Deadmoon

[Zaloog91]

Tell me what you think of these.

 

[Saiba Aisu]

Cool, just add "" around Dead Moon when it is mentioned in a card effect.

[Instinct]

yes, pretty cool

4.5/5

[The Dark One]

card effects need some fixing up, but I love the cards themselves. 6/10

 

(what's up with the writing at the bottom of Hel's picture?

[Zaloog91]

Thanks for the comments how could i fix there card effects.

[The Dark One]

For Hel, try this.

 

Increase the ATK and DEF of all face-up monsters with "Deadmoon" in their card names by 400. If this card would be destroyed, you can destroy another monster on your side of the field with "Deadmoon" in its card name instead.

 

For Jerome:

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, you amy Special Summon one monster with "Deadmoon" in its card name from your hand in face-up ATK position.

 

for the ship:

 

As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select another monster with "Deadmoon" in its card name as an attack target. (Also, increase its defense)

 

For the Captain, put Quotation marks around the reference to Deadmoon, and that would be everything I saw.

[Bloodrun]

first card: when you write a number it has to be in numerical form (1), Deckneeds to be caped, and when you list a monster in an effect, you need "parenthesis" around it

second: again gotta have those "parenthesis" and again put numbers in numerical form

third: Normal Summoned, Special Summoned, and Attack Mode all need to be caped, and again, the "parenthesis"

fourth: and you need the "parenthesis" again lol

other then those minor mistakes, i give you a overall rating of 9/10 =) keep up the good work 8)

[gustov_ya]

those r kewl so 8/10

[Arekku_Koro]

eh, there alright. 7/10

[Professor Cobra]

Good pics, most are balanced. 7/10

[RestLess-BoTics]

Cool!

[Soul Immortal]

I think Deadmoon ship should have 2100-2300 ATK