Citizens for our (RP) Betterment - We're here to help.

[bury the year]

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(I'm sure half of you are wondering, "what's a mod doing making a club?" Well, open-style plottage discussions like this wouldn't work in the RP Forum proper, but I still wanted to try something like this out.)

 

 

Got an idea for an RP, but you just can't put it down? Having trouble writing up that perfectly climactic battle post? Need some cool powers or a tragic history? Well, here at Citizens for our (RP) Betterment, we can help you bring your interactive ideas to life. All it takes is a simple joining post, and our group of expert RPers and writers will help you out. You can also discuss where your plot should go, and how to tie everything all up in the end.[/align]

 

[spoiler=The 3 Rules]

1) Don't stray off-topic. I despise OOC anywhere, not just in RPing. Save that stuff for PMs and the like.

 

2) Be courteous. Don't diss on someone's ideas. I certainly wouldn't want that to happen to me, so why would I do it to others?

 

3) This is not the place to yell at me for the mandatory Advanced Clause. Take your worries/complaints here.

 

4) The password's "itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite".

 

[spoiler=Joining Form]

Remove all text in {curly brackets.}

Account Name:
RPing Time: {About how long have you RPed?}
Sample Post: {Just your average RP post. It's so we can judge at about what level you are.}
Currently Active RPs:
Password:

 

[spoiler=Accepted Members]

YOU DON'T NEED MY RECOGNITION. IF YOU POST THE FORM, YOU'RE IN.

 

 

[spoiler=Current Projects]RP reverse-engineering contest.

 

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[fenrir]

Account Name: Kuro no Keiyakushu

RPing Time: 1 year.

Sample Post: Do I have to fill this out? Seeing as you know how I RP.

Currently Active RPs: Alphabetical Order.

Password: "itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite"

[bury the year]

Sample Post: Do I have to fill this out? Seeing as you know how I RP.

 

Humor me. (AKA, yes.)

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Account Name: Kira Kills

 

RPing Time: Few months? (2-3)

 

Sample Post: This is actually an opening from an old RP, but it's also my best RP post, imo...

 

It is the year 2016. 4 years after the death of Light Yagami (aka, Kira). There are many Kira followers that were crushed by the news, and 1 of them decided to do something about it. Since the day he died, Kent has been looking for a Death Note to call his own. Although he was only 12 at the time, he knew Kira's ideals and supported them. He devoted his lfe outside of school to finding a Note, and 7 weeks ago (making up a date now), April 24, 2020, he finally found a Death Note and its Shinagami Tatsuo (Dragon man, as translated by 20000-names.com), and told him to search for other Shinagami and humans who were looking for fun (For shinagami) or shared the same ideals (for the FWs). Since then, he has found 5 followers known as the FWs. He is still hoping to find more, and they fight to get Kira's ideal world to become a reality. So far, their combined forces have killed half a million Americans (to clarify, THESE "Kiras" are based in Seattle.) to date. The day is now June 12, 2020, and the blood-shed has not yet stopped. The American NPA is powerless to stop it. They saw how well the Japanese NPA handled the case, and they called in their help with the new chief, Leon. As before, many are reluctant to be on the case, so only 6 have joined the case so far.

 

Currently Active RPs: None made by me. Too many to name, really, made by others.

 

Password: itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite

[fenrir]

Sample Post: Do I have to fill this out? Seeing as you know how I RP.

 

Humor me. (AKA' date=' yes.)

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"Goddamnit Fen!"

 

Fenrir winced at Snitch's words.

 

"You know. We've been through so much sheet." Fen started, staring up at the old apartment cieling.

 

"Deactivated lasers, with my =CENSOR=." Snitch continued, his voice rising.

 

"Now it's time to blow this funker down!" They continued in union.

 

Fen nonchalantly grabbed his black guitar lying on the floor of their crappy apartment. As he picked it up, he strummed a few times, and began playing. Snitch grinned, and the beat picked up.

 

"Come on Fen it's time to blow doors down!"

 

"I hear ya Snitch its time to blow doors down."

 

"Light up the stage because it's time for a showdown!"

 

"We'll bend you over then we'll take you to Brown Town."

 

They beat hastened, and they both sang in union, "Now we got to blow this funker down!"

 

(I have to go, but this is more or less something simple of mine.)

[Spartan919]

Account Name: Spartan919

RPing Time: Just over a year

Sample Post: Alistair looked up. He watched as the others battled the giant machine, but was reluctant to join in; he really hated fighting. After watching some of his friends be attacked by the strange thing, Alistair's temper boiled over, and he charged in.

Currently Active RPs: None by me, but I'm in too many to name them all

Password: itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

I honestly doubt you will be accepted, nothing against you. It's just, Rinne is one of the Advanced Clause supporters, and that sample is 3 sentences... 3 SHORT sentences.

[bury the year]

I honestly doubt you will be accepted' date=' nothing against you. It's just, Rinne is one of the Advanced Clause supporters, and that sample is 3 sentences... 3 SHORT sentences.

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I'm not caring about post quality here, because the entire point is to improve. All posters accepted.

[Plaguespreader Zombie]

Account Name: Akira Udou

RPing Time: Around 9 months horribly, 3-4 months somewhat-decent

Sample Post:

[spoiler=]

Lucas stepped cowardly towards his enemy. He looked up, and saw his ugly face. He ran back, hoping he would go easy on him. When his opponent attacked, Lucas tried to dodge it, but was to late, He was hit down by the great fist that was lunging at him. "Ow. You monster!" He yelled angrily at the face of the monster of a human who knocked him down. "I'll make you pay for that!" He yelled and charged at his foe, not thinking about the consequences. When he got up close, he lunged at his opponent. However, he was merely brushed off like a bug. He stood back, saddened at his defeat. "I will become stronger!" He said to himself, with his head down, staring at the ground.

 

 

Currently Active RPs: None atm

Password: "itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite".

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

Ah. Ok. Anyone read the Incarnations of Immortality by Piers Anthony? (This IS relevant to RPing btw.)

[bury the year]

Ah. Ok. Anyone read the Incarnations of Immortality by Piers Anthony? (This IS relevant to RPing btw.)

 

1) No' date=' I have not.

2) Akira, accepted.

3) I'm giving you guys your first challenge in plot designing. The following is a sample post that I have posted in another RP club. I want you guys to create an RP, from top to bottom, that you would most likely find that post in. Set it up like you would the first post of an RP thread; summary, charry form, etc. The winner will receive something special. Entries are due by December 4. Get crackin'.

 

[spoiler=Here it is.']

A single lightbulb hummed relentlessly, hanging from a single steel wire in the middle of a concrete room. The dimness of the bulb only increased the feeling that it was a mosquito, buzzing uncomfortably close to whosever's ear was nearby. In that instance, it would be Mr. John Spokes, a midranked questioning and interrogation officer for 7. Just the number. The less information disclosed about his job, the better.

 

He had grown accustomed to the whine after countless times in the cell. It was almost like the little devil on his shoulder, prompting him to say things he wouldn't dare otherwise in public. The man sitting opposite him seemed to notice this little tidbit equally as much, and he was sweating unknowingly from it, puddles of perspiration forming on his ill-fitting orange jumpsuit. Standard issue.

 

"So, Mr..." Flipping open the cover of the manila folder in front of him, Spokes studied the document and attached high-gloss Polaroid, his reflection appearing in the latter. He had close-cropped straight blond hair, blue eyes, and a severe square face that was offset by multiple etched wrinkles, as if they were set in there with a dull knife. "Mr. Whitebrook," he concluded after a few brief seconds. The prisoner reacted in a very uncouth manner, jumping form his folding iron chair as if he were pricked.

 

"I didn't do nuthin', sir! Nuthin!" Words tumbled from Whitebrook's lips like a waterfall. "Why do you even have me here?" he continued, panicked.

 

Spokes gave a short sigh. "I feel no need to explain. However," he added with an imperceptible smile, withdrawing two more Polaroids from the folder and setting them on the table, "I believe these can. WOuld you so kindly tell me what these pictures show?"

 

Whitebrook glanced down at the pictures. They were blurry, the kind you'd find from a cell phone camera. "They show," he gulped, "me?"

 

"Indeed," the blond replied. Each picture in the pair portrayed a different view of the nervous man, with a thick down vest and baseball cap. He was carrying what appeared to be a gym bag, but there was obvious weight to it, for the man's weight in the picture was pulled to one side. "Well," Spokes continued, brushing a non-existant speck of dust off his suit, "since you've admitted to being the individual in these photos, I believe my work is done." On cue, a pair of black suited guards slipped quietly into the room behind Whitebrook before he had time to react. Snapping a pair of handcuffs on him, the two let the orange-jumpsuited man out of the drafty room.

 

The door swung close behind them, and Spokes sighed again. 'They really have to take more care when planting a bomb next time,' he thought impassively. 'Never know when someone's watching.'

 

[Dad]

Account Name: Dark Phoenix

 

RPing Time: Two years

Sample Post: [spoiler=Sample Role-Play Post]The sun arose sparkling across Karakura. This once semi-peaceful town was now swarming with Hollow left and right. It's a good thing the world's few remaining Shinigami (or Death Gods) were stationed throughout the area. A long, fiendish shadow cast itself over the horizon, belonging to one man, or Shinigami in this case.

 

He sighed heavily, disappointed in himself. "Can't believe we didn't see this coming. And now, our only safe passage has been locked down." A small girl, appearing to be at least half of his own age, poked her head above his shoulder. "It's okay Ken-chan. We're gonna bust in, and get back Seireitei. If you hadn't been there in time-" Zaraki shused her.

 

"Speak nothing of it little lady. I'll always look out for ya." He muffled her flamboyant, pink her, and turned his back to the sun. "Not a day goes by when I don't regret letting Seireitei fall. No matter. I'll just have to rip open every one of those damned Hollow that stand in my way." A devilish grin crossed his face as he reminisced on his past battles, and how he grew to be who he was today.

 

Yachiru tugged his leggings harshly. "Ken-chan, what's for eats?" Yachiru's stomach growled ferociously as she spoke. He managed a laugh. "We'll be stopping by Urahara's place. We can eat there."

 

Yachiru hopped onto his shoulder as they departed.

 

 

Currently Active RPs: BLEACH: Restoration of Integrity

 

Password: "itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite"

[NeoDemonX]

Account Name: LordDemonX

RPing Time: Dec. 2008 to May or June 2009 then I quit and then came back 2 weeks ago

Sample Post: [spoiler=]Saruto Desa was walking in the forest after he was training for the whole day. As he was walking through the forest and seeing the end of the forest. And as Saruto walk into the opening, a man wearing a red hat and a white coat appear in front of him. "Who are you" Saruto said as he was going to grab his sword. The red hat man grad his sword and started to run and said "I want to kill you Saruto". "Why do you want to kill me" Saruto said when he went to run too. "Because you killed my brother and my name is Draco Mesa" said Draco. then Saruto said "Your brother was an evil man kid" as he took a 2 swings at Draco cutting his arm. As Draco was seeing his cut but still fighting, "NO he wasn't, he was a good man" and then he swings but miss. "Then you are a fool and you will die like your brother" as Saruto was finish talking, Saruto did a super swing and kill the young man. Saruto then walk over Draco's dead body and walk home.

 

Currently Active RPs: BLEACH: Restoration of Integrity, Dimension Clash and 2 others

Password: itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite

[Guest Morpheous Erebos]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Incarnations_of_immortality

 

Here. I want an RP on this, but I have NOTHING. Nada. Zip. Squat. lol

[Spartan919]

Okay, I read the sample. Here's my challenge entry.

 

[spoiler=7{Advanced}{PG-16}{Accepting, Not Started}]

[spoiler=Rules (MUST READ)]1. No spamming

2. No flaming

3. No OOC only posts

4. Posts MUST BE at least 3 lines long, this is advanced

[spoiler=Plot] It is the year 2021. In the last twelve years, the U.S. government has crumbled. A group, calling itself only "7," has risen up and taken their place. Gangs, clubs, factions, even families, rebelled at this, and the country became a war zone. Now, a group of terrorists has sprung up, and it is up to 7 to extinguish them before they destroy the U.S. altogether.

 

[spoiler=Facts]There are three factions: 7, Foreign terrorists, and internal terrorists. 7 fights alone, but their numbers are many. You will be either an agent, a terrorist, or a "7-soldier." The first and last are ranks in 7, and obviously, the second is for terrorist groups. Agents do all the backstage work, research, interrogation, reports, etc. The 7-soldiers are the "field agents." They go out, arrest, break up fights, etc.

 

[spoiler=Application]Name:

Age:

Faction:

Rank (if in 7):

Appearance (Image accepted):

Personality:

Bio:

 

[spoiler=My App]Name: John Spokes

Age: 30

Faction: 7

Rank (if in 7): Agent

[spoiler=Appearance (Image accepted):]

 

Personality: Cold, uncaring, only wanting to finish the job.

Bio: John Spokes never thought he would join 7. His family had been in the internal terrorists, plotting against 7. But in 2014, he learned that his parents had died in a bombing run. He had thought it was 7, but he learned later that it was a group of terrorists (he never learned which ones). He vowed vengeance for his parents, and applied to 7 a month later. Thanks to his ruthlessness, Spokes quickly rose through the ranks, and soon gained a position of high power.

 

[spoiler=Accepted][spoiler=7]Spartan919 - John Spokes

[spoiler=Foreign Terrorists]

[spoiler=Internal Terrorists]

 

 

 

[Guest Lily]

Account Name: Łövëły Süccübüs #2.

RPing Time: Around 10 months

[spoiler=Sample Post:]

The only sound that could be heard echoing was the sound of a clock... Tick... Tock... Tick... Tock... That was when Susan awoke. Her eyes fluttered open, and her head surged in pain as she managed to open them fully. Trying again, she opened them, seeing only a pitch darkness in front of her. She threw her arms about her recklessly, trying to find a wall or hard object to lean upon. This continued to happen for a fair amount of time, until she swung her arm into a solid material. Screaming, she staggered backwards, plummeting herself into the darkness that she had not bothered to explore. She let out slight wimpering noises, lost, alone, afraid... Knowing that her phobia was getting the best of her. She spun around and ran forwards, trying to find the source of the solid material yet again. Darkness was always in front of her, a veil over her sight, and would never move from that spot. As she continued to run, she hit the solid material at such a force, she flung herself backwards and into a feebel position on the floor, nearling the icy grasp of unconsciousness once again. Rest, my child... was the sound that echoed through Susan's mind as she closed her eyes and let the icy grasp of unconsciousness envelop her.

 

Currently Active RPs: None, hoping to get back into making some more soon.

Password: itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite

[Wuu.]

Account Name: Da LT

RPing Time: Since i joined i was a RP whore, not so much now.

Sample Post: Jiro grabbed the hilt of his blade while looking into the demon's eyes "This is it..." He whispered, he was ready for the battle and charged in, yelling like a barbarian "Haaa!" He furiously cut the demon in half, his face covered in blood, he was really exhausted because the charge used up the small amount of energy he had left slaughtering the demon's minions. "I think i'm going for a small nap." His eyes slowly closed and he fell to his knees, falling in a deep slumber.

Currently Active RPs: None, i gotta be accepted into one i signed for

Password: itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite

[bury the year]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Incarnations_of_immortality

 

Here. I want an RP on this' date=' but I have NOTHING. Nada. Zip. Squat. lol

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Hmm... Looks interesting... I'll see if I can come up with some AU settings.

 

And all other members are accepted. Get cracking on that challenge~

[Wuu.]

What about Fenrir's Monster Hunter RP?

[Davok]

Account Name: Davok

RPing Time: Around two years

[spoiler=Sample post (I don't have enough time to write an entirely new one up D:, so this will have to do] Pain.

 

The concept was not new to the monster. It had suffered it plenty, from feeling the roar and licking of fire up his head and onto his shell, to a swift slash of a scythe, sending it reeling backwards into blackness. The dull, numb blackness that submits it's victims to death as their bodily fluids slowly etch their way into the ground like a grim tapestry. Oh, yes. The monster knew it well. Pain filled him, embraced him, beckoning him closer and closer... to madness. The creature lashed out at the pain, tired to fight it, and the pain relished into his being as the flames swirled out of his mouth, licking up walls and buildings, running through the grass and climbing the trees, as if attempting at all costs to escape.

 

Escape the pain. The monster roared once more, tuning up the flames until they lapped at his skin, embracing him, beckoning him. The heat maximized the pain, and the monster yelped and ran, letting out a sudden jump and spinning his shell in a Whirling Fortress, to run, to escape the pain. Blood dripped down from his head wound into his eyes, and the monster blinked it back. It turned, looking up at his masterpiece, and inferno, destroying, consuming, eating the very fibers of the house. But the pain kept the monster from observing the masterpiece.

 

He turned, and ran. Away from the pain. But the pain pursued him, and it was faster. Soon the pain was licking at his temple once more. Noise. Slow, and quiet, until finally erupting in a shrill orchestra of tears. The monster turned and saw the source of the noise. A child, crying. The tears welled up in it's eyes, tears dripping down his face. The monster almost felt pity for the creature. But then the noise. The noise greeted the pain, embraced it, and sharpened it to a fever pitch. It was just so annoying! Then the boy turned to the creature, and gasped in disbelief. Then the boy screamed. The pain was at it's height now.

 

"Bowser!"

 

The monster roared, the pain overcoming him, pushing him over the brink. With claws, the monster swiped. Swiped at the boy and the pain. Slashed until the noise stopped. Then the pain deafened, and the monster let out a moan of pain.

 

And Bowser, King of the Koopas, marched off into the forest.

WARNING: Pretty mature, those who are squeamish would probably not want to read the Example. D:

Currently Active RPs: None at the moment, actually. D:

Password: itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite

[Wuu.]

Oh shyt, it's god!

[Classic]

Account Name:Gefhx

RPing Time: 2 weeks (lmao!)

[spoiler=Sample Post:]

"Well i can say that didn't end with a bang!" Austin said obviously in a joking mood

 

*Austin looked around*

"i guess this wood be a good place to set camp because during that fite we made a clearing.....a Giant ditch......and a miniature cave on the side of that mountain."gefhx says beginning to become calm again

 

 

 

Password:"itsafourthruleandrinnedoesn'tbite".

Currently Active RPs: Gifted(note on this RP:it has not changed to advanced tag yet because the owner has not been online.)The 1000 year war, FTA club RP

[Wuu.]

Can you do me a favor and check out Way Of Kokoda

 

A couple of experienced RPers said it looked good but it died quickly, now i made a remake, please check.

[Spartan919]

I am signing up for your RP right now. Some things you need: your app, a list of accepted people, and maybe rules.

[Wuu.]

My app will get posted as soon as someone joined up.

Rules are already there.