Citizens for our (RP) Betterment - We're here to help.

[Enrise]

I didn't ask for just your help. I asked for others also.

[Shadow Zero]

i know, i am just regretting that i cannot help is all. XD

so do you know what type of rp it might be? probably just a social one for the season right?

[Enrise]

Probably. Or I might consider having something not entirely based around the Season, but have it as the setting for it.

[Shadow Zero]

interesting. well whatever it is, i hope that it is quite successful. :) (meaning at least 20 pages worth of posts)

[六兆年と一夜物語]

Hey guys' date=' I want to start up an RP, based around Christmas time mainly, obviously cause it's Christmas time.

 

But I need some ideas, any help for moi guys?

[/quote']

 

Think of basic, always done plot.

 

Then fuse it with another basic and normal plot.

 

Do it again until you find your plot extremely unoriginal.

[fenrir]

Hey guys' date=' I want to start up an RP, based around Christmas time mainly, obviously cause it's Christmas time.

 

But I need some ideas, any help for moi guys?

[/quote']

 

Think of basic, always done plot.

 

Then fuse it with another basic and normal plot.

 

Do it again until you find your plot extremely unoriginal.

 

Christmas Zombies.

[Enrise]

Well, maybe I could so something relating to Horror, also being related to Christmas.

 

After a slight hunger struck me, I thought up an idea. It something like this.

 

Christmas day/Eve (Depends, more like Eve possibly because of the night)

People are having a 'jolly' time, hanging around the fireplace, talking. The moment they go silent however, the fire goes out, and it's freezing. They hear a door close.

The lights go out. Everyone tries to go out, but the door is locked. Everyone of them.

They all see one of their friends dead, skin ripped off.

They all split up into groups, to try and find the 'criminal/killer', and for things they can use a protection.

 

And depending on how it ends, I can make several different endings. They escape the thing goes into the woods (Yes, woods), and tries to kill them, is one of them. I'm still working out the bolts and screws of the story.

[fenrir]

Christmas Zombies dammit! D:<

 

Also, thinking of a christmas RP mayself.

[Enrise]

Fenrir, we're not making two separate Christmas RP's. No, we shall work together to make one Christmas RP's. Yes they can have Zombies too.

[fenrir]

<3

 

PM?

[Enrise]

You first ;D

 

And <3 to you too.

[六兆年と一夜物語]

Well' date=' maybe I could so something relating to Horror, also being related to Christmas.

 

After a slight hunger struck me, I thought up an idea. It something like this.

 

Christmas day/Eve (Depends, more like Eve possibly because of the night)

People are having a 'jolly' time, hanging around the fireplace, talking. The moment they go silent however, the fire goes out, and it's freezing. They hear a door close.

The lights go out. Everyone tries to go out, but the door is locked. Everyone of them.

They all see one of their friends dead, skin ripped off.

They all split up into groups, to try and find the 'criminal/killer', and for things they can use a protection.

 

And depending on how it ends, I can make several different endings. They escape the thing goes into the woods (Yes, woods), and tries to kill them, is one of them. I'm still working out the bolts and screws of the story.

[/quote']

 

Let's list down the possible endings, no?

[Enrise]

Well, me and Fen are working the RP out. That was just my idea till we started working with each other.

We're like RPing brothers, so we can work with each other and stuff, and it'll be good. But when we're done, one of us will put down the draft.

In the mean time, you'll have to wait.

[六兆年と一夜物語]

Well' date=' me and Fen are working the RP out. That was just my idea till we started working with each other.

We're like RPing brothers, so we can work with each other and stuff, and it'll be good. But when we're done, one of us will put down the draft.

In the mean time, you'll have to wait.

[/quote']

 

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Why not do a "rea-time" RP? Like everything is based the same day as in the real world (your time.) So when Christmas actually comes for you then you can start on Christmas and things like that, but have the same plot line as you want it to be, just real time.

[Enrise]

Well, Kira, it would be a good idea, but me and Fenrir just did the first draft of the plot for the RP =P.

 

Here's what we came up with.

 

It's that time of year, everyone spending time with the people they enjoy spending time with, where they forget their current troubles and worries. Yes, the time of Christmas is now. And a group of high school kids, having a blast, are spending their time at a Ski Shack in the middle of the deep forest.

However, just when they can forget their troubles and worries, they are about to be put into trouble and start to worry. When they realize that they are not the only ones in shack, they will think it's nothing, but soon start to have second thoughts.

This is just the beginning. As time goes on, they realize something far more treacherous is going on. Something dark, sinister, evil. As they finally realize what's going on, they're too late. Friendships will be put to the test, trusts will be broken, emotions will be revealed.

If you think you know a person, guess again. As their masks crumble, they realize their friends are not really who they are.

 

The last paragraph is Fen's.

 

Also, people, side note: This is a recursive process. Things can't be done the first time normally, especially when writing. So, if there is anything that seems wrong or out of place, or see errors grammatical wise or such, please do fix it. But please bold it.

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

It's that time of year, everyone spending time with the people they enjoy spending time with, where they forget their current troubles and worries. Yes, the time of Christmas is now. And a group of high school kids, having a blast, are spending their time at a Ski Shack in the middle of the deep forest.

However, just as they are forgetting their troubles and worries, they are put into trouble and start to worry. When they realize that they are not the only ones in shack, they think it's nothing, but soon start to have second thoughts.

This is just the beginning. As time goes on, they realize something far more treacherous is going on. Something dark, sinister, and evil. As they finally start realizing what's going on, they're too late. Friendships will be put to the test, trusts will be broken, and emotions will be revealed.

If you think you know a person, guess again. As their masks crumble, they realize their friends are not really who they are.

 

That's all I got ^^;

[fenrir]

It's that time of year' date=' everyone spending time with the people they enjoy spending time with, where they forget their current troubles and worries. Yes, the time of Christmas is now. And a group of high school kids, having a blast, are spending their time at a Ski Shack in the middle of the deep forest.

However, just [b']as they are forgetting[/b] their troubles and worries, they are put into trouble and start to worry. When they realize that they are not the only ones in shack, they think it's nothing, but soon start to have second thoughts.

This is just the beginning. As time goes on, they realize something far more treacherous is going on. Something dark, sinister, and evil. As they finally start realizing what's going on, they're too late. Friendships will be put to the test, trusts will be broken, and emotions will be revealed.

If you think you know a person, guess again. As their masks crumble, they realize their friends are not really who they are.

 

That's all I got ^^;

 

Enrise's paragraph is fine. So your corrections really don't matter. You did catch a few in mine.

[Enrise]

Ah Enrise.

That reminds me, when the hell is a Super getting on?

YCM is lacking some serious active Mods, both Super and Non.

[Sorrow.]

Ah Enrise.

That reminds me' date=' when the hell is a Super getting on?

YCM is lacking some serious active Mods, both Super and Non.

[/quote']

 

I agree with you a little bit.

Also have you heard Icy quit YCM? Cmon!

[Enrise]

Psh. Knew about it for a while.

[Sorrow.]

Wish he'd never left...

[Infinitus]

New RP idea. I need some feedback, constructive critisism, and ideas.

 

[spoiler=Tick, Tock, There goes the Clock]

There was once a scientist whom had hoped to create a new race of people, a scientist who wanted to create a new life that would be free of human greed, create their own civilization, and help others with their special powers. He created 12 of these new life forms, and he awaited the day they would awaken.

 

However, this man is not who we are here to discuss. We are here to discuss his jealous, treasonous man who despised the people in the world. Their disgusting greed, their awful lust, and their dispicable hate. He knew it was hopeless to try and change them, so he wanted to destroy them. He wanted to end them. He created his own, human like, powerful beings that would destroy the world after he was gone.

 

These beings had specific medallions that were like clocks, and their innerworkings showed. They were old fashioned watches, except they went around your neck. With these, along with their original powers, were given the ability to manipulate time and space using these. These beings destroyed the scientist who wanted to change the world and his creations, but the scientist managed to encapsulate them, scatter their medallions, erase their memories, and put the "secret ingredient" of goodness that was in his creations that allowed them to have hearts.

 

However, the evil scientist had a backup plan. He managed to put an instinct in their mind that never goes away, one that tells them where their medallions are, and that they need to obtain them. They also are then told instinctually told that they are destined to move to a certain spot in the world, that would activate his machine.

 

The capsules are leaking, the creations are awaking, and both plans are coming together. Whom will the creations obey? Who's plan shall prevail? Will the military corner these creations, and squash both plans? What shall go on as the clock continues to tick and tock.

 

[Zimiri of the Muse]

i like the ski-shack i'd join that

[Sorrow.]

That reminds me alot of 9... But it is good.