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~~ Original Chapters of The Other Dimension~~

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[spoiler=Prologue]Prologue

 

The sweeper team ran into the abandoned house to find the man but he was nowhere to be seen. They checked everywhere but he was not found. Somehow he escaped most of the Assault Division of the Falladale Police Force. He was a criminal, a hyperactive maniac thrilled by the kill, which sold his soul to the devil & gained the power to teleport through a remote dimension. He called himself “The Abyss Assassin”.

 

From the research they found, it was a theory that he used a teleportation device & was some how able to breath in dark matter. They decided to start Project Abyss. A project to make a teleportation device based on the research they found. Their first test subject was Koro Mishimoto. His mission was to track & take down “The Abyss Assassin“.

 

It took them 20 months to perfect their prototype teleportation device. They made a few more for Koro’s team. They started the simulation but it malfunctioned but they still disappeared. Koro & his team made it to the abyss but the teleportation device were fried. Koro noticed a mark on his right hand. He wondered if it were a scar from the explosion of the teleportation device.

 

He didn’t worry about it for long because as leader he went to see where the others were but in complete nothingness it was expected that they would get lost. Koro ran & ran until he could hear voices. He turned around & saw his comrades run pass frantically. He wondered what was wrong but it was soon to be discovered that there was a massive mob of ghost white, blood stained, blood-thirsty people running toward them, gaining on them. Some how walking yet they were faster than Koro & the others.

 

Koro caught up to his team but they were soon caught by the mob. As Koro knew all was lost as the mob closed in on them, the mark on Koro’s hand started glowing red & they suddenly were teleported back to the test area. The lab rats were surprised to see they made it back without the teleportation devices. Now that the team was in light they all noticed a mark on all of their right hands. The lab rats did some tasting on them & found dark matter on their hands. The dark matter was a substance which they were able to teleport anywhere there was dark matter & be able to control the dark matter surrounding them. Koro & the team were sent to the dimension to once again find the “The Abyss Assassin”.

 

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1: On Our Own]

 

Koro looked at the mark on his hand & was astounded by what he saw, the mark was changing. It twisted & turned on his hand, he could feel it sinking into his hand. It felt like a mosquito bite only worse. as the churning stopped he noticed his hand change. His hand turned to ice. What the hell is this! Koro thought. Koro looked to his teammates & the same was happening. All of his teammate’s right hands were glowing & changing shape. "What’s going on here?" Koro asked Nada, a girl who Koro has absolutely adored for a long time. She has luscious red hair, glorious brown eyes, and pale skin. Koro started to daydream & forget what he was talking about in the first place. I should ask her out. I shoulda done that a long time ago. She’s so beautiful. If I wasn't careful I'd probably kiss her in my sub-conscience. Haha I wish I could.... Wha...?

 

"Umm… you okay Captain Mishimoto?" Nada asked.

 

“F-fine, uh perfectly fine,” Koro stuttered, “Umm… what where we talking about?”

 

“Well, we were talking about what was up with our hands but I guess that would have to wait cuz we’ve got company.” Nada informed.

 

“Great.” Koro complained as he got up.”Guess we’re on our own. What’re we supposed to do without utilities!!?”

Then Koro noticed Nada's hand. "Guys, I have an idea!! Try this."

 

Koro clenched his right hand to form a fist. Ice shot from his hand. The shot was so big it blocked the mob off.

 

"What are they?" Sayakuro asked as he tried clenching his fist. He held his fist for a while but nothing happened.

Sayakuro tried again but same result. The mob crushed the iceburg that was in their path. Sayakuro had to think quick, he felt a freezing chill consume him as the mob drew closer to him. He looked over at the others. He saw he was not the only one having trouble. Maybe I should try different hand gestures Sayakuro thought.

 

"Talk to the hand bastards!!" Sayakuro exclaimed as he tried an open palm. Out of his hand flew water. Sayakuro waved his imitating the water & the water flowed.

 

"Oh Yeah!! This is getting fun." Sayakuro, being the sadistic one, flooded the mob with his water, binded them & broke their neck as Sayakuro cackling like an evil demon, watching the masecre he created. Sayakuro pointed to the one he kept alive...

 

"This one we have to take back to the labs. Tell 'em they need to analyse it, find out what makes them so stong."

 

"Alright, Sayakuro you find a way to teleport by will & take the... whatever it is back to the labs. The rest are with me. Got it?" Koro ordered.

 

"Sir!" The team saluted.

 

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There are 30+ chapters that are developing at the moment. i dont kno if sum of them fit in with the some of the chapters so i made that one short for now. Chapter 1 is to introduce Nada because she is really important to the story. When im finished making chapter 1 there will be alot mor characters introduced & i'd say that i'd be mor exiting than wat it is now considering that chapter had nuthin to do with the main plot.

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