Sora Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 [align=center] I'm still learning, but I'm really sure this is a lot better than my last! I learned how to use opacity and stuff, still need to learn Flow though. I can't think of anything to help flow in a certain direction. But still, harsh CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is appreciated! Here it is, what do you think? Be brutal if you want.I was going to original make dash marks behind him, but that left the left side really bare. I'd really appreciate Tips and Stuff too. Thanks again. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Blending needs some work and overall very simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 But its better than my last right? Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+Jono Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 ew@colour scheme. It's too bright and hurts my eyes as well as being a strange colour. Also, to achieve flow you could use C4Ds or make those brushes in the background go in the same direction as the nun-chuck. The render is also very LQ and you shouldn't use opacity effects like those in a tag like that. Overall a not-very-good-looking and simple tag. Read some tutorials, they teach you how to use C4Ds, lighting, depth and flow correctly as well as showing you how to use a certain style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Ok, thanks. Man it sounds so complicated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Energy Posted November 26, 2009 Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Very simple and boring. Lacks basically everything, at this stage I can't really give you advice coz it lacks so much. But you should follow some tutorials. Don't think your hopeless though, everyone starts off somewhere, just keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted November 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2009 Ok thanks. But where do I find tutorials? Well in the Tutorial Section obviously.. lol ok, thanks again guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Energy Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 Ok thanks. But where do I find tutorials? Well in the Tutorial Section obviously.. lol ok' date=' thanks again guys.[/quote'] There's alot of tutorials on devientart, that's where I got my first tutorials from. There are alot of good tutorials for download in the tutorials section too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 meh...it is boringno depth no blendingit lacks on the basic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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