~Espada_Tousen~ Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 [spoiler=Chapter One]Luther looked through the newly born frost on the window. He saw the children prancing around outside, if only they knew about what was about to happen. Tera had told him that if he told a soul, he would share the same fate as the rest of Xartharia and he did not want that. The war had been going on for a few years now, all because of his "Experiment". This so called "Experiment" would eventually involve the destruction of mankind, but why would he care, he has nothing left to live for. The clock strikes One, he could not help, but feel anxious for once again he would have to face the destruction of another town, the massacre of thousands of innocent people, and the reprocussions that would follow. But these were his enemies, he had to do it not for his own sake, but the sake of the rest of his own clan, which had fallen pray to the wrath of Tyroidia. He looks over to Calvin a young man with an open expression, this would be his first taste, the black car can rumbling ahead out of the city and onward to safety. T-Minus Seven minutes, his watch read, he had not chosen this life, but was "Voted" into it by the rest of his clan. Yes, after the death of his immeadiate family, it became clear that he could not lead the clan at such a young age, finally after a few years he was getting better at leading his people, surviving off the land, but that is of course before the Tyroidia came back to him. It seemed like his experiment, had done more than the original plan, the past works of his ancesestors had made one grave mistake. That mistake is what Luther was living with, no matter what that was were way things were, no hope for change. T- Minus 3 Minutes, Calvin said looking at him from across seat, Luther looked down at his silk suit that the people of Xartharia had made for him. He had been an Guardian Angel, a savior, to them, but what fools they were, hadn't they heard. This was not anything new, this was the life his destiny...., his experiment had chose for him. Go into every city, be a hero, steal the cities Rosetennial Heirloom, escape the city, and destroy it. But for some reason it was different this time, he looked at his watch just one minute left, he looked down at the City's heirloom, it was a crystalline object, vastly different from much of the other cities. 10 Seconds remained, Calvin knodded his head, 5 seconds, the sky became dark with the "Wujet Clouds" he had designed, One second, Luther closed his eyes and held his breath. "Its just routine" he heard himself say opening his eyes once more.... Comments please?anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Espada_Tousen~ Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 anyone wanna post anything? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Espada_Gin~ Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 that is really good and i mean really good i know considering how many books i have read but wow I can't wait to find out what the experiment is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Espada_Tousen~ Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 It seems you are the only person that likes it, THANKS THOUGH! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Espada_Tousen~ Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 anyone else?!?!?!??!?!?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Hmm... I see good imagery... but I saw some tell... I like the idea, but needs a bit of dialogue. (probably gonna be added later, but just saying) Overall, it's good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Espada_Tousen~ Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Thank You Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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