an AI program. Or else I've been thinking of making a Planet Series or Malefic RP (Using the movie effects for the latter and featuring new ones), so you could give me some ideas for that one and I'll see what I can do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Actually, the Alpha Centauri System, where Alpha is set, is an actual place, about 4.5 Light-Years away from our own solar system. Scientists haven't discovered planets around it yet, so I simply decided to add planets, and allow players to do the same.I should know. I created the RP.http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-200681.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 meh. I've been thinking about making a yugioh RP with a REAL plot that, like you said ghost, isn't surrounded by god cards and such. But I can't get myself to do it alone. I guess I feel that actually making it by myself isn't worth the time it would take to. I even have a plot idea (not written up though), and I'm guessing that if I made it, I would feel differently after it was posted, but for some reason I just don't feel like taking the time to make one. The fact that I have a plot idea too shows that I can be as lazy as I want to when I feel like it xD Now that I think about it, I have ideas for lots of RPs, but I'm too lazy to make them by myself. Also, the malefic thing sounds okay, but you would need a lot more (at least, for the idea I got when I read your post) to ensure a good, lasting RP. Plus, I could see some problems with an RP like that. Also, planet series? Plz don't tell me you mean saturn and mars and those angel card things that all represent planets -_- I've been thinking about trying to make a Yugioh RP where people don't just talk in a class room the whole RP. An RP where there's enough action to keep everyone satisfied and enough to make sure everyone can be involved. I can't tell you how many times I've felt pissed that an owner, on ANY RP site, has pretty much made it so that his RP ends up involving about 3 people max. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 I would be more than happy to support and join any RP that seems to have a solid plot.And that doesn't take place in a Duel Academy or Neo Domino. I'm getting tired of seeing the same settings over and over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 I would be more than happy to support and join any RP that seems to have a solid plot.And that doesn't take place in a Duel Academy or Neo Domino. I'm getting tired of seeing the same settings over and over. I know what you mean. Still... coming up with a good plot seems to be the hardest part. I'll keep thinking about it. But the setting would be important. What would be a good, new location that would be fun for everyone? I've been thinking the duel monsters' world (well... more like worlds, since I would probably separate them in certain ways), but IDK how well that would turn out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Well, have you checked out my RP?The link's a few posts back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Remnants Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Well' date=' have you checked out my RP?The link's a few posts back.[/quote'] I checked it out. Looks pretty good. Like I said, before I do something, I'm pretty lazy though -_- if I actually do it, like join an RP, then I do really well. But until that moment, I'm useless. *Thinks to himself* Man this low-self esteem is making me hungry. ...Time for a snack! *munch munch munch* Where was I? Oh yea. The RP looks really good, and I might join. I'd need to know what happened and where to join in, but I guess I'll make an app next chance I get. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted May 10, 2010 Report Share Posted May 10, 2010 Can we go to PMs, so that we don't clog this forum up any further? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grunt Issun Posted May 11, 2010 Report Share Posted May 11, 2010 Im making a spacial duels RP, you choose to be aliance, or space pirate, you duel the otherside, more info in the actual thing. still no joined people...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted May 12, 2010 Report Share Posted May 12, 2010 Why is it that half the RPs I make die before they get off the ground? I suppose being original doesn't make anyone join. If you're original, little people join, but if you use something like 'Pokemon', 'Digimon', 'Death Note', 'Final Fantasy', or something like that, THOUSANDS join. Seriously, I seriously need a seriously serious answer to this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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