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[spoiler=Prologue]

Andrew Kozac, father of Sean Kozac, was a robotics scientist at the Angel Grove Maximum Security Science Labs(AGMSSL). He was working on two different projects, alternating each day:

 

1. Project Z.A.M.U.R.O.N.- The making of special humanoid robots for the use of U.S military forces to give them advantages in future wars.

2. Project A.R.M.I.T.R.O.N.- A series of robotic transformation wrist devices used to create super soldiers for more advantages in wars.

 

Unfortunately, Project Z.A.M.U.R.O.N. went ammuck(I think that's how it's spelled). When Andrew Kozac began to place intelligence chips in the robots' mechanical brains to activate them, a lightning bolt struck at the main computer grid, creating a virus that entered the robots' intel. chips, which caused the robots to attack Kozac's lab. During the destruction of his lab, he had only finished 5 wrist devices for Project A.R.M.I.T.R.O.N. He took them and escaped the lab with his life.

 

Kozac's first robot, Zamuron, and his strongest at best, stole some of Kozac's robot-creating technology in the middle of the destruction to use for his own evil purposes. He eventually created an evil lair made out of the entire lab wreckage.

 

Andrew eventually went back to his mansion, very hurt as well. His son, Sean, found him on the floor. He put him on his recliner and Sean saw the 5 wrist devices for the, now complete, Project A.R.M.I.T.R.O.N., in 5 different colors, red, yellow, blue, pink, and black. Andrew told Sean to take him to his lab in the mansion basement.

 

When Andrew was fully healed, he did some testing on the 5 devices, and after an hour, he realized the devices were very unstable and were not ready to use. The testings also showed that the only stabilizing compound that can be used without destroying the devices, is plutonium. Of course he had plutonium. Once he added the plutonium to all 5 devices and did a retesting. After another hour, the testings showed the devices were now stable.

 

Afterwards, he searched online for the 4 warriors that would work with the yellow, blue, pink and black devices.

 

He noticed a woman who is a master of martial arts and a master of solving mysteries. Her name was Emily Sapotsy. He believed that she would have the yellow device. Andrew then found a stuntman named Theodore Zarroni. Andrew thought the blue device would work with him. He then found a woman with the same interests in robotics as he was. It said her name was Samantha Shay. Andrew thought to let her have the pink device. Then suddenly, a man that uses spy technology came to Andrew's mind. It said his name was Johnathan Carros. Since the black device was left, he would apply it to him. And finally, Andrew himself will use the red device.

He later invited the 4 to his mansion. Andrew's butler, William, sometimes called Will, escorted the 4 to Andrew's office. He asked them to join his miniature group of super soldiers to help fight an evil that he accidently created. They all agreed and followed Andrew to his underground lab.

 

He then realized there was a phrase that was easier to remember than "super soldiers". He thought of the term, "Power Rangers" and it worked just fine.

 

"Okay before we get started, you need to know that these devices will connect your DNA to see if it will match and link to your DNA," Andrew explained. While the 4 were following Andrew, Sean secretly followed them. When they made it to the lab, the 4 were astonished. "I know, right?" asked Andrew. John was the most amazed. "Wow! ConstructoBots, halographic projectors, a battle simulation chamber, and a Weapon Testing Facility," John said. "You got some of the best technology Mr., uh...?" "Oh, it's Kozac. Andrew Kozac." "Wait, the Andrew Kozac?" asked Samantha. "The Andrew Kozac who makes the best robotic technology in Angel Grove?" "That's me, or used to be," said Andrew. "What do you mean?" asked Samantha.

 

Andrew then explained what he did and what caused him to invite the 4 to his mansion. After hearing the story, Sean slipped on the stairwell, while being sneeky, and fell in exposure of everyone.

 

When Andrew saw Sean, he said, "Sean?" "Uh, who is that?" asked Theodore. "This is my son, Sean Anthony Kozac," Andrew said while picking up Sean. "What are you doing here?" "Since you never let me in on any of your experiments, I decided to figure out myself," said Sean. "The reason why I don't tell about my experiments because (1) You wouldn't understand, (2) You're too curious about anything I do and (3) Some of these things are just too dangerous for you to help with," explained Andrew.

 

Meanwhile........

 

Back at the ruined lab, Zamuron was thinking really hard. "Pitiful humans. They believe that we can be stopped? We'll see about that. Exotor, destroy this city. And bring the Zamur Strikers as well." "Yes, Master," said Exotor.

 

[spoiler=[b]Episode 1: Unleash Armitron! Part 1[/b]]

"Fine!," yelled Sean. "If that's how you feel, dad, then this proves one thing and one thing only. You're never gonna trust me!" Sean turned around and walked out on Andrew. "Sean," Andrew said. Andrew decided to ignore it and finish it later.

 

"It's time to have the powers of Armitron be to use," Andrew said. "Emily, would you step forward please?" Emily came forward. "You will hold the yellow device." When the device was placed on Emily's wrist, a yellow glow covered her body for a few seconds. Then an electronic voice said, "DNA Link Complete!""What happened?" asked Emily. "The data of Armitron Soldier Yellow has been linked to your DNA. Now, and this is for all of you, when you want to transform, clench your fists, spread your arms straight forward, and have your first 2 fingers have contact with the top of the device while saying 'A.R.M.I.T.R.O.N. Activate!'. The device, or should i say 'cyber morphers', will do the rest, turning you into the Power Rangers Armitron!""Power Rangers...?" asked Theodore. "...Armitron?" finished Samantha. "Exactly," said Andrew.

 

"Theodore, would you step forward?" asked Andrew. Theodore stepped forward. "The blue morpher works for you." Just like Emily, the morpher made a glow around Theodore's body, but instead, a blue glow appeared. "DNA Link Complete!" said the electronic voice again.

 

"Samantha, it's your turn." Samantha stepped forward. "Take the pink morpher. I believe it best suits you." A pink glow then covered her body. "DNA Link Complete!"

 

"John?" "I know," said John, and stepped forward. "Since the black morpher is left, you will use it." Finally, a black glow covered John's body. "DNA Link Complete!"

 

"Wait a minute," said Samantha. "What about the red morpher?" "Oh, yes. I will use the red morpher," said Andrew. The 4 began to chuckle. "We're sorry," Emily said while chuckling. "You? Why would you be the red ranger? I mean come on!" The 4 began to burst out laughing. "You're lucky the link to your DNA is permanent," Andrew said. The 4 began to calm down their laughs and listen to Andrew. "Or I would have taken back the morphers and let an evil robot take over the world!" "We said we were sorry."

 

Meanwhile...

 

Exotor began his rampage in Downtown Angel Grove. Exotor then laughed very evil-like. "Run humans!" yelled Exotor. "Run away from the awesome might of Exotor!"

 

Back at the mansion, an earthquake began to happen. "What's going on?" asked Theodore. "It's an earthquake!" answered Andrew. "But where is it coming from?" Andrew then heard the alarm. He saw Exotor on the screen. "It's Exotor!" said Andrew. The earthquake then just stopped.

 

"Exo-Who?" asked Emily. "Exotor," said Andrew. "He was one of my best robots. My guess is that he is second-in-command of Zamuron. We have to stop him!" "Right!" said all 4. They all ran to the Jeep outside. Andrew then accidently put down the red morpher.

 

"I will destroy this city if it's the last thing I do!" yelled Exotor. "Guess again, Metal Head!" yelled out Johnathan.

 

The 5 made it to Downtown Angel Grove in time. Andrew then realized he forgot that he accidently put down the red morpher, but he thinks he can fight without it. Emily, Theo, Sam, and John prepared themselves for the worst.

 

"You're all fools!" yelled Exotor. "Zamur Strikers! Attack!" And so they did.

 

The Zamur Strikers had eventually overpowered the 4, with Andrew watching them, of course. "Have you forgotten who you are?" asked Andrew. "You're Power Rangers. Act like one!" The 4 agreed. They made the stance said, "A.R.M.I.T.R.O.N., Activate!" With that said, the four transformed.

 

Emily-"Through the shining speed of lightning, Armitron Yellow Ranger!"

 

Theo-"From currents of oceans to tides of water, Armitron Blue Ranger!"

 

Sam-"From high rises of the wind, Armitron Pink Ranger!"

 

John-"Moving through shadows and darkness, Armitron Black Ranger!"

 

All-"We protect the earth from every evil around us. We are Power Rangers Armitron!"

 

"GET THEM!!!" shouted Exotor. The Zamur Strikers came at them once again. The rangers then summoned their weapons.

 

All-"Cyber Blaster!"

 

The rangers began to jump, roll, duck, and dodge the Zamur Strikers' attacks while shooting their blasters at them.

 

"Half of them are down, so use your main weapons!" shouted Andrew.

 

All-"Right."

 

Emily-"Cyber Belt: Lightning Staff!"

 

Theo-"Cyber Belt: Water Lance!"

 

Sam-"Cyber Belt: Bow of Wind!"

 

John-"Cyber Belt: Shadow Axe!"

 

The very weapons eventually destroyed the rest of the Zamur Strikers. "Annoying humans," said Exotor, annoyed. "Do I have to do everything?!" Exotor eventually jumped into action and defeated the rangers.

 

Back at the mansion, Sean was still annoyed about his father not trusting him, so he decided to check and see how everyone else is doing. He checked the monitor in the lab and saw the guys, including his dad, were on the ground, seriously hurt, and Exotor was coming closer to them. "I've got to do something," said Sean. He looked around and suddenly noticed the red morpher. He picked it up and thought, "This is the only way I can help them, I guess." He decided that he would be the fifth ranger. He held the morpher in his hand and headed to Downtown Angel Grove.

 

The rangers were demorphed and injured, same as Andrew. "You are fools!" yelled Exotor. "You will never defeat Master Zamuron! Prepare to be destroyed! HAHAHAHAHAAA!"

 

To be Continued...

 

[spoiler=[b]Episode 2: Unleash Armitron! Part 2[/b]]

"Your end is here!" said Exotor.

 

"I don't think so!" yelled Sean, walking towards Exotor.

 

"What?!" shouted Exotor, turning around towards Sean.

 

Andrew looked at Sean and yelled, "Sean! Get out of here! It's too dangerous!"

 

"No dad," said Sean. "It's time I make my own decisions, and not have you keep me away from things I can handle!"

 

Andrew sighs, while still in pain, and said, "You're right. Go get him! Show him what you can do."

 

"Do not encourage this weakling!" shouted Exotor.

 

"I'll show you who's the weakling!" yelled Sean. Sean then placed the morpher on his wrist. A red glow, bigger than the other 4, covered his body. "DNA Link Complete" said a deeper electronic voice. "A.R.M.I.T.R.O.N., Activate!" As said, flames engulfed his body, beginning the transformation.

 

When complete, the appearance was blinding! He had a dragon emblem on his chest, armor plates on his shoulders. A fire was his visor, and his helmet was averagely round.

 

"Wow!" said Emily.

 

"Amazing!" said John.

 

"Incredible!" said Sam. "His technology is so advanced!"

 

Sean-"From embers to the fiercest of fires, Armitron Red Ranger!"

 

"Great," said Exotor, annoyingly. "Another fool who stands in my way? You leave me with no choice, human. Zamuron Sword and Shield!" With that said, Exotor digitized a small metal sword and shield with a lion's eye on the front.

 

Exotor ran towards Sean. Sean prepared his stance and summoned his main weapon.

 

Sean-"Cyber Belt: Fire Sword!"

 

With that said, Sean summoned a long, iron sword with a red handle and a dragon emblem, similar to the one on his chest, on both sides of the blade. "Power Slash!" Sean yelled as his blade summoned fire and blasted it at Exotor. "Gaahhh!" Exotor yelled as he fell in pain. He then stood up again and said, "You will pay for that." He ran towards Sean once again, and Sean blocked Exotor's attack. Sean then jumped back to do his final strike.

 

Sean-"Fire Sword: Inferno Strike!"

 

With that said, Sean launched himself into the air, channeled a large amount of fire energy, landed on the ground, ran towards Exotor, and striked him, weakening him emmensively.

 

"You have not seen the last of me!" yelled Exotor, getting up and limping from the damage that had been inflicted on him. "I shall return!" "We'll see," said Sean. "Power Down!" He then ran to the others.

 

"You okay?" "Yeah, were fine," said Andrew. "That was incredible! How were you able to use so much power?" "I guess my body adapted to the special software."

 

Meanwhile, Exotor bowed to Zamuron for mercy. "Please, master, forgive me, for I have failed you," said Exotor. "Silence! Failure is not an option! But luckily, I have many machines to create before I no longer have use for you." "Oh, thank you, master. Thank you!" "Oh, I almost forgot. Terminia!" A female, a more advanced model of Exotor entered the room. "Yes, master?" asked Terminia. "We have a special task for you." Terminia grinned with curiosity.

 

Back at the mansion, everyone celebrated their first victory, especially Sean. "Don't get too excited," said Andrew. "Zamuron can still make more robots. We need to be prepared for whatever he throws at us." "Right, dad." The 5 put one hand in and yell out their new favorite term:

 

Power Rangers!

Power Rangers!

 

And thus begins the story of Power Rangers Armitron!

 

When the time comes, I will finish each new episode quicker. But for now, I still use a Wii to make my fics, which means I can't finish them within a day. The time will come when a solution will be found and/or made. Always accepting comments and rating of 1 out of 10.

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HOLY WALL OF TEXT, BATMAN

Space it out. Remember, every time someone new speaks or a new topic is discussed, a new paragraph starts. Ah, and double space paragraphs, like this and the sentence exactly like it.

 

Ah, and double space paragraphs, like this and the sentence exactly like it.

 

I'd continue, but this is best reviewed in the most harsh and offensive way possible (Mystery Science Ripoff 3892), so...

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Wall of text needs to die for one. Secondly, everything seems so "rushed" and "convenient". Finally, it feels like you've taken an aspect from different series and slammed them together. Let's break this down shall we? First we have Angel Grove, being the location of the first few series of PR. Next we have this scientist who convieniently creates the bad guy as well as the morphers, in this case it's like Dino Thunder except robots (pretty sure Tommy created Mesogog with his former scientist partner), which is like Zeo with the Machine Empire. Then we come to the case of the rangers, the entire part there looks ripped off Operation Overdrive. If you're going to make a fanfiction based on Power Rangers, try to be original.

 

Finally...if you didn't want to be offended by our comments, you should be ready to accent ANYTHING negative because it helps you improve. If you do get offended by this then you simply need to grow up, it's the internet after all.

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I know what it means! I only kept it how it is because a) you need to look carefully at what I typed because I am being creative, b) what I typed is what I typed so deal with it and c) I only have my Wii to use internet so I can't type like I used to. And one more thing, the next amount of times that you criticize me, I'll have it as spam. You never want to mess with me. NEVER!!!

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You can't take what I have to say so you're gonna class it as spam? ROFL. Just because you want to take elements from multiple series of PR and slap them together and call it your own doesn't automatically make it your own. How about you come up with something that doesn't have any similarity to the other series? You know besides different names. And you can CLASS my post as spam and nothing will happen seeing as I MODERATE THIS SECTION. >>

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