JaredDesighner Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 :?...so yeah...i have some more to... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaredDesighner Posted December 8, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 So what do You think of them on a scale of one to ten? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 um its Draon-Type, and Graveyard should be capitalized, this is on your frist card, as well as, you need to end sentences with a period not / im pretty that was a mistake =)your second card: is okyour third: Graveyard needs to be capitalized, so does Special Summon, and Dragon-Type Monsters, opponent's needs the ' before the s.your fourth card: Standby Phase should be capitalized, along with Special Summon, and Dragon-Type Monsters, your attack should be written like ATK, and your Deck and Graveyard, need to be capitalized.other then that i give you a 8/10 =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaredDesighner Posted December 8, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 Thank You for the rating and Thank You for pointing out My mistakes I will fix them.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 Thank You for the rating and Thank You for pointing out My mistakes I will fix them.:D lol, thats what im here for =) 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaredDesighner Posted December 8, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 Ok I have revised the cards and Changed The dragon symbols effect to when another spell card or trap is activated on your side of the field it is destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 Ok I have revised the cards and Changed The dragon symbols effect to when another spell card or trap is activated on your side of the field it is destroyed. ok, cool =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaredDesighner Posted December 8, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 I'm am going to keep revising the effects.I want them to be Strong But not To strong.........Any suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 I'm am going to keep revising the effects.I want them to be Strong But not To strong.........Any suggestions? just make sure that if you have an effect that allows you to destroy an extra monster, that the effect of the monster it belongs to, isnt able to attack lol if you even understood what i wrote ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
barsam Posted December 8, 2007 Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 8/10 man nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JaredDesighner Posted December 8, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 8, 2007 Yeah I understand...I will desigh a new dragon with effect like that...hmm like a Bomber Dragon..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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