Guest Merciful Idiot Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I couldn't resist. ^_^ [spoiler=Prologue]Prologue Werewolves, Vampires, and Humans have been in war for a long time. They fought and fought. For over a thousand years. There seemed to be no stop to it. And then it happened….. The Vampire Lord, the Werewolf King, and the Human General were fighting in what was once a grassland, it was the final battle. As the human quickly took out his gun and put several silver bullets in it, the Vampire Lord quickly attacked the werewolf. The human continuously shot his silver bullets at the werewolf but it quickly dodged and tackled the vampire into the ground, but the vampire turned into a bat just in time. The vampire resumed its form and then attempted to bite the human but the human managed to throw a garlic smoke bomb on the ground, driving the vampire away. He then took out a small wooden stake and was about to stab the vampire when the sky suddenly turned red. The three beings were confused, as it was late at night, and the sky couldn’t possibly turn red at this time. Just then, thousands of meteors appeared from the sky. Neither of the races knew what was happening, but decided to ignore it and continue fighting. The first meteor hit the ground, then the second. The third one was heading straight towards the trio. All three of them jumped out the way as the meteor hit the earth. The three races then continued their battle once more around the meteor. It was their carelessness that led to their downfalls. The meteor suddenly had a huge crack. And so did the other few thousand meteors that hit the earth. The huge cracks grew bigger as the three races continued their battle, not noticing the cracks on the meteors. The meteors broke apart. And then it turned out that there was something in the meteors. All three races gasped as they saw what was in now-broken meteors. Dragons . [spoiler=Prologue Part 2]Prologue Part 2 It has been five years. Five years of hell even for vampires and werewolves. Humans have been forced to live in camps without knowing why. They are told that earthquakes, tsunamis, volcanic eruptions, and hurricanes are happening everywhere. But these are all lies. Five years ago, the sky rained dragons. The dragons overpowered the humans, the vampires, and the werewolves’ altogether. They could not hold back the dragons. Soon, the dragons quickly conquered the earth. But the humans always found a way to live in peace. And although Humans, Werewolves and Vampires may be able to fight this new threat together, they refuse to work side-by-side. One day, a pure-vampire who has never bitten a human, called Axis coincidentally stumbled upon some ancient relics. In the relics was nothing but three giant stone tablets. The first told of a story about a half-werewolf, half-vampire being. The second told of the blood of dragons and how it affects Vampires and Werewolves. The third told of something so powerful, that it could bring armies to its knees within minutes. Axis was surprised by the tablets. But he took this knowledge to good use. Soon afterwards, he gathered nine followers. Four vampires and five werewolves, exactly the number he needed. By following the instructions on the first tablet, the ten beings became what were known as dangerous, ferocious, powerful, feared beyond belief, and blood-thirsty. Something they could still make a hero out of. Something which could grant the power to save the world (JUST the world, not guaranteeing humans) Werepyres. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 You'll want to close your spoiler tags. There's a "/" on the second one.[spoiler=Straight Review]THE PROBLEMS: Why, oh, why are the leaders fighting? No real general would ever actually tread the earth. More intriguingly, with all three obviously in one place, why don't they all just kill each other? Why just the Lords, rather than the entire armies?Also, you need to describe your setting. We have no idea when or where this is.THE SOLUTIONS: Well... replace the Lords with armies. The Dragons get to show off more easily that way, and it's much more realistic than a simple three-person free-for-all that would have ended the war centuries ago.Describe your setting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evil Princess Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 There's no shift on this keybosrd?! Oh well. Awesome work, idiot. And you forgot the / in da spoiler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 You'll want to close your spoiler tags. There's a "/" on the second one.[spoiler=Straight Review]THE PROBLEMS: Why' date=' oh, why are the leaders fighting? No real general would ever actually tread the earth. More intriguingly, with all three obviously in one place, why don't they all just kill each other? Why just the Lords, rather than the entire armies?Also, you need to describe your setting. We have no idea when or where this is.THE SOLUTIONS: Well... replace the Lords with armies. The Dragons get to show off more easily that way, and it's much more realistic than a simple three-person free-for-all that would have ended the war centuries ago.Describe your setting. [/quote']Edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 Prologue part 2 added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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