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is the next episode starting?

 

your sig is way to tall you have to shorten it.

 

no1 else has complained and y does it matter?

btw can i start writing gales part in the next ep.?

 

lol becuase the mods have said so' date=' im not trying to be mean, im just trying to give you a heads up.

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o right i see i might remove the NDShop banner

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right my part of episode 4 (yes you right your own parts)

Ben managed to arrive at school but he was in shock. He saw someone in the playground but completley ingnored him. (Gale)

he was soon trip uped by a bully.

the bully picks up ben's ultimate power at rips it up.

ben steps up and puts his deck in his duel disk.

the bully does the same thing.

bully:4000

Ben:4000

bully goes first and summons kuriboh in deffnce mode

Ben: it is my turn and i summon luster dragon and then equip it with big shot and then lucky iron axe.

attack:2800

now attack.

bully:1400

bully activates heavy storm luster dragon is removed from play and ben gets to draw a card due to lucky iron axe. the bully ends his turn.

ben draws and says: your the strong silent type. well i going to play a card that going to make you talking for a long time and it is celtic gaurdian with 1400 attack it will wipe your life points in a single blow. this is payback for ripping my card. now attack.

bully:0

the bully shouts out ben HOW.. COULD YOU BEAT ME

Ben: because you are a lame duelist.

ben finnaly gets to class but the teacher is not happy.

Teacher:why are you late, because you are in serious trouble. (small silent evil laugh)

to be continued

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Ok here my part ^^

Gale had decided he take a walk to a school to just take a look around. out of the corner of his eye he could see a boy ripping up someones card.

After that the boy who ripped up the card and another boy started dueling.

Gale pretended not to be bothered but he was watching.

near the end the boy shouted "This is pay back for ripping up my card.now attack!."

The winner of the duel ran to his class.

"real shame he's late and he got his card ripped up...i wonder what it was...?"

gale went over to the remains of the card and pieced them together.

ULTIMATE POWER

"hmm...."

"you there! why arn't you in class or in your uniform!!?"

"huh? oh sorry i justcame to look around... just saw a kid rip someones card up."

"GET TO CLASS BOY NOW!!!! AND GET IN YOUR UNIFORM LYING TWERP!!!!"

"look if i duel you and win will you leave me alone? oh and also if i win i get to have a place to sleep"

"fine prove you don't work here!"

DUEL BEGINS!!!

Gale draws.

Gale plays nothing and ends his turn.

"ha! you can't even play a card!"

Teacher draws.

I play Ancient gear soldier!

"where have i heard of that monster before?"

"Attack him directly!!"

Gale takes the hit without flinching.

Gale 6400LP Teacher 8000LP

Gale draws.

Gale plays Return to base:If an opponents monster has attacked you directly send the monster to your opponents deck.Then shuffle the deck.

"no! now i'm open for an attack!"

"well duh..."

Gale summons 7waf914.jpg

"i attack you directly twice"

Gale 6400 Teacher 5000

Teacher draws.

"You know that was a clever move but i have one cleverer!"

Summons Slate warrior and sets two traps.

"Slate warrior attack eagle twins!"

"I activate eagle Formation split:Send Eagle twins to the graveyard to special summon 2 eagle tokens ATK 1500 DEF 1200!"

I attack one of the tokens then!"

Gale 6000LP Teacher 5000LP

Gale draws.

Gale tributes Eagle token and summons Roc from the valley of haze.

"Roc attack his slate warrior!"

"ahh!!"

Gale 6000LP Teacher 4500LP

Teacher draws.

"Its over now boy,I ACTIVATE HEAVEY STORM!"

Two tokens appear on the field.

"wait i know who you are! your Dr Crowler!"

"I have taught you at this school and you don't even know my name! i tribute my tokens and summon ANCIENT GEAR GOLEM!"

"get this over with i want to get unpacked..."

"Golem attack his Roc from the valley of haze!"

Gale 5400LP Dr crowler 4500LP

Gale draws.

"i activate pot of greed!"

Gale draws The birds last hunt and Cyclone Bird.

"I activate the birds last hunt!:Special summon two winged beast type monsters from your graveyard.they are destroyed at the end of the turn."

"so you still can't stop my golem!"

I tribute my two birds and summon CYCLONE BIRD!

"oh..."

"Did you get fired from the acadamy?"

"WHAT DOES THAT MATTER TO YOU! YOUR JUST AN AMATEUR DUELIST!"

"whatever, Cyclone bird attack his Golem!"

Gale 5400LP Dr Crowler 4100LP

Gale ends by setting Birds counter attack.

Dr Crowler draws.

I summon Ancient Gear soldier!

"i then activate Anicent Gear Overload:Half your LP and triple the attack of a Ancient gear Monster!"

Dr Crowler 2050LP

Ancient gear soldier 4200ATK

"Now soldier attack!!!"

"i activate Birds counter attack:When a winged beast is about to be destroyed double the winged beasts attack!

Cyclone bird 6600ATK

"ohno!"

Gale 5400LP Dr Crowler 0

"Now can you show me a place i can stay for the next 5 days?"

END OF GALES PART OF THIS EP.

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Here's my character

Name: Maximus(Max) Yuki

Deck: Gladiator Beast

Star Card: Gladiator Beast Octavius

Duel Spirit: Gladiator Beast Octavius

Relation: Son of Jaden Yuki & Alexis Rhodes and brother of Andrew Yuki (Has Jaden's Deck)

Personality: To make it short, he has Jaden's season 4 personality (serious)

 

After graduation, Jaden became the next Duel King, with Alexis has his Duel Queen. They have two boys, Andrew and Maximus. Andrew, the first born, gets Jaden's Deck, because Jaden soon retires after having his boys. And Maximus makes his own a Gladiator Beast Deck. Max is jealous of his brother Andrew. He and Andrew go to Duel Academy together. Andrew passed with flying colors, while Maximus barely made it. Andrew is in the Obilisk Blue Dorm and Maximus is in Slifer Red Dorm.

 

More is to come...

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Here's my character

Name: Maximus(Max) Yuki

Deck: Gladiator Beast

Star Card: Gladiator Beast Octavius

Duel Spirit: Gladiator Beast Octavius

Relation: Son of Jaden Yuki & Alexis Rhodes and brother of Andrew Yuki (Has Jaden's Deck)

Personality: To make it short' date=' he has Jaden's season 4 personality (serious)

 

After graduation, Jaden became the next Duel King, with Alexis has his Duel Queen. They have two boys, Andrew and Maximus. Andrew, the first born, gets Jaden's Deck, because Jaden soon retires after having his boys. And Maximus makes his own a Gladiator Beast Deck. Max is jealous of his brother Andrew. He and Andrew go to Duel Academy together. Andrew passed with flying colors, while Maximus barely made it. Andrew is in the Obilisk Blue Dorm and Maximus is in Slifer Red Dorm.

 

More is to come...

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don't od the bit about jaden giving the deck. he duels in one of the epsidoes. also it is not based in duel acadmey. so they cant be in it. also you got to make your own star card. anyway if jaden did give his deck to someone he would give it to ben his couson

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Next ep.

Gale had decided to leave his new home (or shed)

to take another look around the school.

He was along the corridor when he heard some screams coming from a classroom he ran to the classroom and found the kid who had beat the bully dueling the teacher. But the teacher was wearing a black cloak...

(DHH begin the duel!)

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Ben:4000

Teacher:4000

Ben: what has happened to you sir. Could it be "the dark master" (evil ben)

but ill go first and summon mystical elf in deffence mode. def:2000

Teacher: it is max to you and i play card destruction which menas we have to discard all the cards in our hand and then we draw the number of cards we discarded.

Ben: hang on you discarded four limbs of exodia but why all you need was one final peisce you would have won.

Max: there is a greater force that exodia than itslef which you are about to see. Now i activate foolish burial and send it's head to the graveyard and then play contract with exodia so i can summon exodia necross in attack mode. attack: 1800

Ben: it can't be that card is almost un stoppable.

Max: yes and it gets stonger each turn.

Ben: you cant attack and it is my turn and i tribute my elf to summon summoned skull and then i equip him with axe of despair which increases his attack by 1000 which makes it 3500 now attack.

Max: You and your head you compleltey forogt about me playing a face downwhich is reverse attack and deffnce which makes summoned skull attack 1500.

Ben:3700

Max: now it is my turn and my exodia attack is now 2300 and he will attack but before that i equip him with my axe of despiar making it 3300.

Ben:ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!

ben:400

a pendant apperars with that eye thing on the melenuim items.

Ben (now with deeper voice): enough max. you have caused to much trouble and i am going to stop it.

Max:who are you?

Ben: i am the spirit of the melenuim pendant. you can call me yami ben and this duel has just begun.

to be continued

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Gale stared at the weird pendent floating in the air.

Somehow he was drawn to it and began walking forwards but he couldn't feel himself do it. he felt like his real self had gone and he had no control over his actions.

"Dark master i bring this body!"

Gale felt drowsy and began to faint when a very strange thing happened.

His cyclone bird appeared and shook him awake.

"???"

Ben wasn't paying attention to Gale as if he was battleing the pendent with his mind.

Gale tried to speak but no sound came out.

Gale thought about all the strange things that had been happening.

"Strange? i wouldn't say strange i'd say duels."

"What?" Thought Gale.

"Your trapped in your own head even your duel spirit can't save you!"

"...so what do i do to get out whoever you are..."

"What do you mean 'whoever you are?' i'm you!"

"Your not..."

"I am actually i'm just your held in secrets, your hatred for others, i am your Millenium Item...I am the Millenium Soul!"

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Yami Ben: now it is my turn and my beleif in the heart of the cards will give me the card i need and i have got the right card which is soul realese.

Max: no my exodia it is going to be destroyed.

Yami Ben: Thats right i remove all the pecies of exodia. then i play graceful charity which allows me to draw 3 cards and discard 2. then i play monster reborn to bring out my flame wizard in attack mode and the equip it with my second axe of despair increasing it attack to a grand total of 4000. not attack take down max with ancient desert fire blast.

max:0

max falls to the grond the black coat dissapears and max turns back to normal but straight after the computer screen go funny and appears with a message.

yami ben i am so happy to see you. here is the proof that the four lost items exist. you and gale will soon be mine and my powers will be maxed.

to be continued in the next episode

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next part for Gale.

"Millenium Soul?"

"Yes and guess what, you can't use it properly!"

"why?"

"If you don't use me i gain control over you but your subconcious fights it!"

"So? good on me"

"The final battle starts here and ends here to see who will have control over Gale!"

Duel Begins!

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"this duel we will have Shadow LP!"

"Whats that?"

"We lose body parts every 1000LP lost!"

"oh...dam..."

"We will have 4000 SLP so our minds will split in quarters!"

Gale draws.

Gale plays Bird guard:You can summon 3 Winged beasts in face-up Defence posistion.Your regular summon is negated after this card is activated.

Gale sets Negate attack and ends.

Yami Gale draws.

Yami gale activates Anti Bird: Destroy all winged beasts on the field.

Yami Gale plays Bird Summoning:Summon any winged beast in your hand.After this card is used your normal summon is negated.

Yami gale summons Flame Cyclone Hawk.

"I attack!!!!"

"I play negate attack!"

"Humph okay your go!"

Gale plays Bird summoning and summons his cyclone bird.

Yami Gale uses quick-play Bird copying:Copy the attack of a winged beast on your opponents side of the field the monster who had its ATK copyed cannnot attack the monster the ATK was given to and vice-versa.

TO BE CONTINUED!

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