Otakon Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Hi,I'm new to the forum but I've using the card maker for some time and all I can say is good job. Anyway,back to the topic.Since finding the appropriate pictures is a lot of work and the problem of running into copyrights, I've decided to post mostly in this section. This is an archetype I came up with while attending class so it may seem a bit unbalanced.Anyway, if you need to picture them, the Skeletoids are ghoulish skeleton monsters similar to the Reborn Zombie.They are all Zombie and EARTH.As for their effects...well, take a look. Skeletoid GuardianEARTHLevel 4Zombie/effectATK 1800/ DEF 0If this card would be destroyed by battle,you can remove from play one "Skeletoid" monster card in your graveyard to have it not destroyed. Skeletoid BlockerEARTHLevel 3Zombie/effectATK 0/ DEF 2000If this face-down card is attacked by a DARK atribute monster,double this card's DEF until the end of damage step.When this card is removed from play, special summon one "Skeletoid" monster from your deck. Skeletoid ShamanEARTHLevel 5Zombie/effectATK 2100/ DEF 0You can special summon this card from your hand while there is a "Bone Tower" on the field.One per turn, you can special summon one LV 3 tuner monster from either player's graveyard. Skeletoid SpiderEARTHLevel 3Zombie/TunerATK 0/ DEF 1000if this face-up card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard,you can special summon it during your next standby phase. Skeletoid MagicianEARTHLevel 2Zombie/effectATK 0/ DEF 0During the end phase this card is summoned, remove it from play.While this card is removed from play,all of your face-up "Skeletoid" monsters gain 200 ATK and DEF points during each of your standby phases.During the 3rd standby phase after this card is removed from play,retun it to your deck(the deck is then shuffled). Skeletoid ReaperEARTHLevel 8Zombie/effectATK 0/ DEF 0This card cannot be normal summoned or set.This card cannot be special summoned except by sending one "Bone Tower" you control to the graveyard.This card gains 1000 ATK for each Bone counter that was on that card.Once per turn,you can destroy one face-up monster card on the field,then you can special summon one "Skeletoid" monster from your graveyard or hand with a level equal to the destroyed monster's level.This card cannot attack during the turn this effect is activated. Skeletoid BrainEARTHLevel 7Zombie/Synchro/effectATK 0/ DEF 30001 Skeletoid Spider + 1 or more non-Tuner Zombie monstersThis card cannot be destroyed by card effects that do not target.Once per turn,you can add one Zombie type monster that was removed from play to your hand. Skeletoid FighterEARTHLevel 8Zombie/Synchro/effectATK 2800/ DEF 01 Skeletoid Spider + 1 or more non-Tuner Zombie monstersDuring your standby phase,if this card is in your graveyard,you can remove from play one Zombie type monster to special summon this card in face-up attack position.If this card is special summoned this way, you can add one Bone counter to a face-up "Bone Tower" you control. Bone TowerSpell/FieldDuring your standby phase, place one Bone counter on this card(max 3).By removing a numer of Bone Counters from this card activate one of the following effects:*1 Bone counter(s): you can special summon one "Skeletoid" monster from your hand.*2 Bone Counter(s): you can destroy one face-up card on the field.*3 Bone Counter(s):special summon one level 7 or higher monster from your graveyard.If this card would be destroyed,you can remove from play one "Skeletoid monster from your graveyard instead. Empty GraveSpellAdd one Level 4 or lower "Skeletoid" monster from your deck to your hand. Curse of GreedSpellDiscard "Skeletoid" monster(s) from your hand so their level equals 8.Draw 2 cards. Ancient Trap HoleTrapYou can only activate this card while you control a face-up "Skeletoid" monster.When your opponent summons a monster,remove it from play. Bone PartsTrapTribute one Zombie type monster on your side of the field.Place 2 bone counters on a face-up "Bone Tower" and then you can add one monster from your deck to your hand whose level equals half the level of the tributed monster. Well ,that's it; hope you like it. Link to comment
玄魔の王 Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Otakon, I woulda told you over the Codec, but I figure I'll post it here for verification. Besides, you never get the transmissions right anyway. All your monsters suffer from lack of capitalization and spacing. Shaman is OP'ed and needs a cost. Otherwise, I see this as being fine. Carry on. 7/10. Link to comment
Otakon Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 "Lack of capitalization and spacing"...sorry, but not sure what that means. Do you mean there is a problem with my grammar or the monsters themselves? About Shaman, maybe like this:...Once per turn, by discarding one Level 4 or lower "Skeletoid" monster, you can special summon one Level 3 Tuner monster from either player's graveyard.Better? Also, a side question; to how many posts/topics a week am I limited?I have quite few cards I came up with, so I thought I'd just cram 'em in a single topic (with updates) + special topics for Archetypes. Link to comment
玄魔の王 Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 "Lack of capitalization and spacing"...sorry' date=' but not sure what that means. Do you mean there is a problem with my grammar or the monsters themselves? About Shaman, maybe like this:...Once per turn, by discarding one Level 4 or lower "Skeletoid" monster, you can special summon one Level 3 Tuner monster from either player's graveyard.Better? Also, a side question; to how many posts/topics a week am I limited?I have quite few cards I came up with, so I thought I'd just cram 'em in a single topic (with updates) + special topics for Archetypes.[/quote'] I apologize for my vagueness. I was indeed referring to the cards. I'll give you an example: if this face-up card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard,you can special summon it during your next standby phase. This should read: If this face-up card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. The effect is better with that cost, yes. And you may post as mich as you like, as long as it's not spamming (ie. posting the same thing multiple times, posting about something unrelated etc.). Link to comment
Otakon Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 if this face-up card is destroyed by battle and sent to the graveyard' date='you can special summon it during your next standby phase.[/quote'] This should read: If this face-up card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. Thought so, but I was to lazy to keep track of such things, it's not like I'm writing an exam :DThough, I will try to watch out for these thing in the future.Thanks Link to comment
玄魔の王 Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 You're welcome. Happy to be of service. Link to comment
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