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六兆年と一夜物語

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  'awesome66 said:

New RP idea. I need some feedback' date=' constructive critisism, and ideas.

 

[spoiler=Tick, Tock, There goes the Clock']

There was once a scientist whom had hoped to create a new race of people, a scientist who wanted to create a new life that would be free of human greed, create their own civilization, and help others with their special powers. He created 12 of these new life forms, and he awaited the day they would awaken.

 

However, this man is not who we are here to discuss. We are here to discuss his jealous, treasonous man who despised the people in the world. Their disgusting greed, their awful lust, and their dispicable hate. He knew it was hopeless to try and change them, so he wanted to destroy them. He wanted to end them. He created his own, human like, powerful beings that would destroy the world after he was gone.

 

These beings had specific medallions that were like clocks, and their innerworkings showed. They were old fashioned watches, except they went around your neck. With these, along with their original powers, were given the ability to manipulate time and space using these. These beings destroyed the scientist who wanted to change the world and his creations, but the scientist managed to encapsulate them, scatter their medallions, erase their memories, and put the "secret ingredient" of goodness that was in his creations that allowed them to have hearts.

 

However, the evil scientist had a backup plan. He managed to put an instinct in their mind that never goes away, one that tells them where their medallions are, and that they need to obtain them. They also are then told instinctually told that they are destined to move to a certain spot in the world, that would activate his machine.

 

The capsules are leaking, the creations are awaking, and both plans are coming together. Whom will the creations obey? Who's plan shall prevail? Will the military corner these creations, and squash both plans? What shall go on as the clock continues to tick and tock.

 

 

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Well' date=' me and Fen are working the RP out. That was just my idea till we started working with each other.

We're like RPing brothers, so we can work with each other and stuff, and it'll be good. But when we're done, one of us will put down the draft.

In the mean time, you'll have to wait.

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Duuuuuhhhh, i'm thinking...i'm thinking...i'm thinking...i'm thinking...that i should be in on that since i am chock full of ideas. om me what you have so far so i can opine on it and submit ideas of my own! :D

  'awesome66 said:

New RP idea. I need some feedback' date=' constructive critisism, and ideas.

 

[spoiler=Tick, Tock, There goes the Clock']

There was once a scientist whom had hoped to create a new race of people, a scientist who wanted to create a new life that would be free of human greed, create their own civilization, and help others with their special powers. He created 12 of these new life forms, and he awaited the day they would awaken.

 

However, this man is not who we are here to discuss. We are here to discuss his jealous, treasonous man who despised the people in the world. Their disgusting greed, their awful lust, and their dispicable hate. He knew it was hopeless to try and change them, so he wanted to destroy them. He wanted to end them. He created his own, human like, powerful beings that would destroy the world after he was gone.

 

These beings had specific medallions that were like clocks, and their innerworkings showed. They were old fashioned watches, except they went around your neck. With these, along with their original powers, were given the ability to manipulate time and space using these. These beings destroyed the scientist who wanted to change the world and his creations, but the scientist managed to encapsulate them, scatter their medallions, erase their memories, and put the "secret ingredient" of goodness that was in his creations that allowed them to have hearts.

 

However, the evil scientist had a backup plan. He managed to put an instinct in their mind that never goes away, one that tells them where their medallions are, and that they need to obtain them. They also are then told instinctually told that they are destined to move to a certain spot in the world, that would activate his machine.

 

The capsules are leaking, the creations are awaking, and both plans are coming together. Whom will the creations obey? Who's plan shall prevail? Will the military corner these creations, and squash both plans? What shall go on as the clock continues to tick and tock.

 

idea = epic. definitely implement it and tell me exactly when the submission process for the rp starts. i am most definitely looking forward to this. :mrgreen:

and yes, it does sound like it was inspired by 9, but who gives a damn? at least, that's my humble opinion. ;)

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do you mean the christmas rp mentioned before? if so, i would like the plottage for the rising zombies of saint nicholas to be sent to me so that i can opine on them and offer any suggestions where possible. XD if not, then please refresh my memory as to what the rp is if not a chrsitmas one. XD

and i remember when you really were bringing the cake for your nephew zuko. XD

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I meant the Yugioh RP mentioned a few pages back.

 

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  'Bringerofcake said:

[spoiler=Yu-Gi-Oh! Scramble for the Prize!]

[spoiler=The Plot]

A letter arrives at your door' date=' landing with a soft flap. You open it:

 

[spoiler=OPEN THE LETTER!']

13/3/2033

Dear __________,

 

You have been invited to a relic hunt. You and several others, I should say. Your goal (should you choose to accept the challenge): Find the ancient Haklion Temple hidden somewhere in the city of Harighnash.

 

Now, the question that I know is lingering on your mind: What's in it for me?

 

Treasure.

 

All the treasure one could possibly imagine, and much more. The finder's fee alone could purchase a small island. Gold, jewels, ancient knowledge, more than one could think possible.

 

There is one catch, however.

 

There are more than just you. And they want the treasure just as badly as you do (and I know you do).

 

Enclosed in this envelope is one of the Pieces of Regehlak, the ancient god of the Haklion people. Only the one who collects all of the Pieces may be granted entry into the Temple: and no other. But the Pieces may only be obtained from another by way of a Duel. (The Haklions managed to harness the power of the Shadows, as the Egyptians had many hundreds of years afterward.)

 

If you are interested, I hope to see you in Harighnash in a week's time. (An airline ticket has also been enclosed.

 

If you do not wish to be a part of the hunt, I understand completely. Simply send your Piece by return mail (and I will know if you don't.)

 

Sincerely,

Julien Nakonen

Entrepreneur

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=App Form]

Name:

Gender:

Age:

Bio: (1 paragraph minimum)

Appearance: (1 paragraph minimum)

Deck: (If created, post a link to the board where created. If not created, post a link from the wiki)

 

 

[spoiler=My App]

Name: Julien Nakonen

Gender: Male

Age: 37

Bio: A young entreprenuer from America. When he was vacationing in Haklionia, he chanced upon the rumour of the Haklion Temple and found the Pieces of Regehlak. Following the instructions left on the tablet they were found near, he sent them to those found "worthy", that is to say, those who had won duel tournaments in the past. Now, no one quite knows where he is, or what he's doing. The only communication that is known are the letters sent to the chosen.

Appearance: The last known photograph of him shows a thinnish man, mid thirties, six foot one, weighing about 155 pounds. His light brown hair sticks out under his fedora hat. He's wearing a fancy-looking suit, black, as if it had just come back from the cleaners. His shoes are very well-polished. He must pay very well for them to be so.

 

 

 

An actual character will be posted on the actual RP. But let's just say we've not seen the last of Julien yet...

 

 

 

What do y'all think?

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Enrise

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  'Chaos Zero said:

do you mean the christmas rp mentioned before? if so' date=' i would like the plottage for the rising zombies of saint nicholas to be sent to me so that i can opine on them and offer any suggestions where possible. XD if not, then please refresh my memory as to what the rp is if not a chrsitmas one. XD

and i remember when you really were bringing the cake for your nephew zuko. XD

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The Christmas RP with Zombies, which aren't going to be Zombies anymore, was both Fenrir and I's idea.

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ah, okay then. sorry for the confusion. XD

oh yeah, i remember about that relic hunt rp. it sounds interesting, although i am not entirely sure as to how i would go about rping in it. XD

belail, do you think that you could message me the plot so that i could opine on it and maybe give possible suggestions? i tend to be quite good at that you know.

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^No, but I could quote the post for you that was posted.

 

  'Belail said:

Well' date=' Kira, it would be a good idea, but me and Fenrir just did the first draft of the plot for the RP =P.

 

Here's what we came up with.

 

It's that time of year, everyone spending time with the people they enjoy spending time with, where they forget their current troubles and worries. Yes, the time of Christmas is now. And a group of high school kids, having a blast, are spending their time at a Ski Shack in the middle of the deep forest.

However, just when they can forget their troubles and worries, they are about to be put into trouble and start to worry. When they realize that they are not the only ones in shack, they will think it's nothing, but soon start to have second thoughts.

This is just the beginning. As time goes on, they realize something far more treacherous is going on. Something dark, sinister, evil. As they finally realize what's going on, they're too late. Friendships will be put to the test, trusts will be broken, emotions will be revealed.

If you think you know a person, guess again. As their masks crumble, they realize their friends are not really who they are.

 

The last paragraph is Fen's.

 

Also, people, side note: This is a recursive process. Things can't be done the first time normally, especially when writing. So, if there is anything that seems wrong or out of place, or see errors grammatical wise or such, please do fix it. But please bold it.

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  'Chaos Zero said:

yeah' date=' it's just that i wanted to help make it. anyway, i look forward to seeing how it turns out. :)

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YOU MUST CAPITALIZE MORE OFTEN DAMNIT. D<

  'Belail said:

^No' date=' but I could quote the post for you that was posted.

 

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Well, Kira, it would be a good idea, but me and Fenrir just did the first draft of the plot for the RP =P.

 

Here's what we came up with.

 

It's that time of year, everyone spending time with the people they enjoy spending time with, where they forget their current troubles and worries. Yes, the time of Christmas is now. And a group of high school kids, having a blast, are spending their time at a Ski Shack in the middle of the deep forest.

However, just when they can forget their troubles and worries, they are about to be put into trouble and start to worry. When they realize that they are not the only ones in shack, they will think it's nothing, but soon start to have second thoughts.

This is just the beginning. As time goes on, they realize something far more treacherous is going on. Something dark, sinister, evil. As they finally realize what's going on, they're too late. Friendships will be put to the test, trusts will be broken, emotions will be revealed.

If you think you know a person, guess again. As their masks crumble, they realize their friends are not really who they are.

 

The last paragraph is Fen's.

 

Also, people, side note: This is a recursive process. Things can't be done the first time normally, especially when writing. So, if there is anything that seems wrong or out of place, or see errors grammatical wise or such, please do fix it. But please bold it.

 

I want in.

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  'Belail said:

^In on helping with teh RP? Or just partaking in the RP? (I assume that you want to help make it.)

 

The first part. <3 You got MSN?

 

 

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Of course you would. :) And why so cranky? :?

That's just the thing though' date=' I need all of the available information so that I can make well informed suggestions.

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I dunno. *sad faec* T_T

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  'Belail said:

^I might. But do I use it? Hardly. If I do' date=' I need to change some settings, like, name and etc. Or just make a new one. =S

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Make a new one. It would be far easier for us to discuss the plot, because myself and Fenrir both have one. PM's are so slow. v.v

 

 

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Wait.

You guys need a citizen to scream "holy s***" or something?

 

NOU

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Dweller, I saw that episode (the car thing in your sig. I hope you know the show it came from lol). And can anyone please try to help me figure out either how to turn my FF into an RP or if it should at least be posted here?

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