Yugioh : Power of the D.D. archtype

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Prologue:

 

The main character is called Chris Bakerson.He is 13 years old.He is a duelist,well not a very good one.His bigger brother and all of his friends are better duelist then him until he met a special person known as Crow Hogan.He gave him a tournament invite (he couldn't participate in the tournament because he had a broken arm) along with a rare card.Since that day his life totally changed.

 

Characters:

Chris Bakerson

 

Tom Bakerson

 

Crow Hogan(Minor)

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Btw the first episode will be ready tomorrow.

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The new episode is ready

Episode 1:Brother vs brother-The ticket for the tournament

 

Chris was walking to his home when he saw something on the ground.It was an invite for the regional tournament.Along with the invite there was also a rare card known as Marshmallon.Chris ran to his home.His brother,Tom opened the door.

 

Tom:What happened?

Chris:Nothing.I just found an invite for the regional tournament.I also fund a rare card.

Tom:You sure are lucky.I lost my invite yesterday.By the way can I see the invite that you found?

Chris gave Tom the invite.

Tom:WHAT?!?!?!This is my invite!

Chris:Are you sure?

Tom:Of course!There's my name written here.Didn't you see it?

Chris:Nope.Anyway that invite belongs to me,I found it.

Tom:Yes, but they invited me not you.You suck in Duel Monsters.

Chris:Ok we will duel.The winner gets the invite along with the rare card.

Tom:I'll duel only if I add Marshmallon to my deck only for this duel.

Chris:Add it!Who cares how many rare cards you have in your deck.I'll win anyway.

 

Tom:Lets duel!

Chris:Lets duel!

 

Chris saw his hand.It contained:Berfomet,7 Colored Fish,Dark Blade,Waboku,Goblin's Secret Remedy.The card he drew Hinotama.

Chris(8000)I summon 7 Colored Fish(1800) in attack position.I set one card and end my turn.

Tom(8000)I set one monster and two facedowns.I end.

Chris(8000): I draw!(It was Lucky Iron Axe)

Tom:Now I activate Bad reaction to Simochi!In addition I activate also Gift Card!That increases your Lp by 3000.But when your Lp increase Bad Reaction to Simochi activates! Instead of increasing your Lp it decreases them.

Chris(5000):I know how it works!Now 7 Colored Fish attack!

The monster is Marshmallon.

Tom:Marshmallon cannot be destroyed by battle.In addition when he is attacked while he is facedown you lose 1000 Lp.

Chris(4000)Damn it!Main Phase two!I summon Dark Blade(1800) in attack position.And i also activate Hinotama.Your Lp decreases by 500.I end my turn.

Tom(7500):Not bad.My move.Draw!Now I tribute both of your monsters to special summon Lava Golem. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 monsters on my opponent's side of field and is Special Summoned to my opponent's side of the field. This card inflicts 1000 points of damage to the Life Points of this card's controller during each of his/her Standby Phases. If I Special Summon this monster, you cannot Normal Summon or Set a monster during the same turn.I end my turn.

Chris(3000):I draw.(Fissure)Now I tribute Lava Golem to Summon Berfomet(1400).Effect:I add Gazelle King of the Mythical Beasts to my hand.Then I activate Fissure to destroy your monster.Bye marshmallon.Now i equip Lucky Iron Axe to Berfomet(New Atk:1900).Berfomet direct attack.I end.

Tom(5600):My turn.Draw.Damn it.I set one card and I end my turn.

Chris(3000)What's wrong?Bad hand?Draw!(Polymerization)Yes!I activate Polymerization!

Tom:Chain!I activate another Gift Card!So due to Bad Reaction to Simochi you lose 3000 Lp.

Chris(0):sheet!I lost!

Tom:Of course! Because you suck!So I get the invite and Marshmallon.And they invited me to join the regional tournament because I have won almost all my duels without attacking!

The duel ended,but Tom and Chris were not the only ones to watch the duel.The duel was seen also by Crow Hogan.

[RareMaster7]

Nice writing. Also, just to ask, are those Gaia online avatars? Even if they aren't, epic Crow.:D

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Episode 2

 

The tournament begins-Its time for the rematch

 

Tomorrow, Chris went in the park and Crow followed him.

Crow:Sorry,are you Chris Bakerson?

Chris:Yes why?...Wait I know you!You're Crow Hogan the third ranked turbo duelist in the world!

Crow:Yep!I wanted to give you this.

Chris:Its an invite for the tournament.Thanks!But why did you give to me your invite?

Crow:Are you blind?!Can't you see I got a broken arm?!How the hell can I duel in this conditions?!

Chris:I saw that you had a broken arm!But why did you give this to me?There are lots of duelists in the city.Why me?

Crow:I watched your duel against your brother yesterday.You got talent.And the tournament rule says that when a participant can't come to the tournament or he doesn't want to come he can be replaced by someone that he chooses or his first round opponent will be automatically go in the second round!

Chris:I dueled vs my brother ,but I lost!

Crow:Your brother won only because he got lucky.But when you duel him in the tournament he will lose.Take this card.

The card was D.D. Crow.

Chris:You sure?Its a rare card after all.

Crow:Take it.I got one also.Oh, almost forgot I'll teach you a combo also!

After Crow taught him the combo ,Chris thanked him and went to his home.Now he was sure of himself.

He told to his brother what happened in the park,but he didn't say anything about the combo.

Tomorrow the tournament started.

???:Ladies and gentlemen today starts the regional tournament.I'm the MC ,but you can call me Simon.Now one thing about the tournament:16 duelists will duel against each other in this ruthless battle and in the end only one will win!May the best duelist win!Now the first duel will be:Chris Bakerson vs Tom Bakerson.

Tom:Lets duel!

Chris:Lets duel!

Chris(8000):I'll go first.Draw!(Hand:Cannon Soldier,Plaguesterer Zombie,Sangan,Creature Swap,Blackland Fire Dragon,Radiant Mirror Force)I'll set one monster and one card facedown. I end.

Tom(8000):My move!Draw!I summon Solar Flare Dragon(1500) in attack position.Solar Flare Dragon attack!

Chris:The monster was Sangan.Now I can add 1 monster with 1500 or less attack in my hand.I add Quill Bolt Hedgehog.

Tom:I end my turn.But due to Solar Flare Dragon's effect you lose 500 Lp.

Chris(7500):Draw!(Cyber Falcon)I set one monster.I end.

Tom(8000):Draw! I also set one monster. Anyway Solar attacks again!

Chris: It Was Quill Bolt Hedgehog.And now its time for my ultimate combo!

 

(To be continued)

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Nice writing. Also' date=' just to ask, are those Gaia online avatars? Even if they aren't, epic Crow.:D

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Nope they aren't.Anyway thanks for the comment.Also episode 2 is ready.

[bott52]

Nice I like the style you write in!

[DDRGHKH]

YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can you give any tips for a rookie?

Go see Yu-Gi-Oh! X!

[DDRGHKH]

How come I write like that and people hate me? I don't understand!

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I'll add episode 3 later ,I got a lot of homework to do.

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Well ill explain blackthunders is an one that shows the characters and goes quickly into an fun duel and yours talks about stuff people wonder about DDRGHKH I think.

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Episode 3

 

Chris' ultimate combo-The infinite loop

 

Chris: It was Quill Bolt Hedgehog ! And now its time for my ultimate combo.

Tom: I'm sure that it will be a total failure! Anyway combo or not Solar Flare Dragon's Effect activates so you lose 500 Lp.

Chris(7000):Draw!(Lightning Vortex)I activate Lightning Vortex. Now I discard one card form my hand to destroy all your face-up monsters. I discard Plaguespreader Zombie. Now I activate my Zombie’s effect. I place one card from my hand to the top of my deck and Special summon him(400)!Now when I got a tuner in my field I can special summon Quill Bolt Hedgehog(800) from my graveyard! Now I normal summon Cannon Soldier(1400).I activate Cannon’s effect: I tribute one monster on my side of the field so I can inflict 500 points of damage to you! But Quill Bolt Hedgehog its revived due to its effect! So I activate Cannon’s effect again and I tribute again Quill Bolt! And this is repeated again and again until you lose!

Tom: sheet! I lost to a pathetic duelist like you! Arghhhhhhhhh!

Chris: What did you say before the duel? That people from all over Japan would see that I suck? Well they saw that you suck!

Simon: And the winner is Chris Bakerson! He won to his brother by using one of the best combos I’ve ever seen! Now the next duel will be…Nick Kai vs Laurie Crocker!

After Simon said this Tom and Chris went in the duel stadium’s cafeteria.

Tom: I still can’t believe that I lost to you! Anyway why don’t you see the other duel so you can see who will be your opponent next round!

Chris: I don’t want to! I just want a little nap!

Tom: You’re so stupid! Anyway what was the card that Crow gave to you?

Chris: It was this.

Chris showed Tom his D.D. Crow .

???(an unknown tournament participant in the cafeteria) :What that f***ing kid had D.D. Crow?!?!?!?! sheet, that is the only monster of the D.D. archetype that I don’t have! Where did that kid got it anyway?

Simon: The duel ended and Laurie Crocker won! So she will be facing Chris Bakerson in the next round! Now the next duel will be… Robert Dreid vs Sirius Clash!

The guy with the D.D. deck was Sirius.When he was walking at the arena he took a short look at D.D. Crow.

Sirius thought: Humph, that card will be mine soon enough!*evil laugh*

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Today some new characters will be added.And I'll add episode 4 too.

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New characters:

 

Robert Dreid

 

 

Lauren Crocker

 

 

Sirius Clash(villain)

 

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I made a mistake the girl's name is Laurie

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Sorry to say but when quilbolt hedgehog is destroyed after it used its effect it is removed from play but still not bad.

[blackthunder]

Sorry to say but when quilbolt hedgehog is destroyed after it used its effect it is removed from play but still not bad.

Wow you're right!Anyway I watched the combo in a video in youtube where someone used it in yugioh 5d's tag force 4

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Oh ok.

 

Edit:you could still use the stratagy since it was proven in an game.

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Episode 4

 

Sirius’s real plan-The legend of the D.D.s

 

Simon: The first round ended and now the second round will begin! The first duel will be… Chris Bakerson vs Laurie Crocker!

Chris: I still can’t believe that I made it! I beat my brother in a duel and I’m in the second round!

Chris and Laurie went in the arena.

Chris saw Laurie and thought: Oh my god! She is so pretty!-and when Laurie winked at him he became red. Tom laughed.

Laurie: Lets duel!

Chris: Lets duel!

Laurie(8000): Draw! I set one monster and three cards! I end my turn!

Chris(8000): My turn! Draw!(Hand: King of the Swamp, Dark Blade, Pitch-Dark Dragon, Faith Bird, Trap Hole, Creature Swap)I activate King of the Swamp’s effect. I discard it to add 1 Polymerization from my deck to my hand. Now I activate Polymerization. I fuse Dark Blade with Pitch-Dark Dragon to Fusion Summon Dark Blade The Dragon(2200)in attack position. Then I normal summon Faith Bird(1500)in attack position. Now Faith Bird attacks!

Laurie: My monster is Gellundo! He can’t be destroyed by battle!

Chris: I set one card and end my turn!

Laurie(8000): Draw! I tribute Gellundo to Summon Guardian Angel Joan(2800). Gellundo is treated as two tributes for a Fairy-type monster.

Chris: Chain! I activate Trap Hole! Now Guardian Angel Joan is destroyed!

Laurie: I end!

Chris(8000): Draw(Mr. Volcano).I tribute Faith Bird to summon Mr. Volcano(2100) in attack position! Now my monsters attack!

Laurie(3700): I activate Aegis of Gaia! I gain 3000 Lp, But when Aegis is removed from the field I lose 3000 Lp!

Chris: I end!

Laurie(6700): Draw! I activate Premature Burial! I pay 800 Lp to Special Summon Guardian Angel Joan(2800)! Now I normal summon Dunames Dark Witch. Now Guardian Angel Joan attack Dark Blade The Dragon! Due to Joan’s effect I gain Lp equal to your monsters attack, so I gain 2200 Lp!I end my turn.

Chris(7400): Draw(Dark Factory of Mass Production).First I activate Dark Factory of Mass Production to add two Normal monsters from my graveyard to my hand. I add Dark Blade and Faith Bird. Then I summon Faith Bird(1500)in attack position! And now I activate another spell card: Creature Swap. Now I take control of Joan and you get Faith Bird. Now Joan attack Faith Bird and Mr. Volcano attack Dunames Dark Witch. I end.

Laurie(4100): Draw! Now its time to play seriously! I set one monster and I end my turn.

Chris(8900): Draw!(Heavy Storm)Yes, I activate Heavy Storm. Now Since Aegis was destroyed you lose 3000 Lp! And my monsters attack! Joan attack the monster(Magician of Faith) and Mr. Volcano attack directly! You lose!

Sirius thought: That kid with D.D. Crow is good at duels, but that won’t stop me from stealing his card. Today when he goes home I’ll steal it.

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As always I'll add episode 5 later and tell me if I'm being too slow in adding the episodes.

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Episode 5

 

The end of the world-The alternate dimension

 

Simon: The second round ended and the semifinals and the final round will be held tomorrow! Now goodbye duelists!

Chris: Time to go home! I’ll be back here tomorrow and I’ll win this tournament.

Tom: Keep telling yourself that! Have you ever seen your next opponent?

Chris: Who, that guy with a ridiculous alien costume and a lame RFG deck? That guy doesn’t stand a chance against me.

Tom: We’ll see about that!

Chris: You are with me or against me?!

Tom: Of course, I’m with you, but I’m trying to be realistic!

Chris: No offense bro, but you’re a nerd!

Tom: YOU GOT ONLY THREE SECONDS TO RUN! 3,… 2,… 1,… 0!

Tom and Chris ran until they reached their home. Sirius followed them. When they entered to their home, Chris left his deck in a table that was in their garden. Sirius stole Chris’ deck and left a message. Chris went out and he didn’t see his deck in the table, but he saw the message. He and Tom read the message:

 

“I stole your deck and I’ll give it back only if you beat me in the semifinals tomorrow.

By the guy with a RFG deck.”

 

Tom: Who do you think it is?

Chris: Of course! It’s Sirius! He followed us! I think he stole the deck because I’ll duel him tomorrow in the semifinals.

Tom: Yeah, but how will you duel without a deck?

Chris: Don’t worry, I got a backup deck. The bad things are that he stole the card that Crow gave me and he has now the infinite loop combo.

Tomorrow Chris and all the other duelists went in the duel arena.

Simon: Now the first semifinal will be… Chris Bakerson vs Sirius Clash!

Chris: You scum; I know that you stole my deck yesterday!

Sirius: Well, I can’t hide it anymore, I stole your deck! But I didn’t want to steal all your deck, I wanted to steal only D.D. Crow!

Chris: Why?

Sirius: You know that I have a D.D. deck, but D.D. Crow was the only one that I haven’t had! I wanted him because there’s a legend about the D.D.’s :When someone removes from play all the D.D.’s in a duel and in his RFG pile there are no other cards in it, an alternate dimension will be created and all the inhabitants of this dimension will be transported there and the one that removed from play the D.D.’s will be the king of that dimension.

Chris: This is a real crap, but what should I expect from someone that wears an alien costume?!

Sirius: We’ll see about that! Lets duel!

Chris: Lets duel!

Sirius(8000): Draw! I activate Dimensional Fissure! Now all monsters are removed from play when destroyed! Then I activate Card Destruction! We discard our hands and redraw the same number of cards. Then I activate Hand Destruction. We Discard two cards and draw two more! Then I activate another Hand Destruction! And now another one!

After this, Sirius laughed.

Chris: What are you laughing at?

Sirius: I removed from play all the D.D.’s!

A space-time vortex was created and all the inhabitants of the Earth were sucked in it. Sirius’ legend was true!

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I'll add episode 6 tomorrow.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Hm. You've been getting an awful lot of flattery. Why don't I cool you down for a spell?

 

In the not-too-distant future — now present time and present day

A certain cynic author discovered MST3K...

 

The premise of the Mystery Science Ripoff 3892 is that characters from a different anime or video game will tear your story apart line by line. It frames the story in the worst possible light for laughs. Your crew is apparently from Mahou Sensei Negima!.

 

Oh, and by the way, script format sucks. Get rid of it. I have an excuse; trying to MyST in paragraph format would be boring as hell.

 

[spoiler=Prologue and Chapters 1-2]

The Team:

Negi Springfield - A twelve-year-old mage and prodigy, his father was an inhumanly powerful mage who mysteriously vanished a decade ago. Once a brilliant, amiable, and earnest boy, his heart is quickly being corrupted by darkness as he seeks his father out. At this point, he barely resembles his old self at all...

Asuna Kagurazaka - A sixteen-year-old girl who's much more than she seems, she has the power to negate magic. She's apparently responsible for apocalyptic events in the magical world regarding Negi's mother. Harbors quasi-romantic feelings towards Negi.

Evangeline A.K. McDowell - An immortal vampire trapped in the body of a young girl by Negi's father, Nagi. She's rather obviously in love with Nagi. Her power is incredible, and she invented the Magia Erebea that Negi wields, but as Negi grows in power to match his father, the threat she poses is rapidly dwindling.

 

The new episode is ready

All: NOOOOOO...

 

Episode 1:Brother vs brother-The ticket for the tournament

Asuna: Oh, this is promising.

 

Chris was walking to his home when he saw something on the ground.

Eva: It was a bazooka, aimed at his face.

 

It was an invite for the regional tournament.

Asuna: That's convenient.

Negi: A tournament in what?

 

Along with the invite there was also a rare card known as Marshmallon.

Negi: What kind of card?

 

Chris ran to his home.

Negi: Couldn't you tell us anything?! Does this take place now, a century ago, a millenium ago, a century from now, a millenium from now...?

 

His brother,Tom opened the door.

Negi: ...of course you couldn't.

 

Tom:What happened?

Asuna: *Chris* Someone set up us the bomb. We get signal.

 

Chris:Nothing.I just found an invite for the regional tournament.I also fund a rare card.

Eva: Finally, someone recognizes that children's card games don't bear the fate of the world! ...but this is in script format!

Negi: We're in script format, aren't we?

Asuna: Have you ever seen anyone do a successful MyST in paragraph format? It doesn't work that way. Now, this, on the other hand...

 

Tom:You sure are lucky.I lost my invite yesterday.

Negi: That's convenient.

 

By the way can I see the invite that you found?

Asuna: *Tom* So I can steal it and use it to enter the tournament, whose value I grossly overestimate?

 

Chris gave Tom the invite.

Eva: *Tom* Thanks, suck - er, li'l bro!

 

Tom:WHAT?!?!?!This is my invite!

Negi: *Tom* Just as planned!

 

Chris:Are you sure?

TomSurprisedf course!There's my name written here.

Eva: *Tom* *gasp*f course!

Negi: *Tom* I just need to scratch out "Kotaro" here and replace it with "Tom," and...

 

Didn't you see it?

Chris:Nope.

Negi: *Chris* Unlike you, my dear, delusional brother, I don't care about children's card game tournaments.

 

Anyway that invite belongs to me,I found it.

Asuna: Finder's, keepers!

 

Tom:Yes, but they invited me not you.You suck in Duel Monsters.

Asuna: Well, he doesn't sugar-coat things.

 

ChrisSurprisedk we will duel.The winner gets the invite along with the rare card.

Negi: ...But I thought you didn't care... Why, Chris? WHY?!

Eva: *Chris, with little expression* *gasp*k we will duel. The winner gets the invite along with the rare card. *seriously* Really? You care that much? I'm moved.

 

Tom:I'll duel only if I add Marshmallon to my deck only for this duel.

Negi: *Tom* After all, even though you suck in Duel Monsters, I can't win unless I cheat.

 

Chris:Add it!Who cares how many rare cards you have in your deck.I'll win anyway.

Asuna: Hey, brat! In case you didn't get the memo, YOU SUCK IN DUEL MONSTERS.

 

Tom:Lets duel!

Chris:Lets duel!

Asuna: Lets duel!

Eva: Lets duel!

Negi: Lets duel!

 

Chris saw his hand.It contained:Berfomet,7 Colored Fish,Dark Blade,Waboku,Goblin's Secret Remedy.The card he drew Hinotama.

All: ...

Eva: He really does suck in Duel Monsters.

Negi: Anyway, what about "he drew Hinotama?" What does that do?

 

Chris(8000)I

Eva: He's not even bothering with the colons anymore...!

 

summon 7 Colored Fish(1800) in attack position.I set one card and end my turn.

Eva: What's the betting he Set "Goblin's Secret Remedy?"

Asuna: High.

 

Tom(8000)I set one monster and two facedowns.I end.

Asuna: See, there's character development! Tom is an insecure guy who doesn't overstate things.

Eva: Anyone else notice has no spaces after his punctuation?

Negi: Unfortunately.

 

Chris(8000): I draw!(It was Lucky Iron Axe)

Negi: That card was bad enough that I had to look it up.

 

Tom:Now I activate Bad reaction to Simochi!In addition I activate also Gift Card!

Asuna: In addition I activate also wepon!In addition I activate also Inferno Tempest! In addition I activate also Royal Death Note!

 

That increases your Lp by 3000.But when your Lp increase Bad Reaction to Simochi activates! Instead of increasing your Lp it decreases them.

Eva: Huzzah! He's capable of terrible two-card combos!

 

Chris(5000):I know how it works!

Negi: You could have cut him off any time during the above explanation, you know. It took a while.

 

Now 7 Colored Fish attack!

The monster is Marshmallon.

Asuna: That's not foreshadowing; that's friggin' lazy.

Negi: It's something the writers of the real show would do, though.

Eva: The real show is horrible...

Negi: I know.

 

Tom:Marshmallon cannot be destroyed by battle.

Asuna: *Tom* That's really all it's good for, mind.

 

In addition when he is attacked while he is facedown you lose 1000 Lp.

Negi: *Tom* Except in my crappy burn Deck, where it does extra damage!

Eva: If this were the real show, the Duel would be over by now...

 

Chris(4000)Damn it!Main Phase two!

Negi: Author needs spaces badly!

 

I summon Dark Blade(1800) in attack position.And i also activate Hinotama.Your Lp decreases by 500.

Asuna: Such a crippling blow... MARSHMALLON does more!

 

I end my turn.

Tom(7500):Not bad.

Negi: But it was bad! He played right into your traps!

 

My move.Draw!

Asuna: I take back what I said about character development. These people are just blobs.

 

Now I tribute both of your monsters to special summon Lava Golem.

Negi: This guy is getting a hero's draw...

 

This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 monsters on my opponent's side of field and is Special Summoned to my opponent's side of the field.

Asuna: YES! He's finally getting good grammar!

Negi, Eva: UNPOSSIBLE!

 

This card inflicts 1000 points of damage to the Life Points of this card's controller during each of his/her Standby Phases. If I Special Summon this monster, you cannot Normal Summon or Set a monster during the same turn.

Asuna: ...false alarm, he just copy/pasted the effect and changed a few pronouns.

Negi, Eva: NOOOOOOOO...

 

I end my turn.

Chris(3000):I draw.(Fissure)Now I tribute Lava Golem to Summon Berfomet(1400).

Negi: The only use Berfomet could possibly have is in this blindingly obvious combo move.

 

Effect:I add Gazelle King of the Mythical Beasts to my hand.

Asuna: Who's Effect?

 

Then I activate Fissure to destroy your monster.Bye marshmallon.

Negi: *Chris, monotone* Now the way is clear and I can win.I can go to the tournament now and I don't suck as much in Duel Monsters.The author still needs a lot of spaces.Yay.

Asuna: He'd be much better off if he hadn't gotten rid of Lava Golem to begin with.

 

Now i equip Lucky Iron Axe to Berfomet(New Atk:1900).Berfomet direct attack.I end.

 

Tom(5600):My turn.Draw.Damn it.I set one card and I end my turn.

Asuna: He'd only have 3,000 Life Points if Chris had left Lava Golem up.

Negi: Assuming those numbers are Life Points.

Asuna: There's that.

 

Chris(3000)What's wrong?Bad hand?

Eva: Not in this story, pal.

 

Draw!(Polymerization)Yes!I activate Polymerization!

Tom:Chain!I activate another Gift Card!

Negi: Why didn't you activate it during the Draw Phase?!

 

So due to Bad Reaction to Simochi you lose 3000 Lp.

Negi: *Tom, monotone* So I can go to the tournament and keep Marshmallon.Also, you suck in Duel Monsters.The author still fails at punctuation.Yay.

 

Chris(0):s***!I lost!

Eva: We didn't know that!

 

TomSurprisedf course! Because you suck!

Eva: No kidding. He lost to a burn Deck.

 

So I get the invite and Marshmallon.And they invited me to join the regional tournament because I have won almost all my duels without attacking!

Negi: That way, I'll be cannon fodder for anyone who owns a Solemn Judgment!

Asuna: Or for anyone who doesn't have to face a miraculous opening hand!

 

The duel ended,but Tom and Chris were not the only ones to watch the duel.The duel was seen also by Crow Hogan.

Asuna: Who is...?

 

Asuna: ...that's it? It's over? Just drop a name and no description so you can see the blobs?

Negi: You know, I hear most of the works we MyST are actually fun to read.

Eva: Lucky bastards...!

 

 

 

Unlike the last work I MySTed, this is actually hard to read. Please, develop your characters and settings properly before you start the crappy Duels.

[blackthunder]

Hm. You've been getting an awful lot of flattery. Why don't I cool you down for a spell?

 

In the not-too-distant future — now present time and present day

A certain cynic author discovered MST3K...

 

The premise of the Mystery Science Ripoff 3892 is that characters from a different anime or video game will tear your story apart line by line. It frames the story in the worst possible light for laughs. Your crew is apparently from Mahou Sensei Negima!.

 

Oh' date=' and by the way, script format sucks. Get rid of it. I have an excuse; trying to MyST in paragraph format would be boring as hell.

 

[spoiler=Prologue and Chapters 1-2']

The Team:

Negi Springfield - A twelve-year-old mage and prodigy, his father was an inhumanly powerful mage who mysteriously vanished a decade ago. Once a brilliant, amiable, and earnest boy, his heart is quickly being corrupted by darkness as he seeks his father out. At this point, he barely resembles his old self at all...

Asuna Kagurazaka - A sixteen-year-old girl who's much more than she seems, she has the power to negate magic. She's apparently responsible for apocalyptic events in the magical world regarding Negi's mother. Harbors quasi-romantic feelings towards Negi.

Evangeline A.K. McDowell - An immortal vampire trapped in the body of a young girl by Negi's father, Nagi. She's rather obviously in love with Nagi. Her power is incredible, and she invented the Magia Erebea that Negi wields, but as Negi grows in power to match his father, the threat she poses is rapidly dwindling.

 

The new episode is ready

All: NOOOOOO...

 

Episode 1:Brother vs brother-The ticket for the tournament

Asuna: Oh, this is promising.

 

Chris was walking to his home when he saw something on the ground.

Eva: It was a bazooka, aimed at his face.

 

It was an invite for the regional tournament.

Asuna: That's convenient.

Negi: A tournament in what?

 

Along with the invite there was also a rare card known as Marshmallon.

Negi: What kind of card?

 

Chris ran to his home.

Negi: Couldn't you tell us anything?! Does this take place now, a century ago, a millenium ago, a century from now, a millenium from now...?

 

His brother,Tom opened the door.

Negi: ...of course you couldn't.

 

Tom:What happened?

Asuna: *Chris* Someone set up us the bomb. We get signal.

 

Chris:Nothing.I just found an invite for the regional tournament.I also fund a rare card.

Eva: Finally, someone recognizes that children's card games don't bear the fate of the world! ...but this is in script format!

Negi: We're in script format, aren't we?

Asuna: Have you ever seen anyone do a successful MyST in paragraph format? It doesn't work that way. Now, this, on the other hand...

 

Tom:You sure are lucky.I lost my invite yesterday.

Negi: That's convenient.

 

By the way can I see the invite that you found?

Asuna: *Tom* So I can steal it and use it to enter the tournament, whose value I grossly overestimate?

 

Chris gave Tom the invite.

Eva: *Tom* Thanks, suck - er, li'l bro!

 

Tom:WHAT?!?!?!This is my invite!

Negi: *Tom* Just as planned!

 

Chris:Are you sure?

TomSurprisedf course!There's my name written here.

Eva: *Tom* *gasp*f course!

Negi: *Tom* I just need to scratch out "Kotaro" here and replace it with "Tom," and...

 

Didn't you see it?

Chris:Nope.

Negi: *Chris* Unlike you, my dear, delusional brother, I don't care about children's card game tournaments.

 

Anyway that invite belongs to me,I found it.

Asuna: Finder's, keepers!

 

Tom:Yes, but they invited me not you.You suck in Duel Monsters.

Asuna: Well, he doesn't sugar-coat things.

 

ChrisSurprisedk we will duel.The winner gets the invite along with the rare card.

Negi: ...But I thought you didn't care... Why, Chris? WHY?!

Eva: *Chris, with little expression* *gasp*k we will duel. The winner gets the invite along with the rare card. *seriously* Really? You care that much? I'm moved.

 

Tom:I'll duel only if I add Marshmallon to my deck only for this duel.

Negi: *Tom* After all, even though you suck in Duel Monsters, I can't win unless I cheat.

 

Chris:Add it!Who cares how many rare cards you have in your deck.I'll win anyway.

Asuna: Hey, brat! In case you didn't get the memo, YOU SUCK IN DUEL MONSTERS.

 

Tom:Lets duel!

Chris:Lets duel!

Asuna: Lets duel!

Eva: Lets duel!

Negi: Lets duel!

 

Chris saw his hand.It contained:Berfomet,7 Colored Fish,Dark Blade,Waboku,Goblin's Secret Remedy.The card he drew Hinotama.

All: ...

Eva: He really does suck in Duel Monsters.

Negi: Anyway, what about "he drew Hinotama?" What does that do?

 

Chris(8000)I

Eva: He's not even bothering with the colons anymore...!

 

summon 7 Colored Fish(1800) in attack position.I set one card and end my turn.

Eva: What's the betting he Set "Goblin's Secret Remedy?"

Asuna: High.

 

Tom(8000)I set one monster and two facedowns.I end.

Asuna: See, there's character development! Tom is an insecure guy who doesn't overstate things.

Eva: Anyone else notice has no spaces after his punctuation?

Negi: Unfortunately.

 

Chris(8000): I draw!(It was Lucky Iron Axe)

Negi: That card was bad enough that I had to look it up.

 

Tom:Now I activate Bad reaction to Simochi!In addition I activate also Gift Card!

Asuna: In addition I activate also wepon!In addition I activate also Inferno Tempest! In addition I activate also Royal Death Note!

 

That increases your Lp by 3000.But when your Lp increase Bad Reaction to Simochi activates! Instead of increasing your Lp it decreases them.

Eva: Huzzah! He's capable of terrible two-card combos!

 

Chris(5000):I know how it works!

Negi: You could have cut him off any time during the above explanation, you know. It took a while.

 

Now 7 Colored Fish attack!

The monster is Marshmallon.

Asuna: That's not foreshadowing; that's friggin' lazy.

Negi: It's something the writers of the real show would do, though.

Eva: The real show is horrible...

Negi: I know.

 

Tom:Marshmallon cannot be destroyed by battle.

Asuna: *Tom* That's really all it's good for, mind.

 

In addition when he is attacked while he is facedown you lose 1000 Lp.

Negi: *Tom* Except in my crappy burn Deck, where it does extra damage!

Eva: If this were the real show, the Duel would be over by now...

 

Chris(4000)Damn it!Main Phase two!

Negi: Author needs spaces badly!

 

I summon Dark Blade(1800) in attack position.And i also activate Hinotama.Your Lp decreases by 500.

Asuna: Such a crippling blow... MARSHMALLON does more!

 

I end my turn.

Tom(7500):Not bad.

Negi: But it was bad! He played right into your traps!

 

My move.Draw!

Asuna: I take back what I said about character development. These people are just blobs.

 

Now I tribute both of your monsters to special summon Lava Golem.

Negi: This guy is getting a hero's draw...

 

This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 monsters on my opponent's side of field and is Special Summoned to my opponent's side of the field.

Asuna: YES! He's finally getting good grammar!

Negi, Eva: UNPOSSIBLE!

 

This card inflicts 1000 points of damage to the Life Points of this card's controller during each of his/her Standby Phases. If I Special Summon this monster, you cannot Normal Summon or Set a monster during the same turn.

Asuna: ...false alarm, he just copy/pasted the effect and changed a few pronouns.

Negi, Eva: NOOOOOOOO...

 

I end my turn.

Chris(3000):I draw.(Fissure)Now I tribute Lava Golem to Summon Berfomet(1400).

Negi: The only use Berfomet could possibly have is in this blindingly obvious combo move.

 

Effect:I add Gazelle King of the Mythical Beasts to my hand.

Asuna: Who's Effect?

 

Then I activate Fissure to destroy your monster.Bye marshmallon.

Negi: *Chris, monotone* Now the way is clear and I can win.I can go to the tournament now and I don't suck as much in Duel Monsters.The author still needs a lot of spaces.Yay.

Asuna: He'd be much better off if he hadn't gotten rid of Lava Golem to begin with.

 

Now i equip Lucky Iron Axe to Berfomet(New Atk:1900).Berfomet direct attack.I end.

 

Tom(5600):My turn.Draw.Damn it.I set one card and I end my turn.

Asuna: He'd only have 3,000 Life Points if Chris had left Lava Golem up.

Negi: Assuming those numbers are Life Points.

Asuna: There's that.

 

Chris(3000)What's wrong?Bad hand?

Eva: Not in this story, pal.

 

Draw!(Polymerization)Yes!I activate Polymerization!

Tom:Chain!I activate another Gift Card!

Negi: Why didn't you activate it during the Draw Phase?!

 

So due to Bad Reaction to Simochi you lose 3000 Lp.

Negi: *Tom, monotone* So I can go to the tournament and keep Marshmallon.Also, you suck in Duel Monsters.The author still fails at punctuation.Yay.

 

Chris(0):s***!I lost!

Eva: We didn't know that!

 

TomSurprisedf course! Because you suck!

Eva: No kidding. He lost to a burn Deck.

 

So I get the invite and Marshmallon.And they invited me to join the regional tournament because I have won almost all my duels without attacking!

Negi: That way, I'll be cannon fodder for anyone who owns a Solemn Judgment!

Asuna: Or for anyone who doesn't have to face a miraculous opening hand!

 

The duel ended,but Tom and Chris were not the only ones to watch the duel.The duel was seen also by Crow Hogan.

Asuna: Who is...?

 

Asuna: ...that's it? It's over? Just drop a name and no description so you can see the blobs?

Negi: You know, I hear most of the works we MyST are actually fun to read.

Eva: Lucky bastards...!

 

 

 

Unlike the last work I MySTed, this is actually hard to read. Please, develop your characters and settings properly before you start the crappy Duels.

 

lol. Yeah that's kinda true. My fan fic isn't that good and I made all those grammar mistakes because I'm not American, Canadian or British. And also I have not explained many things ,but this fan fic is made on Yugioh card maker and you expect from people to write about Pokemon?! Of course that people write fan fics in Yugioh card maker about Yugioh. Anyway you're right about blaming me because I didn't explain when does this takes place.

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Episode 6 will be added later.

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Episode 6

 

The new world

 

Chris woke up and found himself in the duel arena. The arena was almost empty.

Chris: Where am I?

Tom: Well I think that Sirius’ legend was true.

Chris: sheet! Anyway what should we do now?

Robert: I don’t know.

Chris: Who are you?

Robert: I’m Robert a participant of the tournament.

Tom (searching in his laptop): I just made a research in the internet about that legend and it was proven that was true 10 years ago by some scientists.

Chris: How did you found this address?

Tom: Because unlike you I don’t use internet to see hot girls pictures.

Chris: FOR THE LAST TIME, I DON’T USE INTERNET TO SEE HOT GIRLS PICTURES! I USE IT TO WATCH YUGIOH THE ABRIDGED SERIES CREATED BY LITTLEKURIBOH!

Laurie: Calm down there’s no need to yell.

Chris: Oh, you’re here too.

Robert: Guys I got 2 questions. Why we don’t have our duel disks, but instead we have this yellow colored duel disks and why do they have this strange device?

???: Nice question little boy.

Tom: Who are you?

???: I’m one of Sirius’ slaves. Since he is the king of this dimension you must be his slave or you will die.

Tom: Yeah, yeah whatever.

???: You look smart. Why don’t you duel me?

Tom: And why should I duel you? I got way better things to do.

???: Well with this duel disk I can force to duel me and that’s not all. When a player loses the device activates by throwing the loser a knife and killing him. You cannot avoid the knife because when you lose you are paralyzed for 10 minutes. If you try to remove that duel disk from your arm it will be useless. You cannot remove it.

Tom: sheet! Guess I’ll have to duel you.

 

Tom: Lets duel!

???: Lets duel!

 

Tom(8000): I’ll go first. I set four cards and end my turn.

???(8000):My move! Draw!

Tom: Now I activate 1 Bad Reaction to Simochi card and three Gift Cards! Ordinarily you would gain 9000 Lp, but due to Bad Reaction’s effect you lose them. This makes an OTK!

And what the slave said was true. He was paralyzed and then killed.

Chris: Well at least you didn’t die!

Robert: If Sirius wants to see us dead why he doesn’t kill us immediately?

Tom: Because like this he can force us to duel against people we love like our parents.

Laurie: What?! He can really do that?!

Chris: Didn’t you hear the slave? Looks like Sirius has invented a duel disk that can force people to duel each other!

[Des ＨＥＲＯ]

Its ok.

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episode 7 will be added tomorrow. I really got a lot of homework today. I only found a free minute to write this!

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Episode 7

 

Chris’ new deck-Power of the X-Sabers

 

Tom: Finally, I found it.

Robert: Found what?

Tom: A way to turn the things back to normal. We should rip every member of the D.D. archetype.

Chris: So the only one we know with all the members of that archetype is Sirius.

Laurie: Yeah, but how can we reach him? We don’t know where he is? Where does he stay now that he is the king?

Robert: Maybe we should search in the city.

Tom: No, that’s dangerous. Sirius is searching for us and that means that everyone knows about us.

Chris: We should take the risk. If Sirius’ slave came here means that other slaves are coming so we should go out of the city.

Laurie: Well let’s go!

They went out the arena and they heard a voice.

???: You’re going? No I don’t think so!

Chris: If you want to duel, then duel me!

???: Ok, shitty kid I’ll duel you.

 

Chris: Lets duel!

???: Lets duel!

 

???(8000) : My move! I summon Insect Knight(1900) in attack mode. I activate Heart of the Underdog and I end my turn.

Chris (8000): Draw!( X-Saber Analbera, Shrink, Mirror Force, X-Saber Airbellum, X-Saber Galahad, Marauding Captain) First I summon Marauding Captain(1200). I activate his effect to special summon 1 level 4 or lower monster from my hand. I choose X -Saber Airbellum(1600). Now I tune X-Saber Airbellum(3) and Marauding Captain(3) to Synchro Summon XX-Saber Hyunlay(2300)(6). When XX-Saber Hyunlay is Synchro Summoned I choose and destroy up to 3 spell or traps. The only one that I choose is Heart of the Underdog. Now Hyunlay attack! I set 1 and I end my turn!

???(7600): Draw! Not bad little boy, but I’m better than you. I activate Tribute to the Doomed. I discard 1 card and I destroy 1 monster. I choose yours. Now I summon Gemini Elf(1900) and then I activate Monster Reborn. That means I can special summon the monster that I just discarded: Frostosaurus(2600). Last I activate Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy your facedown.

Chris: It was Mirror Force.

???: Now my monsters attack! I end my turn.

Chris(3600): Draw!( Smashing Ground) I activate Smashing Ground to destroy Frostosaurus. Then I summon X-Saber Galahad(1800). Galahad attack! When he attacks he gains 300 attack points. I set 1 card. I end

???(7300): Draw! Yes!!!! I summon Insect Knight! Insect Knight attacks and duel to his effect your monster loses 500 points.

Chris: I activate my face-down: Shrink! Now your monster’s attack is halved!

???(6950): sheet! I end.

Chris: Draw!( XX-Saber Fautroll) Now I summon in attack mode X-Saber Analbera(1800). When I have 2 X-Saber monster in my field this card can be Special summoned: XX- Saber Fautroll(2400). I activate his effect so I can special summon 1 level 4 or lower X-Saber form my graveyard. I choose X-Saber Airbellum. Now my monsters attack! You got only 50 Lp and no cards in your hand! What will you do?

???(50): This draw will turn the tables. Draw! Noooooooooooo!

Chris: Guess it’s my move. Draw!(Sakuretsu Armor).X-Saber Airbellum attack!

I win.

The slave died and the guys went out of the city.

Laurie: What should we do now? Where will we pass the night?!

Tom: I have no idea, but the best thing to do is to hide in the forest.

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Episode 8 will be ready tomorrow. Also I'm also creating an archetype called Whitewing.(They are chep copies of the blackwings by the way)