First Signature (Fujiwara no Mokou)

[Amethyst Phoenix]

I recently decided to learn GFX.

 

Here's my first sig where I really had any idea what I was doing XD

 

Still considering tweaking it around some more.

 

 

 

I look forward to reading your infamously harsh CnC ^_^

[Charizard]

Good for a beginner, I guess you can follow some tutorials to improve.

[Mister Sir]

Squashed render, no depth, red brush is distracting and completely unneeded.

 

But it's yer first, so not too terrible :P

[Amethyst Phoenix]

Squashed render' date=' no depth, red brush is distracting and completely unneeded.

 

But it's yer first, so not too terrible :P

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By squashed, are you referring to how it looks like part of her is cut off by the left edge of the sig? The render I used is actually cut off on the left side that, so I set her right there to hide that. Probably the same end result though.

 

 

Is red brush referring to the smudging I did on the stars, or just the red area in general?

 

I wanted to make the sky red, but keep the moon looking it's usual color, so I colorized that part red, then made the moon's blue glow purple where it hits the red sky. I smudged the stars like that to make them look more like shooting stars.

 

What can I do to add depth? Do I need to pull her down and show more of the shadow?

[Legend Zero]

Render goes off sig? Smudge on right is ewww and cut off by arm. Random flowers on left is no.