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Pokémon Mystery Dung: Super Killer Yaks (Latest Issue: I-10; In Which Our Heroes Walk Through a Door)


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Despite the fact that the Pokémon world doesn't have yaks.

 

Trying fanfiction instead of showcase this time. I figure it applies in both places. Mods can move if they want, obviously.

 

[spoiler=Part I: Tiny Useless Dungeon! The Ex-Humans Versus the Team Rocket Expies!]

[spoiler=Issue I-1: Pokémon Need Lives Badly]

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Notae Auctoris:

I - I'm ba-ack! PMDung:SKY is PMDung applied to Explorers of Sky (in case you couldn't tell), with all the comedic skills I've learned since the original applied to it. Expect more developed characters and interesting plots than before, but a similar sense of humor.

II - Feather Edges will be arriving shortly.

 

 

[spoiler=Issue I-2: Levels of Failure]

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I: Feather Edges will show up next issue. Stay tuned!

II: I find it odd that "Welcome to the Black Parade" is treated as emo; it's basically an ode to Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann.

 

 

[spoiler=Issue I-3: The Most Important Question]

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I: Now you're reading PMDung. The he®maphrodite question, FEATHER EDGES OF WIN...

II: If you get the reference, congrats, loyal reader. If not, stick around anyway.

III: Vulpix's (Isis) and Eevee's (Christine) personalities are derived from "Relaxed" and "Jolly," respectively. They're both female.

 

 

[spoiler=Issue I-4: Boring Exposition... OR IS IT?]

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I: I am a hopeless geek. There are at least three references to TV shows in this comic alone.

II: Déjà vu doesn't strike as hard here, since no one read issue 15 of the original anyway, but the line was lifted from there.

 

 

[spoiler=Issue I-5: How Do I Shot Web?]

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I: And so, the adventure begins. Side-scrolling view will start next comic; it's usually used for dungeons, while a top-down view signifies the overworld.

II: The inspiration for Pokémon move-using comes from Worlds Apart, the occasionally poorly-written but plotwise-awesome LoZ self-insert that inspired my writing in the first place (for reference, the self-insert wasn't a Mary Sue). If they want to know what they can do, they can, but they have to learn more moves as they go along.

 

 

[spoiler=Issue I-6: This Issue was Brought to You by the Letter "A""]

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I: It seems uncharacteristically homophobic of me now because you don't know Isis is in the Transparent Closet yet. See? Character development!

II: The Bremen March is from LoZ: Majora's Mask, and while I'm not fond of it, it fit the tone and tune of this issue well. Not a pun, incidentally.

 

 

[spoiler=Issue I-7: At Least He Grasps Its Vulgarity]

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I: If you see any plot holes, don't worry; they'll all be resolved next issue.

II: You're allowed to make jokes in bad taste if you know they're in bad taste.

III: Incidentally, "potty," when used as an adjective, means "insane," as in, "You're driving me potty!" But let's face it — anyone who says that is banned from dating for a year or so after saying it.

 

 

[spoiler=Issue I-8: A Boss Battle -- I Mean, Clearing Up Plot Holes]

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I: "Later Today" = "Tomorrow."

II: This comic actually isn't homophobic. Seriously.

 

 

[spoiler=Issue I-9: Birth of Team Kurotsuki, Part I]

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I: I was in a hurry, so this sucked even for PMD:SKY.

II: Told you "Later Today" = "Tomorrow."

III: The name is indeed fan Japanese; that's intentional.

 

 

[spoiler=Issue I-10; In Which Our Heroes Walk Through a Door]

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I: Feather Edges has only appeared once! NOOOOO!

II: Expect a LONG wait for Issue I-11, if you care at all. My GIMP died before I could finish the text. :(

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Part II: A Dungeon That's Actually Difficult! The Pædo Hunt Begins!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part III: An Actual Job! Why is Skuntank Such a Moron?!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part IV: Expedition of the Useless Bidoof! The Love Interest Arrives!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part V: Blindingly Obvious Traitor Dusknoir! How Do They Not Sense His Evil?!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part VI: Grovyle Versus the Three Guardians! Since Grovyle is Evil, Why is Dusknoir Also Evil?]

 

 

[spoiler=Part VII: Into the Future... er, Present... um, Something! Time Travel is Confusing!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part VIII: Celebi and Grovyle! The Magical Girlfriend Dynamic Backwards!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part IX: Wigglytuff is Awesome, Torkoal is Crusty, Lapras is Too Submissive!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part X: The Last Adventure, Except Not Really! Seriously, This Doesn't Offer Any Closure At All!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part XI: Guild Graduation is Rigged, but Uxie Will Turn the Tides! This Title is Brought to You By "The Slayers!"]

 

 

[spoiler=Part XII: Scizor Makes Us Better Than Wigglytuff Even Though we Aren't!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part XIII: Ancient Conqueror Regigigas! Are We Crossing Over with a Serious Comic?!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part XIV: The Real Last Adventure! Parukia vs Cresselia vs Darkrai vs Uxie!]

 

 

[spoiler=Part XV: One More Final! Manaphy and the Trainers' Onslaught!]

 

 

[spoiler=Special I: Bidoof's Wish Fail]

 

 

[spoiler=Special II: Birth of a Bishonen]

 

 

[spoiler=Special III: Valley Girl and Loudmouth]

 

 

[spoiler=Special IV: The First Competent Exploration Team]

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Mystery Mailing Memo]

Just say so and you can be put on this list to know when the next issue's coming out.

Current List:

RAEG

Nexev

zaneko

 

 

[spoiler=Cameos]

Submit a character and we can stick you in the background. Try and pick a species you'd find in the dungeons if you wanna go on adventures; otherwise, you're stuck frequenting Spinda's Café and the town square.

 

 

[spoiler=Credits]

Chatot ripped by Naokohiro

All other sprites thus far ripped by redblueyellow... I think

Hilltop Zone / Tiny Woods BG by Heavy Megetal

Issues I-1 to I-10: SFX by Cybersonik, horrifically bad renders by me

Issues I-11 onwards: SFX by DarkOverord and RandomTalkingBush

 

 

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Latest strip kind of reminds me of the time Kraka and Baba-kun accidentally broke Plasma Whore's gun. They were bathed in an onrush of plasma and were in a state between life and death for several weeks. When they woke up Boom-Boom informed them that they were cotton candy. Disturbingly, they handled it pretty well. O_o

 

Let me guess, one of Shimon's friends is Toomba?

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You know, after spending months hearing you mention it, I really should get to reading that fanfic. *grumbles and gets back to work attempting to write a well written Godzilla fanfic*

 

Still, good. Reminds me of when I taught Boom-Boom how to play Sploderball.

 

...oh god that was a horrible week. D:

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It's zelda-infinite.com's official fanfic; it shows up a lot more easily there, and it shows a bunch of colors the ff.net version doesn't show.

 

Issue VI out later today.

EDIT: I lied; out tomorrow.

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Mystery Mailing Memo

 

A cameo as Pokemon in the second dungeon (I don't know what, is in that dungeon so I can't choose a Pokemon). He spends this large amount of time building an extremely large death machine but he can't find a plug-in outlet for it and runs away crying. LAter is shown drowning his sorrows in beer at Spinda's cafe (which in his deluded imagination involves forcing a darkrai into a giant beer glass until he drowns to death).

 

Or you know, you can just make a mad scientist mankey who's experiments wind up having obvious flaws.

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Bump. I posted a new issue yesterday (ON TIME, technically).

 

New issue out later today/tomorrow, for anyone who cares (probably no one, based on the comments I'm getting [/selfpity])

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