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[lugia61617]

-Due to time and life restrictions, I must cancel and delete this fanfic. I may work on it in the confort of my desktop sometime, but I doubt it. Sorry, but I see no point in keeping it here.

[lugia61617]

BTW I'm sure you don't need reminding that you're allowed to comment on this fanfic, y'know. PLEASE, I feel unappreciated.

[senron]

This is pretty good. I can't wait to read more.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

In your signature, I count Pokémon, Sonic, Yu-Gi-Oh!, and... Death Note.

 

Friggin' DEATH NOTE.

 

On the other hand, I can cross over Nanoha and Evangelion, so I really can't talk. This could work. Whether it does or not, though, some representatives of featured shows will have some... fun... with a sardonic running commentary shamelessly ripping off a certain famous TV show. :twisted:

 

For the record, your title reads "Nexus of the End," not "End of the Nexus."

[lugia61617]

Hmmm...bit of a mixed review. Trust me, I had no more room, so the sig picture can't have everything. ...Really? Damn google translate.

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Also, thanks for the support, Senron. If Y-tak helps as Co-Writer it might become easier.

[lugia61617]

I really question why it is I never get any comments....BTW No update yesterday - was too busy.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

[spoiler=Prologue: In the not-too-distant future...]

The Team —

L, from Death Note: An eccentric master detective tasked with defeating Kira. Though he failed, his plans didn't. Loves sweets, hates all other foods. Will be replaced by Light later.

The Titular Sonic the Hedgehog: A drifting loner who's been battling evil for much of his life. He keeps few constant acquaintances, and this may be driving him mad. For all appearances, though, he's simply a very witty and sarcastic hero. Will be replaced by Blaze later.

Mewtwo: A clone created by morally ambiguous people, for morally ambiguous people. He's as morally ambiguous as the rest of them, but ultimately, he just wants his clone army to live in peace. Will be replaced by a non-participant later.

 

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In a dark city on Earth, there had been a sudden disturbance.

Sonic: It felt as though a million people had cried out in terror and were suddenly silenced.

 

In a control room,

L: That's awfully descriptive. I can see it in my mind's eye right now.

 

a rounded man with a large orange moustache

Sonic: I wonder who that could be!

 

stood by a holographic projection.

Mewtwo: Of what?

 

Another figure, who looked like a giant turtle with teeth and spikes on his shell

L: Another mystery worthy only of my mind... Are you trying to be ambiguous or not?

Sonic: Actually, Bowser has more of a dragon's face.

Mewtwo: ...ah, that's true.

 

was visible on the projection itself.

L: *Bowser impression* I'm standing on a holographic projection!

 

"...So...The plan is going to be carried out tonight, Doctor?"

Sonic: The plan is going to be carried out tonight, L?

L: Indeed! Once the plan is carried out tonight, Kira will be finished!

 

said the still-silhouetted Turtle.

Mewtwo: Why bother silhouetting him? We all know he's Bowser anyway...

 

He laughed like a maniac before the doctor responded.

Mewtwo: Why?!

Sonic: The plan is going to be carried out tonight, L?

L: In —

Sonic: AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

L: Well, that is annoying.

 

"Indeed, your Green-Shelled Majesty." replied the doctor.

Sonic: Hopefully without laughing like a maniac immediately before Bowser can respond.

 

"I have all the emeralds, so it will be a synch

Mewtwo: We have all the Emeralds... Ready to go?

Sonic: Yep!

Mewtwo: Alright. Evangelion Unit 14... LAUNCH!

Sonic: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH — *static impression*

L: I have all the emeralds, so it will be a synch rate of 400%

Mewtwo: Now you tell me!

 

to bring you and the others here. Then we'll have what we want!"

L: Here is a man who has taken every precaution against being eavesdropped on.

 

They were suddenly interrupted by the projection enlarging,

Sonic: *Bowser impression* FWAA!

Mewtwo: *Eggman impression* Hohoho! It's good to see a villain less competent than me every once in a while.

Sonic: *Bowser impression* Why don't you try standing on an enlarging projection sometime?

 

revealing 2 silhouetted people and a cat-like figure.

Sonic: Sheesh, they kidnapped Blaze? I guess when they aren't busy cutting each other off by laughing like maniacs, they're pretty competent.

Mewtwo: Don't jump to conclusions. I have a bad feeling about this.

 

"Doctor E is here, it's gonna be trouble!" said one.

"With us and King K, make that double!" proclaimed the other one.

All: ...oh, no.

 

"We'll show all the evils of truth and love!"

"Extend our plans to the stars above!"

"Jessie!"

"James!"

"Team Rocket's blastin' off at the speed of light!"

"They'll surrender now or prepare to fight fight fight!"

L: They'd do much better to kill them now.

 

"Me-owth! That's righ--" Meowth was interrupted by the doctor.

"WE ALL KNOW YOUR MOTTO! We don't need you to repeat it every time we speak.

Sonic: Thanks, Doc Egg. But couldn't you have done that three lines earlier, rather than right as they've already finished?

 

And why are your silhouettes failing?"

Mewtwo: Because they're Team Rocket. Even their silhouettes ooze failure.

L: Come to think of it, why are they projecting silhouettes in the first place? We have video phone even now.

Sonic: SSBM ripoff?

 

Before the trio could answer, an alarm went off in the control room.

WARNING! WARNING! HEDGEHOG ALERT! REPEAT! HEDGEHOG ALERT!

Sonic: Only Doctor Eggman would ever have an alarm like that.

L: We still don't know what the control room looks like, except that it projects silhouettes one can stand on.

 

"Damn it! Looks like we'll have to initiate the plan early! Stations 1 and 2! Ready?!" ordered the doctor.

L: An order isn't a question. There is a difference.

 

"Yes, Doctor E!" they all replied. More screens appeared, revealing a long grey-purple-haired man, a tanned teenager wielding a golden staff and a young couple, both holding black notebooks.

L: ...oh, dear.

Sonic: I assume at this point that Jesse, James, and Meowth are all alii, or else they'd have suffered mysterious heart attacks long ago.

Mewtwo: Them aside, I must inquire into the color "grey-purple."

 

"We're ready too, aren't we, Misa?" said the boy on station 5.

"Of course, Light-kun!" replied the girl next to him.

L: They... aren't actually a couple; you know that, right?

 

"And us!" shouted the two others on stations 3 and 4.

"Then we begin!!" The doctor placed the last gem in his circular control panel.

Sonic: Only Doctor Eggman would leave the last Chaos Emerald so late.

Mewtwo: Light really should be a more overt director.

 

The engine revved up and the room glowed brightly with the gems.

Sonic: What engine?

Mewtwo: Nothing in that sentence has been adequately described.

 

All of the people on the screens laughed evilly with the doctor when the door was burst open,

L: Except Light and Misa, who didn't laugh and laughed with real joy, respectively.

Mewtwo: Where does it say that?

L: I'm improving the story. Don't complain.

 

and the smoke cleared to reveal the spiky blue hedgehog.

Sonic: Spiky isn't really the first word that comes to mind, thanks.

Mewtwo: So just now we're admitting that the readers already know the characters and using definite articles.

 

“Eggman! Time for you to give back those Chaos Emeralds!” he shouted to the deranged doctor.

Sonic: He refused and tried to start the operation anyway, then we all got sent to other worlds.

Mewtwo: I take it this is a common occurrence for you?

Sonic: Common enough that I'm still in love with a girl from another dimension, yeah.

L: Please don't take liberties with canon.

Sonic: Did you see the last cutscene of Rush? Way more romantic than anything in '06 or Dark Brotherhood, and it wasn't even supposed to be.

 

“My, my! Sonic! What an unpleasant surprise!

L: *Eggman impression* And by that I mean, WHAT AN UNPLEASANT NON-SURPRISE! *presses button*

Sonic: *platypus noises*

 

Still, it’s too late! Soon we’ll be rid of you for good! MUAHAHAHA!!”

Sonic: Except you won't.

 

The alarms stopped abruptly, and the twin-tailed partner of Sonic’s poked his head out from the ventilation shaft above Eggman.

Sonic: You really don't need that apostrophe-s on the end.

Mewtwo: You could have told us there was a ventilation shaft above Eggman's head when you described the room.

L: You could have described the room.

 

“We’ll see about that! Sonic! Grab the Emeralds!” he ordered Sonic.

Sonic: You do realize I'm generally in command, right?

 

Sonic whizzed to the control panel, knocking Dr Eggman over.

Mewtwo: Tails then dropped down from the ventilation shaft and ate the doctor's face.

 

But as he touched the blue emerald, removing it partially from the slot, a huge pillar of pure white light erupted from the centre of the panel, consuming Sonic, then Eggman, and eventually it began spreading across the building.

Sonic: See? What'd I tell ya?

 

“Must…remove…Emerald…” Shouted sonic, but he couldn’t remove it completely before he and everyone nearby blacked out.

Sonic: "MUST... REMOVE... EMERALD..."

L: You really should have gone for the white one.

Sonic: No kidding.

 

In the other Universes, Team Rocket felt their homeland of Kanto begin to teleport,

L: What does a teleport feel like?

Sonic: It doesn't. You have to [pick one: Find the Chaos Emerald / GET BLUE SPHERES / Get Rings / Catch the Chaos Emerald] in an iridescent tunnel, and bam, you're in a new world.

Mewtwo: Or, alternatively, it feels like time stops for a short time and you can go wherever you please.

Sonic: Chaos Control?

Mewtwo: My Teleport technique, actually.

 

before they were also engulfed in light. Pegasus and Marik

Mewtwo: Even for Pegasus, I think "grey-purple" is a very bizarre color.

 

also felt a teleport before blacking out.

 

Light and Misa weren’t panicking, but instead rejoicing.

Sonic: *Light impression* EXACTLY AS PLANNED!

 

“Light-kun! We’re going to a new world! Think of the people we can kill!”

L: Okay, they weren't that psychotic. They really do think they're doing the right thing, I think.

 

They embraced

Sonic: The same way Amy and I embraced at the end of Heroes.

 

before they too fell unconscious.

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[lugia61617]

What. The hell. was that? You just stole and completely re-did my opening. You're not co-writer or anything like that.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

It was this. I do it to a lot of fanfics around here.

[lugia61617]

an MST3K? Still don't get what that's about, but I can conclude one thing; You are loony.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

This should make the style of review clearer. The difference is, these stories are generally a lot worse than yours.

[lugia61617]

HEY! I can take a little criticism but you're just being mean. :P

But you did say they are worse, so I'll overlook it...sort of. If it weren't for the fact that you are one of only 2 people to post about my FF I'd say stop reading.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Hey; at least you recognize that Light's a villain. That's an achievement right there. And, obviously, a MyST makes the target look as bad as possible.

[lugia61617]

I've always known Light as a protagonist, but for the sake of the story, he is an antagonist.

[lugia61617]

What have I said? COMMENT PLEASE>....

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

[spoiler=Part II: Epilogue of the Prologue]

The New Team:

Light, from Death Note: A teenager with a strong sense of justice who developed a god complex and took over the world. Since the underworld is good therapy, he isn't too proud of that last one. Very hammy. Will be replaced by Tahu Nuva later.

Blaze, from Sonic the Hedgehog: The icy empress of an extradimensional empire. In contrast to her personality, she controls fire. She's scared of heights and rather... affectionate... to her friends Sonic and Cream. Will be replaced by Uxie later.

Fate Testarossa, from Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha: A cripplingly shy but surprisingly loving magical girl who manipulates thunder. Quite in love with the titular character, though for some reason, she never says so on screen. Will be replaced by a non-representative later.

 

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Light and Misa opened their eyes, finding themselves in the middle of an apartment.

Light: That's all the description we'll get, isn't it.

 

"Ugh...Light? Where are we?" Asked

Blaze: Dialogue can't end a sentence.

 

Misa as she got up from the floor. Light got up and looked out of a nearby window.

 

"...Japan, by the looks of things...But it seems...different. I would assume Doctor Eggman was able to transport and connect the worlds of the Nexus and fuse them with his...

Light: This is an accomplishment for him.

 

So we're in HIS world's version of Japan..."

Blaze: There are no Japans on Mobius.

 

Misa just blinked.

 

"erm...Right...So...We DID go to another world!" She jumped up and down, laughing.

Fate: ...really.

 

Back in the control room,

Fate: Please separate segments like this properly.

Light: "Meanwhile, back at the ranch..."

 

Sonic and Tails finally woke. They were electro-chained

Fate: Oh, dear. They have an electrokineser as well?

Light: More like putting electricity in things that really don't need it.

 

to a wieght

Blaze: So is that 'weight' or 'wight?'

Fate: Either way, not much use chaining captives to it.

Light: This is Eggman we're talking about. He probably would put electricity in chains connected to skeletal swordsmen.

Fate: Point taken.

 

on a conveyor belt, leading to a circular machine marked Roboticizer MK-IV

 

"Eggman! I thought you'd given up on your roboticization plans when I was 4!

Fate: Er... four?

Blaze: More like twelve.

Light: In any case, I take it Sonic's not a terribly good tactician?

Blaze: Excellent, actually. This is just poor characterization.

 

And what were you doing with the emeralds?!" Sonic shouted.

"Yeah! You did something with them!!" Tails agreed, struggling.

Fate: *Tails* We're breathing air!

 

Eggman, being the idiotic high-IQ'd genius

Light: Hooray for oxymorons.

 

he was, explained.

Blaze: In typical Bond-villain fashion.

 

"Since you'll soon be my slaves, you might as welll learn. There isn't one universe, Sonic! There are hundreds, each joined by something called the Nexus!

Light: Title drop. Spooky.

 

There's even a universe with alternate versions of you!

Blaze: Hopefully, more competent ones.

 

When I had gathered 3 of the Chaos Emeralds, I was able to use their power to create a video and audio link with these other universes!

Fate: These Chaos Emeralds aren't terribly powerful, are they?

Blaze: Poor characterization. This time of things that aren't actually characters.

 

When you rudely interrupted my final project, I was combining several of the universes to bring their inhabitants here, each one as dangerous as the last!

Light: That is, not dangerous at all, with two notable exceptions.

 

We are going to, together, dominate the TRUE world! OURS!"

Light: As opposed to, say, the Nexus.

Fate: All worlds are equally real...

 

Sonic and Tails kept on trying to break free, but the elctro-shackles

Fate: I thought they were chains.

 

were too powerful. The conveyor belt began moving, and they were mere feet away from the roboticizer.

Blaze: Then some big damn heroes swoop out of nowhere and annihilate the incompetent scientist.

 

"(Sonic...Why do evil megalomaniacs always reveal their evil plans when we have chances to escape?)" muttered Tails.

Fate: I notice Tails is much more competent than Sonic here.

Blaze: VERY poor characterization.

 

Sonic ignored his partner and kept on trying to break free, but without any result.

 

"Face it, Sonic! It's all over for you!" Eggman laughed. He was interrupted

Light: Score one for the Empress.

 

by a girly shout.

Blaze: ...oh, no.

 

"DON'T YOU LAY A FINGER ON MY SONIKKU!"

Light: Hooray for gratuitous romanji.

 

Amy Rose, the pink Hedgehog, stood in the doorway, wielding her Piko-Piko Hammer.

Blaze: Of all the damned...

Fate: You don't really like Ms. Rose, do you?

Blaze: Not much for whiny stalkers who insist on obstructing my mission, no.

 

Behind her stood Cream the Rabbit, Big the Cat, Sonia and Manic Hedgehog (grown up) and Knuckles the Echidna.

Fate (Bardiche): ERROR 413 - INFORMATION OVERLOAD. PROCESSING ABORTED.

Blaze: Who're Big, Sonia, and Manic?

Light: A giant cat and Sonic's royal, music-playing siblings, respectively. Says so in the guide.

Blaze: Wh...? So why are Sonia and Manic "grown up?"

 

"W-What?! How did you all find me?!" Shouted Eggman.

Light: It really isn't that difficult.

 

"Isn't it obvious, fatso? If I follow my BOyFRIEND,

Fate: *Amy impression* Using my Sonic-tracker, of course...

 

I always end up finding YOU!" Answered Amy.

Fate: *Amy impression* And because your bases are rather... conspicuous.

 

Amy ordered Manic, Knuckles and Sonia to rescue Sonic and Tails,

Blaze: Who're the imbeciles taking orders from her?

Light: Not Knuckles, if this guide is right.

Blaze: It is.

 

while everyone else was to deal with Eggman.

Fate: All two of the others.

 

The deranged Doctor activated a button, forcing Sonic and Tails into the Roboticiser

Light: Even for Eggman, there's really no reason why he oughtn't to have done that to begin with.

 

while a huge robot encased him. It held a Lance in the right hand and a Lazer in the left.

Fate: Or, in two words, the Egg Emperor.

 

"BEHOLD MY LATEST CREATION! THE EGG LORD!!

Fate: Or, in two words, the Egg Emperor.

 

MUAHAHA!"

Blaze: This is when you laugh maniacally, not immediately after asking a non-rhetorical question.

Light: Or, y'know, after you've already won.

 

Cream lifted Amy up to the ceiling, when she (Amy)

Fate: You oughtn't need pronouns (or parentheticals) there.

 

jumped down and hit Eggman's machine on the 'Head' with her Piko piko hammer.

Blaze: So they pass strategy 101. Good for them.

 

Big and Cream continued with their attacks,

Fate: Which are...?

 

eventually causing the lazer - which was about to fire - to nearly break off.

Blaze: You realize that's spelled with an 's,' right?

 

 

Sonic and Tails heard Sonia, Manic and Knuckles' conversation.

"it's no good, dudes! This thing's too difficult to break!" Manic panicked, but Knuckles had an idea.

"THE MEDALLIONS!"

Blaze: Huh?

Light: ...oh, no.

 

"what?!" responded Sonia.

"Use the Medallion's instruments to break it open!" Argued the Echidna.

Fate: They have medallions containing lockpicking gadgets?

Light: ...not quite.

 

The three Hedgehogs touched their old Medallions to unleash a Hedgehog Guitar, Drum Kit and Keyboard-Gun.

Blaze: ...I refuse to accept this.

Light: Sadly, it's canon.

Blaze: ...I refuse to accept this.

Fate: Who was the third hedgehog, Amy? Sonic was electro-chained or shackled down...

 

They each released a blast of energy, shattering the Roboticizer before it could do any harm.

Light: That was eerily convenient.

 

To everyone's surprise, The electric shackles had also been destroyed.

Blaze: Quite eerie.

Fate: So these instruments are more powerful than the Chaos Emeralds?

Blaze: For us, interdimensional communication is HARD. We don't know how we're supposed to use the energy we have. ...but yes, in this story and individually, the instruments are stronger than Chaos Emeralds.

 

Now everyone else joined in the fight Eggman, who began weakening faster as he had no way of stopping them. Eventually, Sonic dealt the final blow by firing his Guitar-energy at the heart of the Machine.

Blaze: ...I still refuse to accept this.

Light: As opposed to, say, hitting it.

Fate: It seems awfully unwieldy to fight with a guitar.

 

Eggman flew out of his destroyed robot, cursing his luck.

Light: And his crushing incompetence.

Fate: And so the shortest, most vague battle ever described in tolerable writing ends.

 

"Take that, Eggman!" Announced Team Sonic.

Blaze: The rest remembered their personalities and left.

 

They then turned around to see that the screens on the holograms had re-activated.

Fate: Dun-dun-DUN...

 

"Hello? Hello? Is anybody there? Hello? Eggman?" The scrambled picture of a boy in his early twenties and a girl slightly younger was visable.

Light: L and Takaba?

 

Tails pressed the holographic button and then Sonic replied.

"No Eggman here! Just your local hero--"

"AHEM." Tails interjected.

"...Just your local herOES." Muttered Sonic.

Blaze: I call character derailment.

Fate: He could have been saying "heroes" anyway; Tails cut him off too early.

 

"Who is this?"

Light: *Sonic impression* Team Sonic Barely Competent Hero Services. How may we serve you?

 

"...What did you do with Eggman?!" Shouted Light.

Light: *Lelouch impression* That white Knightmare again?!

 

"You WANT him? Why would you want anything to do with that guy!"

Fate: Good question.

 

"Because

Light: Misa knows better than to explain.

 

he brought us to this world to--Wait! SONIC?! SONIC THE HEDGEHOG!?" Misa interrupted. She turned around and then appeared to be speaking to herself, by anyone other than her and Light's view.

Light: No, really, Misa is better than this.

Blaze: We believe ya.

 

"Rem, is it possible for our notes to affect him, even though he's not human?" she asked. Rem the Shinigami looked emotionlessly.

"I have no idea, Misa. The note states that the HUMAN whose name is written in it shall die, but since those rules apply to our world, I have no idea..."

Blaze: Sonic is an alias, anyway. In this tale, that's unfortunate.

Light: So what's his real name?

Blaze: You're kidding, right?

 

Light began terminating their transmission, when he said to Sonic and his friends;

"We're coming for you, Hedgehog! Us, King B, Team R and the others are ready to get rid of you for good!"

Fate: That's "King K."

Light: Why am I saying that?! I'm not vi Britannia!

 

The transmission ended, and Sonic and co quickly left the area, heading for their homes after a job well done.

Blaze: Blithely ignoring the ominous threat imposed by the extradimensional figure. Really, you care that little about me in this story?

Fate: You should be flattered.

Blaze: True, that.

 

Fate: This is how one ought to separate sentences.

 

 

In Space, an island covered with Shadows

Light: Or, in three words, Space Colony ARK...

 

was slowly approaching the Earth, being accidentally removed from the Nexus,

Fate (Bardiche): ERROR 400 - POOR SYNTAX

Blaze: Flying from the homeworld, eh?

 

it had no definate destination. All the beings, save one, that inhabited the island

Light: So, wait. You're saying this is an honest-to-god, palm-trees-and-volcanoes island? Really, make there are better words for space stations.

 

were rendered unconscious for the journey through the void. That lone figure of pure shadows

Fate: The real Shadow, presumably.

 

looked around his lair,

Blaze: Which will not be described or located here...

 

his bright blood red eyes focusing on the image of a mask.

Fate: The Mask... OF LIFE.

 

"We are arriving, my brother...Soon...I will have a new realm to control...And I will make sure...that you will stay...."

 

The room turned pitch black.

Light: So at this point, all we know is that the room wasn't pitch black.

 

"...Asleep..."

Blaze: ...

Fate: It really was the Mask of Light.

Light: /Bionicle/? Really?

 

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[lugia61617]

I just spent 2 hours which I could use writing this to do my homework, and it takes me a long time to write these anyway, and that's the best I get? Humph. This IS my FIRST (and technicall) ONLY fanfic. (Y-Tak's Return of Y;iaster fanfic doesn't count because he invited me to be cowriter after). Look, I think everyone knows who each character is. The only ones I would class as debateable right now are Makuta and Sarah Jane and Luke. Besides, once I finish this fanfic I'll be happy to edit and add more detail. But for now....

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Hey, there's only so much I can say. You are getting advice, after all.

[Falkon 491]

I kinda like the crossover lugia, though I agree with Gamesmaster that you could have done better. Also, I absolutely love Gamesmaster's way of reviewing fanfics. :)