DDRGHKH Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 The writing style in this episode was inspired by blackthunder's Yugioh : Power of the D.D. archtype. In Satellite, Kidd's wounds were being treated, Rally:There, your fine.Kidd:Oh really, because it still hurts! I thought you knew how to do this.Rally:Well excuse me for not freakin going to freakin medical school.Kidd:Can't I see a real doctor?Yusei, Jack, Crow, Blitz, Nerve, and Rally:Nope.Kidd:Jeez.After that, Kidd then faints.Yusei:What the Hell?Yusei looks behind him to see Rally accidentally shot Kidd in the back with Kidd's Tranquilizer Gun.Yusei:Why does Kidd have a Tranquilizer Gun?Rally:No idea.Kidd:.........Yusei:He's waking! But how?Kidd:That tranquilizer dart only lasts for 5 minutes.Yusei:That is stupid as hell.Kidd:Tell me about it.Rally:Lie back, let me treat your wound.Kidd:Uh, no I'm good.Rally:But I have to put rubbing alcohol on it.Kidd:No! Stay the funk away from me just stay away.Kidd keeps struggling and after Rally straps him down and takes his shirt off, they realize something.Rally:Oh my god!Yusei:You are a Dark Signer!Kidd:Wait, I have all the Dark Marks. Well, just on my back.Yusei:What do you mean?Kidd:Look at this.Kidd turns around and Yusei, Jack, Crow, Blitz, Nerve, Tank, and Rallyfind out that Kidd not only has all of the dark marks he also has...Yusei:You have the Crimson Dragon Mark!Kidd:That was what I was trying to tell you!Yusei:Holy sheet!Jack:JABRONI!Yusei:This is crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!!Kidd:Well, only my signer mark is activated. While my older brother, Graton, has his Dark Signer marks activated.Yusei:That is crazy as hell.[/b]How come all of my o's have been changed to smilies? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Noob. Don't do script form. Put it all in one thread. -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackthunder Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Your fan fic is good,but if you want to write a fan fic the characters you created should be the the main characters while the real Yugioh characters (only if you add them)should be minor characters,while in your fan fic the main characters are from Yugioh 5D's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Your fan fic is good' date='but if you want to write a fan fic the characters you created should be the the main characters while the real Yugioh characters (only if you add them)should be minor characters,while in your fan fic the main characters are from Yugioh 5D's[/quote'] *facepalm* This is far from good. I know the rules, so I won't be offensive... too much. Neither of you know the rules. No script form, and all additions go into ONE thread. Not two, ONE. ONE ONE ONE! Clear enough? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
psychicplayer Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 like the 6th signer idea, and the tranquilizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 *facepalm* This is far from good. I know the rules' date=' so I won't be offensive... too much. Neither of you know the rules. No script form, and all additions go into ONE thread. Not two, ONE. ONE ONE ONE! Clear enough?[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Ok since im here and people would be watching this post ive got a question can we use dark synchros in fan fics because it would be cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Lol... Of course you can. Use anything. It's not like all Fan fics are just Yugioh duels. No (limited) boundaries. ^_^ Sorry for babysitting this post, please just combine these all in one thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aesirson Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Listen to Skippy, PLEASE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackthunder Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Your fan fic is good' date='but if you want to write a fan fic the characters you created should be the the main characters while the real Yugioh characters (only if you add them)should be minor characters,while in your fan fic the main characters are from Yugioh 5D's[/quote'] *facepalm* This is far from good. I know the rules, so I won't be offensive... too much. Neither of you know the rules. No script form, and all additions go into ONE thread. Not two, ONE. ONE ONE ONE! Clear enough? I know the rules!And I know that this fan fic is far from good.Because if I would create about Yusei's life in the Satellite I would write about Yusei's childhood when he was 8-14 years old.1 last thing that none has noticed:Yusei was 1 year old before the Zero Reverse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skippy Canoe Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 That's not the only thing that makes this fan fic bad. In fact, I could care less about Yusei's childhood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 An fan fic about Yusei's childhood would be great but the hard thing is it would take a lot of research in yugioh 5ds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DDRGHKH Posted April 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 I have now cancelled Yu-Gi-Oh! X Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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