psychicplayer Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Vian:Erfff... Nyyya... Wah!!(There will be some cards that don't exist)???:Hey I think he's waking up. ???:Well that's good. If Crow didn't find him I don't know if he would have made it.Crow:I don't know anything about him, all I found was a deck with him, and a freakish duel runner that doesn't touch the ground. Yusei, any info on it?Yusei: No, infact it doesn't have a single metal on it that's known to man.???:Are you kidding?! His Duel Runner can't be more unique than MY Wheel of Fortune! I Jack Atlas have the most unique one of all!(Vian gets up and wipes his eyes)Vian:What are you guys doing to my Duel Runner?Yusei: Oh, good to see your awake. It was really intresting to us. Where'd you get it?Vian:Hmmm... I don't remember. In fact, I can't recall anything except my name and anything related to my dueling.Akiza:Well that's no good. You sure there's nothing we can do?(Vian closed his eyes and folded his arms)Vian: ummmm..... maybe a turbo duel? Yeah that might do something.Luna:I'll duel him. I mean I think my deck could do the best at reminding him. I'll have to use my Duel-Board though.(The two grabbed their dueling vehicles, and decks and headed outside to the road)Yusei: Did you see it too Jack?The mark?Jack:Yes, and it doesn't look too good. What should we do with him?Crow:Well nothing now, he's dueling. But it bothered me too.Akiza:I don't sense any darkness in that mark, in fact, there are good intentions inside it. It's wierd though, there is also a pain in his heart that I can't make out. And since he won't remember it we'll have to jog his memory any way we can.(meanwhile on the dueling road...)Luna:My move draw! I summon Regulus in attack position! Then I set two cards face-down and end my turn.Vian: My turn! I draw. I summon Powered Copycat and activate his effect. His level ATK, DEF, name, and effect is now the same as Regulus! Now I equip Omega Shere to Powered Copycat! He gains ATK and DEF equal to another monster on the field with the same name. Now Powered Copycat, attack Regulus.Luna:I activate the trap card Mirror Force!Vian:I activate Omega Shere's 2nd effect. If there is a monster with the same name on my opponent's field, I can redirect the effect to the other monster. So now it's a direct attack!!(3400 damage is inflicted to Luna)Duel-Board:600 LIFE POINTS REMAINING. LOST 3 SPEED COUNTERSVian:I end my turn.Luna:Draw! I activate the trap card that I set last turn, 'Fairy Transition'! I can discard Fairy-type monsters and Special Summon an Ancient Fairy Dragon if the discarded monster's levels equal to hers!(Ancient Fairy Dragoned is summoned in a bright light)(Vian's arm begins to glow in a black, and white light and hurts his arm)Vian:Ahhhhhhh!!! Gahhhhh!(The Powered Copycat begins to turn back to its humanoid form and began to look as if in pain too. Vian's D-Runner stopped floating, and crashed across the road. Vian fell out hanging onto to the side of the road where the sea was. Luna took Ancient Fairy Dragon back into her hand, and stopped her D-Board. She flung off her helmet and ran over to where he was dangling. Vian grabbed onto Luna's arm, and she tried to pull him up, but didn't have the streangth to do it.)Vian: Sorry I caused this trouble...Luna:Don't let go! Please!Vian:Sorry, can't go on...(Vian slipped off head first heading for the water with an unconcious look on his face. All of a sudden, a light gleamed from his D-Runner and a little beam of light shot over to him. He was then surrounded into an orb of Light and Darkness, with wings emerging from it. He sbtopped falling and floated back up inside the sphere of light and darkness. It levitated up higher, and then set him back onto the road.)Luna:Vian!!(After getting Vian back to Yusei, Crow, and Jack's garage where everyonelse was, Luna told Yusei that Vian's D-Runner was still back on the road. After that, when everyone gathered into a room when Vian was asleep, they were debating on wheather or not Vian was a Signer or Dark Signer.)Crow:What do we do with Vian?Yusei:Don't know we'll just have wait. To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 1 - No script form. 2 - You better not put all the episodes in separate threads. 3 - Not too good writing conventions, or at least I'm too distracted by the script form. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
六兆年と一夜物語 Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 1 bucket of fail has been served. I'm sorry, but this is plain unacceptable. Try again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted November 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2009 no,no, it's okay, thanks for telling me. but what do you mean by seperate threads for the episodes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted November 18, 2009 Report Share Posted November 18, 2009 I mean, make sure you keep all of a fan fic in one thread, or page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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