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There's so much text for this, we had to split it into 2 posts lol :P (we are working on getting everything up, do not worry)

Owners are me and Magnet, PM us if you have any questions (no stupid ones please -_-)

[align=center][Spoiler=[b]RULES[/b]]
All YCM and RP Rules apply!
Please read everything through before posting!
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[Spoiler=[b]PLOT[/b]]
[i]Eons ago, the land of Ahrklit was created by whom no one knows. Four races flourished under the creation - the humans, the elves, the Thyrakks and the Espiritii. Around this time, six dragons, each a controller of a different element, were also born. For the first 500 years, everything was peaceful, until a disturbance was felt. An argument had taken place, but who had the dragons argued with? Suddenly they began to rule this world through tyranny.

Ahrklit was in chaos. The world became corrupted, trust and friendships between different races were collapsing, and the dragons were at the heart of it all. Generations after generations, groups swore to take down the dragons, but they have never succeded to hurt even one. Now, years after the peacetime has been long forgotten, a new band of heroes will emerge to take down the dragons...[/i]
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[Spoiler=[b]APPLICATION[/b]]
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[Spoiler=[b]ACCEPTED APPLICATIONS[/b]]
[Spoiler=Nani, Master Red]
Name: Nani
Title: -
Called/Pet Name: -
Gender: Male
Age: newborn
Race: Espirituu
Sub-Race: -
Appearance: As an Espirituu his appearance is consisting of his clothes. He wears an old wizard’s hat made of straw, with several small holes in it, a big old navy blue jacket with dark blue buttons which apparently is too big for him as when he raises his arms part of the sleeves (approx 10 cm) are hanging down, empty. Under the jacket he has a plain white shirt with some stains of what appears to be dirt on it as well as a pair of black leggings. He has a handkerchief tied around his neck, covering most of the part between the shirt and the hat, in this small dark area you can sometimes see two small glowing balls of yellow which probably would be his eyes. On his feet he has two large boots which the pants are tucked neatly into and whenever he actually manages to get his hands out of the jacket they are cover with a pair of ragged brown leather gloves, similar to the ones farmers and blacksmiths wear while working.
Class: as of now, none. But as all Espiritii he is destined to follow the path of a sorcerer or Alchemist.
Personality: As he is a newborn, he is very curious at everything around him, wanting to examine everything around him closely. He is easily amazed with things and kind of naïve (a feature that will disappear more and more as he learns.. and as he is an Espirituu he will learn FAST!). He is not frightened very easily but can get very baffled with things he does not understand, thus causing him to stare at it for a longer amount of time. He has no understanding of right and wrong and has “sticky fingers” wanting to touch basicly everything he sees so he can examine it further.
Bio: None, his story has just begun so there is nothing to tell as of now.
Weapon: -
Weapon Discription: -
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[Spoiler=Magnet's Characters]
Name: Uugokk Grok'raah
Title: Throkk
Called/Pet Name: Hon'rahkk Throkk (Honoured Throkk)
Gender: Female
Race: Thyrakk
Sub-Race: Uukgragg
Age: 170
Appearance: She's unusually tall for a Thyrakk, almost 8 feet tall, and her skin has a reddish hue to it. Her black hair reaches down to her waist, and her eyes are almost cyan. She is noticably more muscular than most females. She wears a bronze chestplate and a matching loose chain-mail skirt with several stripes of metal on top. She rarely carries her club with her, and she wears her brass knuckles on her fists. As a sign to show she is the Throkk, she wears an elegently made silver circlet on top of her head.
Class: Knight
Personality: She is extremely vicious and pompous. She has a short temper and, when in a great rage, unleashes her anger by hitting other Thyrakks. Despite this, she is good with leading her colony. She's demanding in the sense that she wants to have a worthy mate, and despite seeing males after males battling to win her heart, she won't consider them worthy enough unless they are the undefeated champion for more than five mating seasons in a row.
Bio: Uugrokk was born to the notorious Throkk Uugraah, who was one of the best Throkks of her generation. Uugrokk took inspiration from her mother and followed her commands almost to every word, hence her excellent leadership skills and her personality. When Uugrokk's mother lead half the males in their tribe in an attempt to slay one of the dragons, her mother was the last Thyrakk of the unsuccessful party to be killed. Upon hearing the news, Uugrokk was immediately made Throkk, and she has since then been thirsty to kill the dragon in revenge.
Weapon: A heavy club, spiked fists, and a ballista when serving for the army
Weapon Discription: The core of her club is made from the traditional wood material, but it is armoured in heavy metal places and has lethal two inches-long spikes prodding from each plate, so there is a total of about sixteen spikes on it. Wrapped on the handle are black leather stripes.
Uugokk's spiked fists are basically very firm brass knuckles but with added spikes, also two-inches long. The knuckles are a distinctive silver.


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Name: Estanlya (literally Beautiful Voice)
Title: The Fair Charmer
Called/Pet Name: N/A
Gender: Female
Race: Elf
Sub-Race: Wyarkara
Age: 29
Appearance: Estanlya stands at about 182cm, and is quite skinny. She has rich auburn hair tied in a high ponytail, and pale violet eyes. Her jawline is sleeker and her chin is pointier than the typical Wyarkara. However, her body is muscular, though it is less prominent. She often wears a flowing rose-pink robe with a leaf-green overskirt, which is overlapped by an amethyst-purple overcoat, which is cropped around the hem so the overskirt and the robe have longer hems. She has gold earrings in her ears, and a decorated gold and ruby pectoral around her neck. She also has golden bangels on her arms, which jingle whenever she moves her arms.
Class: Charmer
Personality: Estanlya's nature is as beautiful as she looks. She's a very gentle elf, who is quite considerate for other people and not just herself. She has a very optimistic personality, and she likes to help people as best as she can. She rarely gets angry, but when she is, she becomes extremely aggressive, which is why she tends to anger herself as much as she can before she has to go into battle.
Bio: Estanlya was born to a Charmer mother and a Sorceror father. She was immediately recognised as a Charmer by her mother, and so she was brought up learning the techniques to being a successful Charmer, as well as taking up singing lessons to train her vocals (her mother could tell she had talent for singing). Although her father was originally disappointed his daughter wouldn't be following in his footsteps, he soon accepted the route she was being made to take, and was soon proud of his own daughter. When Estanlya turned 21, she was accepted into the army as an official Charmer.
Weapon: Chakrams
Weapon Discription: She carries a pair of silver chakrams with flowers ornately decorated on the blades. The crimson handles are left undecorated, and there are pink silk strips tied around the handles, which purposely trails. [/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Virgil, Stein-Hakase]
Name: Virgil
Title: N/A
Called/Pet Name: N/A
Gender: Male
Age: (please send)
Race: Human
Sub-Race: Shadanaar
Class: Assassin
Appearance: (http://thekumite.deviantart.com/art/Virg...-90587500)
Personality: he's quiet, he barely if ever talks, he has extraordianry sword weilding skills and also gets done the job he is given, he kills targets and even clients if he sees fit, hard to get along with, but he has a gentle side, for what though......is still unanswered
Bio: History will be revealed as the story goes on
Weapon: Katana (aka Yamato)
Weapon Discription: a standard type of katana, it has a dark aura about it and significant strengh along with the ability to cut easily threw tough kinds of material[/Spoiler]
[Spoiler= Lucia, Andx]
Name: Lucia Yule
Title: The Maiden of Thunder
Called/Pet Name: N/A
Gender: Female
Age: 21
Race: Human
Sub-Race: Mystikia
Appearance:
Class: Sorceror
Personality: Lucia is often happy though distant. She observes things and quietly smiles. She never loses this calm except in the worst situations.
Lucia's family was the only Mystikia family in her town. Though different, they were never persecuted for being different; the people had too much to worry about to hurt others. Lucia realized that people were suffering very early on in her life. The farm lands were constantly damaged and criminals ran rampant through their town.

Though she was quiet about it, she wanted very much to help the people. She Began to train around age 12 in the magical arts. Being a Mystikia made it quite easy to learn and her master was happy to have such a skilled student. His only hope was that she would help others with her power. Though he didn't live much longer after teaching her she did live up to that hope. At age 18 she began to drive the criminals away from their town and soon the town was able to have decent harvests.

No longer worrying about the people dying of starvation, the people were able to finally form their own guard and Lucia's services was no longer required. At age 19 she decided to travel around the various towns and to help the people there. She learned how to use a Yumi bow to extend the range of her magic. She went around and began stopping criminals where they appeared. Due to her consistent use of lightning magic, it was the result of excelling in wind magic, she unintentionally earned herself the title of "The Maiden of Thunder". The people of small towns, though they couldn't recognize her by sight, were excited when the signs of her work surfaced in their towns.

Lucia knew what she was doing was good but that there was also a far greater evil on the land; the dragons. She began to train at age 20, she's currently age 21, to eventually fight one of the dragons. As she knew she couldn't do it alone, she began to look for partners. She's driven to defeat the dragons and restored peace to Ahrklit.
Weapon: Yumi Bow
Weapon Discription: Very long bow that is 140 cm long, it's supposed to be as long as the user but that was a bit too much for Lucia. Used to fire arrows long distances. Lucia mostly uses the bow as a way to carry the effects of her magic farther than they could normally; as in she casts the spell on the arrow and fires it.[/Spoiler]
[Spoiler=Kent, Awesome66]
Name: Kent Estworthy
Title: What is this for?
Called/Pet Name: What is this for?
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Race: Human
Sub-Race: Shadanaar/Vanaar
Appearance: A black haired, tall young man with a scar on his right eye, art on top and part on the bottom, with the rest of it on his eye lid. His eyes are black like that of an onyx, and is about 175 cm, and 75 kilograms. His hair is spikey, but also goes down half his neck. His bones are strong, and not too skinny, allowing him to take pain. The teeth beside his two front teeth on the top row are large and sharp. His figure is somewhat muscular, but nothing to really brag about.
Class: Assassin
Personality: He is often wise and knowledgeable when it comes to life and how it works, after having quite the revelation from his past. He is often modest, but sometimes jokes around with a fake ego. However, he is kind of a split personality. When you first meet him, he will often be quiet, and wait things out. He will simply analyze how everyone acts, and adapt accordingly. He is eccentric at sometimes though, and is often gluttonous.
Bio: His father was a Shadanaar, and his mother was a Vanaar. An assasin killed both his parents, and took him in. He was trained to be an assasin, to be stealthy, quick, and deadly. He learned to analyze and conclude, he learned battle strategies and mental logic. He used these skills to kill whoever he was told to kill. Eventually, the sight of his victim's blood became similar to his parents whenever he saw it, and became insane.

He began playing mind games with his victims, sick and twisted mind games. They turned his victim's brains upside down, and eventually his victims took on his insanity before their innevitable death. However, he was given a day off, and he sat. He thought and thought until he could not think anymore. He had a revelation, that what he was doing was wrong, everything he was trained to do was wrong.

So he swore on his life that he would never shed a drop of human blood for sick purposes anymore.
Weapon: A curved blade, with an insignia engraved on the handguard that went only halfway around his hands. It had a black bird on it, and it reminded him of what he had done. It was a curved sword, though the back of it was not curved. It was not too heavy, and was not too wide, but was medium length. He used the weight of his blade to allow for easy, quick, and fatal strikes.[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Baraeron, Kuro no Keiyakushu]
Name: Baraeron Richter Orcle
Title: Puppeteer
Called/Pet Name: Aeron, Richter.
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Sub-Race: Shadanaar
Age: 20
Appearance: Aeron is about 5'2(*) with unkempt bright red hair. His unique hair color often gets him stares and other unneeded attention. His attire is composed of a dress shirt, pants, and shoes. The dress shirt is a light grey, his pants a dark blue, and his shoes a black. He has green colored eyes, and is lightly tanned.
Class: Summoner
Personality: Aeron is a calm fellow, very calculating. He doesn't take action unless it involves him, and even then he doesn't do much. Given his class, he's very relaxed in practically every situation.
Bio: It's often said that Aeron is the descendant of a demon. Given his red hair, and chilling atmosphere, it could be said he was a demon's child. Well sure, in part he could of had demon blood. It also explains his potency for magic; and how he could summon creatures with ease. At around the age of 13, he was able to summon an imp. While it wasn't anything special, it took skill to summon a creature from a different domain. He grew up nicely, with a wise teacher and intelligent neighbors; not to mention the fact that his mother, a widow, was rich.
Weapon: n/a
Weapon Description: n/a[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Thalanias, Łövëły Süccübüs #2]
Name: Thalanias Darklego
Title: Fetish Mistress
Called/Pet Name: Fiebe
Gender: Female
Race: Elf
Sub-Race: Felya Senalya
Age: 19
Appearance: Here
Class: Sorceress
Personality: Often a rather upbeat girl that is never willing to let one of her friends get hurt, she often lets out to much anger at once if she becomes TO angry. She is easily frightened, and is often one of those that would run away from her fears than face them.
Bio: Thalanias was once a member of a royal family in an elven village, with her being the princess of it. She was an arrogant brat back in those times, and the villagers did anything they could to get rid of her. At the age of 12, the villagers finally had enough of her and threw her out of the city, along with her family, leaving them penniless and shelterless. They managed to survive for another 3 years in the wilderness, before her father was attacked by a wolf in a forest and everyone knew he wouldn't last the night. Upon his deathbed, he gave Thalanias the Cobra Emerald Staff, which was used as his walking stick. She is talented in the arts of seductive magic, and can easily make most boys (and some girls) fall in love with her, as she had practiced day and night on her brothers and sister. Her staff is worth alot of money, and so Assassins are often after her for her staff.
Weapon: Cobra Emerald Staff
Weapon Discription: The Cobra Emerald Staff was given to Thalanias by her father. Dependant upon the emotion that she is feeling upon the moment she uses it, it amplifies the magic of the same kind as the emotion. It isn't a very good weapon for melee. It's appearance is a small emerald implanted in the top of an oak tree branch, with carvings on it for each person that has obtained it.[/spoiler]
[Spoiler=Shina, Horologia]
Name: Shina Ravens
Title: N/A
Called/Pet Name: Nargeling (A lich she is casting sometimes)
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Sub race: Vanaar
Age: 18
Appearance:
http://media.photobucket.com/image/red%2...0or%20goth
/AnimeGirl31.jpg 1.75m and 64 kg
Class: Necromancer
Personality: A cold and cruel person, loyal but trys to get what she want. Even if she haves to hurt other people
Bio: Shina spent a lot of time on the study of human anatomy. She is possesed by the idea to create a perfect, immortal and intelligent beeing. And the perfect beeing would be one of the dragons. So she needs a dead dragon to revive him under her controll. She learned the forbidden art of necromancy to reach her goal. Shina allready have a proper minion (Her lich), wich is her only real friend too.
Weapon: Whip
Weapon Discription: A long lether whipe with thorns. She use it most times if the creatures she castes with her necromancy dont want to obey her, or if they try to kill her.[/Spoiler]
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[Spoiler=[b]Known Dragons and Their Whereabouts[/b]]
Amath, Somewhere by the West Coast
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[spoiler=[b]RACES[/b]]

[spoiler=[b]Humans[/b]]

Self explanatory.

[spoiler=[b]Human Sub-Races[/b]]

[spoiler=[b]Vanaar[/b]]

The Vanaars are the most common of the humans and can be found in almost every part of the known world. The Vanaars own no special features or powers, but can be trained in all areas thus allowing them to be of any class desired. The Vanaars skin tone varies from olive tan to pale white and they often have high cheek bones. The hair color is varied but it's mostly varying between blonde and dark brown, there are some with black or red hair but these are often mixed with another race.

A Typical male Vanaar is about 170-185 cm. tall, weighing between 70-80 kg. The women are usually shorter, length usually varying between 160-175 cm. tall and weighing between 65-75 kg.

 

[spoiler=[b]Mystika[/b]]

The Mystikas are the rarest form of human and there are only a few hundred throughout the world. A Mystika is very similar to a Vanaar appearance wise with a few exceptions. Their hair is always white, no matter the age or gender and their eyes are completely white, lacking iris and pupil. The Mystikas are born with immense source of magical power and make great success in the Magical Professions. It seems the Mystikas also have less trouble learning magical skills than the typical Vanaar (usually it takes half the time for a Mystika to learn a magical skill than a Vanaar). While being splendid Mages the Mystikas are useless in physical combat and cannot be trained in professions that demand these skills (i.e. warrior).

 

[spoiler=[b]Shadanaar[/b]]

The Shadanaars are a people whom the other races tend to be careful around. They have a history of being thieves, assassins, mercenaries or involved with other kinds of criminality. Most Shadanaars live on an island out in “Storm Ocean” called Shadaanara, but many also live in the larger cities. It’s common that the Shadanaar is working with something shady or criminal (everything from a cheating gambler to robbers and assassins) but it’s also common that they are shopkeepers or innkeepers. The Shadanaars have a kind of sixth sense in seeing whether or not something is fake and how valuable something is (This goes for anything really; animals, clothes, paintings… you name it). This makes it impossible to rip a Shadanaar off and it’s unusual for a shopkeeper to try sell a forged item to a Shadanaar, as he/she would most likely acknowledge that it’s, in fact, a fake. The Shadanaar is quite short in comparison to the other Humans, the men standing at about 160-165 cm. and the women at 155 – 160 cm. They are of darker skin than the Vanaars and Mystika, tanned to dark brown, with darker hair (different shades of Brown and Black) and eye colors (Brown or Green).

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Elves (Felya)[/b]]

The elves (Felya in their own language) are very similar to a human although they are usually taller, sleeker and have pointier ears. The elves also have less (commonly none at all) body hair than a human (i.e. it is very unusual for a male elf to have any facial hair, no matter his age). Even though the elves have long since lost their immortality, they live generally much longer than a human and age slower. An elf often lives for about 130 years; the women usually live for a while longer then the men though.

Take in consideration that an elven character should probably be between 20-55 years old, as anything else can be bothersome. An older character would be more likely to tend to his/her family and a younger character is still looked upon as a child (20 is very young for an elf as well). You are allowed to play older/younger characters if you want, but we will be less likely to allow it, unless you are playing a family or something with other RP’ers.

[spoiler=[b]Elven Sub-Races[/b]]

[spoiler=[b]Felya Senalya[/b]]

The Felya Senalya are the most intelligent of the elven race. They are easily the tallest, with the average Senalya being 180-190cm. They have the slimmest, pointiest ears, and it is rumoured the pointier the ear the more intelligent they are. The Senalya generally have dark coloured eyes and hair, and it has been noted if a Senalya has different coloured eyes (e.g. one green, one blue) or more unusual colours (e.g. pink) they are more likely to be skilled in professions which prioritise magic. It is rare for a Senalya to have light coloured hair or eyes, but it makes no difference if they do. The Senalya take the longest to make decisions, but when they do they tend to be the correct decision, although they have made wrong ones before. They are very well respected even amongst other Senalyae (the plural for Senalya), and are generally called Sena-Felya (literally meaning "wise elf") by the Warrkara and Morïn.Felya Wyarkara

 

[spoiler=[b]Felya Wyarkara[/b]]

The Felya Wyarkara are the toughest, strongest of the three sub-races. They stand in the middle, with the average height between 170-180 cm. They're the only elven race to be more likely to be born with light coloured hair and/or eyes. Generally they have more muscular bodies, broader and tougher jawline, and thicker chins. This applies for both males and females. However with the females some can be born less muscular and more elegant-looking with a strange charisma about them; these females are almost destined to be Charmers, one of the classes (and the only gender-specific class) of the Wyarkara. Wyarkara usually have short-tempers, aggressive personalities and a strong sense of patriotism. They make excellent bodyguards, and most of the Elven Army is consisted of Wyarkaras. They prefer to use weapons such as swords and spears rather than use magic, as magic is not their strongest focal point.

 

[spoiler=[b]Felya Morïn[/b]]

The Felya Morïn are the elves that are most similar to the humans (Vanaar), both in their way of life and appearance. They often live among the humans or in small societies close to Human Towns.

A Morïn male is the only elf that can get any kind of body hair, other than eyebrows, something considered very attractive and as a sign of maturity and power among other Morïn. Body hair is unusual for any Morïn before the age of 30, and they hardly ever manage to get anything else than stubble, goatees or small mustaches beardwise. They can have any eye color and haircolor (although anything darker than light brown is extremely rare). The only way to tell a Morïn apart from the typical Vanaar is that they have slightly pointier ears and they often have thinner faces and bodies (it’s unusual for an elf to be chubby). They are very short comparing to elven standards, being about 160-170 cm. tall (men and women are about the same height). Morïn are very peaceful and believe that any argument can be settled without violence. There are some Morïn warriors however, but they are very uncommon. The Morïn often work as hunters, fishermen or in smaller shops. In a Morïn society money has no value as you shop by trade and you can often stay the night at someones home for free. The Morïn Elves are well liked by all races, except for other elves, as they think they are a disgrace to their own kind for living like humans. Even though they are disliked by the other elves they are not threatened by these, they simply shoot them glances or comments every now and then and tend to leave them alone.

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Thyrakk[/b]]

The Thyrakk looks a bit like a mixture between a Troll and a Human. They are dark skinned and are generally very hairy, their bottom jaw having a pair of fangs that are often visible even though their mouth is closed. Their looks are quite intimidating and there are prejudices against them to be savage unintelligent beasts. These rumors are not true however, a Thyrakk are just as clever and competent as any human but they do not know as much of the outside world as they don’t travel as much. The Thyrakks that do travel often turn out to be very intelligent and knowledgeable. Thyrakks are born without any connection to the Mana Grid and can therefore not use any kind of magic; in return they are very strong and have a better stamina than any of the other races and magic also has a weaker effect on them. The Thyrakks can be found in small colonies scattered throughout the world, they often keep to themselves but the ones living closer to large cities often trade with them. The Thyrakks have their own language called Sak’hra which to the unknowing sounds much like snarling and growling. Thyrakks usually don’t speak another language than Sak’hra but those coming from tribes or colonies that have been in touch with other races (commonly Vanaars) for trades and such often speak two languages. Sak’hra is impossible for all other races to speak, with the exception for the Espirituu that can learn any language. The Thyrakk societies are completely Matriarchal and each colony/tribe is lead by a Throkk, which is the most powerful female in the colony. One reason to why their societies are lead by women is because female Thyrakks are extremely rare, thus giving them much power (especially during mating season, yes Thyrakks have mating seasons).

[Thyrakkian Sub-Races]

[spoiler=[b]Uukgragg[/b]]

The rarer of the two sub-races, Uukgragg is the Thyrakk's word for female. The females have dark skin that is rough and sandpaper-like, and their hair is very dark brown, if not black. Their eyes are usually light-coloured. The females' faces are also more squashed than the males, their chins are broader than males, and their yellow teeth are like very small rocks. The Uukgragg are the most intelligent and physically are as equally strong as men. Their intelligence tends to secure positions such as generals and high commanders.

 

[spoiler=[b]Groggok[/b]]

The more common of the two sub-races, Groggok is the Thyrakk's word for male. They have hairrier skin than the females, and they are generally more muscular and are slightly hunched back. Their faces are longer and their jawline is thicker though not as broad as the 'Uukgraggs'. Like the females, they have dark coloured hair but light coloured eyes. They also have fangs which reach their chins in place of their canines. The Groggok are the thicker of the two sub-races, and they only know how to be extremely macho. Unlike females, they tend to fight with heavy, blunt weapons such as clubs and hammers or even bare fists. A Groggok never ages in appearance after reaching the age of 25; the only way to tell a Groggok's age is to look at their heads, where over time fine black horns develop which they will use to fight other Groggoks in order to be considered worthy by other Uukgraggs. The older a Groggok, the thicker, tougher and shinnier their horns are.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Espirituu[/b]]

The Espirituu are the rarest and weirdest of the races. There are only a few hundred over the world and it’s rare that there are more than 2 in the same town or city. Outside the larger cities it’s rare to find any Espirituu at all. The Espirituus true appearance is unknown as they are always cloaked in clothes and armor, covering their whole body. Even though the Espiritii (plural) technically don’t have an appearance, they always seem to be ridiculously short. They are almost never taller than 100-120 cm. The only way to tell if an Espirituu is male or female is their voice; their voices are always bright with a slight echo to it. But the males have a slightly darker voice. Clothes can also give away their gender as they often follow the local people’s dress code.

The Espirituu do not need food or water, but sleep and rest is essential for their survival. Espiritii are incapable of engaging in physical battle and cannot be in any class than a Magical Class. They are the most advanced magic users and are experts in all areas of Magic, both practical and theoretical. Espiritii are generally very smart and can pick up on any language very fast, generally they have to be in contact with someone speaking the language for about 15 minutes before they can make a conversation and after an hour they speak it fluently. Espirii themselves have no language of their own and communicate with eachother by hugging, thus exchanging memories.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Weapons[/b]]

Each race have preferred weapons which they will handle more gracefully. All races and classes may use any weapon, but if using a weapon that is outside of their preferred area they will handle it more poorly.

[spoiler=[b]Humans[/b]]

Humans can handle any weapon; as long as they can carry it (this means no swords that are ridiculously huge etc.). They prefer to use swords though, both long and short. Daggers are common as well, but are mostly used by children, thieves and assassins. The humans are familiar with long range weapons and most humans can handle either a bow or cross-bow, some can handle both.

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Elves[/b]]

Elves never use a weapon if it has not been forged in the elven way. All elven weapons are very decorative, being a piece of art as well as a weapon. All elven weapons are also very light and thin while being just as hard to break as any “normal” weapon. Elves never use hammers or clubs as they consider them being savage weapons. When it comes to range weaponry the elves generally uses bows. An elven bow is much more effective than any other bow and elves are also the best shots as they have very good vision.

 

[spoiler=[b]Thyrakks[/b]]

Thyrakks are mainly using close combat weapons as they prefer to fight in this fashion. Thyrakks are also known to use their fists and feet during battle, often equipped with knuckles and metal to be more devastating. They mainly use Clubs, Hammers and Axes as their large hands have problems to grasp a sword (daggers are impossible to wield for a Thyrakk), some craft their own swords but it is highly uncommon. When it comes to range weaponry the Thyrakks mainly use throwing axes but they are also known for using ballistic weaponry within the army (no character can walk around with a ballista though).

 

[spoiler=[b]Espiritii[/b]]

The Espiritii cannot wield any weapon as they lack the physical strength to do so. They may be able to pick up a dagger, but they do not have the knowledge how to use it properly and will therefore avoid that. The Espiritii main weapon is magic, period.

 

 

 

 

Link to classes: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-170847-post-3384694.html#pid3384694

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Name: Virgil
Title: N/A
Called/Pet Name: N/A
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Sub-Race: Shadanaar
Class: Assassin
Appearance: (http://thekumite.deviantart.com/art/Virgil-DMC-3-90587500)
Personality: he's quiet, he barely if ever talks, he has extraordianry sword weilding skills and also gets done the job he is given, he kills targets and even clients if he sees fit, hard to get along with, but he has a gentle side, for what though......is still unanswered
Bio: History will be revealed as the story goes on ;)
Weapon: Katana (aka Yamato)
Weapon Discription: a standard type of katana, it has a dark aura about it and significant strengh along with the ability to cut easily threw tough kinds of material

if anything needs be changed let me know, this app s very complicated :)
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Tell me if anything is wrong/needs changing.

 

Name: Lucia Yule

Title: The Maiden of Thunder

Called/Pet Name: N/A

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Sub-Race: Mystikia

Appearance: [spoiler=Pic] 34fmru9.jpg

The pic is accurate for clothing and hair length. However like all Mystikia her hair is pure white as are her eyes. And she does not use a sword.

Lucia stands at 168 cm and weighs 65 kg.

 

Class: Sorceror

Personality: Lucia is often happy though distant. She observes things and quietly smiles. She never loses this calm except in the worst situations.

[spoiler=Bio:]Lucia's family was the only Mystikia family in her town. Though different, they were never persecuted for being different; the people had too much to worry about to hurt others. Lucia realized that people were suffering very early on in her life. The farm lands were constantly damaged and criminals ran rampant through their town.

 

Though she was quiet about it, she wanted very much to help the people. She Began to train around age 12 in the magical arts. Being a Mystikia made it quite easy to learn and her master was happy to have such a skilled student. His only hope was that she would help others with her power. Though he didn't live much longer after teaching her she did live up to that hope. At age 18 she began to drive the criminals away from their town and soon the town was able to have decent harvests.

 

No longer worrying about the people dying of starvation, the people were able to finally form their own guard and Lucia's services was no longer required. At age 19 she decided to travel around the various towns and to help the people there. She learned how to use a Yumi bow to extend the range of her magic. She went around and began stopping criminals where they appeared. Due to her consistent use of lightning magic, it was the result of excelling in wind magic, she unintentionally earned herself the title of "The Maiden of Thunder". The people of small towns, though they couldn't recognize her by sight, were excited when the signs of her work surfaced in their towns.

 

Lucia knew what she was doing was good but that there was also a far greater evil on the land; the dragons. She began to train at age 20, she's currently age 21, to eventually fight one of the dragons. As she knew she couldn't do it alone, she began to look for partners. She's driven to defeat the dragons and restored peace to Ahrklit.

 

Weapon: Yumi Bow

Weapon Discription: Very long bow that is 140 cm long, it's supposed to be as long as the user but that was a bit too much for Lucia. Used to fire arrows long distances. Lucia mostly uses the bow as a way to carry the effects of her magic farther than they could normally; as in she casts the spell on the arrow and fires it.

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@Kuro: no, if you convert into feet and inches, they wont be short at all

@Awesome: No, guns arent allowed

 

And btw Andx, you can fix your class now accordingly:

 

[spoiler=[b]CLASSES[/b]]

[spoiler=Magical Classes]

[spoiler=Alchemist]

Alchemists are wise men and women that study theoretical magic as well as the functions of the Mana Grid, flowing through the land of Ahrklit. They are making a living from crafting and selling magical items, artefacts and potions.

 

[spoiler=Sorcerer]

A Sorcerer is a person using spells in combat and/or for healing purposes. The Sorcerers are often hired as an additional force to the army or at hospitals as healers. Some put up small shops where they sell basic charms for i.e. love and luck to customers. The Sorcerer is commonly specializing in one certain element, Light, Dark, Fire, Water, Earth and Air. There is also a fifth element whom contain all basic spells (love, luck and such).

 

[spoiler=Recommended Races]

Humans, especially Mystika

Elves, especially Senyara

Espiritii

 

[spoiler=Not Recommended Races]

Thyrakk. The Thyrakks are not connected to the worlds Mana Grid and can therefore not use magic. No one trying to make a magic using Thyrakk will be accepted!

 

 

[spoiler=Physical Classes]

[spoiler=Assassin]

self explanatory

 

[spoiler=Warrior]

self explanatory

 

[spoiler=Knight]

Basicly a higher rank of warrior, often having the the title of sir or lady

 

[spoiler=Paladin]

The paladin is very similar to the knight. A paladin has minor magical training in the Light Element (healing) though.

 

[spoiler=Recommended Races]

Humans

Elves (may not select assassin class!)

Thyrakks (only Warrior class, Females can be Knights)

 

[spoiler=Not Recommended Races]

Espiritii

 

 

 

[spoiler=Criminal Classes]

[spoiler=Assasin]

self explanatory

 

[spoiler=Gambler]

A gambler is a person making a living through betting and fun and games. While not really a criminal, they are not well liked by society. They are often excellent cheaters and will do anything to win a game or bet. Most Gamblers have an addiction to gambling and will bet on pretty much everything.

 

 

[spoiler=Thief]

Self explanatory

 

[spoiler=Recommended Races]

Humans, especially Shadanaars

[spoiler=Not Recommended Races]

Thyrakks are too clumsy and heavy to be assassins or thieves, gamblers are okay.

Elves, the elven law strictly forbids thieving and cheating. This makes it impossible for an elf to be a gambler or thief. Assassins are okay, but should be avoided.

 

[spoiler=Others]

"Crafts"

"Hunting, Fishing and Produce"

"innkeepers and shopkeepers"

anything basicly…

 

 

[spoiler=Elf Specific]

Charmer

Charmers are female specific as well as elf specific. A charmer often works as an infiltrator or spy, working behind enemy lines. They are sometimes used as decoys or distractions as well, this is uncommon though as it is very dangerous and risky.

 

 

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Name: Kent Estworthy

Title: What is this for?

Called/Pet Name: What is this for?

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Sub-Race: Shadanaar/Vanaar

[spoiler=Appearance:] A black haired, tall young man with a scar on his right eye, art on top and part on the bottom, with the rest of it on his eye lid. His eyes are black like that of an onyx, and is about 175 cm, and 75 kilograms. His hair is spikey, but also goes down half his neck. His bones are strong, and not too skinny, allowing him to take pain. The teeth beside his two front teeth on the top row are large and sharp. His figure is somewhat muscular, but nothing to really brag about.

 

Class: Assasin

[spoiler=Personality:] He is often wise and knowledgeable when it comes to life and how it works, after having quite the revelation from his past. He is often modest, but sometimes jokes around with a fake ego. However, he is kind of a split personality. When you first meet him, he will often be quiet, and wait things out. He will simply analyze how everyone acts, and adapt accordingly. He is eccentric at sometimes though, and is often gluttonous.

 

[spoiler=Bio:] His father was a Shadanaar, and his mother was a Vanaar. An assasin killed both his parents, and took him in. He was trained to be an assasin, to be stealthy, quick, and deadly. He learned to analyze and conclude, he learned battle strategies and mental logic. He used these skills to kill whoever he was told to kill. Eventually, the sight of his victim's blood became similar to his parents whenever he saw it, and became insane.

 

He began playing mind games with his victims, sick and twisted mind games. They turned his victim's brains upside down, and eventually his victims took on his insanity before their innevitable death. However, he was given a day off, and he sat. He thought and thought until he could not think anymore. He had a revelation, that what he was doing was wrong, everything he was trained to do was wrong.

 

So he swore on his life that he would never shed a drop of human blood for sick purposes anymore.

 

Weapon: A curved blade, with an insignia engraved on the handguard that went only halfway around his hands. It had a black bird on it, and it reminded him of what he had done. It was a curved sword, though the back of it was not curved. It was not too heavy, and was not too wide, but was medium length. He used the weight of his blade to allow for easy, quick, and fatal strikes.

Age: 17

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Damn, I wanted to give my character some revolvers. -sadface-

 

Name: Baraeron Richter Orcle

Title: Puppeteer

Called/Pet Name: Aeron, Richter.

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Sub-Race: Shadanaar

Age: 20

Appearance: Aeron is about 5'2(*) with unkempt bright red hair. His unique hair color often gets him stares and other unneeded attention. His attire is composed of a dress shirt, pants, and shoes. The dress shirt is a light grey, his pants a dark blue, and his shoes a black. He has green colored eyes, and is lightly tanned.

Class: Summoner

Personality: Aeron is a calm fellow, very calculating. He doesn't take action unless it involves him, and even then he doesn't do much. Given his class, he's very relaxed in practically every situation.

Bio: It's often said that Aeron is the descendant of a demon. Given his red hair, and chilling atmosphere, it could be said he was a demon's child. Well sure, in part he could of had demon blood. It also explains his potency for magic; and how he could summon creatures with ease. At around the age of 13, he was able to summon an imp. While it wasn't anything special, it took skill to summon a creature from a different domain. He grew up nicely, with a wise teacher and intelligent neighbors; not to mention the fact that his mother, a widow, was rich.

Weapon: n/a

Weapon Description: n/a

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Name: Thalanias Darklego

Title: Fetish Mistress

Called/Pet Name: Fiebe

Gender: Female

Race: Elf

Sub-Race: Felya Senalya

Age: 19

Appearance: Here

Class: Sorceress

Personality: Often a rather upbeat girl that is never willing to let one of her friends get hurt, she often lets out to much anger at once if she becomes TO angry. She is easily frightened, and is often one of those that would run away from her fears than face them.

Bio: Thalanias was once a member of a royal family in an elven village, with her being the princess of it. She was an arrogant brat back in those times, and the villagers did anything they could to get rid of her. At the age of 12, the villagers finally had enough of her and threw her out of the city, along with her family, leaving them penniless and shelterless. They managed to survive for another 3 years in the wilderness, before her father was attacked by a wolf in a forest and everyone knew he wouldn't last the night. Upon his deathbed, he gave Thalanias the Cobra Emerald Staff, which was used as his walking stick. She is talented in the arts of seductive magic, and can easily make most boys (and some girls) fall in love with her, as she had practiced day and night on her brothers and sister. Her staff is worth alot of money, and so Assassins are often after her for her staff.

Weapon: Cobra Emerald Staff

Weapon Discription: The Cobra Emerald Staff was given to Thalanias by her father. Dependant upon the emotion that she is feeling upon the moment she uses it, it amplifies the magic of the same kind as the emotion. It isn't a very good weapon for melee. It's appearance is a small emerald implanted in the top of an oak tree branch, with carvings on it for each person that has obtained it.

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Fenrir, the following needs to be fixed:

Pet name - pet name is something your character is called. i.e: dave instead of david. Please put his pet in a separate asea (you can add an area for it if you want or put it in bio)

I am unsure on the class thing... Please add that he can only summon creatures of a certain element or only weaker creatures if you want him to be able to summon from different elements. Also take in consideration that summoning takes quite a toll on you as well as being time consuming.

 

Please dont hate me D:


My lovely lady is accepted ;)

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Fenrir' date=' the following needs to be fixed:

Pet name - pet name is something your character is called. i.e: dave instead of david. Please put his pet in a separate asea (you can add an area for it if you want or put it in bio)

I am unsure on the class thing... Please add that he can only summon creatures of a certain element or only weaker creatures if you want him to be able to summon from different elements. Also take in consideration that summoning takes quite a toll on you as well as being time consuming.

 

Please dont hate me D:

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Why would I hate you..? >_>;

 

Didn't know about the pet name, might want to edit that to be clear since both Awesome and I got confused. Which is an accomplishment I assure you. xD

 

As for the Summoning, well he does have demon blood. Magic is like breathing for him, mana is practically his blood. Naturally, he can summon anything to his hearts desire; while the much bigger things take time and energy, something he can't do all the time.

 

Oh, and isn't restricting to element a bit boring? It would make much more sense to limit a mage to magic type, rather than element.

 

Oh, and next time, when you decline a character, could you post why? :P

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Imma edit that xD

Sorry, forgot at first, sorry for that.

As long as he cannot do any other magic but summon i will accept him. :)

The reason to why it has been restrictions to elements is Because i do not want to get the allmighty wizard that can do everything type of character. And each element has to be learned separately as they are all different. Only a espirituu could possibly learn how to use all elements properly as they basicly are children of the mana grid :p but even for them it would take a serious amount of time to do that.

Hope this explained everything well enough :)

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Elemental control isn't the only type of spell. :/

 

Spell Classes:

Abjuration: Shields user and allies from magical/psychical attacks. (Spells that block or shield.)

Conjuration: Magic that summons creatures and allies.

Divination: Magic the allows the user to look forward in time and anticipate what would happen next.

Enchantment: Ether controlling a creature or enchanting an item.

Evocation: Spells that create something from nothing or manipulate energy. (Fireball, lightning, offensive spells.)

Illusion: Self explanatory.

Necromany: Spells that manipulate, create, or destroy life.

Transmutation: Spells that alter the target, whether subtly or overtly.

 

Taken from a DnD guide book. So yeah, that would be the best way to organize your spells. (Don't have to do it, just an idea.)

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Name: Mobius Lycard

 

Title: The Wise

 

Called/Pet Name: Demitri

 

Gender: Male

 

Race: Felya

 

Sub-Race: Felya Senalya

 

Appearance: Demitri is 189 cm tall, and weighs 40 kg. he has long bark brown hair, and his eye color changes with his mood (Pitch Black = Serious, Dark Blue = Relaxed, Dark Green = Average, Dark Red = Angry, Dark Pink = in Love, Romantic, Light Blue = Sad).

 

Class: Sorcerer

 

Personality: Demitri is kind of shy, but if he knows you well enough he will act goofy and layed back. He hates it when him or one of his friends get hurt. His mood can change on a dime.

 

Bio: When Demtri was born, his mother died. Then shortly after wards his father died for an unknown reason. After both of his parents died he was sent off into the forest to fend for himself. He has lived in the forest most of his life with other elves. One of the elves was a very talented blacksmith/woodworker. He made demitri two short swords and a longbow. Over the years he has became very good with them.

 

Weapon: Two sort swords and a longbow

 

Weapon Discription: The swords are 30 cm long and very well crafted but not very artistic. the have black metal blades and bark blue wooden handles. The bow is 76 cm long and extremely well crafted. It is dark blue with black string. it has carvings on the side that resemble plants.

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Yeah but we didn't want to be too specific. And everyone is familiar with the elements thats why we chose that.

 

Bakudude - not accepted. The guy is 189 and weighs 40 kg? That would make him highly unrealistic! I dont get why he would be called demitri when his real name is mobius, but that is not as important (just saying). Fix him so he is more realistic

 

All: i saw that i forgot to add age to the app, please add that to your apps people :)

 

My lovely lady is accepted of course :) that is you lovely succubus ;)

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