Father Wolf Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 Wolf stood there by the window gazing into the darkness of the city. it was close to midnight now but he didn’t care. Something inside of him was telling him to stay there and watch for a sign. The feeling hurt him so bad, it was like being punch in the stomach. He rose his left arm up and grabbed his stomach after brushing away his trench coat to get to it. He didn’t know why he was waiting but he was. once and awhile he stared at his own reflection. When he did he was discussed by his eyes that had black rings around them from not getting enough sleep. His hair was messy too and his duel disk around his arm was a little too tight. After 5 min he began pacing back and forth. Getting tired of this feeling he told him self he would wait a bit longer. He looked down at side walk and saw a man in a black trench coat in a rain hat walk across the street. 'That’s weird no one else is out side why is he' wolf thought to him self. As soon as wolf thought that the black figure looked up and stared at wolf. Wolf’s stomach began hurting more and more as he gazed at the figures golden eyes. Wolf turned away and bolted away from the window trying to catch his breath. He held his chest gasping for air leaning against the nearest wall in the hallway he was in. finally he got his breath and the pain from his stomach lifted. Wolf looked around and saw a man coming up the stair way. "Who’s there" wolf said to the man. As the man walked slowly to the final step. "Did u here me" wolf shouted moving his head up and down trying to see the persons face past the coat and the rain hat. "So u can see me" said the man in the coat. He lifted up his left arm which had a duel disk on it. Wolf stared at the disk it was like one that he never seen befor. It looked as if it ripped its way out of his coat. "This is unfortunate for u" the man said as his other hand toke off his hat revealing his face. it was impossible wolf thought backing up. The mans face was twisted something that couldn’t possibly be a human deformity. It wasn’t human at all. As wolf gazed in aw the beast be for him was doing something. Suddenly its trench coat exploded from the inside. The creature was then recognizable by wolf. It was. It was terror king archfiend. "What a duel monster" wolf said surprised by the monster "yes what about it" Terror said flapping its wings. He reached over to his duel disk and drew 6 cards. "Come let’s play a game" he said. "grrrr" wolf grunted activating his duel disk 4000 flashed in the middle. He quickly drew 5 cards. Wolf looked down at his hand and smiled. 'Sweet if I play my cards right ill win in no time' he thought to him self. "Since its my turn ill start things off with this" terror said interrupting wolfs thoughts. "Pandemonium" he said as the field began to change as the monster placed his spell card in the field zone of his duel disk. The hallway be came a demon world where archfiends live. "This card allows me to never pay for my archfiends and a little extra" terror said pulling another card from his hand. "To finish my turn I summon my Shadow Knight Archfiend" he said placing the card into his monster zone. wolf gazed as a demon looking knight with a sword for an arm appeared. "my turn" wolf said drawing a card. He smiled at the card he just drew. "I play my card destruction now we discard all our hands then draw 1 for each card discarded" wolf laughed as he sent 5 card to the graveyard. Terror king laughed historically. "What’s so funny" wolf asked the laughing demon. "u sent this to the graveyard" terror held up a card "Prison Queen Archfiend" wolf questioned the card. He thought he seen all the archfiends, but this one was new. "Let’s just put it this way" terror sent his hand to the graveyard and drew 4 cards. "when she is in the graveyard and i have my field spell, I give 1 of my monsters that is level 4 or below a 1000 more attack points during each one of my turns" he said giggling. Wolf was shocked. He never heard of such a power. When did archfiends become so much more power full? Wolf smiled and drew his 5 cards. "u know i can not allow u to use that card" he said slowly looking down at the floor, as a dark aura grow from his graveyard. "What’s going on" terror asked wolf. Suddenly 2 demons appear on wolfs field. "What are those" he shouted. "How did u get monsters with out playing a card" terror questioning wolfs last move. "its simple really" wolf said looking up. "When my card destruction goes off these monsters don’t like being sent to the graveyard" he smiled. Razing his arms up and yelling "behold my dark world monsters, sillva and goldd"! To be continued! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest setojim Posted December 5, 2007 Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 i see a few errors....spelling, and punctuation are you biggest ones good story line and characters......need more info on what's goin' on...overall: 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted December 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 5, 2007 i edited it some more and fixed i think most of the spell and grammer. aka i read it outload to my self. oh and i added a banner i made to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted December 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 6, 2007 Wolf stared down his opposite. His 2 monsters by his side. Grinning he looked down at his hand and picked one card from it. "Now I summon my Brron mad king of dark world in attack mode" wolf said to terror. Suddenly a laughing demon appeared on the field. Its chains raddled around as the demon was trying to break free. "Go goldd attack that knight" he commanded his monster. The gold demon holding an axe teleported in front of terror’s monster ready to slice throw it. goldd pulled back the axe and then swung with all its might and destroyed the knight in one hit. Purple lightning shot out from the axe as it swung in the air after tairing throw the monster. The purple twisted and turned hitting terror and bringing him to his knees. "agh" terror whimpered out putting his first on the floor. In the front of his duel disk the numbers went down to 3700. "Don’t tell me that hurt" wolf said staring down his foe. "Because there’s a lot more where that came from" he shouted as sillva toke off towards terror. sillva appear behind terror with his blades out. On terrors duel disk the numbers once again dropped. 1200 it read. Terror was on one knee. He had no strength left to fight. "Now for my final attack, bronn" wolf said pointing to his opponents. "Attack with Dark world lightning" he said as purple lighting shot from behind the chained up demon. "Wait" terror said as the attack was launched. "What" wolf answered back at him calling his attack off? The lightning disappeared in a instant right be for hitting terror. "Don’t u want to know why im here" said terror. He was talking to save his life for one more attack would mean the end for him. "u got my attention now talk" replied wolf to the last comment. He folded his arms waiting for the demon to catch his breath and stand up. "Well u see..." terror said standing up. “We are looking for a child" "a child?" wolf asked. "Yes a child" said terror after seeing Wolf’s confused face. He smiled evilly. "But not just any old child a very special one". Wolf stared at the blabbing demon. "This child as the power to awaken a force that hasn’t walked this earth for several 1000 years" the word coming out of terrors mouth made wolf smile. "so ur telling me there’s more than one of u out tonight looking for this kid" wolf said closing his eyes and leaning back. Terror looked at him surprised. "yes whys" "that’s all I needed to know" wolf said turning around. As his did bronn launched his attack. Wolf didn’t see terrors face but the screams that where let out did. The city was really dark that night as thunder storm clouds where above but no rain came down. Wolf was just walking out of the duel arena. He saw shadows jump from roof top to roof top. Wolf decided then and there that he would fallow them. He began running fallowing 1 dark figure. Dodging from ally to ally he was barley able to keep up. The next thing wolf knew, he was in town square where a huge number duel monsters where gathered. He stood back in the ally where he was at so he could watch and listen in. "We finally got him" said jinzo. He was one of the main monsters in the center of the area. The monsters on the outside cheered. "Tomorrow we will have all 7 ultimate spell card" yelled Dark Crusader. More and more cheers came out for the monsters. "Indeed, and our lord will finally have the power he needs" Raiza said next to dark crusader. 'what is going on' wolf thought to him self. 'i need more info but im not going out there no way i can take them all'. As wolf thought to him self a dark figure decided from the roof tops holding a 13 year old boy in his arms. The dark figure came closer. Wolf then recognized the monster it’s was sillva. Then wolf looked and saw a light shined behind the buildings where sillva was just at. It was the legendary rainbow dragon! It was like a huge snake like dragon with angle wings and gems on its neck. On the huge dragons head was a man with white hair staring down at the monster group. as wolf gaze up at the dragon and the man, he made out the words that the man yelled. "Rainbow Dragon! Rainbow Reflection!" To be continued! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted December 7, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 7, 2007 A rainbow beam of light came down like a hammer to the ground, destroying everything in site. The beam of energy was so strong that wolf covered his eyes with his coat. The attack sounded like thunder that rang in ur ears and made the earth its self shack. Several sec the noise stopped and wolf removed his arm from his face. Very few monsters where the blast landed survived. The monsters in the middle disappeared with out a trace. They could not have been in the blast for it had landed several feet away. At that moment wolf saw sillva jump right over him and started running down the ally. "Wait u" wolf said dashing after him. As he ran after the monster wolf heard another blast from rainbow dragon along with some other noises. Wolf stopped in the middle of the street. "Crap I losed him" he said looking around hoping to fined sillva. Then something catched his eye and wolf turned and say sillva summoning something like a portal. On the side of the building was trash can and right above that was a old rust fire escape. 'No time to think' wolf said running to the trash can. He leaped with all his might on the trash can the gave way under his feet as he jumped for the ladder. Wolf barley grabbed a hold of the ladder. Having trouble he pulled him self up the stairs that led all the way up to the roof. Wolf made it to the roof and stood there to catch his breath. slowly sillva turned around. His fur on his shoulders and his black wings hid his face from wolf till he was staring straight at him. Wolf stared at the meeting looking skeleton face with horns popping out of it. Wolf smiled and stood up "nice to see u sillva" sillva gazed at wolf with his milk white eyes. He pushed his arm the had the child in it, closer to his black muscular horned body. "What do u want" sillva grunted back. "I want the child" wolf said back activating his duel disk. "Are u for real?" sillva asked putting down the child to his side, resting the boy on the edge of the building which was next to the small portal opening. Wolf watched him. sillva walked to the middle of the building. His blade on his wrist began to morph into some demonic blade looking duel disk. He smiled evilly drawing 5 cards. "First it was the guy after me and now u" he said. wolf drew 5 cards "maybe if u didn’t steal a kid he wouldn’t be after u and maybe if ur friend terror didn’t come after me I wouldn’t be here" said wolf as he drew one more card. "What terror?" sillva said questioning "yes terror i defeated him in one turn" wolf said back. sillva laughed histaricly. "wow u should be fun then" he said still laughing. Wolf picked a card from his hand. "I set one card face down" he placed 1 card in his spell and trap zone. Wolf quickly reached back to his hand and picked another card. "Now I set another but this ones a monster". A card appeared on the field in face down defense position. "Turn end" wolf said putting his hands to his side. "Finally my turn" sillva said drawing a card. "I think ill have fun with this". sillva placed a card in his spell and trap zone. "I activate a card called Dark World Barrier" as sillva said that a nearly clear but purple tented energy field separated the field into 2 halves. Wolfs side of the field and sillvas. "What’s the meaning of this" wolf said "well u see this spell effects only sertant cards" sillva said pointing to it. "Let’s say when u play a card that affects both players hands it only effects u now" he said laughing. he held a card up "now I play my dark world dealings card so we both draw 1 card from our decks and then discard 1 card from our hands but looks like my spell card don’t allow u to do so" sillvas laughing was starting to get on wolfs nerves. all wolf could do is stand there as sillva drew his card. "hmmmm" sillva muttered sending a card to his graveyard. a black aura shot out form sillvas duel disk and out form it came a slimy demon in white armor holding a spear. "Say hello to one of my best soldiers" sillva paused for a min. then held his hand up "Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World" the monster screamed as its name was called. "go attack that monster with ur damned spear of dark world" sillve commanded. "Not so fast sillva" wolf said as beiige struck the face down monster revealing it. beiige had hacked throw a jar. "u destroyed my morphing jar so we both get to discard our hands and draw 5 new cards" wolf smiled "but thanks to ur spell u don’t get to" wolf quickly discarded his whole hand and drew 5 new cards off the top of his deck. a black aura roses up from wolfs graveyard. Goldd appear on the field. The demons shiny golden armor shinned on the field. "What u have dark world monsters too" sillva asked as another monster appeared behind wolf. "yes and thanks to my Broww, Huntsman of Dark World I get to draw 1 more card from my deck" wolf said drawing one card a the slimy demon behind him with an abnormally large right arm holding a bow disappeared. "Now end ur turn sillva so ur friend goldd here and destroy u" wolf said smiling sillva was surprised by the last move but then called down. he grabbed 2 card from his hand and placed them face down in his s/t zone. "Turn end" "my go" wolf drew a card "wait a sec there I have a deal to make with u" sillva said as wolf drew his card. To be continued! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 Wolf looked at sillva "what is it" he’s asked back to his opponent Sillva smiled and giggled "If u win this duel like I dought u will ill give u my powers as a gift" as sillva spoke his eyes began to glow a weird color one that wolf couldn’t make out. Wolfs head was pounding for even looking at the glow. "And if u loose I get to eat ur soul" sillva said as he watch wolf grab his head in pain. "What ever" wolf yelled back. As he yelled goldd took off running at the demon holding the spear. Wolf let go of his head and screamed "Golden Axe of Dark world"! Goldd was right in front of the spear demon about to swing his mighty axe into the weak monster. "not so fast go sakuretsu armor" sillva said as the trap card next to him reviled its self. Spikes shot out at Goldd. Quickly the axe wielding demon was imprisoned within a spiky armor coating. Purple blood came out from the cracks. "What did u do to gold" wolf yelled as he watch the armor become smaller and smaller and more blood came out and the demon inside rawred in pain. "What I gave him a suit of armor" sillva giggled holding his hand up to his mouth. "Thing is this armor comes with a price of slow and painful death" as sillva said that the armor exploded in flames and smoke. Wolf eyes opened wide as he watch one of his monsters die be for his very eyes. "What’s wrong never see a monster really die" sillva asked. "Damn u" wolf said closing his eyes. He set 2 card on the field. Wolf never seen anything die so grosom. It was nearly unbearable for him. He looked down at the 2 cards he set scared to even use them. "I guess ur turns over" sillva said drawing a card from his deck. "hmmmm i know" sillva said looking at his hand and the card he just drew. "i play my Dark world reload" Wolf opened his eyes as sillva said the name of his card. "What?" wolf asked in shock "im glad u asked" sillva said as he removed his deck from his duel disk. "See I get to add any dark world monster from my deck to my hand then i have to discard 1 card from my hand" as he spoke sillva opened his deck and picked one card from it. sillva put his deck back into his duel disk and sent one of the cards from his hand to the graveyard. Yet again a dark aura exploded from sillvas graveyard and a dark beam came out and struck on wolfs field. When the dark energy cleared a hunch back looking demon was on wolfs side of the field in defense mode. "what is the meaning of this sillva" wolf asked confused "why did u give me a monster" "his name is Celery, Guru of Dark World and he is the reason u wont live throw this duel" Sillva laughed out load and he held up his arms. "Now since he’s ur monster and ur effect I must discard I random card in my hand and since I have only 1 that means..." "i must discard it" wolf said softly ending sillvas sentence. as he did sillva discarded the card and a huge dark aura roses up from sillva as the Overlord of Dark World monster appeared behind sillva. "When reign is discarded from my hand by opponents card effect he comes back and i get to destroy all ur monster or spell and trap cards" sillva yelled in laughter and Reign held his staff up. "Go reign destroy his Back Field. HELL BLITS!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 I like it, its not like the other ones, your style =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted December 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 thank u blood ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted December 20, 2007 Report Share Posted December 20, 2007 thank u blood ^.^ lol your welcome! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted January 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2008 Not so fast" wolf yelled. "i play my face down card Book of Moon" the card lifted up and a light blue glow shined. Sillva covered his eyes with his arm as did Riegn. "What is that light" sillva said at wolf as he was trying to see. "Its book of moon this card is so power full it flips Reign face down" wolf said. Reign got down on one knee and disappeared and a face down card toke its place. the light stopped and sillva removed his arm from his face. a grin went across sillvas face. "Beiige its ur turn destroy Celery" sillva said holding his hand up. Beiige nodded and jumped at the armored demon stabbing it in the chest. Blood exploded from the beast just be for it exploded in fire. Beiige jumped back to sillvas side of the field. "Turn end" Wolf drew a card "how could u do that to ur own monster" wolf asked gritting his teeth. "easy now stop stalling" sillva said back tapping his foot. "Fine" wolf looked again at his hand "I summon Brron Mad King of Dark World" The demon that killed Terror rose up covered in chains. The demon strangled breaking the chained in a flash of lightning. "Brron attack Beiige" wolf shouted to his new demon monster. The demon shoot a bolt of purple lightning out of its right hand. The bolt of lightning went right throw the demon holding the spear and struck sillva. sillva groond and held his chest where the lightning struck. "Only a flesh wound reign will do much worse to u" sillva said as his life points dropped to 3800. "im not done and im sure u know that" wolf said as he discarded a card from his hand. "brrons special effect" sillva giggled "That’s right" wolf said making a fist as a dark aura shoot out from wolfs graveyard and latched to the face down card that is reign. "Come Kahkki, Guerilla of Dark World" wolf said looking down as the dark aura as it toke shape. The bomb looking demon was holding onto the face down before it exploded and the dark aura returned to the graveyard. "kahkki never goes to the graveyard alone" "good I don’t feel bad about using this then" sillva said as a card flipped over and reign reappeared on the field. Reign was back with out a scratch and he was face up and ready for blood. To be continued! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Sorry for double posting this and not another ep but i have spell checked (finally) all the older eps =3 wooooo go me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted January 3, 2008 Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 Nice fan-fic! I read all the chapters! :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted January 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2008 thank u very much ^.^hope u liked them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted January 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2008 Reign growled down at wolf and his monster. "Damn it" wolf said looking up to the huge demon that was being for him. Wolf quickly looked at the card sillva played "gateway to dark world, should have knew that was coming" he said glancing at his hand as sillva chuckled about the move he just made. "I set a card and end my turn" wolf said placing a card in his duel disk. "And this is where the pain starts" sillva said reaching for a card. His fur covered his face be for he drew. He quickly drew his card extending his arm to the fullest length then opened his wings. He body relaxed as he brought the card in front of his face. "Reign u knows what to do" sillva spoke to his monster. Reign didn’t reply but he did lift his mighty staff. "Hell's Rain" he shouted. With out thinking reign jumped up in the air and shot a black burst of energy at bronn destroying him. "AGH" wolf yelled holding his chest. 'This is real pain' he thought to him self. He began cuffing and blood came up into his hand. The wind blow wolfs trench coat back as wolf went down on one knee. 3300 it read on wolfs duel disk. "The pain don’t stop there I play a Quick-play spell card" sillva said holding a card up. "Dark World Grudge" he said as he sent the card to the graveyard. "Since I destroyed a monster with a dark world monster, the destroyed monsters attack points come out of the player’s life points" said sillva as a black beam struck wolf from his duel disk. Wolf yelled in pain as his nerves shot up. He felt as if fire was all around him. he could have swore he was in a cone of black fire, and his flesh was burning. 1500 life points wolf had left. "im not going to die here" wolf said standing up. he shuck and wobbled around trying to stand up straight. "From the look of things u are" sillva laughed out folding his arms. "and when u do ur soul is mine" "ill like to see u try" Wolf said softly drawing a card. "i play my Time Machine card to bring back bronn" he told sillva as one of his face downs lifted up. A chamber appeared on the field. Steam came off of it violently as the door to the chamber opened and bronn stepped out. The chamber disappeared behind him. "What are u going to do with him" sillva asked "this i play Shrink and then i play double attack" wolf said as he placed the cards into his duel disk. "What!?" sillva yelled "u heard me" wolf said as reign began to shrink to a tiny monster. "I cut ur monsters attack points in half" he said smiling. "Then by discarding the final card in my hand bronn can attack twice this turn". Wolf pointed to reign "bronn do ur thing. dark world lightning!". Bronn held his hands up and shot 2 purple streams of lightning 1 connected to the weakened reign the other was to sillva. Sillvas head jolted up word as he yelled and laughed at the same time "yes" sillva said as the lightning disappeared. "This is the thrill of a duel, 2 souls in combat but only 1 can leave" he laughed putting his 2 fingers on his deck. sillvas duel disk read 1450. "I take it ur..." "Not done" wolf shouted "What are u talking about" sillva asked back "I play call of the haunted!" wolf said. Purple steam rose up out of the ground. "I call goldd to the field" he said pointing to the steam. From the inner part of the building the shinny demon appears. "GOLDD!" sillva yelled. "goldd end this duel' wolf said pointing at sillva. "Golden axe of dark world" once again the golden demon spun off at sillva. the golden axe connected to sillva. The axe was stuck in sillvas shoulder. Purple blood seept up onto the axe as it dug in deeper. "agh" sillva said closing one eye. "Looks like u win this one wolf and as promised my power" the demon laughed as the axe tour the rest the way throw him. "Oh god" wolf said as he fell to the ground and everything went black. To be continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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