JeremyH Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 That's a little broken..but original. Maybe make it 500? 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 hmm its good, but you need to write face-up <--- like that, and Draw Phase is capitalized, other then that, i give you a 9/10 =) keep it up! 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abstract [Atrocity] Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 that card is pretty original, and I don't think it's that broken.Not drawing cards is a REAL disadvatage, so this gives youa bonus for it. Nice 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JeremyH Posted December 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Thank you for the comments, I'll change the first one right away; what do you think about my second creature? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Thank you for the comments' date=' I'll change the first one right away; what do you think about my second creature?[/quote'] ok, Summon needs to be capitalized, and the only time you use ATK, is when you are talking about the monster attack like, increase this monsters ATK by suc and such, and you use attack, when you say, this card card can attack, and things like that =) and its good, 9/10 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyperwater Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Great pics! but I find that the 2nd card is practically useless. It can't attack and it continues to fill up your field with monsters that do nothing and your opponents easily kills.... 9/10 for the first one and 4/10 for the second one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JeremyH Posted December 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 The reason for my second creatures effect is to force my opponent into attacking me by wanting to take away my life points. Its not useless, its stradegy. You just need patience with this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 The reason for my second creatures effect is to force my opponent into attacking me by wanting to take away my life points. Its not useless' date=' its stradegy. You just need patience with this card.[/quote'] lol wow, i havent seen a duelist with patients in a while1 8) *besides me* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 yes, i like the originality4.25/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aztex Posted December 6, 2007 Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Very original but broke! 9/10! I still like them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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