chris78909 Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 Here are some of my best cards if any of them are out of hard just tell cause im new and i get carried away sometimes :Pits alot of cards aswell :P thx for looking Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 8, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 no comments or improvments ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aretha Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 These cards need a lot of work. There is flavor text in effect and fusion monsters, and effects in normal monsters. Bad OCG and grammar problems. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 5/10 for sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 thats okay anyway im pretty rubbish anyway i'd ive myself 1/10 :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 they could use some work 2.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 Could improve...... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztex Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 BAD OCG and spellings! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Briton of Rose Posted December 9, 2007 Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 4/10 for the following reasons:- mixing flavor text and effect text- bad OCG (on card grammar)- spell check needed- somewhat overpowered (e.g.- Fire Lord)+ good artwork, if leaning slightly to the novice side+ a good rough draft, and you were willing to take criticism from more experienced cardmakers Keep working on it. Soon you'll learn the ropes, and go on to make us all proud.(For those of you who think this is too heartfelt and touchy-feely, :twisted:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chris78909 Posted December 9, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2007 yea thx i'll try hard with my next cards :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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