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New man on the block... (5 Cards...1 New)


Ryukei

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Welcome to the forums ^_^

 

1. The first tip i can give ya is to try and not distort your picture, the picture you used seems fuzzy/blurry which is never a good thing ^_^

 

2. You should say monster instead of creature.

 

3. Be careful with wording errors such as " from the field to out of play", it should say "from play" and instead of offering you should say "removing" etc etc.

 

But a good first attempt, better then most ^_^

7/10

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The picture is kind of blurry but other than that' date=' I don't see much problems. Pictures aren't that important and the card seems pretty much balanced; 8.5/10

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Pictures rn't important? for the realistic section they are, they give the card not just a look but a feel. They should be as perfect as possible.

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