Pokemon:Rise of the light ones!

[Haze]

This is my first Pokemon fanfic. I hope you like it.The prologue starts in the middle of the story so to get the beginning wait for chapter one.

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Gabe had never ran so fast in his entire life. One minute he and his sweet, sweet Bulbi, were on their checkered picnic blanket. Then, it had seemed out of nowhere, The skies had turned pure gray, rumbling with thunder.

 

"Wow Bulbi, The weather can change super-fast."

 

Blubi nodded in agreement.

 

Now, there was thunder off in the distance. But minute by minute the thunder move closer to Gabe and Bulbi.

 

"Hey Bulb, maybe we should go."

 

"Bulb Bulb!"

 

Bulbi started running in circles out of fear as Gabe folded the picnic blanked and stuffed it in his knapsack with no time to lose. Just when Gabe and Bulbi took one step in the opposite direction of the lightning, a bolt struck right behind them. Gabe looked over in his shoulder in horror. Behind him stood a fifteen foot tall Light being. Gabe picked up Bulbi and ran for his life. He looked behind him to see what was going on. The elemental was flying right behind them. Shouting the ancient language of the gods the elemental was catching up. Gabe tripped on a branch, falling to the ground tossing Bulbi. Gabe closed his eyes and hoped for the best.

 

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[Kendo Fish]

Time for a WEATHER REPORT.

This is my first Pokemon fanfic. I hope you like it.The prologue starts in the middle of the story so to get the beginning wait for chapter one.

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Gabe had never ran so fast in his entire life. One minute he and his sweet' date=' sweet Bulbi unnecessary comma, were on their checkered picnic blanket. Then, it had seemed out of nowhere,NOT a comma, but a PERIOD The skies had turned pure gray, rumbling with thunder.

 

"Wow Bulbi, lowercase the weather can change super-fast."

 

Blubi WHO'S BLUBI!?!? nodded in agreement.

 

Now, there was thunder off in the distance. There wasn't already thunder before? Because I already figured there was some. That was just redundant. But minute by minute the thunder move closer to Gabe and Bulbi.

 

"Hey Bulb, maybe we should go."

 

"Bulb Bulb!" TRANSLATION: "YOU DIND'T THINK SO BEFORE!?"

 

Bulbi started running in circles out of fear as Gabe folded the picnic blanked (I know about blankets but not much about blankeds) and stuffed it in his knapsack with no time to lose. Just when Gabe and Bulbi took one step in the opposite direction of the lightning, a bolt struck right behind them. Gabe looked over in his shoulder in horror. Behind him stood a fifteen foot tall oddly-capitalized Light being. Gabe picked up Bulbi and ran for his life. He looked behind him to see what was going on. The elemental was flying right behind them. Shouting the ancient language of the gods COMMA the elemental was catching up. Gabe tripped on a branch, falling to the ground AND tossing Bulbi. Gabe closed his eyes one space too many and hoped for the best.

 

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I can't say that was BAD, but I can't say it's GOOD. It's just IN-BETWEEN somewhere. And something can be fifteen feet tall and look like an elephant. What's its body shape? Also, if you couldn't tell its body shape you should say it was glowing too brightly.

 

Don't tell me...Dark is evil in this story. Huh. Which side are Hispanics on? :S