thanonyx Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 For those of you who read the old version of this, my sister and I are adding a story behind the duel, for we forgot to do so the last time. These events take place near the end of season 1 of Sailor Moon. Enjoy! After all of the Sailor Senshi and Yugi's friends had fallen to the power of Queen Beyrl only Sailor Moon and Yugi were left standing. They headed for Queen Beyrl's throne room where she and Darian were. The moment Sailor Moon and Yugi had arrived Queen Beyrl had struck Darian down. Filled with grief, Sailor Moon ran to his side in tears and as Yugi looked upon them, his heart filled with burning determination, activated his Millenium Puzzle and shouted, "Beyrl! How can you do such things! You have torn 2 loving souls apart! I cand stand to see you commit these attrocities anymore! It's time to duel Beyrl!" The wicked queen accepted and it was on. Yugi Muto vs. Queen Beyrl Yugi's turnSets 1 monster in defense modeBeyrl's turnBeyrl Summons Archfiend Soldier(1900/1500) in Attack mode.Archfiend Soldier attacks Yugi's face-down monster, Marshmallon(300/500).Marshmallon is not destroyed and Beyrl loses 1000 Life Points. (Beyrl 3000)Sets 1 card.Yugi's turnYugi tributes Marshmallon for Des Voltsgalph(2200/1700).Beyrl activates her face-down trap, Trap Hole, which destroys it.Sets 2 cards.Beyrl's turnBeyrl summons Hannibal Necromancer(1400/1800).Attacks with both monsters but Yugi activates Mirror Force and destroys them both.Beyrl activates Monster Reborn and brings back Yugi's Des Voltsgalph.Yugi's turnYugi summons Big Shield Gardna in defense mode.Beyrl's turnBeyrl plays Shield Crush and destoys Big Shield Gardna.Attacks directly with Des Voltsgalph.Yugi activates Shrink so it's attack points are halved. (Yugi 2900)Sets 1 card Yugi's turnSummons Mystical Elf(800/2000) in defense mode.Activates Magical Dimension and tributes Mystical Elf to Summon Dark Magician(2500/2100) and destroys Des Voltsgalph.Dark Magician attacks directly but Beyrl activates Negate Attack.Beyrl's turnBeyrl Plays 1 card in defense mode.Yugi's turnYugi summons Obnoxious Celtic Guardian(1400/1200).Dark Magician attacks Beyral's face down monster, Emperor Sem(1300/2200)Obnoxious Celtic Guardian attacks directly. (Beyrl 1600)Sets 1 card Beyrl's turnPlays Card of Sanctity so both players draw until the have 6 cards.Plays Dark Hole which destroys Yugi's monstersActivates End of the World and tributes her Cosmo Queen to Ritual Summon Ruin, Queen of Oblivion.Ruin attacks Directly (Yugi 600) Yugi's turnYugi plays Swords of Revealing Light so that Beyrl can't attack for 3 turns.Sets 1 monster and 3 cards. Beyrl's turnPassesYugi's turnSummons Breaker the Magical Warrior(1600/1200) and adds a Spell Counter to it which gives it 300 ATK (1900/1200) Beyrl's turnActivates Heavy Storm which destroys all of Yugi's spells and traps.Attacks Breaker. (Yugi 200)Attacks Yugi's face down monster, Gazelle King of Mythical Beasts(1500/1200) Yugi's turnActivates Pot of Greed and Draws 2 cards.Activates Monster Reborn to revive Dark Magician and attacks Ruin. (Beyrl 1400)Sets 1 card. Beyral's turnBeyral activates Premature Burial and pays 800 Life Points (Byral 600) to revive Cosmo Queen(2900/2450).Cosmo Queen attacks Dark Magician but Yugi activates Spellbinding Circle which stops the attack and reduces Cosmo Queen's ATK by 700 (2200/2450).Sets 2 cards. Yugi's TurnYugi activates Fiend's Sanctuary to summon 1 Metal Fiend Token(0/1000).Activates Stronghold the Moving Fortress(0/2000).Tributes all 3 to Summon Slifer the Sky Dragon(X000/X000).Since Yugi has 4 cards in his hand Slifer ATK is 4000.Slifer attacks Cosmo Queen.Queen Beyral Attampts to activate Sakuretsu Armor but Slifer is unaffected.Slifer destroys Cosmo Queen. (Beyrl 0) Yugi wins!Yugi wins! After her defeat, Queen Beyrl fell to her knees in shock. As Yugi stood over her he said, "You can never overcome a heart that is willing to right wrongs an triumph over evil, and that means you." Sailor Moon's tears of sorrow soon turned to tears of joy because, as if by magic, Darian started to come around. After he stood up he thanked Yugi and Sailor Moon for clearing his mind and saving his life. But afterward Queen Beyrl dissapeared to attain more power to defeat the Sailor Senshi and the great duelist who defied her. And the rest is history... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Uh... this is still bad. Maybe you should look at something else first, like maybe my Wild West Bob story on the forum. It may help you get better at writing stories, especially since this one was crappily thrown together. Sorry, but it's true, but if you could make more than just a one-shot, make a reason for these guys to be in the same universe together, show just how they got into this specific mess, why the Sailor gals can play Yu-Gi-Oh, and overall improve your writing skills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAEGING D0GKING Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 And why did they duel It needs a better startBut Nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted November 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 I know it's kind of bad but it's still in the experimental stages. I just wanted to introduce the idea first. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted November 28, 2009 Report Share Posted November 28, 2009 Its ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 Still not what a fanfic is supposed to look like.Show, don't tell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted November 29, 2009 Report Share Posted November 29, 2009 I didn't notice that you still haven't changed or researched the fact that you mistaked spellbinding circle with shadow spell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted November 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 I didn't notice that you still haven't changed or researched the fact that you mistaked spellbinding circle with shadow spell. I told you last time. I'm using the anime effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted November 30, 2009 Report Share Posted November 30, 2009 uuummmmeven the anime effect, it's still wrong. please know your cards. By the way put stuff in paragraph form. much easier to read And start with a plot. If you want organize your thoughts in a outline before you start writing. And You Spelled Queen Beryl's name wrong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted December 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 uuummmmeven the anime effect' date=' it's still wrong. please know your cards. By the way put stuff in paragraph form. much easier to read And start with a plot. If you want organize your thoughts in a outline before you start writing. And You Spelled Queen Beryl's name wrong[/quote'] No.1 That IS the anime effect. Look it up. I'm using it for plot purposes because Yugi doesn't have Shadow Spell. No. 2 Is it spelled B-E-R-Y-A-L? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LuffyLaxer Posted December 1, 2009 Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 look in my post. Beryl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted December 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 look in my post. Beryl O.K. It's B-E-R-Y-L Got it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
六兆年と一夜物語 Posted December 2, 2009 Report Share Posted December 2, 2009 No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmallieBigs Posted December 3, 2009 Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 I think this is allright but against the rules Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
六兆年と一夜物語 Posted December 4, 2009 Report Share Posted December 4, 2009 Well, since "No." didn't define what I meant, this is the truth. - What's their motive?- Where are they dueling?- What's their relationship?- ETC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Well' date=' since "No." didn't define what I meant, this is the truth. - What's their motive?- Where are they dueling?- What's their relationship?- ETC.[/quote'] We're working on it. We have to to things besides this too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 5, 2009 Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Stop rewriting this and start all over.Script format is illegal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted December 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2009 Stop rewriting this and start all over.Script format is illegal. nyeh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted December 6, 2009 Report Share Posted December 6, 2009 Im bored oh well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 7, 2009 Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Stop rewriting this and start all over.Script format is illegal. nyeh? Dontcha nyeah me.Needs more storyline and description.Where's Weather Report when you need him? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted December 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2009 Stop rewriting this and start all over.Script format is illegal. nyeh? Dontcha nyeah me.Needs more storyline and description.Where's Weather Report when you need him? I said we're working on it! God, we have lives you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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