Dark Lightning Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 [align=center] [spoiler=Intro]Jael and Jarred are orphan twins. They live with their very awkward and mysterious uncle. They are 16 years old and start noticing some unusual behaviors during a Cresent moon. After a while they decide to tell their best friend, Cameron. Cameron starts to conduct time consuming research on the effects of a cresent moon; What he finds out could change Jarred and Jael's life forever....It could also lead to many adventures. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kendo Fish Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 That's a...really short intro. And also, why's crescent moon capitalized? NEEDZ MOAR...STUFF. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 Seems kinda promising. Bit short though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted December 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 1, 2009 I'll try to make it longer later. The chapters will hopefully be a lot longer. I'm kinda busy and don't really have Internet right now(I'm on the Library computer) but I'll try to get on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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