Alordzynix Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 This is my Fan Fic it maybe isn't good but please look at it. NT stands for New Times it is with New Charachters you can read the Characters below there type of deck and there best played card. I won't write something about characters that didn't enterd yet. Name: AaldertType of Deck: Dark MachinesBest Card Played: Needle Burrower Name: FirozType of Deck: Kuriboh DeckBest Card Played: Kuribabylon A Secret Told. Find the Sacred Beast CardA Secret Told. Find the Sacred Beast Card Aaldert: When are you going to tell me what you are doing?Firoz: I’m almost ready so I will tell you. Do you know about the three sacred beasts?Aaldert: Of course I do everyone knows it. What is with them? Firoz: Well rumour says that Pegasus found out that the three sacred beast aren’t dangerous at all when not played together. So he released them al given as price in a different tournament. They also say that if you win a duel when your opponent played a sacred beast then the Sacred Beast will only be played by you until he loses a other match. That’s because they want to be the best.Aaldert: Let me guess you want to find the sacred beast to win the PowerCup?The PowerCup was a tournament hosted by Kaibakorp to promoted the new and improved duel disk. Aaldert and Firoz both singed up and are trying to improve there deck before it starts because all players most first beat an tester to prove you are strong anove and only 32 persons are allowed to go the next round where dueling each other.Firoz: Yes I want to find Raviel his Fiend tribute requirement could fit in my Kuriboh deck. I have a good deck but I just can’t find a good monster for the last finish.Aaldert: But you don’t know where the person is who him has and maybe he don’t even plays him but keeps him as a collectors Item. And even if you do find him you don’t know if you would win.Firoz: That’s right but I created this site Searchforraiviel.com and the person who gives me the information that will lead me to Raviel gets a super rare card. I almost tracked him down it seems like that the person who has him wants to show others his power. And I know I can win if I play my cards right. Don’t you think that to Kuriboh.A Kuriboh spirit appeared. Both Aaldert and Firoz could see him. Once when they where a kid Kuriboh flow away and flow right to Aaldert. Firoz who ran after him saw that Aaldert could see Duelspirits to and since then they where good friends.Aaldert: If you think you are that good prove it by beating me in a duel.Firoz: All right its time to duel.[align=center]LP Aaldert: 4000LP Firoz: 4000[/align]Firoz: I start by summoning my Leveller Fiend (ATK:1200/DEF:1300) to the field in defends mode! Than I play one card face-down and end my turn. (Hand: 4)Aaldert: I start by special summoning my Robotic - Dark Toy (ATK:1000/DEF:1000) in Attack mode! I can special summon him from my hand if I don’t control any monster. So I will tribute him to summon my Needle Burrower (ATK:1700/DEF:1700) In attack mode. Now attack his Leveller Fiend!.Firoz: My monster was in defends mode so I don’t take any damage.Aaldert: Wrong! When my Needle Burrower Destroys a monster as a result of a battle you take damage equal to the level of your monster x 500Firoz: But that means that I lose 1500 LPs[align=center]LP Aaldert: 4000LP Firoz: 2500[/align]Aaldert: I end my turn with a face-down. (Hand: 3)Firoz: Well than I draw. Now I can activated the effect of my Leveller Fiend once in a duel when he was destroyed I can special summon him back to my field in defends mode. If It was special summoned by this effect he is threaded as a level five monster. Next I play my 5 star Twilight so by sacrificing one level 5 monster ,like my Leveller Fiend, allowes me to special summon the Five Kuriboh Brothers so meat my Kuriboh, Kuribu, Kuriba, Kuribe and Kuribi. (5x ATK:300/DEF:300). Than I play my Fiend Power Load. It increases the attack points of all my Fiend-type monsters by 200 for each Fiend-Type monster on my field. I got 5 monsters and they are all fiend so all my monsters gains a attack boast of 1000 points (5x ATK:1300/DEF:200) Than I will remove my Five Kuriboh monsters from play to special summon my Kuribabylon (ATK:?/DEF:200) his attack points are eqaule to the combined attack of my Kuribohs they all had a attack of 1300 that multiplied with 5 creates 6500 attack points for my Kuribabylon. Than my Fiend Power Load will increase my monsters attack with another 200 points (ATK:6700:200). Than I will activated my Face-down card: Invincible Strike When my monster attacks it is uneffected by any magic or trap card that only effects him on my field. So I hope for you that that face-down isn't magic cylinder or mirror force because then it won't work. Go Kuribabylon attack his Needle Burrower .Aaldert: Not so fast I activated my Zero Gravity now all monsters switch mode. Firoz: No way but my monster only has 200 defends points. Well all I can do is end my turn. (Hand: 3)Aaldert: Its was a good duel but I’m going to end it. So I witch my Needle Burrower back to attack mode. Now Needle Burrower attack his Kuribabylon. Now for his effect you take damage equal to the level of your monster x 500. Kuribabylon had 5 stars… Firoz: … so I lose 2500 LP all what I had left.[align=center]LP Aaldert: 4000LP Firoz: 0[/align]Aaldert: It was a close match. Next time you will be sure to beat me. expectedly if you do find that Raviel CardFiroz: Yeah, I will take a look at my site. Maybe some one found good information.-Firoz: No way some here says that he saw Raviel and it is only 5 streets away if we run we can make it! Will Firoz find the Duelist who has Raviel?And if he will will he beat him?Next Episode: Hunting Down Raviel! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Champster Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Nice start for your Fan-Fic, Keep it up.But, the duel was kinda short.Anyways, can't wait to see...a you-know-who. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Yea alittle too short but pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 The real long duels will be in the tournament Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted December 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 Come on peole more comment. it isn't that bad is it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StalionLastBlade Posted December 10, 2007 Report Share Posted December 10, 2007 nice not bad, but you should make the cards and efects for the kuribo brothers, but is still nice,check my fics(they are on my sing) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted December 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2007 I will make them you can see them in the next episode. The next episode will be around either tomorow or the day after that. I can't be on the computer much I just "borrowed" this laptop from down stairs with out telling my parrents but the next episode is on my other computer so you just need to wait if you want to read it. Oh and Champion #1 I think that I need the (you know what) before I can write the third episode Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Champster Posted December 18, 2007 Report Share Posted December 18, 2007 Alright, i got some spare time. I'll get to work and PM you The-you-know-what. *Edits* When will you post the Next Chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zane trusedale Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 Nice job.if you'd like some help just ask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted December 19, 2007 Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 It's nice, but it is indeed short.They have both played their best cards in 3 turns, that is too quick you see.The duel should build into a climax.It was ok though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted December 19, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2007 They didn't they have better cards. If you read what I sayed in there profile: Best Card Played. I don't want to talk about there best cards before I used them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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