The School For The Gifted Fighters [Lock Please]

[LuffyLaxer]

This Rp is The First One I'm making, So I would like some any or all feedback and criticisms.

 

Basic Plot: The year, 2010. A multimillionaire Fighter in the Elemental Ring, Quickus Cambodia, retires from professional fighting with a record of 300-0-0. Now With his free time, he opens a school to teach students who have powers, and who want to fight in this school on the gigantic Island, Elemental's Circle. With this, He can train future fighters to become champions.

 

Rules:

1. All Of YCM Rules Apply. This Is Important!!!
   
2. No GodModding. The Only One Who Does That Is Me.
   
3. Please Only Pick One Ability. And It has to be A bit above Basic.
   
4. If you can't continue this RP, Pm me and let me know so i can expell your character.
   
5. Have Fun!!!
   

 

App:

Name:

Age:

Gender(hey some names are unisexual. sometimes you can't tell):

Appearance:(If No Picture, Describe Fully.)

Personality: (required more than 2 sentences)

History: (requires 4 or more sentences)

Powers: (remember on a just a little more than a basic grasp of it)

RP Sample: (From Other RP's) just want to make sure you know what your doing.

 

My App:

Name:Tiberius Badanov

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Personality: He is a kind and loving person, who tries to be friends with everybody. Tiberius is also very intelligent and a good listener. When he gets in the ring, he is honorable, patient, and Dedicated person.

History: Tiberius Badanov is a poor kid growing up in a orphanage in Brooklyn. Ever since he was a kid he wanted to grow up and become a great fighter like Quickus had. Only knows Nan Chaun fighting style, But has read up on the other martial arts. When he was 12 years old he found out he could control fire, but only through his palm. Up to now, he can use fire in his both of his hands. He studied really hard when he found out Quickus opened a school. He aced the placement test and earned a full scholarship to Elemental's Circle. With just a deck of yugi-oh cards, a blue backpack, a blue baseball cap, the clothes on his back, and Bruce Lee-like shoes, He left the orphanage to the plane to take him to his destiny.

Powers: Fire but can only shoot them out of hands.

 

People in RP

Tiberius Badanov-LuffyLaxer

Getsurai-Kio-Kun

Joseph Cruz-Lord JZ of the Enigma

Merin Ataska-Encapturer

Shadow Darkhood-Shadowknight

Jarred Cyan-Darklightning

Ryeden-Ryeden_Ogata

Kristan Clement-magnet_soldier

Ryu Sawada-jcbballer

[Yosuke-kun]

Name: Getsurai

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Personality: Not too reliable, and clumsy, but strong when it comes to protecting his friends.

History: He was made fun of his whole life, and doesn't have many friends but he loves the ones he does have with his life. He joined the academy to try to change himself, but nothing changed yet. He's a strong fighter when he wants to be, but ultimatly he was always too kind hearted to hurt living things.

Powers: Uses light and holy moves in flame fist forms.

RP Sample:

Hisagi drew his sword as well. "Go ahead. Lets see if the 3 of you can keep up!" he said. Urahara stood. "Like I said, I'm not making another Hogyoku just so that the Soul Society can do the same thing that bastard Aizen did. But if I have a choice, then..." he pulled out his swod too " scream, Benihime!!" he swung his sword across the ground and sent a red shockwave at Maria. Hisagi shunpoed in front of Fuerte, and slammed his elbow into his chest.

 

"Damn, they're pretty good." Hisagi said standing. "But they missed something." he said pointing at the ground beneath Maria and Fuerte. There were about 5 knives at the ground smoking. "Ah, nice touch." said Urahara. No sooner than he finished, the knives exploded. Hisagi ran at them, jumped, and aimed his two fingers at them and chanted "Ye lord! Mask of flesh and bone, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name Man! Truth and temperence! Upon this sinless wall of dreams unleash but slightly the wrath of your claws! Hado number 33! Sokatsui!!" a bluish purple fire was shot at the group. Hisagi then followed up his attack by throwing 3 more bomb knives at them. "I'm not called Captain for nothing!!" he said as he landed.

[LuffyLaxer]

I have a question. now in my post above i said it needs to be just above basic. so i need you to limit the power to something just above basic. like mine for example.

 

Accepted once you change your power. Good Beginning.

[LuffyLaxer]

bump anyone else? i need at least 8 people to start not including me.

[Lord JZ of the Enigma]

The Dark lord Heeds your call, besides you invited me

 

Name:Joseph Cruz

Age:18

Gender:Male

Appearance:

Personality:Rather Aloof, he doesn't show care for most things, but is level headed when fighting, when facing a powerful opponent he can go into a berserker form due to his repressed anger

History: born to a rather wealthy family he has always had incredible coaches in anything he did, he is considered a prodigy by most people and despite never really caring what people thought of him he did enjoy crushing his opponents in the most humiliating fashion possible, if anything he is more feared that respected when he learned to control the Enigma energy, or the unknown substance that he fires, when he took the test he found that only one person equaled his score, thus giving him a true reason for entering.This brought him closer to his goal of finding an opponent to match him

Powers:Can shoot a powerful beam he refers to as the "Enigma Beam" from his palms, but the blast exhausts him incredibly

RP Sample:Zensaki feels uneasy, he could tell that this next battle would be difficult for him, and he worried he may not make it without his mask. he looked out the window and felt whose pressure it was, it was Shoren....he remembered long ago he was quite the wild one, and Rei feared him everytime he was near. Zensaki was worried of one thing, if anything had happened to Rei during the 100 years he was gone, it accidentally caused his Reishi to flare, with that he ran off, one was to see the others, and also to avert their attention away from the main group.

[LuffyLaxer]

accepted cool

[LuffyLaxer]

bump please people join

[Yosuke-kun]

I meant he uses them as flame fists, sorry I wasn't clear. I'll ask others to join.

[LuffyLaxer]

cool and thanx

anyone else?

i need 7 more.

[encapturer]

Name: Merin Ataska

 

Age: 17

 

Gender: Female

 

Appearance:

[spoiler= Picture from one year ago]

 

 

She has recently taken to wearing jeans and boots; its much more practical that shorts and sandals if you get attacked. She currently looks much the same as she did a year ago, though a bit taller and toned from her recent spurt of training and exercise.

 

Personality: In a crowd of people, one would usually find Merin off to the side, away from the commotion. She is very quiet and withdrawn, and it seems like she is always deep in thought. She is a worrywart and naturally distrustful. Despite all of that, she treasures friendships, and those who earn her trust have a dedicated ally on their side.

 

History: She comes from a family known for their fighting skill, even though none of them have powers. Merin had wanted to live life away from the ring, even though her family disapproved of her choice. They were satisfied, though, when she exhibited the ability to heal others at the cost of some of her health, feeling that Merin's calling in life is to save lives. Her life changed forever, one evening, when she was assaulted by a street thug. While the thug was trying to restrain Merin, she would not give up easily, and unconciously activated another facet of her power. The bruises inflicted upon her vanished, and the thug fell to the ground, almost dead. Since then, she brushed up on her self defense, so she can protect herself and her friends. Seeing her resolve, her family enrolled her into Elemental's Circle. Even if her family misinterpreted her intentions, Merin was grateful since she could better her fighting technique, and learn more about her power.

 

Powers: Merin can heal others she touches at the cost of making her exhausted. She can also drain life from those she touches, rejuvenating her. So far, though, she can only drain the life from small living things consistently. Her family and friends call her ability "Healing Hands", or more recently "Vampire". She prefers to call it "Life manipulation", a plain name, but descriptive of what she feels her true power is.

 

RP Sample:

Evan squeezed his way into the lobby of the arena. He did not expect it to be this crowded at all. If he recalled correctly, the arena was a dome, with various facilities along the outer area, and the main arena in the center. He had only been here once before, so he recounted his last trip here, and made his way to the main trading hall.

 

Along the way, Evan passed some concession stands, which reminded him that he did not have lunch today. He stood in front of the stands, examining each menu item, and watching the food bought by others. Eventually, he decided that a hot dog combo would give him the most bang for his buck after about 3 minutes of deliberation. With his meal in hand, he continued towards the trading hall.

[Magnet Soldier]

I'll join.

 

Name:Kristan clement

Age:16

Gender:male

Appearance:[spoiler=normal]

[spoiler=demon controlled]

 

Personality:Dark and usually alone. can be friendly if you get on his good side, but this is very rare. He also is very punctual(always on time and well equiped for lessons) and hates it when people are tardy and late.

History: Was put in an orphanage at the age of 2. He killed his parents, has no idea it was him and has nightmares about it regularlly, leading to a bad case of Insomnia. He was sent to this school as the orphanage didn't want him because his powers were scaring the other kids. He Has control over only one of the different versions of his power but sometimes a demon which posseses him comes out and uses all of the powers. His main goal is to master the demon and control it. When the demon takes over he gains a dark armor and destroys every thing as that is the demons goal.

Powers:power over Oblivion, once he's mastered it. He Killed his parents with this power as said in bio/history. At the moment can create an inpenetrable barrier of darkness but it can only last for 10 moinutes and for every barrier that time is halved. As he progresses he learns how to shoot beams of darkness out of his hands, how to create weapons out of darkness, how to become invisible in shadows(in own shadow he is transparent but you can still see the shadow) and his signiture move Which is to engulf the area that he is in in a dome of darkness that gives of a strange light. In this ethereal darkness he can turn totally invisible, talk to you in your mind and teleport, making you go insane. none of the powers after the barrier are available at the moment but he learns them.

RP Sample:

"thanks for the money, But now you die!" Kris walked out of the room, the money for the last mission in his pocket. Guards were running at him but they just dropped dead around him, their round glowing souls vanishing in the air. "God i love this job." He said. He went outside to notice smoke in the distance. He melted the light around him to teleport there. He saw a Teenage girl just standing there, next to the meteor. She was staring at a dome of ice withen which, there was a fight going on. Kris presumed it was the boy who started it as he used ice and the other girl didn't, meaning he built the dome. "What the hell is going on here!!?? Surely you cant be them aswell?" he said. Then he thought "Actually this could be good." The boy looked like he could be a challange, but the girls looked easier. Then he charged at the girl from the meteor pulling out his sword while gathering dark and light in the blade.

[LuffyLaxer]

encapturer your in.

 

magnet soldier, your ability is overpowered. turned in down, then you in.

[Magnet Soldier]

What! All he can do at the moment is create a barrier of darkness!

After he masters his power he can do all those things. Not at the moment.

[ShadowKnight27]

Name: Shadow Darkhood

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Appearance:

Personality: Shadow is a cold, calculating person; adding the fact he enjoys being alone. He usually looks down on others, though this rarely noticeable as he keeps it to himself most of the time. He is actually quite more friendly than everyone expects him to be...

History: His parents were killed when he was 10 years old, but he managed to take care of himself just fine. He found out he was different than everyone else, having mysterious teal stripes going across his left arm and spreading in the palm of his hand to later end exactly in the first set of phalanges in his fingers.

Shadow learned quite fast his arm was something else, being able to cast minor magic with it. He was bullied for that reason, being often called a freak, this later making him develop the desire to being alone. This is why he trained at hand-to-hand combat and with blades of sorts, becoming quite skilled after a short period of time.

Seeing his potential, they brought him to Elemental's Circle...

Powers: Apart from having exceptional hand-to-hand combat and swordsmanship skills, Shadow can also cast spells and magically manipulate his Dual Saber with his left hand. He only knows how to cast Shifta, a strength-boosting spell, and flipping his sword several times with magic before falling to the ground.

RP Sample:

Shadow just stood there, his hand lifted to grab the horizontally-placed Dual Saber. A masterpiece made by the hardest of metal alloys, the cylindric thin tube was made especially for aerodynamic and swift movements, reserved only for a few elite swordsmen. Two isosceles triangle shaped metal pieces were carefully attached to each end of the metal pole, their edges being crafted with expertise, making the deadly plasma blades glow in a mystical blue color.

Shadow manipulated his weapon, adopting a perfect battle position just before running towards his target, the only glowing things contrasting the everlasting darkness of the ruins being his crimson red visor and the blue trail left by the blades.

Rushing towards his only enemy, Shadow slashed through his victim's chest with the upper blade with a quick diagonal movement, blood flying across the air. This wasn't enough to pierce his ribcage and armor, but taking a step forward made the laceration go deeper and more painful. Almost immediately, he raised his right arm forcefully while taking another step, flipping his double-bladed weapon vertically to cut with the lower blade and making the other go just above his shoulder... Illuminating the cold expression drawn on his face. The victim backed in pace just as Shadow impulsed upward just as the cut was done, quickly rotating his Dual Saber on his top while airborne.

The room appeared to flash in blue as the plasma blades illuminated every corner in intervals. He stopped right when gravity pulled him down, his double-bladed weapon pointing downward.

"You end now." Shadow said, his voice echoing through the whole room.

He stabbed the Dual Saber in his enemy's chest, killing him immediately after impact. Shadow landed with a thud and got his blood-bathed blade just before the enemy collapsed like a doll...

 

 

I think I actually overdid the RP Example part... Hehe...

 

EDIT: I just noticed "From other RP's", I hope it's just fine if I written it from my mind. After all, it's an example, right?

[Dark Lightning]

Name: Jarred Cyan

Age: 17

Gender(hey some names are unisexual. sometimes you can't tell): Male

Appearance: http://media.photobucket.com/image/psychic+anime+guy/Jasuchin/RP%20Characters/Guys/Cyan.jpg?o=6

Personality: A Troublemaker. He is usually a goof off but sometimes at random moments will become extremely deep and serious.

History: Jarred grew up with no parents to teach him right from wrong, because of that he spends his time being chased by the cops. He has a few issues with people mentioning why exactly he is that way. He usually just says that he isn't that way because he doesn't have parents, but that the other people are that way because they do have parents. Jarred becomes emotional when people call him 'Cyan' his last name. Jarred lost one of his eyes when he was young, because he doesn't talk about it, no one really knows how. He has a deep fear of Trust for some strange reason

Powers: Manipulation of Electricity; Lightning Control

RP Sample: (From Other RP's) just want to make sure you know what your doing.

 

Jarred ran and, feeling that he was running like the wind, felt pretty good about it. He turned his head as he ran, to get a quick glimpse of the cop chasing after him.

"Cyan!" he yelled after him.

"Troublesome..." he muttered to himself. He continued to run but felt his legs getting heavy.

He quickly looked at the sky, careful not to trip as he ran. The sky was dark; it was early in the morning, he had hoped for a small storm, so that he would be able to disappear with the lightning bolts near by.

"A cloud...Possibly my only solution..." he muttered once more.

But I have to do it quick... He took a quick glance behind him, the cop still on his trail If not...I won't get another chance...

Almost immediately he stopped his rush, the dirt under his feet lifting from his sudden brake.

Jarred put a smirk on his face as he felt a few water droplets.

Suddenly came down a small lightning bolt that seemed to strike him.

The lightning bolt disappeared and Jarred along with it.

The cop put on a irritated face

"Not again..." he sighed

[~Final_Ryeden~]

Name:Ryeden

Age:23

Gender(hey some names are unisexual. sometimes you can't tell):Male

Appearance:(If No Picture, Describe Fully.)Ryeden has red hair and red eyes, he is kinda muscluar and loves women, he will do anything you impress a women

Personality: (required more than 2 sentences)Ryeden is nice to most people, but to the people he can't stand, he curses at them alot and is very nasty, but overall he's nice to everyone he knows and they all love him too

History: (requires 4 or more sentences)Ryeden was just a baby when he got his special power, he used to not be able to control it and wreck his clothes, then his poor mother got sick of it and sent him away until he could control the power. He finally came back 3 years later, stronger than ever and his mother was so happy, she tried wonderful tears.............

Powers: (remember on a just a little more than a basic grasp of it)He can make metal spikes come out of his body, as a shield and weapon

RP Sample: (From Other RP's) just want to make sure you know what your doing.

Trust me i know what i'm doing, i actually have no samples either because my last rp that had all my best samples, got locked by deja cru (I HATE HIM SO MUCH!) so yeah

Trust me i know what i'm

[Magnet Soldier]

Hey whats your name, luffy laxer. Why's mine not accepted and don't say he's over powered as he can only create a barrier at the moment.

[encapturer]

I wonder where LuffyLaxer is.... I've been itching to start.

 

If it were me, magnet soldier, the only thing about your starting power is that your barrier happens to be impenetrable (to everything? Certain things?). Of course, it would help if LuffyLaxer came in and said so himself what he thinks needs to be fixed.

 

Ryeden, you can do a search in the RP thread for one of your character's names, and use that to get a post you want to use. I did the same to get mine (which came from a thread a few months back). If you want, you can click your profile, and search for your threads, if you created a few RPs yourself.

[ShadowKnight27]

I wonder if making up the RP Example is right... Oh, well...

[LuffyLaxer]

Hi guys sorry i was away for mandatory reasons. i had to stay with my father who has no internet.

 

Anyway

magnet soldier your barrier is overpowered. i want people to be able to build towards that power. your accepted, just weaken your barrier.

 

Shadowknight: you're in. nice post by the way.

Dark lightning: you're in just change your power a bit. you have to say a bit above average. So for example if you want to make lighting come out of you hand that's fine.

Ryeden: you're in but tone the power down. maybe make spikes come out his forearms for right now. remember just a bit above beginner.

[Dark Lightning]

So shall we start when everyone fixes their app?

[LuffyLaxer]

well yes

and when we get one more person.

I wanted to start with ten but i guess we could add more transfer students later in the RP.

[Magnet Soldier]

Ok i'll turn down the barrier so that he can hold one barrier up for 10 mins and every other barrier halfs the remaining time.

[LuffyLaxer]

ok that sounds good.

personally i'd say 3 or 4 mins but that's me.

now we need one more person to start.

Right now i'm currently writing the beginning.

[Azure Flame Kite]

Can I join? here's my App:

 

Name: Ryu Sawada

 

Age: 15

 

Gender: Male

 

Appearance: 6'0" African-american, he always wears his favorite outfit: Black jeans, black Jordans, black and red No Fear short-sleeve, black Quicksilver hoodie, white 2008 Fox Racing cap and giant earphones that he usually wears around his neck. (Need more description, then tell me.)

 

Personality: When it comes to fighting and sports, Ryu always goes his hardest. Outside of the ring, he can come across as slightly stoic, uncaring and sarcastic, but he does try to be friendly most of the time.

History: Ryu Sawada, originally James Dietz, grew up in a middle-class family in Los Angeles. Since the age of 8 (The time when he had first seen Quickus fight)he had become interested in fighting. Throughout the years, he had become very proficient in several martial arts, he created his own style based on his instincts. He first discovered his powers at the age of 13 when he was getting mugged by a few thugs while walking through the wrong side of town. His as he was fighting them off, and his determination reached its peak, his powers manifested themselves as metal gloves covered in flames. He defeated them easily after that, and from that day forth, he vowed to master the power that was given to him and defend everyone he held close. 2 years later, when he heard that his idol, Quickus, was opening Elemental's Circle, he jumped at the chance to go. Scoring 4th on the placement exam, he left with nothing but his favorite clothes, his laptop, his iPod, his Nintendo DS and a half-suitcase full of manga and movies, determined to get stronger.

 

Powers: Ryu can enter a state that he calls Hyper Will Mode. In this state he can control the gloves he possesses (Which he dubbed X-gloves), which are covered in what he calls his "Determination flame" which, as the name implies is fueled by his determination and will to fight; the flames come in two different categories: Soft flame, which is used for hovering, and Hard flame, which is used for acceleration and fire attacks. He can use the flame in many ways, including propelling himself through the air and blasting fire.

 

RP sample:

 

“Gomu Gomu no…” Luffy reared back his fist a mile behind him, surprising the shinigami greatly. “What the hell?!” Soi Fon exclaimed. “Did he just stretch his arm?”

“Pistol!” the pirate’s arm shot forward and planted itself into Omaeda’s stomach, making him fall back, unconscious. “One shot?” Luffy said to himself, surprised. “These guys aren’t that strong.” That set SoiFon off, nobody called her weak. Not even Yoruichi-sama. Disappearing from view with shunpo, she kicked the boy in the stomach as hard as she could; He didn’t even try to dodge, and his stomach just… stretched, for lack of a better word, around her foot. “What the…?” Soifon reappeared again, back where she was before. “Physical attacks won’t work on me,” Luffy said, beaming. “You see, I ate the Gomu-Gomu no mi!” “The Gomu-Gomu what?” Soifon questioned. Luffy ignored her confusion and continued, “And now I’m a rubber man!” Luffy hooked his index finger around his cheek and pulled, stretching his cheek about a good foot-and-a-half; that thoroughly freaked everyone out, only Kurotsuchi-taichou had been able to come close to anything remotely like that. “Now it’s my turn,” Luffy’s face suddenly turned serious. “If it’s a battle of speed, then I’m game.” He crouched down with his hands on his knees, soon oval-shapes began forming on the bottom of his legs and his skin started to glow. The shapes began moving up his body and disappeared, by this time his whole body was glowing red and was steaming. “What in the world is he doing?” Soi Fon questioned, completely confused and in shock of this ryoka’s abilities. Luffy touched his fist to the ground, his black hair shadowing his eyes. “Gear… Second.”

 

Yeah. He's pretty much Tsuna from KHR without the equipment. hehehe. *laughs sheepishly as I rub the back of my head* My character, I mean